2018_2019學(xué)年高中英語Unit17LaughterSectionⅥ（自修課）Writing—個人趣聞軼事學(xué)案北師大版.docx

Section (自修課) Writing個人趣聞軼事本單元的寫作項目是個人趣聞軼事，它屬于記敘文范疇。一、基本結(jié)構(gòu)1簡述故事的梗概給出簡要的信息，說明在某時、某地你做了什么，遇到了什么人，在此之前發(fā)生了什么事情。2故事的開始描述這個帶有幽默性質(zhì)的故事是怎樣開始的。3故事的發(fā)展描寫接下來發(fā)生的事情，即在哪些方面出了問題。4故事進一步走向高潮描寫新插曲，使故事更具有幽默性。5進行總結(jié)二、增分佳句1That was the worst day I have ever had when I was doing .2As I was waiting for a bus, a taxi passed by and splashed rainwater over me .3When we hurried to the station, there was a long queue and we had to wait for a long time. We got disgusted .4I was having a photo taken when my classmate fell into the water. Luckily, at the moment .5In the end, the keeper took us to the office and we dried out Jacks clothes.6When we finally got home, my parents saw us funny and we all burst out laughing.題目要求仔細觀察下面兩幅圖畫，寫一篇幽默故事，講述“我”在星期天發(fā)生的“污水代墨”的趣事，反映“污染嚴重”這一主題。可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意：1.短文必須前后連貫；2.詞數(shù)100左右。參考詞匯：墨汁ink化工廠chemical works第一步：審題構(gòu)思很關(guān)鍵一、審題1確定體裁：本文為個人趣聞軼事，屬于記敘文；2確定人稱：本文的主要人稱應(yīng)為第一人稱；3確定時態(tài)：本文描述過去發(fā)生的事情用一般過去時。二、構(gòu)思第一部分，敘述事件的背景。第二部分，詳細敘述事件的經(jīng)過。第三部分，敘述事件的結(jié)果。第二步：核心詞匯想周全1amusing,_interesting,_funny有趣的 2be_used_up,_run_out,_give_out 耗盡；用完3without_delay,_immediately,_at_once 立即；馬上4figure_out 理解；弄明白5result_in,_lead_to 導(dǎo)致6regardless_of 不管；不顧第三步：由詞擴句雛形現(xiàn)1上周日我發(fā)現(xiàn)了一種不用花錢的特殊墨水，這真是太有趣了。(and 連接的并列句)Last_Sunday_I_found_a_special_ink_that_cost_nothing_and_it_was_amusing.2我正在家里做作業(yè)，這時發(fā)現(xiàn)墨水用完了。(and 連接的并列句)I_was_doing_my_homework_at_home_and_at_this_time_I_found_my_ink_had_run_out.3在路上我驚奇地發(fā)現(xiàn)在河里有一些黑水。(主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)； astonish)On_the_way,_I_was_astonished_to_find_there_was_some_black_water_in_the_river.4我很快弄明白了：附近的一所化工廠一直在往這條小河排放污水，這就造成了現(xiàn)在的局面。(and 連接的并列句)Soon,_I_figured_out_that_the_chemical_works_nearby_was_always_pouring_polluted_water_into_it_and_this_resulted_in_the_situation.5多虧了它，我及時完成了作業(yè)，而且對此很滿意。(主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)；thanks to)Thanks_to_it,_I_finished_my_work_on_time_and_felt_content_with_it.6面對這種形勢，我們必須承認，盡管政府采取了一些措施，但我們的環(huán)境一直在遭受著嚴重的污染。(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語；acknowledge)Facing_the_situation,_we_must_acknowledge_that_our_environment_is_being_polluted_seriously_regardless_of_some_measures_taken_by_our_government.7因此到了我們每個人都保護環(huán)境的時候了。(Its time that .)So_it_is_time_that_everyone_should_protect/protected_our_environment.第四步：句式升級造亮點1用which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句改寫句1Last_Sunday_I_found_a_special_ink_that_cost_nothing,_which_was_amusing.2用when作并列連詞改寫句2I_was_doing_my_homework_at_home_when_I_found_my_ink_had_run_out.3用which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句改寫句4Soon,_I_figured_out_that_the_chemical_works_nearby_was_always_pouring_polluted_water_into_it,_which_resulted_in_the_situation.4用過去分詞作狀語改寫句6Faced_with_the_situation,_we_must_acknowledge_that_our_environment_is_being_polluted_seriously_regardless_of_some_measures_taken_by_our_government.第五步：過渡銜接聯(lián)成篇Last Sunday I found a special ink that cost nothing，which was amusing.I was doing my homework at home when I found my ink had run out. Without delay, I hurried to a store nearby to buy a new bottle. On the way, I was astonished to find there was some black water in the river. Soon I figured out that the chemical works nearby was always pouring polluted water into it, which resulted in the situation. “Why not use it as ink？” said I. So I got some home. Thanks to it, I finished my work on time and felt content with it.Faced with the situation, we must acknowle