六級作文復(fù)習(xí)資料.docx

知識篇第一部分：天龍八部1. 描述類經(jīng)典句用法：.很重要，.很必要句型：_ plays an extremely important role._ is of utmost importance.Nothing is more important than _.替換詞：important可以替換詞匯：significant（意義深遠(yuǎn)的）essential（關(guān)鍵的） indispensable（不可替代的） pivotal（中樞作用的）key（關(guān)鍵的）等等。注意：indispensable 不可替代，本身就代表了非常重要，所以千萬不要寫extremely indispensable.變通：我們也可以換成其他意思，比如 it is of great necessity to do sth. 表示做.非常必要比如play a role/part也可以表示扮演著重要的角色。結(jié)合經(jīng)典開頭：There is little doubt that It cannot be denied that It is beyond doubts that It is generally accepted that There is a growing recognition that It has been widely noted that It goes without saying that 綜合版：(1) 閱讀經(jīng)典書籍非常重要It is generally accepted thatnothing canplay a more indispensable role thanreading classic books.(2) 從網(wǎng)絡(luò)中獲取信息很重要，但是閱讀傳統(tǒng)書籍也很必要。It is very important toacquire useful information online, butit is still of great necessity toread traditional books.(3) 眾所周知，大學(xué)在人的培養(yǎng)中扮演者基礎(chǔ)的作用，并為高等教育提供了平臺（大學(xué)排名My View on University Ranking）。It has been widely noted thatuniversityplays a fundamental rolein ones cultivation and provides a platform for higher education.(4) 機(jī)器人可以展示出人工智能，慢慢進(jìn)入到我們的視野，并扮演著越來越重要的角色。Robots, which are capable of exhibiting artificial intelligence, have emerged into our vision, andtend to play an increasingly important rolein our life.(5) 創(chuàng)新對于一個(gè)國家發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)至關(guān)重要。如果中國想要在世界舞臺扮演其地位，那么我們必須提倡獨(dú)創(chuàng)性，激發(fā)創(chuàng)造力，鼓勵創(chuàng)新。It goes without saying that innovationplays a key rolein developing national economy. If our country would like to play its role in the world arena, we should promote originality, inspire creativity and encourage innovation.（還記得嗎，后面這句就是我微博上#寫作素材日積月累# #優(yōu)格課堂#中的句子！）2. 重視類經(jīng)典句用法：重視.句型：pay attention to attach importance to lay emphasis/stress on 綜合版：(1) 我們應(yīng)該重視教育。We shouldpay special attention toeducation.(2) 我們應(yīng)該重視好習(xí)慣的培養(yǎng)。We shouldattach great importance todeveloping good habits.(3) 我們應(yīng)該重視環(huán)境保護(hù)。One shouldlay great emphasis onenvironmental protection.(4) 中國正在面臨嚴(yán)重的環(huán)境問題。作為一個(gè)大學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該重視保護(hù)我們的地球。Currently, China is facing a serious environmental issue. As university students, we shouldattach importance toprotecting our planet.(5) 作文一個(gè)90后，我們應(yīng)該重視保持健康。As the post-90s generation, we shouldpay special attention tomaintaining good health.衍生：套句 . capture/draw ones attention一次性塑料袋的使用引起了大量公眾關(guān)注。The use of disposable plastic bagshas captured/drawn a great deal ofpublic attention.套句 much attention has been paid to .大家都很關(guān)注如何有效地進(jìn)行信息處理。Much attention has been paid tohow to process information effectively.3.議論類經(jīng)典句用法：.產(chǎn)生了爭議句型：(1) there is much controversy over .我們是否該控制物質(zhì)的欲望，這個(gè)議題引起了爭議There is much controversyoverwhether we should control our desire for materialism.(2) has caused quite a stir among the general public.關(guān)于我們是否該控制物質(zhì)的欲望，在公眾中引發(fā)了很多爭議。The issue of whether we should control our desire for materialismhas caused quite a stir among the general public.(3) opinions vary when it comes to .當(dāng)談及到我們是否該控制物質(zhì)的欲望，大家觀點(diǎn)不一。Opinions vary when it comes towhether we should control our desire for materialism.綜合版：對于學(xué)習(xí)有沒有捷徑這個(gè)問題，同學(xué)們各執(zhí)一詞。（1）There is much controversy overwhether there is a shortcut to learning.（2）As regardswhether there is a shortcut to learning,there is a heated discussion among college students.（3）Opinions vary when it comes towhether there is a shortcut to learning.4. 結(jié)果類經(jīng)典句用法：.對于.產(chǎn)生了影響句型：exert a positive/negative/great impact on It cannot be denied that economic growthexerts a great impact onour environment.綜合版：（1）網(wǎng)絡(luò)對于我們的日常生活產(chǎn)生了巨大的影響，這是不爭的事實(shí)。It cannot be denied that the Internetexerts a huge impact onour daily life.（2）環(huán)境污染對我們的健康產(chǎn)生了消極的影響。It has been widely noted that environmental pollution canexert a negative influence onour health.(3) 我選擇為國企工作，因?yàn)榧彝サ慕逃龑ξ耶a(chǎn)生了很大的影響。I prefer to work for a state-owned business because family education has exerted a huge impact on my career choice.5.見證類經(jīng)典句用法：在某時(shí)某地發(fā)生了.（該句型實(shí)際解釋為：.見證了.）句型： witness （用時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)做主語）過去幾年里，越來越多的父母把孩子送到藝術(shù)學(xué)校去。（改寫成：過去幾年見證了越來越多的父母把孩子送到藝術(shù)學(xué)校去。）The past several years has witnessed an exponential increase in the number of parents who wish to send their kids to art classes.替換詞：exponential 表示上升的程度，可以替換成 dramatic / sharp / considerable / striking綜合版：（1）過去幾年見證了中國經(jīng)濟(jì)的騰飛/過去幾年見證了歐洲經(jīng)濟(jì)的衰退。The past few yearshas witnesseda burgeoning economy in China.During the past several years, Chinahas witnesseda rapid economic development.Chinahas experienceda rapid economic development in recent years. （替換）Europehas suffered froma great financial loss in recent years. （替換）注：the past several years后面接has和have均可。一方面，一段時(shí)間后面用has沒有問題；另一方面，用have也可以，表示這幾年年年都見證了。（2）練習(xí)：近幾年來，中國見證了信息的爆炸。Chinahas witnessedthe great information explosion during the past several years.（3）近年來在學(xué)生中出現(xiàn)了忽視中文的現(xiàn)象。The past several yearshave witnesseda thought-provoking phenomenon that we students pay very little attention to the study of Chinese.6.使動類經(jīng)典句用法：.使得.句型：enable/allow/render sb. to do 追求物質(zhì)主義使得我們拋棄希望，放棄夢想，沉浸在物質(zhì)世界的快樂中。The pursuit of materialismenables/allows one toabandon his hope, give up his dream and indulge himself in the pleasure of the material world.綜合版：（1）網(wǎng)絡(luò)能讓我們更有效的溝通。The Internetallows us tocommunicate more effectively.（2）虛心使人進(jìn)步（驕傲使人落后）。Modestyenables one togo forward. (Conceit makes one lag behind.)（3）抵制誘惑可以讓我們培養(yǎng)好習(xí)慣。Resisting temptationallows one todevelop good habits.補(bǔ)充經(jīng)典句型：offer sb. sth. / offer sth. to vide sb. with sth. / provide sth. to sb.bring sb. sth.物質(zhì)世界能給我們提供快樂的幻覺，而精神世界能給我們提供生活真正的樂趣。Material world couldoffer usthe illusion of happiness, while spiritual world couldprovide us withreal pleasure for life.閱讀能給我們提供知識。Reading canprovide us withsufficient knowledge.因特網(wǎng)能給我們帶來很多便利。The Internet can bring us much convenience.7.引出類經(jīng)典句用法：.成為了.重要的社會問題句型：(1) has arisen as one of （很適合開頭句）孩子的教育已經(jīng)成為最重要的社會問題之一。Childrens educationhas recently arisen asone of the essential problems.(2) . has become one of .環(huán)境保護(hù)問題已經(jīng)成為了對于政客和科學(xué)家同等關(guān)鍵的議題。The environmental protectionhas become one of the key issuesfor politicians and scientists alike.(3) . emerge into ones vision 進(jìn)入到.的視野里環(huán)境問題進(jìn)入到了我們的視野中。The issue of environmental problem has emerged into our vision in recent years.綜合版：（1）信息真?zhèn)谓鼇沓蔀榱艘粋€(gè)重要的問題。The credibility of informationhas recently arisen asone of the heated topics, as can be found in the columns of many city newspapers.（2）信息安全近來成為了一個(gè)重要的問題。The issue of information securityhas recently arisen asone of the heated topics.此句配合第二步衍生句，可以作為引出主題的句子。8.趨勢類經(jīng)典句用法：越來越句型：More and more people An increasing/ A growing number of people People in mounting numbers 注意：in mounting numbers里numbers有s！而a growing number of里number沒s！綜合版：（1）越來越多的人開始重視如何有效處理信息。People in mounting numbersare paying much attention to how to process information effectively.（2）隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的普及，網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程越來越受大學(xué)生的歡迎。With the popularity of internet, online courses have graduallyemerged into our visionand becomeincreasinglyprevalent among college students.衍生1：趨勢類有些非常好的句型值得大家學(xué)習(xí)，意思是“傾向于”，可以翻譯成“容易”。引子：冬天容易著涼。In winter, one tends to catch cold.(1) tend to (2) be likely to (3) be inclined to 比如：(1) 如今大學(xué)畢業(yè)生更想找一份好工作。Nowadays, college undergraduates tend to seek a decent job.(2) 過去人們認(rèn)為經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展必定會導(dǎo)致環(huán)境污染。In the past, people were likely to believe that rapid economic development will inevitably lead to environmental pollution.(3) 我更傾向于喜歡前者/后者I am inclined to be in favor of the former/the latter.(4) 笑容能規(guī)避沖突，消除分歧，縮短人和人之間的距離。A sweet smile tends to avoid the conflict, iron out the discrimination and shorten the distance between people.衍生2：趨勢類還有一個(gè)短語叫“必定會”，可以翻譯成“一定” be bound to 競爭的社會勢必會導(dǎo)致找工作的壓力A competitive society is bound to make finding a job much difficult.總結(jié)：其實(shí)天龍八部就是教大家如何模仿句型，學(xué)有余力的同學(xué)可以繼續(xù)進(jìn)行句型仿寫的積累，以下舉幾個(gè)例子。1. owe/attribute A to B 將A歸因BMany people owe their success not to formal schooling but to self-education.很多人并不將他們的成功歸結(jié)于正式教育。2. dedicate/devote oneself to 致力于I think it is very noble for him to dedicate himself to public service.我覺得他將自己投身于公共服務(wù)這件事非常地高尚。3. stem/result from 源于The pressure of finding a job among college students stems largely from the population explosion.大學(xué)生尋找工作的壓力很大程度上來源于人口膨脹。4. lead to/result in/give rise to 導(dǎo)致Technological advances can lead to more efficient uses of natural resources and sustain economic growth.科技的發(fā)展可以使我們更有效率地使用自然資源以及維持經(jīng)濟(jì)增長。5. in terms of 在某一方面Tourism is becoming a global industry, an industry which ranks second to none in terms of size and global influence.旅游業(yè)已經(jīng)成為一個(gè)世界產(chǎn)業(yè)，一個(gè)就規(guī)模和全球影響而言都獨(dú)一無二的產(chǎn)業(yè)。第二部分：經(jīng)典背景句（上過課的同學(xué)知道，我們把他成為wnwdwslm句）注：今年從6.5日開始，我每天會在微博上更新一個(gè)句子，使得大家循序漸進(jìn)背誦。我會在發(fā)完十句后發(fā)一個(gè)匯總貼，并配上音頻。以下句子僅供參考。這些句子一般用在引出主題或者觀點(diǎn)前，加上背景。比如：人民生活水平顯著提高，因此網(wǎng)絡(luò)越來越重要。網(wǎng)絡(luò)越來越普及（The Internet has played an increasingly important role.）是觀點(diǎn)或者主題，前面可以加上背景，比如隨著改革開放，人民的生活水平有顯著提高（With the reform and opening-up in recent decades in China, peoples living standard has been very much improved.）連在一起：With the reform and opening-up in recent decades in China, peoples living standard has been very much improved. The Internet has played an increasingly important role in our society.1. With the reform and opening-up in recent decades in China, peoples living standard has been very much improved.隨著改革開放，人民的生活水平有顯著提高。2. With the development of economy and society, competition is increasingly fierce.隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)和社會的發(fā)展，競爭越來越激烈。3. It is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties. We can do nothing but face them. Attitude is the key point to take the first step.眾所周知，我們生活在一個(gè)存在很多困難的動態(tài)的世界里，我們只能面對他們。態(tài)度是邁出第一步的關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)。4.Smartphones have penetrated every aspect of daily life.智能手機(jī)已經(jīng)滲透入日常生活的方方面面。5. With the accelerated pace of contemporary life, peoples work and life are increasingly stressful.隨著當(dāng)代生活的節(jié)奏加快，人們的工作和生活壓力越來越大。6. Resource exhaustion, environment degradation, andaging population constitute the three major national issues confronting human beings.資源耗盡，環(huán)境惡化，和老齡化人口組成了人類面臨的三大問題。7. Life is ten percent what you make it and ninety percent how you take it. The value of life lies not in the length of days, but in the use we make of them. So having right values in life is very important for us, especially youngsters.生活的10%在于你如何創(chuàng)造它，90%在于你如何接受它，生活的價(jià)值不在于天的長度，而在于我們的利用，因此具有正確的價(jià)值觀非常重要，尤其對于年輕人。第三部分：六脈神劍（起承轉(zhuǎn)合獨(dú)評）我把六脈神劍總結(jié)為四個(gè)問題，更便于閱讀。1.“兩點(diǎn)”怎么表述？Firstly, Secondly, To begin with, Furthermore, On the one hand, On the other, In the first place, Besides, 2.“順接”和“轉(zhuǎn)接”怎么表述順接：as a result/as a consequence /consequently /thus / hence / therefore轉(zhuǎn)接however / nevertheless / nonetheless3.“總結(jié)”怎么表述總結(jié)in conclusion, all in all, in a word簡而言之in short, in brief, to sum up如前所述as has been mentioned abovegiven the factors I have just outlined4.“個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)”怎么表述in my eyesas for mefrom my perspectiveas far as I am concernedTo my knowledgeFrom my level of understanding附贈六脈神劍完整版：啟部：用于引導(dǎo)第一點(diǎn)首先：1. first, firstly, first of all; 2. to begin with, to start with; 3. in the first place, first and foremost一方面：1. on the one hand (on the other); 2. for one thing (for another thing).承部：承接前面觀點(diǎn)其次 - second, secondly, third, thirdly進(jìn)一步 - furthermore, whats more, moreover此外 - besides, in addition結(jié)果- consequently, as a consequence/result, thus hence therefore, on this account, in light of this轉(zhuǎn)部：轉(zhuǎn)折語義相反技巧1：but改although/in spite of/despite如：Selecting their favorite lecturer does bring great benefits to students study, but it also cause a number of problems.Although selecting their favorite lecturer does bring great benefits to students study, it also causes a number of problems.In spite of/despite its great benefits for students study, selecting their favorite lecturer does cause a number of problems.注：很多老師建議but改成in spite of the fact that. 那么那些老師有興趣去看看GMAT語法，這種寫法叫wordy或者redundancy（冗長，累贅）。但是如果改成in spite of this，那還可以。不過前面需要句話句掉。技巧2：but改yet/while/whereas如：Many people argue that the spring festival gala should not be cancelled, but others adopt a completely different view.Many people argue that the spring festival gala should not be cancelled, while others adopt a completely different view.此外還可以用：不幸地：sadly unfortunately相反地：on the contrary, by contrast, conversely事實(shí)上：as a matter of fact, in fact然而：nevertheless, nonetheless合部：小結(jié)上文中段落的內(nèi)容總結(jié)：in conclusion, all in all, in a word簡而言之：in short, in brief, to sum up如前所述：as has been noted / mentioned abovegiven the factors I have just outlinedtaking into account all the above factors (后面主語用I)獨(dú)部：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)標(biāo)志詞personally speaking可以用in my eyes, as for me, as I see itin my opinion可以用from my perspectivefrom my point of view可以用as far as I am concernedit seems to me that可以用from where I stand, my stance is that 評部：在觀點(diǎn)前可以加一些副詞來評價(jià)Interestingly, surprisingly, more importantlyEspecially, particularlyUndoubtedly, apparently, evidently, obviously, conceivably等等應(yīng)用篇大家可以看下天龍八部和六脈神劍的威力注：今年我們有一個(gè)新的內(nèi)容，增設(shè)真題練習(xí)，會用我們教授的套路給大家講解，我微博和微信號會時(shí)時(shí)更新，千萬不要錯過了。應(yīng)用范例1：2011年12月For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of times.” You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.參考：Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will As a humorous saying goes, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of times.” This saying intends to inform us that a strong will plays an extremely important role in achieving success （主題）. Why, you may wonder, is a strong will so essential for success. To begin with, with the rapid development of economy, peoples living standard has been very much improved. However, competition is increasingly fierce. A strong will enables us to concentrate on our work and compete with others even in difficult time. Furthermore, it is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various new changes. A strong will also allows us to persist on the road we choose. Given the factors I have just outlined, I personally argue that it is a strong will that exerts a positive impact on success (學(xué)會變換句式). As far as I am concerned, if one makes friends with those who have strong wills, he is more likely to succeed in the future.應(yīng)用范例2：2016年6月六級For this part, you are