遼寧省鳳翔縣高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí) 寫(xiě)作選編（5）.doc

陜西鳳翔縣2016高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作【二輪】選編（5）書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練假如你是李夏。你看到關(guān)國(guó)留學(xué)生sharon 在網(wǎng)上發(fā)貼，.希望有人能幫助她提高普通話(mandarin）水平，她可以教英語(yǔ)作為回報(bào)。請(qǐng)銀據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)給她寫(xiě)一封電于哪件。1.表達(dá)給她提供幫助的意愿； 2.說(shuō)明你能勝任輔導(dǎo)的理由； 3.給出講好普通話的兩點(diǎn)建議； 4.提出你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的具體需求。注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 文中不得透漏個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；hi sharon,this is li xia. i learned from your post that you want to improve your mandarin_ li xia【參考范文】test 3hi sharon,this is li xia. i learned from your post that you want to improve your mandarin. i am quite interested in it . i think im fit for it. as a student, i have been learning mandarin for many years. in addition ,i am chinese, which means mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. so im quite confident that i can help you learn mandarin.learning mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well ,you should spend much time practicing mandarin everyday. as the saying goes, practice makes perfect. besides, you can also read some books in chinese、see some chinese films and listen to some chinese radio programmes. speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.in your post, you say you can teach english as a reward. it is just what i want. im eager to improve my english. so, if you allow me to help you learn mandarin, you can also help me improve my english. we can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in english and half an hour in chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.hope for you early reply! yours sincerely li xia【深圳市2014高考英語(yǔ)綜合能力測(cè)試題（1）】讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)（共l小題，滿(mǎn)分25分）閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。benefits of honestysarah darling met a homeless man called billy ray harris and gave him her purse, with all her change in it. it was not until the next morning she realized that she had left her diamond ring in the purse. to her surprise, when she and her husband bill krejci found billy, billy immediately returned the ring. the grateful couple paid him back for his honesty by emptying out their pockets. however, bill krejci, a web designer, felt that he needed to do something more for this honest man. he set up a special page for him on money- raising site give forward with a goal of raising $1,000 in 90 days. in just four days, the donations rose to over $85,000. that was not all. because of all the media coverage, billy reunited with his elder brother, edwin harris who he had not met for 27 years. the two talked for 45 minutes on the phone and edwin was planning to take billy to his home in lubbock, texas. all this good fortune came just because billy did the right thing - he returned something that did not belong to him. honesty is surely the best policy!【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】 1以約30個(gè)詞概括短文的內(nèi)容； 2以約120個(gè)詞就“因誠(chéng)實(shí)而得到的收獲”發(fā)表你的看法。內(nèi)容包括： (1)簡(jiǎn)述你對(duì)billy ray harris事例的理解或看法： (2)記述一次你（或你的朋友）“誠(chéng)實(shí)待友”的經(jīng)歷： (3)你對(duì)“誠(chéng)實(shí)待友”的建議或方法?！緦?xiě)作要求】1在作文中可以使用實(shí)例或其它論述方法支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)?！驹u(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。_ 【參考范文】讀寫(xiě)任務(wù) (one possible version)the passage is a story about honesty. billy ray harris was given many donations after he honestly returned a diamond ring to sarah darling. moreover, he got the opportunity to reunite with his long-lost brother. i appreciate billy ray harris very much. his honesty touched sarah darling and her husband as well as the whole society. the donations offered to him have proved that “one good turn deserves another”.as far as honesty is concerned, i have had an unforgettable story to tell. about ten years ago, my friend susan brought a beautiful pen, which i loved so much that i stole it. that night, i was filled with regrets. after struggling for the whole night, i decided to tell her the truth. i was much surprised that susan was not angry at me. so i have understood that honesty can clear misunderstanding and promote friendship. as a matter of fact, we should be honest with our friends, because only in this way can we win their trust. 【深圳市2014高考英語(yǔ)綜合能力測(cè)試題（6）】基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作（共1小題，滿(mǎn)分15分） 以下是你班“自然災(zāi)害”討論會(huì)的記錄匯總?！緦?xiě)作內(nèi)容】 根據(jù)下面方框中的信息，為英語(yǔ)校報(bào)寫(xiě)篇報(bào)道。時(shí)間：三月九日，班會(huì)課與會(huì)人員：全班同學(xué)及班主任討論內(nèi)容1現(xiàn)象：十年來(lái)，水災(zāi)、地震、臺(tái)風(fēng)、海嘯和森林火災(zāi)日益頻繁。2危害：造成數(shù)百萬(wàn)人死亡，破壞了大片的肥沃土地。3原因：讓人震驚的是，許多自然災(zāi)害是由人類(lèi)行為引起的，人類(lèi)過(guò)多地砍伐森林樹(shù)木、 嚴(yán)重污染環(huán)境，導(dǎo)致氣候發(fā)生了巨大變化。4建議：地球是我們的家園，我們應(yīng)該盡力保護(hù)它，使它成為適合于我們生活的好地方?！緦?xiě)作要求】1只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容；2作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹炕A(chǔ)寫(xiě)作 (one possible version) on 9th, march, we had a heated discussion on natural disasters in our class meeting, with the whole class and our head teacher taking part in. from the discussion, we realize that in the last decade, floods, earthquakes, typhoons, tsunamis and forest fires have become common things, resulting in millions of deaths and severe destruction of rich lands. what shocks us is that it is human behaviors that have brought along many of these natural disasters. climates have greatly changed because people cut down too many trees in the forests and the environment has been badly polluted. therefore, it is high time for us to protect the earth to make it a lovely place that is suitable to live in. 假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友杰克在網(wǎng)上收看了今年的春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會(huì)(gala)。在給你的郵件中，杰克希望了解更多“春晚”的情況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，回復(fù)一封電子郵件。要點(diǎn)：1“春晚”從1983年開(kāi)始舉辦，中國(guó)人視之為精神大餐(big feast)；2節(jié)目包括歌舞、相聲(crosstalk)、小品(sketches)、雜技(acrobatics)等；3今年“春晚”你最喜歡的節(jié)目。注意：1詞數(shù)100左右，可根據(jù)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2電子郵件的開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。dear jack，im glad to know youve watched the cctv spring festival gala this year and that youve got a very good impression of it.looking forward to hearing from you again!sincerely yours，li hua【參考范文】dear jack，im glad to know youve watched the cctv spring festival gala this year and that youve got a very good impression of it.the spring festival gala, known as “chun wan” to us chinese, is a big feast for our eyes and ears. ever since its first appearance in 1983, the gala has developed into an occasion that most chinese find it hard to ignore.on new years eve every year, family members gather in front of the tv enjoying a wide variety of programs. though they vary from year to year, the programs mostly include singing, dancing, crosstalk, sketches, acrobatics, etc. , from which we have endless fun and entertainment.of all the programs this year, i especially like the magic show by liu qian, a magician from taiwan. according to liu, we all have the power to create magic in our lives. a nice idea, isnt it?looking forward to hearing from you again!sincerely yours，li hua【深圳市2014高考英語(yǔ)綜合能力測(cè)試題（6）】讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)（共l小題，滿(mǎn)分25分）閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。last month, the ministry of education asked all schools to get their students to take part in an online blessing the motherland program during the spring festival. but, surprisingly, some netizens (網(wǎng)民) have questioned, even criticized the proposal. economic globalization has brought about cultural diversity in china. as a result, many young people prefer to celebrate christmas, valentines day and other western festivals rather than celebrate traditional chinese festivals such as the dragon boat festival. it is important to teach the importance of chinese culture to such people if we dont want the traditional festivals to become history. by chance, the lunar new year starts on feb 14, which was celebrated as valentines day only in the west a few years ago, but now is a sort of craze among youths in chinas cities. thats why the blessing the motherland is important; it is aimed at making students attach more importance to spring festival and traditional chinese culture. so it is necessary for china to strengthen the influence of its traditional culture and enhance chinese peoples sense of identit3r and national pride.【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】1以約30個(gè)詞概括短文要點(diǎn)；2以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)“重視傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日”的看法，內(nèi)容包括：(1)你的讀后感想；(2)闡述忽視傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日引發(fā)的后果；(3)對(duì)待中國(guó)和西方節(jié)日你的建議?！緦?xiě)作要求】1在作文中可以使用實(shí)例或其它論述方法支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)?！驹u(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。_【參考范文】讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)(one possible version)proposed by the government, the “blessing the motherland” program has come under question and criticism. many youths prefer western festivals to traditional chinese ones, so its t