高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：老人的饋贈(zèng)：一場(chǎng)心靈的轉(zhuǎn)變

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)老人的饋贈(zèng)：一場(chǎng)心靈的轉(zhuǎn)變1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文AChangeofHeartItwasoneofthosedays,anordinaryOctoberday.Iwokeupfeelingtiredofallofthehousework.Iwasn’tfeelinganysenseofthankfulnessformycomfortablehomeorlovelyfamily,Idroppedmytwoolderchildrenatschoolwithasenseofreliefandunwillinglyheadedtothesupermarkettobuygrocerieswithmyyoungest.Iwasfeelingbadathavingtogointhefirstplace(whydotheyhavetoeat?)andmyson,justfouryearsoldatthetime,respondingtomyfeelings,wasbeingdifficult.Iracedaroundwiththetrolley(手推車),thoughtlesslythrowingitemsinwithnoregardtocost,whiletryingtocontrolmynaughty(調(diào)皮的)boywhosebehaviornowwascompletelyoutofcontrol.Yes,Iwasthatmother,shouting,threatening,atasmallchild,thekindofbehavioryouseeinothersbeforeyouhavechildrenandthink,Iwillneverbeoneofthosepeople.4續(xù)寫原文Weeventuallymadeittothecheckout,andstoodinthequeuewaitingourturn.Afterashorttime,Inoticedthatsomeonehadjoinedthelinebehindus.Iturnedaroundandsawanoldman.Hewasbentoverandworeadirtyovercoat,tiedaroundthemiddlewithrope.Hisshoeswerewornoutandhistrousershungaroundsocklessanklesonthiscold,wetday.Inhishandshecarriedasmallbottleoflong-lifemilk.5續(xù)寫原文AsIhadatrolleyfullofgroceries,Iaskedhimifhe’dliketogoaheadofme.Itwasn’tanactofkindnessonmypart,butratheranautomatic(無意識(shí)的)reaction,rootedinmesincechildhoodfromthetimeIwentshoppingwithmymother.PerhapsIjustdiditoutofasenseofresponsibilityorguilt.PerhapsIjustwantedhimgone.Afterall,hispresencemademeuncomfortable,inthesamewayIfeeluncomfortableandlookawaywhenpassingahomelessperson.Helookedshockedanduncertain.“No,Icouldn’tpossibly.Areyousure?”“Howkindofyou!”hesaid.Hesitantly,hewentahead,paidforhismilk,andtookhischange.6段首句Paragraph1：Then,tomyamazement,heturnedtomylittleboyandgentlypressedthechangeintohishand.Paragraph2：Wavingbacktohim,withmyyoungsonbymyside,Ifeltachangeofheart.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9在一個(gè)普通的十月天，“我”因厭倦家務(wù)，帶著煩躁情緒去超市購(gòu)物，四歲的兒子也調(diào)皮搗蛋，讓“我”更加心煩。在超市排隊(duì)結(jié)賬時(shí)，“我”看到身后有個(gè)穿著破舊的老人，出于習(xí)慣或某種復(fù)雜心理，“我”讓老人先結(jié)賬。老人買完牛奶后，做出了令人驚訝的舉動(dòng)，這一舉動(dòng)讓“我”的內(nèi)心發(fā)生了改變。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Then,tomyamazement,heturnedtomylittleboyandgentlypressedthechangeintohishand.接著，令我驚訝不已的是，他轉(zhuǎn)向我的小男孩，輕輕地把零錢塞到他手里。他臉上帶著和藹的笑容，眼神中滿是慈愛，輕聲說道：“拿著，小家伙，去給自己買個(gè)糖果吧?！蔽覂鹤酉仁且汇叮S即眼睛里閃爍著驚喜的光芒，開心地大聲說道：“謝謝您，爺爺！”那一刻，我仿佛被一道電流擊中，整個(gè)人都愣住了。我本以為老人會(huì)默默離開，沒想到他竟如此慷慨地對(duì)待我的兒子?？粗鴥鹤蛹冋娴男θ?，再看看老人那樸素甚至有些寒酸的模樣，我心中涌起一陣強(qiáng)烈的愧疚感。我開始反思自己之前對(duì)老人的嫌棄與偏見，僅僅因?yàn)樗耐獗砭托纳鷧拹?，?shí)在是太不應(yīng)該了。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Wavingbacktohim,withmyyoungsonbymyside,Ifeltachangeofheart.我和年幼的兒子一起向他揮手告別，那一刻，我感覺自己的內(nèi)心發(fā)生了變化。望著老人漸漸遠(yuǎn)去的背影，他那略顯佝僂的身軀在我眼中卻仿佛變得高大起來。我心中滿是羞愧，為自己之前膚淺的判斷而自責(zé)。同時(shí)，我也對(duì)老人充滿了感激，是他用這無聲的舉動(dòng)給我上了一課。我意識(shí)到，不能以貌取人，每個(gè)人都有自己的尊嚴(yán)和善良。從那以后，我決定改變自己，珍惜生活中的點(diǎn)滴，以更友善、包容的心態(tài)去對(duì)待身邊的每一個(gè)人，不再讓偏見蒙蔽自己的雙眼。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Then,tomyamazement,heturnedtomylittleboyandgentlypressedthechangeintohishand.Withakindsmileonhisfaceandaffectioninhiseyes,hesaidsoftly,"Here,littlefellow.Buyyourselfatreat."Mysonwasstartledatfirst,andthenhiseyessparkledwithsurprise.Heexclaimedhappily,"Thankyou,sir!"Atthatmoment,Iwascompletelystunned.Ihadthoughttheoldmanwouldjustleaveafterpayingforhismilk.However,heshowedsuchgenerositytomyson.Lookingatmyson'sinnocentsmileandtheoldman'sshabbyappearance,astrongsenseofguiltwelledupinme.Ibegantoreflectonmypreviousdislikeandprejudicetowardstheoldman.Itwasreallywrongofmetojudgehimjustbyhisappearance.14范文呈現(xiàn)Wavingbacktohim,withmyyoungsonbymyside,Ifeltachangeofheart.AsIwatchedtheoldmanwalkingaway,hishunchedbackgraduallydisappearingfrommysight,Iwasfilledwithshame.Iwasashamedofmypreviousshallowjudgment.Meanwhile,Iwasdeeplygratefultotheoldman.Itwashewhotaughtmealessonwithhissilentact.Irealizedthatweshouldn'tjudgepeoplebytheirappearance.Everyonehastheirowndignityandkindness.Fromthenon,Idecidedtochangemyself.Iwouldcherisheverybitinlifeandtreateveryonearoundmewithmorekindnessandtolerance,nolongerlettingprejudiceblindmyeyes.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)hen,tomyamazement,heturnedtomylittleboyandgentlypressedthechangeintohishand.Hisfaceadornedwithakindsmileandeyesbrimmingwithaffection,hemurmuredsoftly,"Here,littlechap.Gogetyourselfasweet."Myson,initiallytakenaback,hadhiseyesinstantlylightup."Thankyou,sir!"hecriedoutmerrily.Atthatinstant,Iwasrenderedspeechless,rootedtothespot.Havingassumedtheoldmanwoulddepartafterpurchasinghismilk,Iwascompletelycaughtoff-guardbyhisgenerositytowardsmyson.Gazingatmyson'sinnocentsmileandtheoldman'statteredappearance,awaveofguiltwashedoverme.HowwrongIhadbeentojudgehimmerelybyhisexterior!16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Wavingbacktohim,withmyyoungsonbymyside,Ifeltachangeofheart.Astheoldman'shunchedfigurefadedintothedistance,I