高三英語一輪復習讀后續(xù)寫練習：警察為小男孩拯救生日派對

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習警察為小男孩拯救生日派對1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Whenwearelittlekids,birthdaypartiesaremomentousoccasions.Theyareourtimetoshine,andweloveeverythingaboutthem:theballoons,thegames,thecake,thegifts,andsoon.Afterreadingcoolstoriesaboutpoliceofficerssolvingmysteries,AllenMillerthoughtthepolicewereawesome,hopingtobecomeoneofthem!So,whenhehadtochooseathemeforhisseventhbirthdayparty—hewentwithhisfavorite:thepolice!Andallhewantedforhisbirthdaypartywasamodelpolicecar.Heexcitedlyinvitedsomeofhisfriendsandanxiouslyawaitedtheday.Unfortunately,noneofthemcouldmakeittothepartyduetovariousreasons,Allen’smomRachelwrestledwiththechallengingdecision:shouldshecancelthepartyandsaveAllentheembarrassmentofanemptypartyroom?Hehadbeenlookingforwardtothepartyandtalkingaboutitdaily,soitwouldbreakhishearttocancelit.4續(xù)寫原文OfficerFrankSmith,whohadalreadyplannedwithRachelandagreedtoshowupattheparty,heardfromRachelthatitmightbecanceledduetolowattendance.That’swhenhedecidedtosavetheday—heisapoliceofficerafterall!Hisdutyistoserveandprotect,andhedecidedtoprotectAllenfromhavingabadday,andservehimthemostamazingseventhbirthdayparty!OfficerSmithgotthewholelocalpolicetojoinin.“Weliketobeinvolvedinourcommunity.It’snotjustaboutenforcing(執(zhí)行)thelaw.Weliketobethereinthegoodtimesaswell,”heexplainedtoRachel.OnthedayofAllen’sparty,OfficerSmithpickedupRachelandAlleninhispolicecar.Theboydidn’tknowwheretheyweregoing,butwasexcited.TheystoppedatTownHall,andofficerSmithledthemintothemeetingroomwhereagroupofpolicemenwerewaitingtowishAllenahappybirthday.5段首句Paragraph1：There,apartywaswaitingforhim.Paragraph2：Aftertheyenjoyedthecake,OfficerSmithtookoutagiftbag.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8小時候，生日派對對孩子意義重大。艾倫?米勒因喜愛警察故事，七歲生日派對選警察主題，滿心期待朋友來參加，還渴望得到一輛模型警車。然而，朋友們因各種原因無法赴約，母親瑞秋糾結是否取消派對。得知消息的警察弗蘭克?史密斯決定召集當?shù)鼐煺扰蓪?。派對當天，史密斯警官開警車接艾倫母子，帶他們到市政廳會議室，那里一場為艾倫準備的驚喜派對正等待著他。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：There,apartywaswaitingforhim.當艾倫走進房間，他瞬間被眼前的景象震撼。五彩斑斕的氣球從天花板垂落，墻上貼滿了警察主題的海報，正中央擺放著一個巨大的、精心制作的警察造型蛋糕，蛋糕上的警燈閃爍著微光。警察們穿著整齊的制服，微笑著鼓掌歡迎他。接著，警察們帶著艾倫玩起了有趣的游戲，比如模擬追捕小偷的游戲，艾倫扮演英勇的警察，在房間里穿梭，玩得不亦樂乎。大家還一起唱歌跳舞，艾倫完全沉浸在歡樂的氛圍中，之前因朋友缺席的失落早已煙消云散。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Aftertheyenjoyedthecake,OfficerSmithtookoutagiftbag.在盡情享受蛋糕后，史密斯警官神秘地拿出一個禮物袋。艾倫好奇地看著他，眼中滿是期待。史密斯警官笑著說：“艾倫，這個禮物是大家對你的祝福。”艾倫迫不及待地打開袋子，當看到夢寐以求的模型警車時，他激動得跳了起來。他緊緊抱住模型警車，連聲道謝。隨后，警察們和艾倫一起合影留念，記錄下這美好的時刻。這個特別的生日派對，不僅讓艾倫度過了難忘的一天，更在他心中種下了一顆更加堅定的夢想種子，讓他對未來成為警察充滿了向往。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)WhenAllenenteredtheroom,hewasimmediatelystunnedbywhathesaw.Therewerecolorfulballoonshangingfromtheceiling,andpolice-themedposterswerepastedalloverthewalls.Inthecenteroftheroomstoodahuge,exquisitely-madepolice-shapedcakewiththelightsonittwinklingslightly.Thepolicemen,dressedinneatuniforms,weresmilingandclappingtowelcomehim.Then,thepolicemenledAllentoplaysomeinterestinggames.Forexample,theyplayedagameofsimulatingcatchingathief.Allen,actingasabravepoliceofficer,ranaroundtheroom,havingagreattime.Everyonealsosanganddancedtogether.Allenwascompletelyimmersedinthejoyousatmosphere,andthedisappointmentcausedbyhisfriends'absencehadlongsincedisappeared.13范文呈現(xiàn)Aftertheyhadenjoyedthecake,OfficerSmithtookoutagiftbagmysteriously.Allenlookedathimcuriouslywithfullofanticipationinhiseyes.OfficerSmithsmiledandsaid,"Allen,thisgiftistheblessingfromallofus."Allencouldn'twaittoopenthebag.Whenhesawthemodelpolicecarhehadbeendreamingof,hejumpedupexcitedly.Hehuggedthemodelpolicecartightlyandthankedeveryonerepeatedly.Subsequently,thepolicementookpictureswithAllentorecordthiswonderfulmoment.ThisspecialbirthdaypartynotonlymadeAllenhaveanunforgettableday,butalsoplantedamoredetermineddreamseedinhisheart,makinghimlookforwardtobecomingapoliceofficerinthefuturewithgreateagerness.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)There,apartywaswaitingforhim.AsAllensteppedintotheroom,whatgreetedhiseyeswasascenestraightoutofhisdreams.Colorfulballoons,likefloatingrainbows,hungfromtheceiling,whilepolice-themedpostersadornedthewalls,creatinganexcitingatmosphere.Intheverycenterstoodamagnificentpolice-shapedcake,itslightstwinklinginvitingly.Thepolicemen,intheirimmaculateuniforms,worewarmsmilesandwelcomedAllenwiththunderousapplause.TheythenengagedAlleninaseriesofthrillinggames.Takethe"catch-the-thief"gameforinstance,whereAllen,asavaliantpoliceofficer,dashedaroundtheroom,hislaughterringingout.Allweresinginganddancing,withAllenbeingcompletelylostinthisseaofjoy,thepreviousdisappointmentoverhisfriends'absencelongforgotten.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Aftertheyenjoyedthecake,OfficerSmithtookoutagiftbag.Withamysterioussmile,OfficerSmithpresentedthebagtoAllen,whowaslookingathimwitheyesbrimmingwithcuriosity."Thisisatokenofourloveforyou,Allen,"saidOfficerSmith.Eagerly,Allentoreopent