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高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)善舉引機(jī)遇：一次幫助改變?nèi)松?題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文ThisisastoryaboutanactofkindnessthatIdid,whichinturnchangedmylifeinaway.Iusedtoteachinauniversitywithamaster’sdegree.Inmycountry,itwasbettertohaveaPhDforcareeradvancement,andmyqualificationsneededtobeimproved.SoItelephonedProfessorSmithforhelp.Ihadheardthathewasagooddoctoralsupervisorintheuniversity,butIhadn’tmethim.Itriedtocallhimonce,buttomydisappointment,hesaidhewasalittlebusyatthattimeandthathewouldcontactmelater.Oneday,IwasdrivinghomefromtheuniversitywhenIsawanaccidentatthesideoftheroad.Thetwocarscollided(碰撞),butfortunatelythedriverswerenotinjured.Theyarguedwitheachotherabouttheaccidentandbecameannoyed.ThenIstoppedmycartoseeiftheymightneedmyhelp.4續(xù)寫原文“Calmdown,gentlemen.What’sthematter?”Iapproachedthemandsaid.“It’sjustaminorscratch(劃痕).Thereweresomedisagreementswhenwetriedtoworkthingsoutprivately.Ithinkheisaskingforalittletoomuch,”onedriversaidtome.Ilearnedthathedidn’thaveenoughmoneyonhandtopayforthedamage.Understandingthesituation,Iofferedtohelp.Ipaidtheamountneededtosettlethematter.5續(xù)寫原文Atroublesomematterturnedintoapeacefulresolutionwithmyinvolvement.Whenthedriverofferedtoexchangeourbusinesscards,Iagreed.“Itwassokindofyoutoreachout.I’llrepayyourmoneytomorrow,”hesaid.“Forgetit.It’sjustasmallthing,”Iresponded.Finally,wesaidgoodbyetoeachother.However,Ididn’texpectmykindbehaviorwouldreallybringmegoodluck.WhenIwentbackhome,Ihappenedtoseethedriver’sbusinesscard.IwassurprisedtofindthatthedriverIhadhelpedwasProfessorSmithwhoIwantedtoturntoforhelp.Iconfidentlydecidedtocallhimagainthenextdaytomakeanappointment.6段首句Paragraph1：Unexpectedly,earlythenextmorning,myphonerang.Paragraph2：Thatafternoon,ImetProfessorSmithinhisoffice.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9本文講述了作者的經(jīng)歷。作者擁有碩士學(xué)位在大學(xué)任教，因職業(yè)發(fā)展需提升資質(zhì)，便向史密斯教授求助，初次致電被婉拒。一次駕車途中，作者看到兩輛車碰撞，司機(jī)因賠償問題爭(zhēng)執(zhí)，一方缺錢，作者幫忙支付解決糾紛?；丶液蟀l(fā)現(xiàn)受助司機(jī)竟是史密斯教授。次日一早，教授打來電話，對(duì)作者的善舉表示感動(dòng)，決定幫助作者深造。當(dāng)天下午，兩人在辦公室詳談，教授為作者的博士學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃提供建議并承諾指導(dǎo)，作者因善舉獲得寶貴機(jī)會(huì)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Unexpectedly,earlythenextmorning,myphonerang.沒想到，第二天一大早就接到史密斯教授的電話，他在電話那頭熱情洋溢，說一看到名片就想起了我，對(duì)我昨天的善舉贊不絕口，言語(yǔ)中滿是感激與欣賞。他感慨道，在如今這個(gè)快節(jié)奏的社會(huì)，愿意主動(dòng)幫助陌生人解決麻煩的人實(shí)在難能可貴，我無私的行為深深打動(dòng)了他。他還說，這種善良的品質(zhì)正是他在挑選學(xué)生時(shí)最為看重的。所以，他決定給予我?guī)椭?，愿意為我進(jìn)一步深造提供支持與指導(dǎo)。聽到這個(gè)消息，我簡(jiǎn)直欣喜若狂，激動(dòng)得語(yǔ)無倫次，連聲道謝。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Thatafternoon,ImetProfessorSmithinhisoffice.下午，我懷著忐忑又興奮的心情來到教授辦公室。教授早早在那等候，一見到我，便親切地起身迎接，熱情地與我握手。隨后，我們?cè)谏嘲l(fā)上坐下，他認(rèn)真地詢問我關(guān)于學(xué)術(shù)的規(guī)劃和目標(biāo)，仔細(xì)聆聽我的想法，不時(shí)點(diǎn)頭。接著，他根據(jù)我的情況，詳細(xì)且專業(yè)地分析了目前面臨的優(yōu)勢(shì)與不足，給出了許多極具價(jià)值的建議，比如如何準(zhǔn)備申請(qǐng)材料、怎樣提升專業(yè)知識(shí)等。他還承諾會(huì)在整個(gè)博士學(xué)習(xí)過程中悉心指導(dǎo)我，讓我安心學(xué)習(xí)。這次會(huì)面，讓我對(duì)未來充滿信心，也深深感受到善舉帶來的美好回饋。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Unexpectedly,earlythenextmorning,myphonerang.ItwasProfessorSmith.Onthephone,hisvoicewasfilledwithwarmthandgratitude.Hesaidthatassoonashesawthebusinesscardlastnight,herecognizedme.Heexpressedhisdeepappreciationformyactofkindness.Hementionedthatinaworldwherepeopleareofteninahurryandself-centered,mywillingnesstostopandhelpthoseinneedwastrulyremarkable.Heemphasizedthatkindnesslikeminewasexactlywhathewaslookingforinastudent.Therefore,hedecidedtooffermeahelpinghand.Hewouldassistmeinmypursuitofadoctoraldegree,providingmewithguidanceandsupport.IwasoverthemoonwhenIheardthisnews.IwassoexcitedthatIcouldhardlyspeakclearly,stutteringoutmythanks.14范文呈現(xiàn)Thatafternoon,ImetProfessorSmithinhisoffice.AssoonasIentered,hegreetedmewithabigsmileandawarmhandshake.Wesatdown,andhebegantoaskmeaboutmyacademicplansandgoalsindetail.Helistenedattentively,noddingfromtimetotime.Then,basedonmysituation,heanalyzedtheadvantagesanddisadvantagesIhadinpursuingadoctorate.Hegavememanyvaluablesuggestions,suchashowtopreparetheapplicationmaterialsandhowtoimprovemyprofessionalknowledge.Healsopromisedthathewouldguidemethroughouttheentireprocessofmydoctoralstudy.Thismeetingmademefeelconfidentaboutmyfutureandmademerealizethewonderfulrewardsthatakindactcouldbring.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Unexpectedly,earlythenextmorning,myphonerang.ItwasProfessorSmith,whosevoiceonthephonewasbrimmingwithwarmthandgratitude.Hesaidthatnosoonerhadheseenthebusinesscardlastnightthanherecognizedme.Expressinghisdeepappreciationformyactofkindness,hementionedthatinaworldwherepeopleareoftenpreoccupiedwiththeirownaffairs,mywillingnesstostopandhelpthoseinneedwastrulyremarkable.Emphasizingthatkindnesslikeminewasexactlywhathewaslookingforinastudent,hedecidedtooffermeahelpinghand,vowingtoassistmeinmypursuitofadoctoraldegreebyprovidingguidanceandsupport.Iwasoverthemoonuponhearingthisnews,hardlyabletospeakclearlyasIstutteredoutmythanks.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Thatafternoon,uponenteringhisoffice,IwasgreetedwithabigsmileandawarmhandshakefromProfessorSmith.Wesatdown,andhebegantoinquireaboutmyacademicplansandgoalsindetail,l