高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作技巧方法

1、基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練,一. 基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作基本要求 I. 基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作考我們什么能力? A. 信息處理或整理的能力;如:信息之間 能否合并為邏輯關(guān)系或處理先后順序等 B. 組詞造句能力;如內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確 性和合適性 C. 連句成文能力;信息內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性,A. 如何處理或整理信息? 1. 存在問(wèn)題,I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. First of all, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists， especially to

2、 the older people. ,(1) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency and the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists， especially to the older people.,錯(cuò)誤診斷：總體信息和細(xì)節(jié)信息不能合并,(2) However, the food provided in the restaurant didnt agree with many of us. Quite a few of us

3、had to buy extra food. 錯(cuò)誤診斷：因果關(guān)系的信息合并 However, the food provided in the restaurant didnt agree with many of us and quite a few of us had to buy extra food. (He had a high fever and went to see the doctor.),(3) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency, the local tour guide John was very enthusiast

4、ic, he could concern old men in our group. 錯(cuò)誤診斷： 一逗到底”的中式英語(yǔ)表達(dá)導(dǎo)致信息表達(dá)出現(xiàn)問(wèn)題，不能用多個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句表達(dá)多個(gè)不同類型的信息內(nèi)容。 I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and he could concern old men in our group.,II. 如何處理或整理信息? 一、按信息內(nèi)容或邏輯關(guān)系分為五大信息塊； who what why when where 二、一個(gè)完整的信息

5、用一個(gè)句子來(lái)表達(dá)； 三、信息之間如果存在邏輯關(guān)系就應(yīng)該合并， 但如果它們之間沒(méi)有邏輯關(guān)系就不能隨便 合并。 四、總體信息和細(xì)節(jié)信息不能合并； 五、要正確使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)避免影響信息的正確 表達(dá),B. 組詞造句能力;如內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性和合適性 旅行社 travel agency 2. 食物不合味口 the food didnt agree with us 3. 他講解清晰,生動(dòng)。 He explained everything about the places in a clear and lively way. His explanation about those places of in

6、terest was very clear and vivid.,4. 貨真價(jià)實(shí)的購(gòu)物場(chǎng)所 the shops where we could buy good bargains the shops where we could buy nice things with reasonable prices,1. 我表示對(duì)旅行社提供的服務(wù)總體感到滿意。 I am quite satisfied with the travelling company. I am quite satisfied with the traveler centre. 2.當(dāng)?shù)貙?dǎo)游對(duì)游客非常熱情，體貼，耐心照顧團(tuán)中的老人。

7、 John, who was the travel leader, was get along with everybody and he was took good care of the older.,travel agency.,travel agency.,The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists，especially to the older people.,錯(cuò)句修正,3.導(dǎo)游對(duì)游地講解清晰、生動(dòng)，增長(zhǎng)了我們的見(jiàn)聞。 The interview of the view

8、 is clear and funny and its clearly that we improve knowledge for Johns direction.,The local tour guide explained everything about the places we visited in a clear and lively way, which helped us broaden our horizons.,4. 飯館提供的膳食不合口味。 我們有些人不得不自買(mǎi)食物。 The diet provided in the restaurant didnt fit us so

9、many of us and quite a few of us had to buy extra food.,However, the food provided in the restaurant didnt agree with many of us and quite a few of us had to buy extra food.,5.建議應(yīng)該多提供貨真價(jià)實(shí)的購(gòu)物場(chǎng)所。 I suggest you can offer more and more shops.,we wanted to be taken to the shops where we could buy good ba

10、rgains but were not.,錯(cuò)句修正例： 1) We are dont like the food. We are dont like the food. 2) We dont satisfied with the food. We dont satisfied with the food. 3) People had to bought some food. People had to bought some food. 4) Guides spoken is very lively. Guides spoken is very lively.,werent,buy,speec

11、h,C. 連句成文信息內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性 存在問(wèn)題 I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists，especially to the older people. The local tour guide explained everything about the places we visited in a clear and lively way, it helped us broade

12、n our horizons. The food provided in the restaurant didnt agree with many of us, quite a few of us had to buy extra food. We wanted to be taken to the shops where we could buy good bargains but were not. 錯(cuò)誤診斷：內(nèi)容缺乏連貫,I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. First of all, the local tour guide John

13、 was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists， especially to the older people. The local tour guide explained everything about the places we visited in a clear and lively way, which helped us broaden our horizons. However, the food provided in the restaurant didnt agree with many of us and

14、quite a few of us had to buy extra food. In addition, we wanted to be taken to the shops where we could buy good bargains but were not.,二. 基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作基本步驟,基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作步驟,審,抓,擴(kuò),連,改,抄,基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作步驟,一、審題,理清文字信息,判斷文章格式、人稱、要點(diǎn)、時(shí)態(tài)、,基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作步驟,二、抓要點(diǎn),確定主要行為,用一兩個(gè)詞或短語(yǔ) 寫(xiě)出每句的要點(diǎn),基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作步驟,三、擴(kuò)展成句,形成基本語(yǔ)義單位,用一些簡(jiǎn)單句、不同句型、不同句式或 高級(jí)詞匯將要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展成句,基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作步驟,

15、四、連句成文,時(shí)間 空間 細(xì)節(jié) 連貫 呼應(yīng),背景（適當(dāng)增加時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)條件等）、 邏輯關(guān)系、開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾、巧用連接詞和 過(guò)渡句,書(shū)面表達(dá)六步法,五、查錯(cuò)改錯(cuò),要盡量剔除錯(cuò)誤 如要點(diǎn)齊全、句法、語(yǔ)法有無(wú)問(wèn)題；單詞拼寫(xiě)、大小寫(xiě)和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)；句數(shù),基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作步驟,六、謄寫(xiě),卷面要工整,建議： 1. 注重基礎(chǔ),單詞短語(yǔ)多 2. 培養(yǎng)寫(xiě)句意識(shí),以動(dòng)詞為中心,1,如何在寫(xiě)作中避免句式單一,Rewrite the sentences,1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another ch

16、ance. I will succeed. 3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard.,方法一. 使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使句子簡(jiǎn)潔高檔,When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.,Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.,If I am given another chance, I will succeed.,Given another chance, I will succeed.,

17、In order to improve his English, he studies hard.,方法一. 使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使句子簡(jiǎn)潔高檔,Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞) 聽(tīng)到這個(gè)消息,他們變的很激動(dòng). _the news, they got excited. 2. 盡管被告知許多遍,他仍然重復(fù)這個(gè)錯(cuò). _many times, he still repeated the mistake. 3.除非被邀請(qǐng)發(fā)言,你應(yīng)該在會(huì)議上保持沉默. Unless _to speak, you should keep silent at th

18、e meeting.,Hearing,Having been told,invited,Translate the following sentences by using non-predicate (非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞),1,面對(duì)困難時(shí)，他從不放棄。 2，引入市場(chǎng)后，該產(chǎn)品大獲成功。 3，做完作業(yè)后，他回家了。,Faced with/Facing difficulties, he never gives up.,Introduced to the market, the product made a great success.,Having finished his homework, he r

19、eturned home.,方法二. 巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力,he returned home did he realize his foolishness.,by changing the way we live can we save the earth.,Clever he is, he does not work hard.,stands the clock tower.,方法二. 巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力,Translate the sentences by using Inverted Sentences(倒裝句) 1. 他從不說(shuō)關(guān)于他家庭的事. 2. 只有我們每個(gè)人都意

20、識(shí)到水的重要性, 我們才能生活得更好. 3.只有用這種方式, 我們才能有足夠的精力好好學(xué)習(xí).,Never did he speak about his own family.,Only when each of us realizes the importance of water, can we live a better life.,Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.,方法二. 巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力,4. Describe the character by using Inverted Senten

21、ce(倒裝句),Poor as/though he was, he was happy.,方法二. 巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力,5. 他是個(gè)孩子，卻知道很多。 6. 墻上有個(gè)通知，上面寫(xiě)著“請(qǐng)節(jié)約用水”.,Child as/though he is, he knows a lot.,On the wall is a notice saying “Please Save Water”.,Use different ways to describe the picture,方法三. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式,一就受到歡迎,As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrive

22、d at the airport, they were warmly welcomed . On arriving at the airport , Lien Chan and his wife Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment they arrived at the airport. No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were ,方法三