高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：小貓的守護：波西亞勇對金毛護小主人+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)小貓的守護：波西亞勇對金毛護小主人1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文WemetattheLeedsGrenvilleSPCA.Wewereheretofindthebestfitforourlittlefamilyofthree.Inmyheart,however,IthinkIalreadyknewwhichonewastherightcat.Portia,aquietbrowntabby(斑貓),watcheduswithpartiallyclosedeyes,seeminglysaying,“Takeyourtime…”andIknowit’sgoingtobeme.AsInearedhercage,onepawextended.Finallywedecidedtobringhomeacatthatday.Afteradayortwoofsettlingin,Portiabecameasortofsmallandfurrynannytomykids.Shewouldtravelfromroomtoroomwithusduringtheday,usuallystayingclosesttomyson.Shewantedtositwherehesat,lookoutthewindowsfromwhichhepeered,andmakecourageousattemptstosharewhateverhewaseating.Atnight,shewouldsprawlontohislapduringstorytime.Wenicknamedher“GuardianKitten”forthewayshealwayswantedtobewherehewas,watchingoverhimasifhewereherown.4續(xù)寫原文Oneday,Iwasgatheringleaveswhilemychilddelightedindisturbingthepiles.Portiawasdozingontheporch,hercarssometimesshiftingtowardthesoundofourvoices.Thensuddenly,fromdownthestreet,adesperatevoicecried,“No!Comebackhere!”Thephrasewasrepeatedandthevolumeincreasedasthespeakerdrewcloser.AGoldenRetrieverignoredhisownerandreachedmypropertyfirst.Inasplitseconditleapedoverthelowfencesurroundingthefrontyard.Thedogrushedtowardmysonwithboundlessenergyandbodylanguagethatexpressedthatitwantedtoplay.“Puppy!”mysonexclaimed,spreadinghisarmsapartinawelcominggesture.Unlikeme,hewasnotawarethatthisdogwould,attheveryleast,knockhimdownwithitsuncontainedenthusiasm.AndIwasn’tgoingtobeabletoclosethespacebetweenusintime.5段首句Paragraph1：WhenIwaswonderinghowtoprotectmyson,ascreameruptedbehindme.Paragraph2:Afterawhile,theownerarrived,outofbreath.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8“我們”前往利茲格倫維爾防止虐待動物協(xié)會（SPCA），打算為一家三口挑選一只合適的貓咪。在眾多貓咪中，“我”一眼就相中了安靜的棕色斑貓波西亞，它那淡定的神態(tài)讓“我”認(rèn)定它就是“我們”要找的那只貓，于是“我們”將它帶回了家。波西亞適應(yīng)新家后，宛如一位貼心的小保姆，時刻陪伴在孩子們身邊，尤其是對“我”的兒子格外關(guān)照。白天，它會跟著兒子在各個房間穿梭，晚上則會在講故事時趴在兒子腿上，大家都親切地稱它為“守護小貓”。一天，“我”在院子里收集樹葉，兒子在一旁玩鬧，波西亞在門廊打盹。突然，一只金毛犬掙脫主人的控制，越過矮柵欄沖進院子，朝著兒子興奮地奔去。兒子天真地以為是小狗來找他玩耍，張開雙臂迎接，卻不知這只金毛犬極有可能會因過度熱情而撞倒他，而“我”卻來不及趕到兒子身邊保護他。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1：WhenIwaswonderinghowtoprotectmyson,ascreameruptedbehindme.正當(dāng)我在想如何保護兒子時，身后傳來一聲尖叫。我回頭一看，竟然是波西亞。它原本慵懶的模樣瞬間消失不見，全身的毛發(fā)都豎了起來，尾巴也變得又粗又大，像一只隨時準(zhǔn)備戰(zhàn)斗的小戰(zhàn)士。它以極快的速度沖到兒子身前，對著那只金毛犬發(fā)出兇狠的嘶嘶聲。金毛犬顯然被這突如其來的“襲擊”嚇了一跳，停下了腳步，一臉疑惑地看著波西亞。波西亞絲毫沒有退縮，它弓著背，眼睛緊緊地盯著金毛犬，擺出一副隨時準(zhǔn)備進攻的架勢。兒子被這一幕驚呆了，他下意識地往后退了幾步，躲在波西亞身后。我趁機快速跑向兒子，一邊跑一邊大聲呼喊，試圖嚇退金毛犬。然而，金毛犬并沒有離開的意思，它似乎被波西亞的挑釁激怒了，開始圍著波西亞打轉(zhuǎn)，尋找進攻的機會。波西亞則緊緊地守護在兒子身前，寸步不離。10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:Afterawhile,theownerarrived,outofbreath.過了一會兒，主人氣喘吁吁地趕到了。他看到眼前的場景，滿臉歉意。他一邊不停地向我們道歉，一邊努力控制住金毛犬。金毛犬在主人的呵斥下，終于安靜了下來。主人解釋說，金毛犬平時很溫順，今天不知道怎么突然掙脫了繩子跑了出來。他對波西亞的勇敢行為贊不絕口，說他從來沒有見過這么勇敢的小貓。我抱起兒子，檢查他有沒有受傷，幸好兒子只是受到了一點驚嚇，并沒有受傷。我感激地看著波西亞，輕輕地?fù)崦念^，對它說：“你真是我們家的大英雄?！眱鹤右采斐鲂∈?，輕輕地摸了摸波西亞，眼中充滿了崇拜和感激。從那以后，我們一家人對波西亞更加疼愛了，它在我們心中的地位也變得更加重要。而波西亞依然像往常一樣，默默地守護著我們，成為了我們家不可或缺的一員。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)WhenIwaswonderinghowtoprotectmyson,ascreameruptedbehindme.IturnedaroundandwasshockedtofindthatitwasPortia.Itsoriginallylazyappearancedisappearedinstantly.Allitsfurstoodonend,anditstailbecamethickandbig,justlikealittlewarriorreadytofightatanytime.Itrushedtomyson'sfrontatanextremelyfastspeedandhissedfiercelyattheGoldenRetriever.TheGoldenRetrieverwasobviouslystartledbythissudden"attack"andstoppedinitstracks,lookingatPortiawithapuzzledexpression.Portiadidn'tbackdownatall.Itarcheditsback,itseyesfixedtightlyontheGoldenRetriever,andassumedaposturereadytoattackatanymoment.Mysonwasstunnedbythisscene.HesubconsciouslytookafewstepsbackandhidbehindPortia.Itooktheopportunitytoruntowardsmysonquickly,shoutingloudlyasIran,tryingtoscareofftheGoldenRetriever.However,theGoldenRetrievershowednosignofleaving.ItseemedtobeirritatedbyPortia'sprovocationandstartedcirclingaroundPortia,lookingforachancetoattack.Portia,ontheotherhand,firmlyguardedinfrontofmyson,notmovinganinch.13范文呈現(xiàn)Afterawhile,theownerarrived,outofbreath.Helookedatthesceneinfrontofhimandwasfullofapologies.HekeptapologizingtouswhiletryinghisbesttocontroltheGoldenRetriever.Undertheowner'sscolding,theGoldenRetrieverfinallycalmeddown.TheownerexplainedthattheGoldenRetrieverwasusuallyverygentle,andhedidn'tknowwhyitsuddenlybrokefreefromtheropeandranouttoday.HepraisedPortia'sbravebehavior,sayingthathehadneverseensuchabravekitten.Ipickedupmysonandcheckedifhewasinjured.Fortunately,mysonwasonlyalittlefrightenedandnothurt.IlookedatPortiagratefullyandgentlystrokeditshead,sayingtoit,"You'rereallytheheroofourfamily."MysonalsostretchedouthislittlehandandgentlytouchedPortia,hiseyesfullofadmirationandgratitude.Fromthenon,ourfamilylovedPortiaevenmore,anditsstatusinourheartsbecameevenmoreimportant.AndPortiastillsilentlyguardedusasusual,becominganindispensablememberofourfamily.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)WhenIwasatalossastohowtoprotectmyson,apiercingscreamrangoutfrombehindme.Whirlingaround,IwasastonishedtodiscoverthatitwasnoneotherthanPortia.Gonewasitspreviousairofindolence;everysinglehaironitsbodystoodonend,anditstailswelledtoanimpressivesize,transformingitintoatinyyetfiercewarriorreadytoengageinbattleatamoment'snotice.Withlightningspeed,itdartedinfrontofmyson,emittingamenacinghissattheapproachingGoldenRetriever.Caughtoffguardbythissuddenshowofaggression,theGoldenRetrieverhaltedinitstracks,itseyesfilledwithbewildermentasitstaredatthefearlessfeline.Undeterred,Portiaarcheditsback,itseyeslockedontothedogwithunwaveringdetermination,assumingastancethatclearlyconveyeditsreadinesstodefenditsterritory.Myson,takenabackbythesuddenturnofevents,instinctivelytookafewstepsbackward,seekingrefugebehindthecourageouscat.Seizingtheopportunity,Isprintedtowardsmyson,shoutingatthetopofmylungsinadesperateattempttoscareoffthedog.However,theGoldenRetriever,seeminglyprovokedbyPortia'sdefiance,begantocirclearoundit,itseyessearchingforanopeningtolaunchanattack.Meanwhile,Portiaremainedsteadfast,standingguardinfrontofmyson,refusingtoyieldaninch.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Momentslater,theownerarrived,pantingheavily.Hisfacewasetchedwithremorseashetookinthechaoticscenebeforehim.Heprofuselyapologizedtouswhilestrugglingtoregaincontrolofhiswaywardpet.Withafirmscolding,hemanagedtocalmtheGoldenRetrieverdown.Theownerexplainedthatthedogwasusuallyverydocileandhewasatalosstoexplainwhyithadsuddenlyboltedfreefromitsleash.Hecouldn'thelpbutexpresshis