英語初三第二階段寫作訓練.ppt

初三第二階段寫作訓練,Travel (1),假如你是李雷，請閱讀你美國網(wǎng)友Tom的E-mail，根據(jù)E-mail的內容，給他寫一封回信。 Dear Li Li Im glad to tell you that Ill take a trip to China this winter vacation. Could you please tell me where I can go? What are the places of interest there, the activities I can do, and the food I can enjoy? Sorry to trouble you. Will you please write to me soon? Yours， Tom 注意: 1字數(shù)不少于60。 2.開頭已給出 Dear Tom Im glad to know you will come to China.,Dear Tom, Im glad to know you will come to China. Talking about my motherland， theres just so much to appreciate. Among all the attractive cities， Shanghai may be one of the best choices for you.,Shanghai is a perfect mixture of historic sceneries and modern skyscrapers. For instance， people invariably visit the Town Gods Temple(城隍廟) when they come to Shanghai. Not only can you learn about a lot of touching stories there， but also youre supposed to try the famous delicious food - Shanghai Steamed Dumplings . By the way， are you crazy about shopping? Shanghai is really a paradise for shopaholics . Its easy for you to get inexpensive goods of best quality. So, whats your decision? I just cant wait meeting you and you are always welcome.,Travel (2),Do you have a plan for your next vacation? If not, why dont you come to visit Beijing? Beijing is a city with a long colorful history, so there are lots of places of interest. For example, the Summer Palace, the Fragrant Hill park and the Palace Museum. If you prefer to go boating, the Summer Palace is a great place to choose. The Fragrant Hill park is for people who like climbing mountains. And if you want to go somewhere educational, its not a bad idea to go to the Palace Museum.,Traveling around Beijing by bus is the cheapest and the most convenient way. There are any different kinds of buses. Taking different kinds of buses, you can enjoy different sights. When the evening is coming, how about having some Beijing food? Beijing Duck is one of the most delicious food in Beijing, however, it doesnt cost much, you still can have a good time eating in Beijing. In a word, Beijing is not only famous for places of interest, but also awfully thrilling. One eyewitness is better than ten hearsays. Come to visit Beijing and enjoy yourself!,Volunteer (1),Dear Sir, I am Li Ming, a student from Class Five, Grade Nine. I want to join your volunteer group this winter vacation. Id like to visit the old peoples home on Sundays and sing for them. I am a loving boy with an interest in music, so it would make all of us happy. Going to an animal hospital is also a good chance for me to put my love to good use. I will spend several hours working there every week. I believe I can not only help others, but also do what I enjoy by volunteering. If you would like me to have this chance, please call me at 5555-8765 Li Ming,Volunteer (I),Dear Sir, Im Li Ming, a student from Class Five, Grade Nine. Hearing the news, I was very excited and I was determined to do some volunteer work. First of all, Id like to help clean up a city park. I enjoy doing outdoor work and I think its our duty to make contribution to the society. So Ill try my best to do it well.,Another thing that I want to do is teaching in an after-school care center. I think my English is good and while I am doing that, I can not only help children with their homework, but improve myself as well. Volunteer is great. It can give us lots of experiences in both social skills and study. That will also help me to realize my dream when I work. These are what I can do and how I think. I hope you can give me this chance.,Volunteer (II),Dear Sir, Im Li Ming, a student from Class Five, Grade Nine. I really want to be a volunteer. I can help in the Childrens Hospital. There, I can help look after children and sing to cheer them up as well because I am good at taking care of others and singing is my favorite hobby, too. I believe I can help them stay away from sadness.,I also want to volunteer in an animal hospital. I am able to feed animals and help them clean themselves because I have a pet dog and I have lots of knowledge about animals. Besides being interested in animals, the reason why I can volunteer there is I have enough time to work. So I prefer this volunteer work. In my opinion, the more I volunteer, the more knowledge I will get. Being a volunteer will not only open up my eyes. But also make me a helpful girl in the future.,As for the Childrens Hospital, every child there needs help. And Im helpful, my hobby is reading, so I can tell stories to cheer them up and let them know : when you smile, the world smiles to you. One more thing I need to mention is that I can do these work on weekends. In my opinion, these activities are great, they can help me keep an active attitude towards life.,Volunteer (2),假如你是李雷。你想加入你所在學校的“愛心俱樂部(Helping Hands Club)”，請用英語寫一封自薦信，寫出你的“愛心”具體表現(xiàn)，并說明為什么要參加？你的想法是什么？ （注意：開頭和結尾已寫出，不記入詞數(shù)。請不要寫出真實姓名和學校。） work hard at, help others， get on with ， old people，because，,Dear Chairman , I am a boy student from Class 1, Grade 3. Id like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am well. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates and often help them with their lessons. On my way home, I often help old people cross the street. On the bus, I always give my seats to women with babies. Sometimes, I pick up rubbish in the park in order to protect our environment because I think I must do what I can do to save the earth. If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. Besides, I can do more for others. Ill be glad if Im received. I am waiting for your answer.,Volunteer (3）,現(xiàn)在，學校正在開展題為What I have done for my class 的征文活動，請你投稿，談談你為班集體做了些什么，有什么感想或受到了哪些教育。 注意：請不要寫出真實校名和姓名。 提示詞語：love，class，do，for example，think,What I have done for my class,Im a member of our class. I love my class and I have done lots of things for it. First of all, I usually clean up the classroom carefully and keep it clean. Not only do I feel good when I clean our classroom, but also I make both teachers and the other classmates happy. Next, I have never stopped helping other classmates. Its a good way to make friends and it has also improved my skills when I help others with their schoolwork. Meanwhile, I have helped teachers solve some difficult questions. I think they are all educational. The more you have done for your class, the more you have learned. It lets me know helping is learning.,What I have done for my class,I love my class, because it is not only a place for me to study, but also my home. So I have done many things for my class. I like helping others. For example, I always help my classmates with their homework so that they can improve their exam grades. That makes us happy. And I often help my classmates to do the cleaning work. Because of this, our classroom is clean and tidy everyday. Doing these things not only makes us happy, but create a clean and comfortable environment for study as well. I think all of this makes us united. Unity is strength. With the unity, we can do well in everything.,Help (1),英語報正在舉辦“We help ourselves by helping others”為主題的征文活動。請你通過自己的經(jīng)歷和感受，說明幫助別人也就是幫助自己。 提示詞：for example, ask for, find, with ones help, realize, do good to,Everyone needs help and Ive learned a lot from it. Months ago, my teacher asked me to help Mike with his math. At first I felt a little nervous, because I was not that good at math. So before helping him, I went over the textbook again and again, and did lots of exercise. To my surprise, some difficult problems I couldnt understand before were worked out by myself. With my help, Mike made great progress in math, too. After that, I realize that helping others also does good to ourselves.,Help (2 ),媽媽，我愛你！,校報舉行英語征文比賽，請根據(jù)圖畫和所給提示詞, 以“Sally smiled again” 為題寫一篇80個單詞以上的英文短文參賽。要求語法正確、意思連貫，所提供的圖示和英文提示詞必須涉及并可適當發(fā)揮。短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。提示詞： in hospital, look after, miss lessons, fail, help, encourage, join, game,三類文（有錯誤）,Last week, Sallys mother was ill in hospital. She had to looked after her. Because she looked after her mother in the hospital, she missed a lot of lessons. Sally failed the exam and very sad. She was cried loudly. When her classmates knew she failed the exam story, they helped her with the lessons after school. They encouraged her and played games with her. Sally joined them and had a good time. Sally was very happy, she smiled again. (80w),二類文,One day, Sallys mother was badly ill in hospital; she was really worried and had to look after her mother every day. She didnt come back to school until her mother was well enough to leave the hospital. After she returned to school, she took a big exam. She missed a lot of lessons, so she failed the exam and was very sad. She cried loudly as soon as she saw the paper. When her friends knew this, they decided to help her. They encouraged her and helped her with the lessons. With the help of her friends, Sally caught up with others again, she was very happy. Sally smiled again! Look, she is playing games with her friends now! (120w),二類文,One day, Sallys mother was ill. Sally was very worried about her and had to look after her in hospital every day, so she missed a lot of lessons. There was a big exam and she failed. Her classmates saw her cry and decided to help her. They encouraged her to face the difficulties and also helped her with her lessons. Sally was moved and tried her best to study. She made good progress then and caught up with others. She enjoyed playing games with her classmates. Sally smiled again.,一類文,Sally used to be outgoing. But that was before her mother was hospi