四級(jí)作文分析.doc

歷年考題分析及準(zhǔn)備謹(jǐn)以此文獻(xiàn)給可愛的駱詩遞同學(xué)，預(yù)祝她高分通過四級(jí)2009.61. 有人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)絡(luò)可以讓學(xué)習(xí)、工作更有效率2. 還有人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)絡(luò)讓青少年沉迷，進(jìn)而影響學(xué)習(xí)3. 你對(duì)于網(wǎng)絡(luò)的看法 2008.121. 一次性塑料袋給人們生活帶來便利，廣為使用2 由此帶來的問題， 舉例子 3 限制使用塑料袋的意義，理論與實(shí)際相結(jié)合2008.6娛樂活動(dòng)多種多樣2. 娛樂活動(dòng)可以使人們受益，也可能有危害性3. 作為大學(xué)生我們的看法 2007.12各大學(xué)開設(shè)了多種多樣的選修課2、學(xué)生因?yàn)楦鞣N原因選擇了不同的選修課3、以你自己為例 2007.61.活動(dòng)主要內(nèi)容 2.加入好處 3.如何加入 2006.12許多人喜歡看cctv 春節(jié)晚會(huì)2、但有的人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該取消3、你的看法 2006.6校學(xué)生會(huì)組織暑假社會(huì)志愿活動(dòng)，現(xiàn)場招聘志愿者本次志愿者活動(dòng)的目的、內(nèi)容及安排報(bào)名調(diào)價(jià)即聯(lián)系方式規(guī)律：1.主要為記敘文；2.三段式，前兩段敘述，后面一段是議論；3.最后一段大多需要談自己的看法；老師批英語試卷時(shí)：判卷時(shí)，每個(gè)老師桌子上都會(huì)有一大疊卷子，遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)超過我們平時(shí)桌子上的復(fù)習(xí)資料，你想，只要是個(gè)人，誰會(huì)有耐心仔細(xì)看那么多的英語文章，而且必須規(guī)定每天批多少份試卷，每天關(guān)在小屋里看偶們這些無聊低級(jí)的文章，心情煩躁，不許上網(wǎng)，不許QQ，不讓開MSN，更不可能寫博客，好人也會(huì)被折磨瘋的。所以他們判卷時(shí)，一般只看開頭和收尾句，再大體看一下字?jǐn)?shù)夠不夠，有的心情好的老師，還會(huì)看有沒有簡單低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤的單詞，因此針對(duì)這樣的情況：1.我們的目標(biāo)不是寫一篇驚世駭俗的文章，而是盡量在三十分種內(nèi)不說一句錯(cuò)話，不寫一個(gè)錯(cuò)單詞；2.寫作文時(shí)，最好用黑色筆，而不要用其他顏色的，另外，千萬要注意書面整齊，一般判卷老師大都是近世眼，對(duì)于黑色他們更為敏感，更習(xí)慣；3.書寫也是，越整潔，批卷老師看得越清晰，心情就越好，那么分?jǐn)?shù)也就越高！如果遇見寫錯(cuò)了單詞，千萬不要胡成一團(tuán)，用一個(gè)輕斜杠輕輕劃掉，老師說不定看不見，但是整體上是整潔的。如何準(zhǔn)備：1.背幾個(gè)經(jīng)典句型，盡量用在每段的首末句，一般一個(gè)作文三段，則背六個(gè)句子就行了，想法用在每段的首末句，經(jīng)典句型見下面；2.在作文中用閃光詞，經(jīng)典的閃光詞見下面；3.段中填充一些題干中的一些事實(shí)、要求描述進(jìn)去，盡量不要出現(xiàn)漢語拼音和錯(cuò)單詞，則最多十分鐘能寫一個(gè)中上檔的作文。經(jīng)典替換詞：1、individuals,characters, folks替換(people, persons)2、positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good3、dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替換bad ，如果bad做表語，可以有be less impressive替換Eg：An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.4、(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替換many.注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。Eg：Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理 用most, if not all ,替換most.5、a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some6、harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因?yàn)槭菚嬲Z，所以要加that)7、affair ,business ,matter 替換thing8、shared 代 common9、reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits )10、for my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion11、Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more( 注意沒有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.Eg：Sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12、little if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly13、beneficial, rewarding替換helpful14、shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer15、exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替換very16、hardly necessary, hardly inevitable . 替換 unnecessary, avoidable17、sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb. be interested in18、capture ones attention替換attract ones attention.19、facet,dimension,sphere代aspect20、be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear21、give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause.22、There are several reasons behind sth 替換.reasons for sth23、desire 替換want.24、pour attention into 替換pay attention to25、bear in mind that 替換remember26、enjoy, possess 替換have(注意process是過程的意思)27、interaction替換communication28、frown on sth替換 be against , disagree with sth29、to name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance30、next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible作文是各類英語考試中得分率最低的題型之一。同學(xué)們在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的語法、詞匯、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中創(chuàng)造一些詞匯和句型的閃光點(diǎn)，必定會(huì)使你的作文如虎添翼！如何寫一篇高分作文，仔細(xì)揣摩本文，肯定能寫高分作文：高分作文標(biāo)志1：是否長短句交叉；2、是否會(huì)使用插入語；3、用詞是否多樣，準(zhǔn)確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞；4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞；5、句型使用是否準(zhǔn)確、地道。下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng)：1.適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí), 句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 3. 一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think,people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge替換enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)下面舉一篇南京工程學(xué)院某位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。Computer and I By SimmyI never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 verythrilling 替換 excitingsth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in sth.google 替換 searchan army of 替換 a lot ofThe dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個(gè)精彩句型，用來描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情；Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popularCoincident with 非常地道的句型，表達(dá)“與一致”的意思，替換 With Advancement 替換 developmentPour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換 enter intoCurrent ( currently )替換 nowAppeal to sb. 替換 sb. be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替換 more and more peopleIt is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型， 說某事是毫不夸張的For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be GREatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin withWe can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被動(dòng)Additionally 替換 In addition / BesidesDeliver 替換 sendThere is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,*, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個(gè)句型，還有however作為插入語， function in the disservice of 替換 do harm toEmerging 替換 appearing ( fading 替換 disappearing )Net citizen 網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sidesComputers do play ，do 強(qiáng)調(diào)Positive 替換 important / good 等A slice of 替換 a part ofUnfavorable 替換 badImpacts 替換 effects / influencesWe should, therefore, take advantage of 使用插入語Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替換 advantage ( defects 替換 disadvantage )Facet 替換 aspect一個(gè)簡單模板（供參考）Nowadays, there are more and more 某種現(xiàn)象 in 某種場合. It is estimated that 相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù). Why have there been so many 某種現(xiàn)象? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is 原因一. Besides, 原因二. The third one is 原因三. To sum up, the main cause of 某種現(xiàn)象 is due to 最主要原因. It is high time that something were done upon