Module 7 My past life-2021-2022學(xué)年七年級(jí)英語下學(xué)期模塊話題滿分寫作（外研版）

2021-2022學(xué)年七年級(jí)英語下學(xué)期單元話題滿分寫作Module7:Mypastlife單元話題：描述過去生活范文11．“Myprogressinthepastyear”Youmusthavemademuchprogressinthepastyear.Maybetheprogressisinyourlifeskillsorhabits.Maybeyouhavemadeprogressinyourstudyorattitude.Chooseoneaspectandwriteanarticleof80-100wordswiththefollowingquestions:1.Inwhichaspect/fieldhaveyoumadeprogress?2.Whathaveyoudonetomaketheprogress?3.Whathaveyoulearntfromit?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1．例文：Inthepastyear,Ihavemadegreatprogressinreading.Before,Ididn’tlikereading.Ithinkreadingisawasteoftime.Inmysparetime,IwouldratherplaygamesandwatchTVthanreadbooks.ButafteraChineseexam,Irealizedtheimportanceofreading.Ithinkbooksareourbestfriends.Theygiveusmuchknowledge.Ifindreadingbooksisagoodwaytorelaxmyself.Atthesametimeitcanalsohelpmeopenupmyeyestotheoutsideworld.ThoughI’mbusywithmylessons,myfreetimeisfullofhappinessandjoy.Ilovereadingbecauseithelpsmestudybetter.Ioftendosomereadingintheevening.SoIsuggestthatteachersshouldgiveuslesshomeworksothatwecanhavemoretimetoread.IlikereadingandIwanttobeawriterinthefuture.【解析】1.題干解讀：文章屬于材料作文，主要是以過去一年自己取得的進(jìn)步為主線展開描寫，內(nèi)容可以按照題目中所提出的問題提示進(jìn)行描寫，按照自己的情況適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：文章主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)相結(jié)合，人稱用第一人稱展開描述。主要是介紹自己在某一方面取得的進(jìn)步。寫作時(shí)語言要簡單易懂，文章結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，多使用簡單詞語表達(dá)，意思要通俗易懂。范文22．假如你的英語老師叫陳華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所提供的信息，以MyTeacher’sPastLife為題，寫一篇60詞左右的英語小短文，介紹她過去的生活情況。NameChenHuaBorninAsmallvillageinZhuchengBornonJune18th,1990PrimarySchoolTaolinPrimarySchoolFirstEnglishTeacherMr.ZhangCharacter(性格)Friendly__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．參考范文：MyTeacher’sPastLifeChenHuaismyEnglishteacher.ShewasborninasmallvillageinZhuchengonJune18th,1990.ThenameofherprimaryschoolisTaolinPrimarySchool.Mr.ZhangwasherfirstEnglishteacher.Atthattime,shewasfriendlytoeveryone.Ithinkallofherteachersandclassmateslikedherverymuch.Allofusloveher.Sheisaniceteacher.【解析】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)表格提示要點(diǎn)，介紹英語老師的過去，寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。2.

寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要緊扣主題，本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過去時(shí)；在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。范文33．時(shí)光飛逝，一轉(zhuǎn)眼你即將升上八年級(jí)。過去的這一年，學(xué)校豐富多彩的生活中一定有開心、美好、難忘……的日子吧？請(qǐng)以“A(n)_______DayThisYear”為題寫一篇不少于80個(gè)單詞的短文，要求內(nèi)容適切，意思連貫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。內(nèi)容包括：1.今年在學(xué)校最……的是哪一天？為什么？2.那一天你是怎樣度過的？(和誰一起，做了什么？感受如何？)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．例文AnUnforgettableDayThisYearEveryonehashisorherunforgettableday.I’llneverforgetJune11th,2012.Itwasasunnyday.Onthewaytoschool,myfrienddidsomethingrudetome.Itmademesad.What’sworse,Igota“C”inmyfavoritesubject.Afterschool,Iwenthomeunhappily.Itwasdarkintheroom.Suddenlythelightswereon,andIheardthesong“HappyBirthday”.Iwassurprisedtoseemanypeopleandabigcake.“Oh,it’smybirthday.”Iwassoexcitedandhappy.Itwasmyfirsttimetohaveabirthdayparty.I’llneverforgetthatday.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞“今年難忘的一天”為題寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要以一般過去時(shí)為主，人稱為以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。分為兩段式：第一段引出主題；第二段講述自己那天的經(jīng)歷。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。范文44．初一生活即將過去，在這一年里，你一定有很多快樂和收獲，也不可避免的留有遺憾。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格所提示的內(nèi)容，寫一篇英語短文，對(duì)自己的初一學(xué)習(xí)生活進(jìn)行總結(jié)和回顧。對(duì)自己滿意的方面1.personalities2.abilities3.thingsIdid4.…(自擬)對(duì)自己不滿意的方面1.seldomdoexercise2.…(自擬)對(duì)自己初二生活的打算1.…(自擬)2.…(自擬)要求1.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格提示的所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.詞數(shù)：80詞左右，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3.不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。Timeflies!IspendawholeyearstudyinginGrade7.Attheendofthisterm,Iwanttosummarize(總結(jié))myschoollife.IamveryhappythatIdidsomethinggoodinGrade7._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．例文Timeflies!IspendawholeyearstudyinginGrade7.Attheendofthisterm,Iwanttosummarize(總結(jié))myschoollife.IamveryhappythatIdidsomethinggoodinGrade7.

Ijoineddifferentkindsofclubs.Imadesomefriendsandhadagoodtime.SoIammoreoutgoingnow.Itookpartinalotofgamesandwonprizes.ButIwassocarelessthatIcouldn’tmakemyparentshappy.Iseldomdidexercise.Ididn’tworkveryhardinclass.NextyearIwilltakemoreexercisetokeepfit.IamgoingtobeseriousaboutwhatIdo.IwillstudyharderandtrytogetbettergradeswhenIaminGrade8.Iwanttomakemyparentstakeprideinme.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)表格提示信息進(jìn)行寫作，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一人稱來行文，時(shí)態(tài)綜合使用一般過去時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹過去一年對(duì)自己滿意和不滿意的方面；第三段介紹自己初二生活的打算。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。范文55．ZhangTao是你的新同學(xué),介紹一下他過去的生活?？筛鶕?jù)內(nèi)容適當(dāng)增添。要求60個(gè)字以上...wasborn...Beijing,2003...hisfirstschool...No.3PrimarySchoolHewas...nice,good...hisfirstteacher......hisfirstfriend...MissLi,strictZhangMeng,good...hisfavoritesport...swimming__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．例文MyfriendZhangTaoisnewhere.HewasborninBeijingin2003.HisfirstschoolisNo.3PrimarySchool.Heisniceandgood.HisfirstteacherisMissLi.Sheisstrictwithherstudents.HisbestfriendisZhangMeng.Sheisagoodgirl.Theyoftendidtheirhomeworktogetherafterschool.Hisfavoritesportwasswimming.Ithinkhewillgetonwellwithothers.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文為一篇小記敘文，主要描寫自己新同學(xué)的過去。表格內(nèi)容比較清晰，且內(nèi)容充分。學(xué)生只需將表格內(nèi)容進(jìn)行整理加工即可。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用了兩段式，描寫他的過去的事情，采用一般過去時(shí),描寫客觀事實(shí),用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。最后一段一句話獨(dú)立成段，寫出了自己對(duì)同學(xué)的美好祝愿。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：beborn；bestrictwith；afterschool；getonwellwith。句型：Hewasniceandgood；HisbestfriendwasZhangMeng。范文6每個(gè)人都有自己的童年生活。你過去的生活是什么樣子的？請(qǐng)你以“Mypastlife”為題，寫一篇70詞左右的英語短文。要求：1、不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名；2、語句連貫，70詞左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．例文MypastlifeIwasborninasmallvillageinthewestofChinaon14thMay,2006.IoftenplayedandhadfunwiththeboysnearMinjiangRiver.IwenttoschoolwhenIwassevenyearsold.MyfirstschoolwasShiyanPrimarySchool.Ihadagoodtimeandfinishedtheprimaryschoollessonsthere.MyfirstteacherwasMrsWang.Shewasverystrictbutveryfriendly.Now,Iamstudyinginamiddleschool.IwanttobeadoctorwhenIgrowup.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。要求以“Mypastlife”為題，介紹自己過去的生活，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一人稱來介紹，時(shí)態(tài)用一般過去時(shí)。作文可分為兩段，第一段回憶過去的生活，包括家鄉(xiāng)、小學(xué)生活、學(xué)校老師等；第二段介紹現(xiàn)在的狀態(tài)以及未來的打算。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。范文77．假如你是來自英國的交換生Mike，寫信給英國的朋友Nick，講述自己過去一年在中國的生活并他分享自己新年的計(jì)劃。信件的開頭已給出。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1、游覽了中國名勝，熟悉了中國文化；2、交了新朋友，中文進(jìn)步了；3、打算培養(yǎng)一項(xiàng)愛好，學(xué)習(xí)制作中國食品；4、多做運(yùn)動(dòng)保持健康；5、補(bǔ)充一兩點(diǎn)寒假計(jì)劃。參考詞匯：placesofinterest名勝古跡，culture文化，traditional傳統(tǒng)的。要求：文中不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校姓名；書寫整。要點(diǎn)齊全，詞數(shù)80詞左右。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________