2024-2025學(xué)年高中英語Unit2WhatishappinesstoyouSectionⅦGuidedWriting教師用書教案牛津譯林版選修6

PAGEPAGE1Unit2Whatishappinesstoyou如何寫建議信(1)eq\a\vs4\al([文體指導(dǎo)])建議信是對收信人就某一問題提出看法、建議或忠告。建議信有可能是寫給個人，就其遇到的某個問題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；也可能是寫給某個組織或機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)提出建議或忠告。建議信確定要禮貌當(dāng)先，要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和勸服力。一、建議信的結(jié)構(gòu)首段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡潔介紹自己，留意語氣。主體段落：應(yīng)當(dāng)首先確定對方的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后再寫須要改進(jìn)的地方或針對具體狀況提出具體建議或忠告。千萬留意不要讓別人以為你是在投訴，而不是提建議。結(jié)尾段：對提出的建議進(jìn)行總結(jié)，要有禮貌，使對方簡潔接受。二、建議信的語言語言確定要委婉、禮貌，顧及他人感受。慎重運(yùn)用must，should，oughtto才能使對方能夠興奮地接受你的勸說或建議。要想提出好建議，你必需展示出獨(dú)特的見解。eq\a\vs4\al([亮點(diǎn)句式])1．Iwouldliketosuggestthat...我想建議……2．Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...我寫信來是要表達(dá)有關(guān)……我的看法。3．Youhaveaskedformyadvicewithregardto...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.你問我有關(guān)……的事情，我會嘗試著提出一些建議。4．IfIwereyou，Iwould...假如我是你，我會……5．Itseemstomethatyoucould...我認(rèn)為你可以……6．Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...我想假如你能……，可能會更好。7．Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount.我信任你會仔細(xì)考慮我的建議的。8．Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.我希望這些建議/看法/看法對你來說好用/有用/有幫助。9．Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.假如這方面有所改善我會特別快樂的。10．Iwillbereadyforfurtherdiscussingthismatterintodetails.我時刻打算著就此事進(jìn)行更具體的探討。eq\a\vs4\al([寫作任務(wù)])你兒子的班主任打電話告知你你的兒子被發(fā)覺私下里抽煙，作為父親或母親你寫了一封信放在兒子的枕頭上，在信里你告知他吸煙的害處，并告誡他杜絕抽煙。提示：1.健康角度；2．經(jīng)濟(jì)角度；3．戒煙決心；4．詞數(shù)80左右，開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dearson，YouknowwhatasurprisetomewhenIlearnyouaresmokingthesedays.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________eq\a\vs4\al([審題謀篇])體裁建議信時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時主題告誡兒子杜絕抽煙人稱其次人稱結(jié)構(gòu)第一部分：得知兒子吸煙很驚訝，表露擔(dān)憂。盡管兒子做了錯事，但作者理解。其次部分：從健康和經(jīng)濟(jì)角度分析吸煙的危害，讓兒子相識到其嚴(yán)峻性。第三部分：表達(dá)愿望，信任兒子定能戒煙。eq\a\vs4\al([遣詞造句])Ⅰ.對接單元詞匯1．obey 聽從；聽從2．specialist 專科醫(yī)師；專家3．suffer_from 遭遇4．a(chǎn)part_from 除了；遠(yuǎn)離5．quit停止； 放棄6．lung_cancer 肺癌7．cause/lead_to/result__in 導(dǎo)致Ⅱ.巧用單元句式、語法(一)完成句子1．眾所周知，吸煙有害健康。As_we_all_know，smokingisharmfultoourhealth.2．吸煙導(dǎo)致很多疾病。Smokingcauses/leads_to/results_in_many_illnesses.3．吸煙對中學(xué)生的危害更大。Smokingiseven_more_harmful_to_middle_school_students.4．吸煙對他們的身心健康都有損害。Smokingdoesgreatharmtotheirhealthphysically_and_mentally.5．由吸煙導(dǎo)致的最嚴(yán)峻的疾病就是肺癌。Themostseriousillnessthat_was_caused_by_smokingislungcancer.(二)句式升級6．用it作形式主語改寫1句It_is_known_to_all_that_smoking_is_harmful_to_our_health.7．用強(qiáng)調(diào)句式改寫2句It_is_smoking_that_causes_many_illnesses.8．用過去分詞短語作定語改寫5句The_most_serious_illness_caused_by_smoking_is_lung_cancer.eq\a\vs4\al([妙筆成篇])______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[參考范文]Dearson，YouknowwhatasurprisetomewhenIlearnyouaresmokingthesedays.Itisknowntoallthatsmokingisharmfultoourhealth.Andit'sevenmoreharmfultomiddleschoolstudentsforitdoesgreatharmtotheirhealthphysicallyandmentally.Itissmokingthatcausesmanyillnesses.Alotofpeoplealwayssufferfromcoughingbecauseofsmoking.Themostseriousillnesscausedbysmokingislungcancer.Meanwhile，smokingisalsoawasteofmoney.Forexample，ifyouspend15yuanonapackofcigaretteseveryday，theninayearthatisabout5,400yuan.Itwillbemoremeaningfulifthemoneycanbeusedinagoodway.Apartfromit，carelesssmokersmaycausedangerousfires.Thus，tokeephealthy，youshouldmakeyourmindtogetridofthebadhabitofsmoking.Pleasequitsmokingatonce.Iloveyouandbelieveyou!Yourdad【導(dǎo)讀】《簡·愛》(JaneEyre)是英國女作家夏洛蒂·勃朗特創(chuàng)作的長篇小說，是一部具有自傳色調(diào)的作品。閱讀下面選取的有關(guān)親情的節(jié)選，對比中外文化中對親情看法的異同。JaneEyre(excerpt)TheredroomWecouldnotgoforawalkthatafternoon.Therewassuchafreezingcoldwind，andsuchheavyrain，thatweallstayedindoors.Iwasgladofit.Ineverlikedlongwalks，especiallyinwinter.Iusedtohatecominghomewhenitwasalmostdark，withice-coldfingersandtoes，feelingmiserablebecauseBessie，thenursemaid，wasalwaysscoldingme.AllthetimeIknewIwasdifferentfrommycousins，Eliza，JohnandGeorgianaReed.Theyweretallerandstrongerthanme，andtheywereloved.Thesethreeusuallyspenttheirtimecryingandquarrelling，buttodaytheyweresittingquietlyaroundtheirmotherinthesitting-room.Iwantedtojointhefamilycircle，butMrsReed，myaunt，refused，Bessiehadcomplainedaboutme.“No，I'msorry，Jane.UntilIhearfromBessie，orseeformyself，thatyouarereallytryingtobehavebetter，youcannotbetreatedasagood，happychild，likemychildren.”“WhatdoesBessiesayIhavedone？”Iasked.“Jane，itisnotpolitetoquestionmeinthatway.Ifyoucannotspeakpleasantly，bequiet.”Icreptoutofthesitting-roomandintothesmallroomnextdoor，whereIchoseabookfullofpicturesfromthebookcase.Iclimbedontothewindow—seatanddrewthecurtains，sothatIwascompletelyhidden.Isatthereforawhile.SometimesIlookedoutofthewindowatthegreyNovemberafternoon，andsawtherainpouringdownontheleaflessgarden.ButmostofthetimeIstudiedthebookandstared，fascinated，atthepictures.Lostintheworldofimagination，Iforgotmysad，lonelyexistenceforawhile，andwashappy，Iwasonlyafraidthatmysecrethiding-placemightbediscovered.Suddenlythedooroftheroomopened.JohnReedrushedin.“Whereareyou，rat？”heshouted.Hedidnotseemebehindthecurtain.“Eliza!Georgiana!Janeisn'there!TellMammashe'srunoutintotherain—whatabadanimalsheis！”“HowluckyIdrewthecurtain，”Ithought.Hewouldneverhavefoundme，becausehewasnotveryintelligent.ButElizaguessedatoncewhereIwas.“She'sinthewindow-seat，John，”shecalledfromthesitting-room.SoIcameoutimmediately，asIdidnotwanthimtopullmeout.“Whatdoyouwant？”Iaskedhim.“Say，‘Whatdoyouwant，MasterReed’，”heanswered，sittinginanarmchair.“Iwantyoutocomehere.”JohnReedwasfourteenandIwasonlyten.Hewaslargeandratherfat.Heusuallyatetoomuchatmeals，whichmadehimill.Heshouldhavebeenatboardingschool，buthismother，wholovedhimverymuch，hadbroughthimhomeforamonthortwo，becauseshethoughthishealthwasdelicate.Johndidnotlovehismotherorhissister，andhehatedme.Hebulliedandpunishedme，nottwoorthreetimesaweek，notonceortwiceaday，butallthetime.Mywholebodytrembledwhenhecamenear.Sometimeshehitme，sometimeshejustthreatenedme，andIlivedinterriblefearofhim.Ihadnoideaabouthowtostophim.Theservantsdidnotwanttooffendtheiryoungmaster，andMrsReedcouldseenofaultinherdearboy.SoIobeyedJohn'sorderandapproachedhisarmchair，thinkinghowveryuglyhisfacewas.PerhapsheunderstoodwhatIwasthinking，forhehitmehardontheface.“ThatisforyourrudenesstoMammajustnow，”hesaid，“andforyourwickednessinhiding，andforlookingatmelikethat，yourat！”IwassousedtohisbullyingthatIneverthoughtofhittinghimback.“Whatwereyoudoingbehindthatcurtain？”heasked.“Iwasreading，”Ianswered.“Showmethebook.”Igaveittohim.“Youhavenorighttotakeourbooks，”hecontinued.“Youhavenomoneyandyourfatherleftyounone.Yououghttobeginthestreets，notlivehereincomfortwithagentleman'sfamily.Anyway，allthesebooksaremine，andsoisthewholehouse，orwillbeinafewyears'time.I'llteachyounottoborrowmybooksagain.”Heliftedtheheavybookandthrewithardatme.IthitmeandIfell，cuttingmyheadonthedoor.Iwasingreatpain，andsuddenlyforthefirsttimeinmylife，IforgotmyfearofJohnReed.“Youwicked，cruelboy！”Icried.“Youareabully!Youareasbadasamurderer！”“What!What！”hecried.“Didshesaythattome?Didyouhear，ElizaandGeorgiana?I'lltellMamma，butfirst...”Herushedtoattackme，butnowhewasfightingwithadesperategirl.Ireallysawhimasawickedmurderer.Ifeltthebloodrunningdownmyface，andthepaingavemestrength.IfoughtbackashardasIcould.Myresistancesurprisedhim，andheshoutedforhelp.HissistersranforMrsReed，whocalledhermaid，MissAbbott，andBessie.TheypulledusapartandIheardthemsay，“Whatawickedgirl!SheattackedMasterJohn！”MrsReedsaidcalmly，“Takeherawaytotheredroomandlockherinthere.”AndsoIwascarriedupstairs，armswavingandlegskicking.Assoonaswearrivedintheredroom，Ibecamequietagain，andthetwoservantsbothstartedscoldingme.“Really，MissEyre，”saidMissAbbott，“howcouldyouhithim?He'syouryoungmaster！”“Howcanhebemymaster?Iamnotaservant！”Icried.“No，MissEyre，youarelessthanaservant，becauseyoudonotwork，”repliedMissAbbott.Theybothlookedatmeasiftheystronglydisapprovedofme.“Youshouldremember，Miss，”saidBessie，“thatyourauntpaysforyourfoodandclothes，andyoushouldbegrateful.Youhavenootherrelationsorfriends.”AllmyshortlifeIhadbeentoldthis，andIhadnoanswertoit.Istayedsilent，listeningtothesepainfulreminders.《簡·愛》(節(jié)選)紅房子那天下午，我們不能出去漫步。寒風(fēng)刺骨，大雨瓢潑，大家都待在家里，我倒是因此感到興奮。我從來不喜愛走長路，特殊是在冬天。過去我最厭煩回到家時天色已暗，手腳冰涼，女仆貝茜總是訓(xùn)斥我而使我苦痛不堪。無論何時我都懂得我和我的表兄妹——里德家的伊麗莎、約翰和喬治娜不一樣。他們不僅比我高大、強(qiáng)壯，而且還受寵。這三個人經(jīng)常吵鬧不休，但今日卻和媽媽一起靜靜地坐在起居室里。我也想加入他們，可我的舅媽里德太太不允許。貝茜告了我的狀?！皩Σ黄?，簡。假如不聽到貝茜說或是由我親眼看到你的確努力要學(xué)好，你就不能像我的孩子那樣，被當(dāng)成是歡樂的好孩子?！薄柏愜缯f我干什么了？”我問?！昂?，這樣問我是不禮貌的。假如你不能好好講話，就閉嘴。”我靜靜退出起居室，走進(jìn)隔壁的小房間，從書架上選了一本圖畫書。我爬上窗臺，拉好窗簾，把自己整個藏了起來。我坐了一會兒，時而望望窗外。11月的午后天氣陰沉，大雨傾瀉在禿枝枯葉的花園里。不過大部分時間，我仔細(xì)讀著書，完全被書中的圖畫吸引住了。我沉醉在想象的世界中，短暫忘掉了難過和孤寂，只感到愉快。我唯一擔(dān)憂的就是我的隱私藏身處可能會被發(fā)覺。突然，門開了，約翰·里德沖了進(jìn)來?！袄鲜?，你在哪兒？”他叫著，沒有看到窗簾后面的我?！耙聋惿讨文?！簡不在這兒！告知媽媽她跑出去淋雨了。真是個畜生！”“幸好我拉上了窗簾，”我心想。他恒久找不到我，因?yàn)樗⒉宦敾?。可是，伊麗莎一下子就猜出了我在哪里。“約翰，她在窗臺上。”她在起居室喊道。于是，我抓緊走了出來，因?yàn)槲也幌Ｍ麃碜??！澳阆朐鯓?？”我問道?！罢f‘里德主子，您想要什么’，”他坐在椅子上說?！拔乙氵^來。”約翰·里德已經(jīng)14歲了，而我只有10歲。他長得又高又胖，經(jīng)常狼吞虎咽吃得太多，以致鬧病。他本該上寄宿學(xué)校的，可是他媽媽太寵他，把他接回家一兩個月，因?yàn)樗X得他身體弱。約翰既不喜愛他的母親，也不喜愛他的妹妹，對我更只有恨。他欺侮我，懲處我，不是一星期兩三次，也不是一天里一兩次，而是隨時隨地。他一靠近，我就渾身打顫。他有時打我，有時恐嚇我，我成天生活在對他的恐驚中，