高考話題寫作高分句.doc

話題寫作高分句話題一 外貌特征1.我的同桌是個衣服從不合身的古怪男孩。(定語從句；odd)(13 湖北書面表達改)My deskmate is an odd boy whose clothes never fit him.2. 薩莉 (Sally) 是個二十歲出頭，長發(fā)及腰的女孩。(with復合結構)Sally is a girl in her early twenties with long hair reaching the waist.3. 我想知道這么多年瑪麗是怎樣保持身材的。(賓語從句)(15 福建單選改)I wonder how Mary has kept her figure all these years.4. 他臉上流露著如此嚴肅的表情，我很害怕。(so . that .; wear)He was wearing so serious an expression / such a serious expression on his face that I was quite frightened / scared.5. 一個人能靠外表吃飯，卻 (偏偏) 要靠才華。(liveoff,appearance)One could live off his appearance, but instead lives off his talent.話題二 性格與行為特征1. 他就是這么一個總是挑別人毛病的人。(定語從句；fault)He is such a man who is always finding fault with other people.2. 正是苦干、決心以及溫和的天性使她進入了醫(yī)學院。(強調句；aswellas)(人教U1)It was hard work and determination as well as her gentle nature that got her into medical school.3. 他不但展現(xiàn)出了勇氣，還證明了自己是個可以信賴的人。(倒裝句；display)Not only has he displayed courage, but also he has proved himself to be a reliable person.4. 不要在意別人說什么，只要我們對自己做過的事充滿信心。(賓語從句)(12 北京書面表達改)Dont mind what others say so long as we are confident in what we have done.5. 喬 (Joe) 既驕傲又固執(zhí)，從不認錯且總是找他人擔責。(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語；admit,blame)(14 浙江單選改)Joe is proud and stubborn, never admitting he is wrong and always looking for someone else to blame.話題三 興趣與愛好1. 這種硬幣品質高，值得收藏。(of +n;worth)(13 福建閱讀)The coin is of high quality and worth collecting.2. 養(yǎng)寵物是她的愛好，這極大地撫慰了她孤獨的心靈。(非限制性定語從句；comfort)Raising / Keeping pets is her hobby, which comforts her lonely heart greatly.3. 身為一個活躍的年輕人，我喜歡體育和戶外活動。(being,fond)(11 遼寧書面表達改)Being an active young person, Im fond of sports and outdoor activities.4. 為了保持健康，退休后他開始把騎自行車作為經常性的鍛煉形式。(不定式作目的狀語；take up)To keep healthy, he took up cycling as a regular form of exercise after he retired / his retirement.5. 體育運動不但對身體有益還有助于使你的頭腦更敏銳。(benefitv, sharp)Sports not only benefit the body, but also help make your mind sharper.話題四 人體與動作1. 在漆黑的房間里他摸索著走到了床邊，尋找開關。(feel ones way)He felt his way to the bed in the dark room in search of the switch.2. 約翰正在房間學習突然聽到了一聲尖叫。(when)(人教U5)John was studying in his room when he heard a scream.3. 我抬頭看她的眼睛時，她朝我微笑并伸出雙手抓住了我的手。(look up, reach)(14 重慶閱讀改)When I looked up into her eyes, she smiled at me and reached out her hands to grasp mine.4. 她緊緊地擁抱著丈夫，眼睛里噙滿了感激 (gratituden) 的淚水。(并列句)(10 湖北完形改)She hugged her husband tightly and her eyes (were) filled with tears of gratitude.5. 我不知道小說里到底是什么使他放聲痛哭。(強調句)(12 湖北完成句子)I dont know what it was in the novel that made him burst into tears / burst out crying.話題五 生活起居1. 電話又壞了，我得找人把它修好。(have sth done)The phone is out of order / not working again and I have to have it repaired.2. 大部分青少年比較喜歡晚上熬夜，早上睡懶覺。 (08 浙江閱讀)Most teenagers prefer to stay up late at night and sleep late in the morning.3. 盡管我很累，但是能幫助父母做家務我很開心。(as)Tired as I was, I was happy that I could help my parents with the housework / do the housework.4. 家具齊全的公寓，9月1日起可供出租。Fully furnished flats are available to rent from 1st September.5. 他們想看到自己的女兒安頓下來，結婚生子。 (17 天津單選改)Theyd like to see their daughter settle down, get married, and have kids.話題六家人、朋友與周圍的人1.任何人，無論他是官員還是公交車司機，都應受到同樣的尊重。(whether. or .; equally)(12福建單選改)Anyone, whether he is an official or a bus driver, should be equally respected.2.我們擁有的朋友越多，獲得的快樂也就越多。(themore . the more)(14全國短文改錯改)The more friends we have, the more pleasure we can gain / get.3.無論我們多忙，都該抽時間陪陪父母。(讓步狀語從句；spare,accompany)However busy we may be, we should spare some time to accompany our parents.4.出生在一個有三個哥哥的家庭里，大衛(wèi)從小就被培養(yǎng)重視分享的意識。(過去分詞作狀語；bring up;value)(11福建單選改)Born into a family with three brothers, David was brought up to value the sense of sharing.5.我父母已經結婚20年了，但他們從沒有吵過一次架。(倒裝句)My parents have been married for 20 years but never once have they quarreled with each other.話題七社交禮儀1.應該鼓勵孩子們養(yǎng)成良好的習慣并且守規(guī)矩。(被動句；behave)(11浙江書面表達改)Children should be encouraged to develop / form good habits and behave themselves.2.認真傾聽可以顯示尊重、促進理解、改善人際關系。(promote)(08江蘇書面表達改)Good listening can show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.3.當你直視他人時，他們會覺得你(很)欣賞他們正在講的話。(賓語從句；appreciate)(15安徽任務閱讀)When you look people in the eye, they feel you appreciate what they are saying.4.為某人的健康或者成功祝酒時，我們總會碰杯(clink)。(when +現(xiàn)在分詞短語)We will clink glasses when drinking to someones health or success.5.我要向你道歉我恐怕誤拆了你的信。(apology)(11陜西單詞拼寫)I have an apology to make to you / I have to make an apology to you Im afraid I opened your letter by mistake.6.你不該打斷會議來告訴我那件事，你本可以會后告訴我。(虛擬語氣；interrupt)(14湖北完成句子)You shouldnt / oughtnt to have interrupted the meeting to tell me that; you could have come to tell me afterwards.話題八學校生活 (一)1.此課程旨在使學生能勝任護理工作。(bedesigned to, equip . for)The course is designed to equip students for a career in nursing.2.應該鼓勵學生將課堂上所學的知識運用到實踐中。(被動句)Students should be encouraged to apply what they have learned in class to practice.3.自從她出國深造后就不再和我們聯(lián)系了。(no longer)(11上海句子翻譯)No longer has she / She has no longer kept in touch with us since she went abroad for further education / study.4.不管就業(yè)形勢如何嚴峻，對優(yōu)秀大學畢業(yè)生總是有需求的。(讓步狀語從句；top,indemand)However / No matter how serious the employment situation is, top graduates from universities will always be in demand.5.盡管對破舊的校園和設備簡陋的教室感到失望，但我發(fā)現(xiàn)老師們很有耐心也很體貼。(as,shabby)(12湖北書面表達改)Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate.6.這個學生沒有請假就離校三天。(leave,absent)(12湖北完成句子改)The student was absent from school for three days without asking for leave (first).話題九學校生活 (二)1.通過不斷努力，我在學習上取得了平穩(wěn)進步。(constant)Through my constant efforts, I have made steady progress in my studies.2.下個月就該交論文了，一周七天我都在工作，(而且)常常到深夜。(due)(14浙江單選改)The paper is due next month, and I am working seven days a week, often long into the night.3.為解決我所面對的問題，我通常選擇參考相關的學習資料或網頁。(relevant)To solve the problems (which / that) Im faced with, I usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or web pages.4.我決定專注(學習)英語并且最終我的努力取得了成功。(pay off)(14山東書面表達改)I decided to concentrate on my English and finally my efforts / hard work paid off.或I decided to focus my mind / attention on my English andfinally my efforts / hard work paid off.5.最有益于我們工作的，不是我們做了多少事，而是在所做的事情中我們傾注了多少愛。(強調句；benefit)(11陜西單選改)It is not how much we do but how much love we put into what we do that benefits our work most.話題十語言學習1.為了取得更好的成績，你應該在考試前再復習一下我們學過的所有內容。(11四川單選改)To get a better grade, you should go over everything that we have learned / covered before the test.2.他法語學得很好，在明年學校組織的法國之旅中將會派上用場。(非限制性定語從句；grasp / knowledge)He has a good grasp / knowledge of French, which will be useful for the school trip to France next year.3.有這么多的單詞和短語我能理解，但不能準確使用。(定語從句)There are / were so many words and phrases that I can / could understand but cant / couldnt use accurately.4.我們靠課堂上學到的東西不太可能通過考試。(onthe basis of)We are not likely to pass the exam on the basis of what weve picked up / learned during the classes.5.如果他以前花更多的時間練習說英語，那現(xiàn)在就能說得更好了。(if虛擬條件句)If he had spent more timepractisingspeaking English before, he would be able to speak it much better now.話題十一工作與職業(yè)(一)1.毫無疑問，這位候選人符合該職位的要求。(thereis no doubt that; meet the requirements)There is no doubt that the candidate meets the requirements for this position / post.2.雖然很累，但是我不后悔志愿幫助殘疾兒童。(as)Tired as I was, I didnt regret volunteering to help the disabled children.3.常言道，不要以貌取人。(judge)(13全國單選改)You cant judge a book by its cover, as the old saying goes.或You cant judge by appearances, as the old saying goes.4.直到大學畢業(yè)，我才決定成為一名程序設計師。(not. until .)I didnt make up my mind to become a program designer until I graduated from university.5.護士們不僅要求漲工資，還要求減少工作時間。(倒裝句；not onlybut also)(14全國單選改)Not only do the nurses want a pay increase, but also they want reduced working hours.6.警察在我們的社會中起著極其重要的作用。(playa vital role)The police play a vital role in our society.話題十二工作與職業(yè)(二)1.我期待您的答復。(11遼寧書面表達改)Im looking forward to your reply.2.我的工作包括招聘與培訓新員工。(involve)My work involves employing and training new employees / staff.3.有相關(崗位)工作經驗的求職者優(yōu)先。(relevant, prefer)Applicants with relevant work experience are preferred.4.說實在的，很多人把名和利看得很重要。(attach)(人教U5)To be honest / frank, a lot of people attach great importance to fame and fortune / becoming rich and famous.5.正是他手寫的求職信使其從眾多的求職者中脫穎而出。(強調句)It was his handwritten application letter that made him stand out from a large number of applicants / candidates.6.吉米(Jimmy)一到就發(fā)現(xiàn)排了一條長隊的申請者等著面試。(13山東閱讀)Upon arrival, Jimmy found a long line of applicants (were) waiting to be interviewed.話題十三工作與職業(yè)(三)1.他有潛力成為世界級的音樂家。(potential)He has the potential to become a world-class musician.2.很多難題亟待解決，新升職的經理正面臨巨大挑戰(zhàn)。(with復合結構)With so many difficult problems to settle / handle / deal with, the newly-promoted manager is facing a great challenge.3.毫無疑問這是你獲得工作技能、提高能力的絕佳機會。(同位語從句)There is no doubt that this is an ideal / perfect / golden opportunity for you to acquire work skills and improve your ability.4.盡管我被提升為經理了，我感覺我沒有做好承擔新責任的準備。(讓步狀語從句)Although I have been promoted to manager, I dont feel ready to undertake / take on new responsibilities.5.周日是我們不必工作的一天，是我們全身心地投入去享受并慶祝美好事物的時刻。(定語從句；be supposed to, devoteoneself to)(08湖北閱讀改)Sunday is a day when we are not supposed to work, a time when we devote ourselves to enjoying and celebratingwhatis beautiful.6.我認為不管發(fā)生什么，我們必須保持冷靜并找出解決問題的方法。(賓語從句；find a solution to)(09湖南書面表達改)I think / find that whatever / no matter what happens, we must keep calm and find a solution to the problem.話題十四問題與沖突1.我想分享我解決難題的方法.(approach)(11安徽書面表達改)Id like to share my approach to difficulties.2.我們應該學會多溝通并設身處地為他人著想。(place/ position)We should learn to communicate more and put ourselves in others place / position.3.有困難請向警察求助。(祈使句；turn to)(08上海句子翻譯)Please turn to the police for help when (you are) in trouble.4.父母的言行對孩子的一生都有影響。(what引導主語從句；effect / influence)What parents say and do has a life-long effect / influence on their children.5.要避免此類沖突，我認為雙方保持冷靜很有必要。(it作形式賓語；consider)To avoid such conflicts, I consider it necessary for both sides to keep / stay calm.6.從某種程度上講，是你的消極態(tài)度造成了外語學習上的困難。(強調句；attitude)To a (certain) degree /Tosome extent, its your negative attitude that causes difficulties in learning a foreign language.7.在老師的幫助下，我學會了如何分析并解決問題。(settle)With the help of my teacher, I have learned how toanalyseand settle problems.8.就我們班而言，急需解決的問題是有些學生上課偷偷玩手機。(現(xiàn)在分詞作定語；表語從句；resolve)(15廣東書面表達改)As for our class, the problem requiringto beresolved urgently is that some students play cell phones secretly in class.話題十五成功與失敗1.我們應該下苦功夫通過學習來提高自己。(take pains to)(15福建書面表達改)We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning.2.一想到沒賣完所有報紙，喬治(George)就覺得沮喪。(sink, failure)(15湖北完形改)Georges heart sank as he thought of / at the thought of his failure to sell all his papers.3.不到萬不得已不要承認失敗。(not. until .)Dont admit defeat until you really have to.4.是勇氣和決心而不是運氣保證了他的成功。(強調句；guarantee)It was not luck but courage and determination that guaranteed his success.5.她奮斗了十年來取得成功。(不定式作目的狀語；struggle)She struggled for ten years to achieve success.6.要克服如此多的問題需要極大的勇氣。(it作形式主語；take)It takes great courage to overcome so many problems.7.他們決心不惜任何代價也要堅持并實現(xiàn)他們的夢想。(cost, stick to)They were determined to stick to andrealise/fulfil/ achieve their dream at all costs / at any cost.8.可能要很多年你的努力才會有回報。(itis / was . before)It may be many years before your hard work pays off / is rewarded.寫作十大“加分”句型句型一 分詞作狀語Moved by the kids, I decided to donate all my money to them.被孩子們感動了，我決定把我所有的錢都捐給他們。Seeing Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears.看到父親工作這么辛苦，我忍不住愴然淚下。點評：分詞作狀語可以用來替代時間、條件、原因等狀語從句，讓文章顯得更加簡潔，同時功底更深。分詞作狀語的用法：當狀語從句的主語與主句的主語一樣時，可直接省略從句的主語，并把從句的謂語改成分詞（主動語態(tài)改成現(xiàn)在分詞，被動語態(tài)改成過去分詞），從而構成分詞作狀語結構。【例1】When I see Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears.Seeing Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears.【例2】Because I was moved by the kids in Wenchuan, I decided to donate all my money to them.Moved by the kids in Wenchuan, I decided to donate all my money to them.句型二 副詞提前Obviously, one of the best ways to keep healthy is to do sports.顯然，保持健康最好的方法之一是做運動。Eventually, every child will leave home to lead his own life as a fully independent adult.最終，每一個孩子都會離開家庭去過自己的生活，成為一個完全獨立的成年人。點評：如果要選一種最讓人心生感觸的句型，副詞提前的做法即使不是最好，也是之一了。前置的副詞讓作者還沒說出具體的事件，內心的想法已經呼之欲出。這正是這種無比簡單的語法現(xiàn)象所煥發(fā)出的魅力所在。除了提升情感效果之外，副詞提前也是讓文章結構清晰的一個非常好的辦法。我們常用的firstly, furthermore, finally等等所謂的“邏輯詞”都是屬于這一種類型，同學們要時刻想著去用它。注意事項：用來提前的必須是副詞！除了上面給出來的2個例句之外，再分享一篇作文里一個較難的句子，作文題目是“我最難忘的回憶”?！纠縊ddly enough, my most precious memory lies in the days when I was ill in hospital.非常奇怪的是，我最珍貴的回憶發(fā)生在我生病住院的那些日子里。句型三 動名詞作主語Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.聽音樂可以讓我們感覺放松。Doing exercise keeps us healthy.做運動讓我們保持健康。點評：動名詞做主語是最簡單的一種加分句型了，非常容易掌握。注意事項：如果主語只有一個動作，謂語動詞要用單數第三人稱！大家可能覺得上面給出來的兩個例句并不是十分精彩，但是動名詞作主語只要合理使用，還是會讓人眼前一亮的。請看下句：【例】Besides, taking some small sports equipment along with you can help you do exercise whenever you are free.另外，隨身攜帶一些小型運動器械可以讓你利用任何空閑的時間來運動。句型四 強調句It is in recent years that people begin to realize the importance of environmental protection.最近這些年人們才開始意識到保護環(huán)境的重要性。點評：強調句型是一種規(guī)律性極強、非常好用的高級句型，有利于增進文章的感情色彩。強調句型的基本模式：It is / was +句子要強調的部分+ that +句子中剩余的部分。例如，原本我們想寫的句子是：Eric found a beautiful vase in the cave.要強調主語Eric，則為It was Eric that found a beautiful vase in the cave.要強調賓語a beautiful vase，則為It was a beautiful vase that Eric found in the cave.句型五 同位語or同位語從句Beijing, the capital of China, has a great many places of interest.北京是中國的首都，有很多的旅游景點。The fact is clear that our planet is becoming warmer and warmer.很顯然，地球正在變暖。點評：相比于前幾種閃光句型，同位語和同位語從句就要復雜一點了，尤其是同位語從句要復雜一些。當同位語從句被合理使用，尤其是和排比句一起使用的時候，所產生的效果是震撼性的。同位語從句的基本結構是：抽象名詞+ that +抽象名詞的內容（從句）+主句剩余部分?！纠縄 have just recieved the message that a serious earthquake struck a county of Taiwan yesterday.我剛收到一個消息：昨天臺灣某縣發(fā)生了嚴重的地震。關于同位語從句的效果，且看獨立宣言中的名句：We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness.我們認為以下事實是不言自明的：人生而平等，并擁有不可分割的權利，包括擁有生命的權利、獲得自由的權利以及追求幸福的權利。句型六 經典句型這些句型有三個特點：1.專業(yè)。這些句型都是經過驗證的在議論文中經常使用的套話，使用這些句型顯得比較專業(yè)。2.萬金油。這些句型經過前人的實踐發(fā)現(xiàn)非常容易使用，只要往自己寫好的句子上硬套就行，甚至對時態(tài)語態(tài)都無特殊要求，如同萬金油一樣。3.無意義。這些句型本身并沒有什么特殊含義，只是輔助一下預期或讓表意更嚴謹一點，有它無它對語義影響其實不大。這些句型包括：There is no denying that +陳述句不可否認There is no doubt that +陳述句毫無疑問Needless to say,陳述句不用多說，It is widely accepted that +陳述句眾所周知As is known to all,陳述句眾所周知，F(xiàn)rom my point of view,陳述句我個人認為，Personally,陳述句我個人認為，As far as I am concerned,陳述句我個人認為，As far as I know,陳述句據我所知，When it comes to，陳述句說到鑒于句型太多，就不一一舉例子了，大家只要把自己想說的話放到“陳述句”那一部分就可以了。記住，剩余的部分一點都不要改，包括逗號！舉個例子吧。一般我們會說：Mr Zhang is the most handsome teacher in the world.點評：這句顯得很普通，但是如果我們使用經典句型的話，就會顯得高級一點：【例】As is known to all Mr Zhang is the most handsome teacher in the world.眾所周知，張老師是世界上最帥的老師?！纠緼s far as I am concerned, Mr Zhang is the most handsome teacher in the world.我個人認為，張老師是世界上最帥的老師。句型七 巧用asAs winter comes, more and more leaves fall off the trees, yellow and sad.隨著冬天的來臨，越來越多悲傷地黃葉從樹上落下。The pollution is getting worse as the economy develops.隨著經濟的發(fā)展，污染正在變得更加嚴重。Moms hair is not as black as it used to be.媽媽的頭發(fā)不再像過去一樣烏黑亮麗。點評：當，隨著as time goes by隨著時間的流逝作為regard A as B把A當做Bas a result結果是正如，就像as we all know/ as everyone knows正如我們都知道的as we had expected正如我們期待的那樣as is know to all眾所周知as is mentioned before正如前面所提到的as the saying goes就像諺語說的那樣as it turns out正如結果所展示的那樣因為比較as . as it used to和過去一樣句型八 定語從句The man, w