2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：從+“山羊”+到河流：伊娃的游泳蛻變+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)從“山羊”到河流：伊娃的游泳蛻變1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Evaknewshe’dhavetoswimonthe“goat”again.Thethoughtmadeherwanttoturnherbicyclearoundandheadhome,butshedidn’t.ShekeptridingalongtherivertowardMrKovar’shouseforherswimminglesson.Eva’stownhadnopublicpools.Theuniversityhadapool,butitwasonlyforswimteams.Evahadseenthepoolwhenherbrothershadbeenontheschoolswimteam,andsheiseagertoswiminitsbluewater.Butnow,Evaandtheotherstudentshadtolearntoswimbylyingonapieceofwoodfixedonasawhorse(鋸木架).Thesawhorselookedlikeagoat.AfterEvareachedMrKovar’shouse,hebeganhisclass.“TellmethebasicswimmingwayIhaveaughtyou!”MrKovarsaid.“Lieonmyfront;swingonearmovermyhead,andthentheotherarm.Meanwhile,kickthewater,”Evareplied.MrKovarsaid,“OK.Now,practice.Onehundredstrokes(劃水)!”Evaclimbedontothesawhorseandlayonherstomachbuttherewasnowateraround.4續(xù)寫原文MrKovarwalkedaroundEvaasshepracticedherstrokes.“Fingerstogether,”hesaidandtappedherhand.Nexthetappedherhead,saying,“Breatheonlywhenyouturnyourhead.”FindingMrKovaroftenlookedunsatisfied,Evabecamenervous.“Thirty-seven,thirty-eight,”MrKovarsaid,countingherstrokes.Weekafterweek,MrKovarcountedandtapped.Eachweek,Evatriedtobreakherrecordforfewesttaps.Oneday,MrKovarsaid,“You’rereadytoswiminthewater.”“Theuniversitypool?”Evaaskedhappily.MrKovarsaid,“Youcannotswimthereunlessyou’reonateam.Youcannotbeonateamunlessyoupassmyclass.IcannotpassyouuntilIseeyouswiminthewater.Youmustfirstswimintheriver.”“Isitsafe?”Evaasked.Theriverwascoldandmuddy.“It’ssafeifyou’reagoodswimmer,”saidMrKovar.ThenextdayEvaandhermothermetMrKovarattheriver.5段首句Paragraph1：WhenMrKovargavethesignal,Evarushedintothebrownwater.Paragraph2：SeeingEva’sexcellentswimming,MrKovaraskedhertoswimbacktothebank.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8伊娃所在的城鎮(zhèn)沒有公共泳池，大學(xué)泳池只對游泳隊(duì)開放。她只能在科瓦爾先生家，借助像“山羊”的鋸木架練習(xí)游泳。在科瓦爾先生的指導(dǎo)下，伊娃不斷練習(xí)劃水動作，每周都努力減少被糾正的次數(shù)。終于，科瓦爾先生認(rèn)為她可以下水了，但不是在大學(xué)泳池，而是在冰冷泥濘的河里。伊娃帶著對游泳的熱愛和對未知水域的擔(dān)憂，迎來了新的挑戰(zhàn)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：WhenMrKovargavethesignal,Evarushedintothebrownwater.當(dāng)科瓦爾先生發(fā)出信號，伊娃一頭扎進(jìn)那渾濁的棕色河水中。刺骨的寒冷瞬間包裹住她的身體，讓她忍不住打了個寒顫。但伊娃迅速調(diào)整狀態(tài)，腦海中回想著科瓦爾先生的教導(dǎo)，拼盡全力開始游動。她緊緊并攏手指，雙臂有節(jié)奏地?cái)[動，按照老師說的，轉(zhuǎn)頭進(jìn)行呼吸。河水的水流不斷沖擊著她，試圖阻礙她前進(jìn)，可伊娃沒有絲毫退縮。她專注于每一次劃水，在心里默默計(jì)數(shù)，就如同在“山羊”上練習(xí)時一樣。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：SeeingEva’sexcellentswimming,MrKovaraskedhertoswimbacktothebank.看到伊娃出色的游泳表現(xiàn)，科瓦爾先生讓她游回岸邊。伊娃熟練地調(diào)整方向，輕松地朝著岸邊游去。當(dāng)她終于踏上河岸時，全身濕漉漉的，頭發(fā)上還掛著水珠?？仆郀栂壬樕下冻隽藵M意的笑容，對伊娃說道：“你做得很棒，完全掌握了游泳技巧?，F(xiàn)在，你已經(jīng)有資格參加游泳隊(duì)的選拔了?！币镣蘼牶?，興奮得跳了起來，她的努力終于得到了回報(bào)。這次在河里的游泳經(jīng)歷，不僅讓她學(xué)會了游泳，更讓她變得勇敢和自信。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)WhenMrKovargavethesignal,Evarushedintothebrownwater.Thecoldnessoftheriverimmediatelyengulfedher,makinghershiverinvoluntarily.However,shequicklygatheredherselfandstartedswimmingwithgreatdetermination.SherememberedMrKovar'steachingsclearly:keepherfingerstogether,swingherarmsrhythmically,andturnherheadtobreathe.Therivercurrentpushedagainstherforcefully,butshedidn'tyield.Sheconcentratedoneachstroke,countingtheminhermindjustasshedidonthe"goat".Witheverymovement,shewasprovingherabilityandcourage.13范文呈現(xiàn)SeeingEva'sexcellentswimming,MrKovaraskedhertoswimbacktothebank.Evaskillfullychangedherdirectionandmadeherwaybackwithease.Whenshefinallysteppedontotheshore,herwholebodywaswetandwaterdropletswerehangingfromherhair.MrKovarsmiledwithsatisfactionandsaidtoEva,"You'vedoneanexcellentjob.You'vefullymasteredtheswimmingskills.Now,you'reeligibletotryoutfortheswimteam."Evajumpedwithexcitementuponhearingthis.Herhardworkhadfinallypaidoff.Thisexperienceofswimmingintherivernotonlytaughtherhowtoswimbutalsomadeherbraverandmoreconfident.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)WhenMrKovargavethesignal,Evaplungedhead-firstintothemurkybrownwater.Awaveoffrigidcoldinstantlyenvelopedher,causinganinvoluntaryshudder.Yet,withremarkablecomposure,sheralliedherresolveandlaunchedintoadeterminedswim.EveryinstructionfromMrKovarechoedvividlyinhermind:fingerstightlytogether,armssweepinginarhythmicarc,andheadturningpreciselyforabreath.Therivercurrent,aformidableforce,pushedrelentlesslyagainsther,butsheremainedundeterred.Withlaser-likefocus,shecountedeachstroke,justasshehadonthe"goat",eachmovementatestamenttohergrowingprowessandunwaveringcourage.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)ObservingEva'soutstandingswimmingdisplay,MrKovarsignaledforhertoreturntothebank.Withpracticedease,Evaadjustedhercourseandglidedbacktowardstheshore.Asshefinallysteppedontotheland,water-loggedandglisteningwithdroplets,MrKovar'sfacebrokeintoasatisfiedsmile."You'veexcelled,Eva,"hecommended."You'vetrulymasteredtheartofswimming.Now,you'reeligibletovieforaspotontheswimteam."Atthesewords,Eva'seyessparkledwithexcitement,andsheleapedwithjoy.