Unit5Feelingexcited單元寫作指導-2024-2025年八年級英語下冊易錯易混考點（仁愛）

Unit5FeelingExcited單元寫作指導★話題命題角度Unit5主要涉及個人經(jīng)歷情感體驗方面的“經(jīng)歷與感受”這一話題主要考查：1.自己的經(jīng)歷與感受；2.他人的經(jīng)歷對自己的影響。此話題偶爾還會涉及社會熱點進而提出一些自我提升的方法和建議。一、核心詞句【詞匯積累】品德修養(yǎng)1.quality品質(zhì)；人品2.spirit精神3.honesty誠實4.kindness善良5.admire欽佩6.independent獨立的7.positive積極的8.moral道德的9.grateful感激的10.behavepolitely舉止文明11.respecteachother相互尊重12.keeppromises信守承諾13.strongwill堅強的意志14.befriendlyto對……友好15.beresponsiblefor對……負責16.bepatientwith對……有耐心17.bethankfultoothers感恩他人18.bereadytohelpothers樂于助人19.nevergiveup永不放棄自我認識與提升1.influence影響2.experience經(jīng)驗；經(jīng)歷3.dare敢于4.require需要5.fail失敗6.silent不說話的；沉默的7.helpful有幫助的8.valuable寶貴的9.seldom很少10.dealwith應對；處理11.inpublic公開地12.inperson親身；親自13.takepridein為……感到自豪14.beproudof為……驕傲15.makeplans制訂計劃16.managetime管理時間17.overechallenges克服挑戰(zhàn)18.sticktodoingsth.堅持做某事19.achievethegoal實現(xiàn)目標20.take…seriously認真對待……21.aslongas只要22.learnfrommistakes從錯誤中學習23.makeprogress取得進步二、話題佳句記背過去經(jīng)歷1.IusedtobeafraidofwritingEnglisharticles.我過去害怕寫英語文章。2.HownervousIwaswhenIwastoldtogiveaspeech.當聽說我要發(fā)表演講時我緊張極了。3.ThebiggestchangeI’veevermadeisthatI’vefalleninlovewithreading.我做過的最大的改變是我愛上了閱讀。4.Myteacherencouragedmetostudyhardandgavemesomehelpfuladvice.我的老師鼓勵我努力學習，并給了我一些有用的建議。5.Ididn’tfallbehindtheotherswithhishelp/withthehelpofhim.在他的幫助下，我沒有落在別人后面。6.Hespentonehoureverydaystudyingwithherandexplainingdifficultproblemstoher，soshemademuchprogressinmath.他每天花一個小時和她一起學習，給她解釋難題，所以她在數(shù)學上取得了很大的進步。感受和影響1.Allinall，theworldneedsloveandweshouldgetreadytohelpothersatanytimewithoutexpectinganythinginreturn.總而言之，世界需要愛，我們應該隨時準備幫助別人，不求任何回報。2.Inmyopinion，it’sveryimportanttolearntobethankful.Ifeveryonecanhelpeachother，theworldwillbefulloflove.在我看來，學會感恩非常重要。如果每個人都能互相幫助，世界將會充滿愛。3.Nomatterhowhardlifeis，wewon’tfailunlesswegiveuphope.無論生活多么難，除非我們放棄希望，否則我們不會失敗。我認識與提升1.Inordertocatchupwithmyclassmates,Ibegantopracticerunningeverydayafterschool.為了趕上我的同學，我開始每天放學后練習跑步。2.NomatterwhatkindofdifficultyIfaced,Itriedmybesttosticktoexercising.無論我遇到了什么困難，我都竭盡全力堅持鍛煉。3.Ifinditimportanttokeepapositiveattitudewhenwe'reintrouble.我發(fā)現(xiàn)當我們遇到麻煩時，保持積極的態(tài)度很重要。4.However,Iregardeditasachallenge,whichwasalsoagoodchancetoimprovemyEnglish.然而，我認為它是一個挑戰(zhàn)，也是一個提高我的英語水平的好機會。個人成長5.Iusedtobeveryshy,notdaringtoexpressmyselfinpublic.我過去很害羞，不敢在公共場合表達自己。6.Butwiththeencouragementofmyteachers,Inotonlybeemoreoutgoingbutalsogetonwellwithallthepeoplearoundme.但是在老師的鼓勵下，我不僅變得更加外向，而且與周圍的人相處得很好。7.Makingandkeepingpromisesplaysanimportantroleinourlives.許下承諾并信守承諾在我們的生活中扮演著重要的角色。8.Don'tspendtoomuchtimeonhardthinkingbecauseonlyactionleadsyoutosuccess.不要花太多時間苦思冥想，因為只有行動才能帶你走向成功。三、開頭中間結(jié)尾模板開頭段1.Theactivityimpressedmemostwasabasketballgame.給我印象最深的活動是一場籃球賽。2.ItwasatthattimethatIdecidedtohelpmorepeopleinneed.就是在那個時候，我決定幫助更多需要幫助的人。3.Thereisalwayssomethingunforgettableinmylife，especiallythestoriesbetweenmyfriendandme.在我的生活中總有一些難忘的事情，尤其是我和朋友之間的故事。4.Thoughthephysicaltestintheentranceexaminationforseniormiddleschoolwasover，itleftmeadeepimpression.即使中招體育考試已經(jīng)結(jié)束了，但它給我留下了深刻的印象。中間段Toprepareforthephysicalexamination，Igotupearlyandusedsomefreetimetopracticethesesports.InP.E.class，Ialsohadapetitionwithothers.Finally，Igotfullmarksintheexamination.在這次體育考試的備考期間，我每天早起并用空閑時間練習這些考試項目。在體育課上，我也和其他人進行了比賽。最終，我考試得了滿分。結(jié)尾段1.Throughthisexamination，Iunderstandthataslongasweworkhard，therewillbeharvest.SoIwillcontinuetoworkhardandnevergiveupinmyfuturelifeandstudy.通過這次考試，我明白了只要努力就會有收獲。因此，在未來的生活和學習中，我會繼續(xù)努力，永不放棄。2.Thisexperiencetaughtmenottolookdownonothers.這次經(jīng)歷教會我不要小瞧別人。四、話題俗語諺語1.ThereareathousandHamletsinathousandpeople’seyes.一千個人眼中有一千個哈姆雷特。2.Youhavetosowbeforeyoucanreap.Youhavetogivebeforeyoucanget.先播種才能收獲，先付出才能得到。3.Indoingwelearn.實踐長才干。4.Allthingsaredifficultbeforetheyareeasy.凡事必先難后易。5.Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.行動勝于空談。6.Badluckoftenbringsgoodluck.塞翁失馬，安知非福。7.Ajourneyofathousandlibeginswithasinglestep.千里之行，始于足下。水滴石穿，繩鋸木斷。堅持做好一件事情，成就更好的自己。請以“OnethingIkeepdoingeveryday”為題，根據(jù)以下要點和要求，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，參加學校的英語主題演講活動。1.要點：1)你每天在堅持做什么；2)你堅持這么做的理由；3)它會給你帶來怎樣的影響或改變。2.要求：1)文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學校的校名和師生姓名；2)詞數(shù)100左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。OnethingIkeepdoingeverydayGoodmorning,everyone!Iamveryhappytobeheretomakeaspeechtoday.ThetopicofmyspeechisonethingIkeepdoingeveryday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That'sall.Thankyou!【審題】人稱：______________時態(tài)：______________【列綱】【成文】OnethingIkeepdoingeverydayGoodmorning,everyone!Iamveryhappytobeheretomakeaspeechtoday.ThetopicofmyspeechisonethingIkeepdoingeveryday.IloverunningandIhavekeptrunningforthreeyears.WhenIwasinGrade7,Iwasnotgoodatsportsandrunningwasalwaysmyweakness.Ioftenfailedmyrunningtests.①Inordertocatchupwithmyclassmates,Ibegantopracticerunningeverydayafterschool.Sometimes,IwassotiredthatIreallywantedtogiveup.②ButIkepttellingmyselfthatIcouldmakeit.③NomatterwhatkindofdifficultyIfaced,Itriedmybesttokeeprunning.NowIdomuchbetterinrunning.I'mveryproudofmyselfandI'mreadyforanychallengeinthefuture.That'sall.Thankyou！加分亮點①句使用inorderto引導的目的狀語，闡述作者每天堅持練習跑步的原因，表達干凈利落，使文章句式結(jié)構(gòu)多樣；②句使用轉(zhuǎn)折詞but及that引導的賓語從句，生動形象地描述了作者不輕易放棄的決心，邏輯嚴密順暢，內(nèi)容更加連貫；③句使用nomatter引導的讓步狀語從句，再次闡明作者勇于面對困難，使文章句式更高級，內(nèi)容更加充實。1．每個人都有自己的閃光點，請以“MyShiningPoint”為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文。要求：（1）講述一個自己的故事；（2）你的感悟；（3）適當增加細節(jié)，行文連貫；（4）文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實姓名和校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

MyShiningPointImeetmanyexcellentpeopleeverydayandatthesametimeIalsofindmyselfreallygood.Icanseetheworldwithkindeyes.IthinkIdon’tliketoplain.Ifinditimportanttohaveapositiveattitude.Lastmonth,IwaschosentoplayaroleinanEnglishshow.Itwasdifficultformetomemorizethelinesinashorttime.However,Iregardeditasachallenge,whichwasalsoagoodchancetoimprovemyEnglish.SoImadeanefforttopractice.Finally,Imadeitandreceivedhighpraise.Infact,itismypositiveattitudethatbringsoutthebestinmeallthetime.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時；③提示：以“MyShiningPoint”為題并結(jié)合提示進行寫作，適當增加細節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題，簡要說明自己有哪些閃光點；第二步，講述一個自己的故事；第三步，介紹自己的感悟。[亮點詞匯]①atthesametime同時②playarolein在……中扮演角色③regard…as把……當作[高分句型]①However,Iregardeditasachallenge,whichwasalsoagoodchancetoimprovemyEnglish.(which引導的定語從句)②Infact,itismypositiveattitudethatbringsoutthebestinmeallthetime.(強調(diào)句)2．你校EnglishReadingClub正在組織一次英文小說讀書分享會，本周閱讀內(nèi)容為Auggie’sStory（閱讀D篇）。請從以下兩個標題中任選一個，寫一篇英文讀后感。選擇一：以Sometimespeoplesurpriseus為題，內(nèi)容包括：1．你對這句話的理解；2．結(jié)合實際生活舉例說明；3．你得到的啟發(fā)。選擇二：以Troubleisafriend為題，內(nèi)容包括：1．你對這句話的理解；2．結(jié)合實際生活舉例說明；3．你得到的啟發(fā)。注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右；2．請先填寫你所選的標題，再寫文章；3．照抄閱讀語篇不得分；4．文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實校名和姓名等信息。Title:____________AfterreadingAuggie’sstory,I’mreallytouched.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Title:Troubleisafriend AfterreadingAuggie’sstory,I’mreallytouched.AndIthinktroubleisafriend.Themeaningofthissentenceisthatalthoughtroublemaybefrustratingandupsetting,itisalsoaremindertobemorecarefulandavoidbiggerproblems,justlikeafriend.InmyEnglishstudylastyear,mygrammarwasverybad.Thatwasabigtroubleforme,becauseitloweredmyEnglishscore.Butthankstothehelpofmydeskmate,shehelpedmemakeagrammarstudyscheduleandhelpedmewithgrammareveryweek.AndIspentanhourstudyinggrammareveryday.Intheend,mygrammarimprovedgreatly.Inmyopinion,troubleisbad,butitsometimesmakesusbetter.Itremindsusnottogiveupwhenfacingdifficultiesandtofacethembravely.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：選擇一個話題完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第一人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，請先填寫你所選的標題并介紹你對這句話的理解；第二步，結(jié)合實際生活舉例說明；第三步，最后表達你得到的啟發(fā)。[亮點詞匯]①thanksto多虧②helpsbdosth幫助某人做某事③inmyopinion在我看來[高分句型]①Themeaningofthissentenceisthatalthoughtroublemaybefrustratingandupsetting,itisalsoaremindertobemorecarefulandavoidbiggerproblems,justlikeafriend.（表語從句，讓步狀語從句）②Thatwasabigtroubleforme,becauseitloweredmyEnglishscore.（原因狀語從句）3．假定你是李華，學校正舉辦“我勞動，我快樂”為主題向?qū)W生開展征文活動。請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文投稿。要點包括：（1）分享你的勞動經(jīng)歷；（2）談談你的勞動感受；（3）表達你的觀點并發(fā)出倡議。注意：（1）詞數(shù)90左右；（2）可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；（3）文中不能出現(xiàn)可能透露考生真實身份的任何信息。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Lastweekend,Igotupearlyandcookednoodlesformyparents.First,Iboiledsomewater.ThenIputsomenoodlesintothepot.Aboutfiveorsixminuteslater,Iplacedtheminthebowlsandaddedsomesaltandoil.Whenmyparentsgotup,theyweresurprisedandpraisedmewithabigsmile.Itwasthefirsttimeformetocookforthem.Alittlebittiredbuthappy,IfeltproudofmyselfbecauseIcouldtakecareofmyparents.Fromthisunforgettableexperience,I’vealsogotadeeperunderstandingofmyparents.Ithinkit’sourdutytosharesomehousework.Besides,doingsomehardhouseworkisakindofphysicalexercise.Asteenagers,weshouldtakeactiontohelparoundthehouse.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”和“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點，同時注意用一般過去時敘述自己的勞動經(jīng)歷和感受，用一般現(xiàn)在時談自己的觀點。[寫作步驟]第一步：介紹自己的勞動經(jīng)歷；第二步：談談自己從這次勞動經(jīng)歷中獲得的感受；第三步：表達自己對勞動的觀點。[亮點詞匯]①surprised驚訝的②praise表揚③takecareof照顧④unforgettable難以忘記的⑤takeaction采取行動[高分句型]①Itwasthefirsttimeformetocookforthem.（itis/wasthefirsttimetodosth.第一次做某事）②doingsomehardhouseworkisakindofphysicalexercise.（動名詞作主語）4．某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“我最想感謝的人”為主題的征文活動，假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談誰是你最想感謝的人，他/她是怎樣幫助你的，以及你的收獲。提示詞語:trouble,encourage,improve,stickto提示問題:.·Whodoyouwanttothankmost?·Howdidhe/shehelpyou?·Whathaveyoulearnedfromhim/her?Inmylife,manypeoplehelpedandinfluencedmealot.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Inmylife,manypeoplehelpedandinfluencedmealot.Mymotherismyrolemodel.Iadmireherverymuch.Mymotherisresponsibleandcareful.Sheisnotonlybusywithherworkbutalsotakesgoodcareofourfamily.What’smore,ShedidalotformewhenIwasupset.OnceIfailedasingingpetitionandfeltveryupset.Iwascryinginthecornerofthehallwhenmymothercametome.Shehandedmeapieceoftissueandhuggedmetenderly.ShekeptfortingmeandencouragedmetillIstoppedcrying.Fromherwords,Ibecamecalmandfoundconfidenceagain.IloveherandIwilllearnfromher.Shemakesmeknowtheimportanceofdiligence.Iwillworkhardandtrymybesttohelpothers.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏要點，可適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出“我最想感謝的人”的話題；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“身份、事件、感悟”等方面進行介紹；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，總結(jié)全文。[亮點詞匯]①admire欽佩②diligence勤奮③notonly…butalso…不僅……而且……[高分句型]①Iwascryinginthecornerofthehallwhenmymothercametome.（when引導的時間狀語從句）②ShekeptfortingmeandencouragedmetillIstoppedcrying.（till引導的時間狀語從句）5．家是溫馨的港灣，家是幸福的源泉，家是永遠的依戀，每年5月15日是世界家庭日(InternationalDayofFamilies)。學校英語?？e辦征文活動，請結(jié)合自身的成長經(jīng)歷，破解家庭幸福的“密碼”，寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.你對家庭幸福的理解；2.你家發(fā)生的一件有意義的事；3.促進家庭和諧幸福的幾點建議(請列舉兩到三條具體做法)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Familyisthesourceofhappinessandtheharborofwarmth.Tome,ahappyfamilymeansmutualrespect,understanding,andsupportamongallmembers.Onemeaningfuleventinmyfamilywaswhenweallworkedtogethertoprepareasurprisebirthdaypartyformygrandmother.Everyonehadaroletoplay,andthejoyonherfacewaspriceless.Topromotefamilyharmonyandhappiness,Ihaveafewsuggestions.First,spendqualitytimetogether,suchashavingmealsorplayinggames.Second,municateopenlyandhonestlytounderstandeachother’sfeelingsandneeds.Lastly,showappreciationandgratitudeforeachother’seffortsandcontributions.Byfollowingthesesteps,wecancreatealovingandsupportivefamilyenvironment.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：文章應該包括三個方面的內(nèi)容要點，要適當補充，使文章內(nèi)容充實；行文時多用第一和第三人稱，盡量多使用短語和句型；寫作中適當使用連接詞，使行文連貫、順暢。[寫作步驟]第一步，整體介紹對家庭幸福的理解；第二步，具體描述家庭中發(fā)生的一件有意義的事；第三步，最后提出促進家庭和諧幸福的建議。[亮點詞匯]①thesourceof……的來源②preparefor準備③showappreciationfor對……表示感謝[高分句型]①Onemeaningfuleventinmyfamilywaswhenweallworkedtogethertoprepareasurprisebirthdaypartyformygrandmother.（表語從句）②Topromotefamilyharmonyandhappiness,Ihaveafewsuggestions.（動詞不定式作目的狀語）6．在成長過程中，青少年面臨越來越多的煩惱與壓力，請以此為話題給英語報社投稿，寫一篇文章談談你的看法。內(nèi)容包括：（1）導致青少年壓力大的主要原因？（學習、與他人相處等，至少兩條）（2）減少壓力的措施？（運動、聽音樂、與他人談心等，至少兩條）（3）簡要談談你對壓力的看法。要求：（1）包含所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮。（2）詞數(shù)80左右。（3）不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Weteenagershavemoreandmorepressurewhilegrowingup.Themainreasonforpressureisschoolworkandgettingalongwithothers.Studentshavesomuchhomeworkthattheyhavenotimetorelax.Somestudentsdon’tknowhowtogetalongwellwithothers.Theyfeellonely.I’llgiveyousomewaystorelievepressure.Firstofall,youneedtotakepartinallkindsofclassactivities,suchassportsmeetings,footballgamesandsingingpetitions.Besides,youshouldtrytomunicatewithyourclassmatesasoftenaspossible.Inmyopinion,properpressureisbeneficialtoourgrowthanddevelopment.Weshouldlearntofacepressureinourlife.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：材料所給提示不得遺漏，注意“原因”和“措施”部分至少寫明兩條。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹青少年壓力大的原因；第二步，闡述減輕壓力的方法；第三步，表達自己對壓力的看法。[亮點詞匯]①growup長大②getalongwithsb.與某人相處③firstofall首先④takepartin參加[高分句型]①Studentshavesomuchhomeworkth