第一次月考作文錯(cuò)誤總結(jié).ppt

1、第一次月考作文錯(cuò)誤總結(jié),Summary of the composition of the first monthly exam,一、審題,1.很多學(xué)生審題錯(cuò)誤，把暑期打算與計(jì)劃寫成了回顧暑期生活，導(dǎo)致全篇時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。 2.本文是書信格式，且寫信人是李華。部分學(xué)生沒有書信格式?jīng)]有署名或者署名錯(cuò)誤。還有些學(xué)生Best wishes!位置放錯(cuò)了。 3.部分學(xué)生沒有認(rèn)真閱讀題干要求，漏掉了詢問Rboert暑期安排這一要點(diǎn)。 4.部分學(xué)生沒有注意題干最后的提示詞，導(dǎo)致部分關(guān)鍵詞寫錯(cuò)。,二、文章結(jié)構(gòu),1.高中作文一般要分為三段或者四段，使文章清晰明了，且要注意使用段落間，要點(diǎn)間的銜接詞使用。如：First

2、 of all, / Besides,/Last but not least. 另提示這些銜接詞后打逗號而非點(diǎn)號。 2.請勿隨意調(diào)換要點(diǎn)順序，以免閱卷老師漏掉打分點(diǎn)。 3.請勿使用，1,2,2,3等阿拉伯?dāng)?shù)字來開始段落，也不要一個(gè)點(diǎn)一個(gè)段落，導(dǎo)致120字的文章寫了六七段。 4.文章注意分清要點(diǎn)主次，不要有些要點(diǎn)寫很長，有些要點(diǎn)一筆帶過，或者有些同學(xué)寫了很多無關(guān)緊要的話。,三、書寫與卷面,1.很多同學(xué)書寫極差，完全不知寫的什么。 2.注意卷面整潔，請勿使用改正帶，錯(cuò)詞、刪詞請使用一條短橫線即可，不要打墨團(tuán)。 3.請開始一段時(shí)退四個(gè)英文字母的位置。,四、內(nèi)容,1.每個(gè)要點(diǎn)的寫法一般為。 銜接詞+關(guān)

3、鍵詞句+闡述句（通常是闡述原因、目的、結(jié)果、影響，且闡述句不要超過三句話）。一個(gè)要點(diǎn)一般三句話表達(dá)清楚。 2.寫要點(diǎn)是盡量用短語代替單詞，用固定句型書寫卷子，適當(dāng)使用從句。 如：First, I studied hard last term so I will stay at home and rest. I will help my parents do some housework. And they can have a rest. 改寫為。First of all, I intend to stay at home to have a good rest after a long ti

4、me of study. Besides,I am supposed to help my parents do some housework so that they can have a rest,too.,3.寫要點(diǎn)請開門見山，不要使用描述、闡述法。例如： 第四點(diǎn) 游覽四川的景點(diǎn) 最好寫 I will pay a visit to some tourist attractions in Sichuan province to widen my horizon. 不要寫成這樣 As you know, i am a native Sichuan person. But i have nev

5、er been to any places of interest. So my parents decide to bring me to visit some tourist attractions such as Jiuzhaigou, Huanglong,Yibin and so on this summer holiday. That will be exciting,isnt it? If you have time , you may go with us. And we will take a lot of photos,eat delicious food and make

6、a lot of new friends.,4.語法錯(cuò)誤,My summer vacation will busy. （缺謂語） (Changlish) This are my want to do it. What about your? The study is very tired. I have a long time not see her. My English can make progress. His home is living in the countryside.,(主謂一致) She decide to hold a party. I think my parents

7、 is hard,i should do some things for things. It is said the tourist attractions is very beautiful.,(用詞不當(dāng)) I will join English courses. I think my English spoken is not well. I hope to your letter. Please write me soon. At first, There are my plan.,（句子結(jié)構(gòu)） Its the most exciting thing is that I like to go to somewhere have beauti