讀后續(xù)寫《艱難歲月的圣誕抉擇》+講義 高三下學(xué)期學(xué)科綜合素養(yǎng)評(píng)價(jià)2月聯(lián)考英語試題

讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文，ItwasacoldDecember.Mumhadahardtimeraisinguskidsonherown.MyfatherhaddrownedinPittLakefiveyearsearlier.BecauseDadhadnopensionorbenefits,therewasnotmuchmoney;wewentonsocialassistance.Lookingback,IrealizewhatMumwentthroughasendinguskidstoschool.Everymorningshewouldtuckanewpieceofcardboardinourshoesbecauseoursoles(鞋底)werewornout.Whenwegothome,MumwouldhaveFrenchtoastreadyforus.Thiswasbreaddeep-friedinlard(豬油).Constantmovingwastypicalformyfamilyinthosedays,anditdidn’tlooklikewe’dbeinourcurrenthousemuchlonger.Rentwas$25amonth,butMumcouldn’tpayit,andweknewwewouldbeforcedoutafterChristmas.Theholidayswerefastapproaching,andwewereentitledto$25forChristmasfromsocialservices.Aninspectorcametoourhouseandsearcheditthoroughlytobesurewedidn’thaveanyfoodhiddenaway.Whenhedidn’tfindany,heissuedthechequetoMum.Mumsaidthatinsteadofbuyingfood,shewasgoingtousethemoneytopayourrent.Thatwaywe’dhavearoofoverourheadsforalittlewhilelonger.ThenshetoldustherewouldbenoChristmasgifts.UnknowntoMum,IhadbeensellingChristmastrees,shovelingsnowanddoingoddjobstoearnenoughmoneytobuyanewpairofboots—bootswithnocardboardinthesoles.Theywereten-inch,Top-Genuine,andcost$23.ThebigdayforgettingmybootscameonChristmasEveafternoon.IwasveryexcitedasIhurrieduptheroadtocatchthebusintotown.ButonthewaytothebusstopInoticeddahousewithChristmaslightsanddecorations.ItwasthenIrealizedthatwehadnolights,nodecorationsandnoChristmasgoodies.IalsoknewwewouldhavenoturkeyorhamforChristmasdinner.ButatleasttherewouldbeFrenchtoast.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。AsIcontinuedwalking,Ibegantofeelconfused.Thebusdroveoffwithoutme,andIstoodaloncinadaxe,feelingasifaweighthadbeenliftedoffmyshoulders.《艱難歲月的圣誕抉擇》續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）第一段：著重刻畫“我”內(nèi)心的激烈沖突。一方面，對(duì)新靴子的渴望十分強(qiáng)烈，那是自己辛苦工作許久的目標(biāo)，穿上新靴子能擺脫窘迫的穿著現(xiàn)狀。另一方面，看到家里的寒酸景象，想象著家人過一個(gè)沒有任何節(jié)日氛圍的圣誕節(jié)，親情的責(zé)任感涌上心頭。此時(shí)可以通過回憶家庭過往的溫暖時(shí)刻，或者對(duì)比其他家庭的熱鬧，來強(qiáng)化這種內(nèi)心的糾結(jié)，最終促使“我”做出決定。第二段：詳細(xì)描述“我”改變計(jì)劃后的行動(dòng)。先寫“我”如何用買靴子的錢購買圣誕所需物品，比如在商店里挑選時(shí)的仔細(xì)考量，因?yàn)殄X有限，要平衡各種物品的花費(fèi)。接著描寫回家后布置房子、準(zhǔn)備食物的過程，可能會(huì)遇到一些小困難，但都努力克服。最后寫家人回家后的反應(yīng)，通過家人的表情、語言和動(dòng)作，展現(xiàn)出他們的驚喜與感動(dòng)，以及家庭氛圍的轉(zhuǎn)變。情感線（150字）起初，“我”滿心期待著買新靴子，興奮之情溢于言表。可當(dāng)看到別人家的圣誕裝飾，想到自家的凄涼，興奮瞬間被失落和愧疚取代。內(nèi)心開始在個(gè)人渴望與家庭責(zé)任間掙扎，痛苦又糾結(jié)。做出放棄買靴子的決定時(shí)，雖有不舍，但更多的是為家人付出的堅(jiān)定。在購買圣誕物品和布置家的過程中，心中滿是對(duì)家人即將收獲驚喜的期待。當(dāng)家人回家，看到他們的喜悅，“我”收獲了滿滿的幸福與滿足，深刻體會(huì)到親情的珍貴。故事線（6條）“我”在去買靴子的路上，看到別人家的圣誕裝飾，內(nèi)心開始動(dòng)搖，思考家庭的困境?！拔摇苯?jīng)過激烈的思想斗爭，決定放棄買靴子，用這筆錢給家人過一個(gè)像樣的圣誕節(jié)。“我”走進(jìn)商店，精打細(xì)算地挑選圣誕裝飾品、食物和給家人的小禮物。“我”帶著購買的物品匆忙回家，開始布置屋子，擺放裝飾品，準(zhǔn)備烹飪火雞。家人在不知情的情況下回家，看到煥然一新的家，感到無比驚訝和驚喜。一家人圍坐在一起，享受著溫馨的圣誕晚餐，彼此分享著喜悅，家庭氛圍變得格外溫暖。主旨升華句5句英文ThisChristmasexperiencetaughtmethatthejoyofgivingtofamilyfaroutweighsthepursuitofpersonaldesires.Inthatmomentofdecision,Irealizedthattruehappinessliesnotinmaterialpossessionsbutinbringingwarmthandlovetothosewecherish.Throughthisselflessact,Ilearnedthatfamilyunityandthespiritofsacrificecanturneventhetoughesttimesintounforgettablememories.TheChristmasIspent,forgoingmyboots,mademeunderstandthatthevalueoffamilybondsisimmeasurableandworthanysacrifice.ThisChristmas,Idiscoveredthatalittlethoughtfulnessandsacrificecancreateaworldofdifference,fillingourhomewiththemostpreciousgiftofall-love.兩篇寫作示范示范一AsIcontinuedwalking,Ibegantofeelconfused.Thethoughtoffinallyowningthosenewboots,whichIhaddreamedofforsolong,wassoalluring.Butthen,Ipicturedourcold,unadornedhouseandmyfamily'sforlornfaces.IrememberedthetimeswhenMumhadsacrificedsomuchforus.Theexcitementforthebootsgraduallyfaded,replacedbyastrongsenseofduty.IknewthatmyfamilyneededthisChristmastobespecialmorethanIneededanewpairofshoes.Afteralongmomentofhesitation,Imadeupmymind.Thebusdroveoffwithoutme,andIstoodaloneinthesnow,feelingasifaweighthadbeenliftedoffmyshoulders.Iheadedstraighttothegrocerystore.Withmymoney,Iboughtasmallbutplumpturkey,somecolorfuldecorations,andafewinexpensivegifts.WhenIgothome,Iquicklygottowork.Ihungupthelights,setupthetree,andstartedcookingtheturkey.Justasthedelicioussmellfilledthehouse,Mumandmysiblingswalkedin.Theireyeswidenedindisbelief,andthenhugesmilesspreadacrosstheirfaces.Mumhuggedmetightly,andforthefirsttimeinalongwhile,ourhomewasfilledwithgenuinelaughterandthewarmthofChristmas.示范二AsIcontinuedwalking,Ibegantofeelconfused.Theshinynewbootsinmyimaginationclashedwiththerealityofourempty-handedChristmas.IthoughtabouthowMumstruggleddayinanddayouttotakecareofus.HowcouldIbesoselfishtothinkonlyaboutmyownwants?ThemoreIthought,themoreashamedIfelt.Thecoldwindseemedtopiercemyheart,makingmerealizethetruemeaningoftheseason.Finally,Iturnedaround,awayfromthebusstop.Thebusdroveoffwithoutme,andI