2025屆高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)：從誤解到關(guān)愛(ài)：杰森與流浪老人的故事+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)從誤解到關(guān)愛(ài)：杰森與流浪老人的故事1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文“Mom,I’mreadytogo,”calledJason.EverySaturday,JasonlookedforwardtogoingtoChinatowntoshopforfoodbecausehismomlethimpickhisfavoritesnacks:roastporkbunsandbubbletea.ThestreetsinChinatownwerecrowdedwithcarsandpedestrians.Hismothercouldnotfindthesameexoticvegetablesinthelocalsupermarkets,sotheyalwayscameheretoshop.WhatfascinatedJasonwastastyroastpork,eventhewholepigshangingonbighooksinthewindows,theirskinsroastedtoaglisteningbrown.Jason’smouthwouldwaterjustlookingatthem.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文AstheypassedthenewsstandcarryingChinesenewspapersandmagazines,Jasonspottedanoldmansittingonthesidewalk.Hishairwaslong,white,andmessy.Thefacebeneathwaslined,dirty,andunshaven.Frayedandtornclothingwrappedaroundhisthinframe,andinthiskindofcoldweather,heevenworesandals,hisfeetbluewithcold.Hebangedanemptycanagainstthesidewalk.AsJasonwalkedby,hecouldsmellamustyodorandpinchedhisnostrilstogether.TheoldmanreachedoutandtouchedJason’sleftleg.Instinctively,Jasongatheredallhisstrengthtojerk(猛拉)hislegawayandkicktheoldman’shandheavily.Frightened,hehurriedtocatchupwithhismotherwithoutlookingback.“Mom,theoldmantouchedme,”hecried,“Hetouchedmewithhisdirtyhands.It’sdisgusting!Andhesmelledtoo.”5續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Jason’smotherglancedbackatthemanwithalookofunderstandingandsaidgently,“Jason,hecan’thelpit.He’shomeless.Hedidn’tmeananyharm.”Mom’swordsmadeJasonlookbackattheoldmanwithregret,whonowwaslookingupatotherpassersby,stillbanginghiscan.Ontheirwayhome,Jasonasked,hisvoicefilledwithconcern.“Whyisthatoldmanhomeless?Wheredoeshesleep?”“Idon’tknow.It’stoughtobehomeless,especiallyinthiscoldweather.Hedidlookquiteweak,”hismotherreplied.Mom’swordsmadeJason’sregretdeepened.Heconfessedhisheavykicktohismother,whoremindedhimthatitwascrucialtoacknowledgehismistakeandtrytomakeupforit.6段首句Paragraph1：Thenextday,withhismother’shelp,Jasondecidedtodosomething.Paragraph2：Hearingthis,theoldmanlookedatthemwithwateryeyes.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析9每周六杰森都期待和媽媽去唐人街買(mǎi)食物，他喜歡那里的小吃。一次去唐人街，杰森遇到一位流浪老人，老人碰了他的腿，他出于本能踢了老人。媽媽告訴他老人無(wú)家可歸并非有意冒犯，杰森心生悔意。回家路上他向媽媽詢(xún)問(wèn)老人的情況，愧疚感加深。媽媽提醒他要承認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤并彌補(bǔ)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1：Thenextday,withhismother’shelp,Jasondecidedtodosomething.第二天，在媽媽的幫助下，杰森決定做點(diǎn)什么。他和媽媽一大早就來(lái)到了超市，精心挑選了厚實(shí)的襪子、保暖的手套，還買(mǎi)了面包、熱湯等食物。杰森還特意讓媽媽幫忙裝了一大杯熱氣騰騰的咖啡。一切準(zhǔn)備就緒后，他們?cè)俅蝸?lái)到了唐人街昨天遇見(jiàn)老人的地方。杰森的心跳不由自主地加快，內(nèi)心充滿(mǎn)了緊張和愧疚。他深吸一口氣，緊緊地攥著手中的袋子，一步一步慢慢地走向老人。當(dāng)老人那布滿(mǎn)滄桑的眼睛看到他們時(shí)，眼中閃過(guò)一絲驚訝。杰森鼓起全部的勇氣，微微顫抖著雙手把袋子遞向老人，聲音小卻堅(jiān)定地說(shuō)：“爺爺，對(duì)不起，這是給您的。”11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：Hearingthis,theoldmanlookedatthemwithwateryeyes.聽(tīng)到這話，老人淚眼汪汪地看著他們。他那瘦骨嶙峋、滿(mǎn)是污垢的手顫抖著接過(guò)袋子，嘴唇不停地抖動(dòng)，似乎有千言萬(wàn)語(yǔ)卻難以說(shuō)出口。過(guò)了許久，他才用沙啞得幾乎聽(tīng)不清的聲音說(shuō)道：“謝謝你們，你們真是好人。”杰森看著老人，眼眶也不禁紅了起來(lái)，他深刻地意識(shí)到自己曾經(jīng)的行為是多么的魯莽和錯(cuò)誤。而此刻，能為老人做些力所能及的事，讓他的內(nèi)心充滿(mǎn)了溫暖。從那以后，杰森每次來(lái)到唐人街，都會(huì)特意來(lái)看望這位老人，給他帶來(lái)生活所需，老人臉上的笑容也漸漸多了起來(lái)，他們之間也建立起了一種特殊的情誼。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextday,withhismother’shelp,Jasondecidedtodosomething.Earlyinthemorning,heandhismotherwenttothesupermarket.Theycarefullyselectedthicksocks,warmgloves,andalsoboughtsomebread,hotsoupandotherfood.Jasonalsoaskedhismothertohelphimfillalargecupofsteamingcoffee.Aftereverythingwasready,theycametotheplaceinChinatownwheretheymettheoldmanyesterdayagain.Jason'sheartwaspoundingandhewasfilledwithnervousnessandguilt.Hetookadeepbreath,tightlyheldthebaginhishand,andwalkedslowlystepbysteptowardstheoldman.Whentheoldman'seyesfullofvicissitudessawthem,therewasaflashofsurpriseinhiseyes.Jasonsummonedupallhiscourage,hishandstremblingslightlyashehandedthebagtotheoldman.Hesaidinasoftbutfirmvoice,"Grandpa,I'msorry.Thisisforyou."14范文呈現(xiàn)Hearingthis,theoldmanlookedatthemwithwateryeyes.Histhin,dirtyhandstrembledashetookthebag.Hislipswereshaking,asifhehadalottosaybutcouldn't.Afteralongtime,hesaidinahoarsevoicethatwasalmostinaudible,"Thankyou.Youarereallykind-heartedpeople."Jasonlookedattheoldmanandhiseyesalsobecamered.Hedeeplyrealizedhowrecklessandwronghispreviousbehaviorwas.Atthismoment,beingabletodosomethingfortheoldmanmadehisheartfullofwarmth.Fromthenon,everytimeJasoncametoChinatown,hewouldspeciallycometovisittheoldmanandbringhimdailynecessities.Thesmileontheoldman'sfacegraduallyincreased,andaspecialfriendshipwasalsoestablishedbetweenthem.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextday,withhismother’shelp,Jasondecidedtodosomething.Atthebreakofdawn,Jasonandhismothermadetheirwaytothesupermarket.Theymeticulouslypickedoutthicksocks,warmgloves,alongwithbread,hotsoupandotherprovisions.Jasonevenaskedhismothertopreparealargecupofsteamingcoffee.Onceeverythingwasinorder,theyreturnedtotheveryspotinChinatownwheretheyhadencounteredtheoldmanthepreviousday.Jason'sheartracedwildly,andhewasovercomewithamixofnervousnessandguilt.Takingadeepbreath,heclutchedthebagtightlyandedgedclosertotheoldman,stepbycautiousstep.Astheoldman'sweather-beateneyesfelluponthem,aflickerofsurpriseflashedacrosshisface.Summoningallhiscourage,Jasonextendedthebagwithslightlytremblinghandsandsaid,inasoftyetresolutevoice,"Grandpa,I'msorry.Thisisforyou."16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Hearingthis,theoldmanlookedatthemwitheyesbrimmingwithtears.Hisemaciated,dirt-cakedhandsquiveredasheacceptedthebag.Hislipstwitched,asifstrugglingtogivevoicetoamultitudeofemotions.Afteralongmomentofsilen