考點(diǎn)14 高中英語(yǔ)寫作技巧-新高考英語(yǔ)一輪總復(fù)習(xí)（上海專用）（解析版）

PAGE1考點(diǎn)14高中英語(yǔ)寫作技巧課前熱身練（2023春·上海·華師大二附中?？迹〥irections:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.現(xiàn)在城市里有很多家庭請(qǐng)家政服務(wù)(housekeepingservice)，請(qǐng)你對(duì)此現(xiàn)象發(fā)表你的看法。內(nèi)容必須包括：◆概述城市里有很多家庭請(qǐng)家政服務(wù)現(xiàn)象◆此現(xiàn)象對(duì)家庭和社會(huì)產(chǎn)生的影響◆你對(duì)此現(xiàn)象的看法__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Wecanoftenseereportsthatthehousekeepingindustryisinastateofshortage,whichshowsmoreandmorepeoplehirehousekeeping.Thisphenomenonhasvariouseffectsonthefamilyandsociety.First,housekeepingcansavetimetodootherthings.Officeworkersincreasinglyneedthehelpofhousekeepingservicestohelpthemsavefromtedioushouseholdchoresanddevotethemselvestomeaningfulthings.Secondly,ithelpstoreducefamilyconflictsandpromotefamilyharmony.Housekeepingcanhelpyoungcouplesmaintainfamilyrelationsandreducefamilyconflictsafterforminganewfamily.Finally,housekeepingcanalsobringconveniencetoparents.Duetotheparticularityofwork,suchasdoctors,trafficpolicemaynotbeabletogohomeduringtheNewYear.Inthiscase,itisagoodchoicetofindadomestichelperoroccasionallycallanhourlyworker.Therefore,Ithinkthehousekeepingserviceisnecessary.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文是一篇說(shuō)明文。要求考生針對(duì)城市很多家庭請(qǐng)家政服務(wù)現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行概述，分析這一現(xiàn)象對(duì)家庭和社會(huì)產(chǎn)生的印象，以及考生對(duì)此的看法?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累表明：show→indicate產(chǎn)生影響：haveeffectson→haveinfluenceon由于：dueto→becauseof選擇：choice→option2.句式拓展原句：Housekeepingcanhelpyoungcouplesmaintainfamilyrelationsandreducefamilyconflictsafterforminganewfamily.拓展句：Housekeepingcanhelpyoungcouplesmaintainfamilyrelationsandreducefamilyconflictsaftertheyhaveformedanewfamily.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Wecanoftenseereportsthatthehousekeepingindustryisinastateofshortage,whichshowsmoreandmorepeoplehirehousekeeping.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)同位語(yǔ)從句，運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Secondly,ithelpstoreducefamilyconflictsandpromotefamilyharmony.（運(yùn)用了動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語(yǔ)）核心考點(diǎn)梳理想寫好作文第一件事是準(zhǔn)備一個(gè)作文素材積累本?。?！把老師平時(shí)講的、閱讀翻譯中遇到的地道表達(dá)都記下來(lái)并經(jīng)常復(fù)習(xí)。（一）高考作文?？碱愋蜁蓬悾航ㄗh信、申請(qǐng)信、投訴信等；議論或夾敘夾議；話題類：說(shuō)明、議論或夾敘夾議；圖表類：說(shuō)明+議論；漫畫類：描寫+議論。（二）作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)一）評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1、本題總分為25分，其中內(nèi)容10分，語(yǔ)言10分，組織結(jié)構(gòu)5分。4、詞數(shù)少于70，總分最多不超過(guò)10分。檔次內(nèi)容語(yǔ)言組織結(jié)構(gòu)得分A9—109—104—520-25分B7—87—8316-19分C5—65—6212-15分D3—43—417-11分E0—20—200-6分各檔次給分要求：內(nèi)容部分A．內(nèi)容充實(shí)，主題突出，詳略得當(dāng)。B．內(nèi)容較充實(shí)，能表達(dá)出作文要求。C．內(nèi)容基本充實(shí)，尚能表達(dá)出作文要求。D．漏掉或未能寫清楚主要內(nèi)容，有些內(nèi)容與主題無(wú)關(guān)。E．明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容，嚴(yán)重離題。語(yǔ)言部分具有很好的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力，語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)正確或有些小錯(cuò)誤，主要因?yàn)槭褂昧溯^復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致。具有較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力，語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的應(yīng)用基本正確，錯(cuò)誤主要因?yàn)閲L試較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致。有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，但不影響理解。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)與詞匯錯(cuò)誤較多，影響了對(duì)內(nèi)容的理解。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)與詞匯的錯(cuò)誤很多，影響了對(duì)內(nèi)容的理解。組織結(jié)構(gòu)部分自然地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，全文流暢結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。句子結(jié)構(gòu)多樣，詞匯豐富。能使用語(yǔ)句間連接成分，全文流暢結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。句子結(jié)構(gòu)多樣，詞匯較豐富。能使用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間連接成分，全文內(nèi)容連貫。句子結(jié)構(gòu)有一定的變化，詞匯使用得當(dāng)。尚能使用語(yǔ)句間連接成分，語(yǔ)言連貫性較差，句子結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)，詞匯貧乏。缺乏語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，語(yǔ)言不連貫。詞不達(dá)意。二）閱卷評(píng)分實(shí)例Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.請(qǐng)簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片，并結(jié)合圖片內(nèi)容談?wù)勛约旱南敕ā?+8+5=20Thepictureshowsaboywithaspreadpairofwings,andacoupleofparentswithahugepairofscissors,goingtooperateontheirchild’sbeautifulwings.Whatwecanseeintheparents’eyesisexpectation,insharpcontrastwiththesadnessintheboy’s.Thepicturejustremindsthesimilaroperationofmyown,whenIwasakidwhohadjuststartedprimaryschool.Ialwaysenjoyedmyselfinthenature,whichwaswideenoughtospreadmywingsandflytothefun.However,asmyagesgrew,myparentsstartedtopullthefeatherofffrommywings.Sincethen,Ihadnoalternativebuttoberestrictedintheroom,workinghardontheacademicsubjectsbythewindowinsteadofsettingmyselffreeintheair.Imusthaveargued,criedandshouted,butitwasofnouse.Atthatpoint,IcouldjusttellthatIfeelsobounded.IthoughtIwasnotdoingbadinschoolsoIshouldearnmytimeofplaying.Itdidn’tnecessarilymeanplayinggamesorotherthings,butthefreedomtofollowmyinterestanddevelopthembeforeitwastoolate.SoIcantotallyunderstandtheboyinthepicture,andwishhimabrightfuture.7+6+3=16Thiscriticalpicturedescribesaphenomenonthatparentsarecuttingtheirchild’swings,whichimplysthatnowadaysmoreandmoreparentsarekillingtheirchild’screativityandfreedom,ignoringthattheirchild’sdisappointmentandsadness,inordertomaketheirchildaso-called“great”student.Ihavealsoexperiencedthisbefore,onceIwasinthejuniorhighschool.Oneday,ourteachertoldusthatourschoolisgoingtoorganizesomeclubactivitiesonFridayafternoon,includingsomeacademicclubsandsomeclubswhichaftergreatopportunitiestotakepartinsocialactivities.AsIwasastudentwhowasinteretedinsocialactivities,Iwasdyingfortakingpartinaclublikethelaterone.But,myparentsdon’tagreewithme,theythoughtthatthechieftaskofastudentislearningsotheyforcedmetojoinanacademicclub.Iwassodisappointedatthetime,becauseIfoundthatIdon’thavetherighttomakemyownchoice,nottosaycreatesomethingIlike.ButIdon’thavetheforcetorejectmyparentsdecision,andIfoundmyselfbecomeafollowerofmyparents.Thesethigsarecommoninourreallife,eventoday;manyparentsstillimposetheirownopinionsontheirchild.Thiscanhaveabadinfluenceonoursocietyandourgenerationmaylackofcreativity,sowhydon’twestopit?6+6+2=14Asisvividlyshowedinthepicture,acouplestandsbehindtheirchildandthemencutsoffchild’swingswithhissessioncruelly.However,thiskindofpicturelotsmerecallmypersonalmemory.WhenIwas10yearsold,Iwasaddictedtodancingandwantedtobeadancerinthefuture.Sincemydanceteacherpraisedmeandgavemecouragetoachievemydream.ItoldmyparentsthatIhadapassionondancingandwouldliketotakepartinadancecompetition.Neverthless,myparentrefusedmyrequestanddidn’tallowedmetodanceanymore.Needlesstosay,theythoughtthemostcrucialthingformeistoenteraexcellentcollege.Sotheydisaggreedmyopinion.ButasfarasIamconcerned,parentshouldencourangetheirchildrentocultivatetheirinterestratherthanmerelylearnsomeknowledgefrombooks.5+6+2=13Asisclearlyshowninthepicture,acoupleareshapingtheirson’swingsintotheshapetheywant.Butthelittleboylooksreluctant.Itcanbesimplyinferedfromthepicturethattheartistwantsparentstoallowtheirchildrentogrownaturally.Andthat’swhatIamfor,too.BecauseImyselfgotbenefitsfromthefreegrowthduringmychildhood.WhenIwasabouteight,myparentswantedmetobeapianoist,whichwasthecommonideaofmanyparentsatthattime.However,Ididn’tlikeplayingthepianoatall.WhyshouldIstepintoafieldwhichIwasnotinterestedin?“Interestisthebestdrivingforce.”SoItoldthemaboutmyopinions.Fortunately,myparentsagreedandletmechoosetheskillIwantedtolearn.IsignedupfortheNewConceptEnglish.NeverhasanyonewonmecompletelyinEnglishevenonce!ItmustbethemagicofinterestthatmakeEnglishastrongarmofmine.Whynotletchildrencultivatetheirinterestandstriveforitthemselves?Everyoneisunique.Ifallflowersarethesame,thenaturewon’tbebeautifulanymore.5+5+2=12Asthepictureshows,theboyhasabeautifulwingbuthisfatherisgoingtocutitwithouthesitation.Hismotherfeeldesperatebutcan’tdoanythingwithoutlookherchild.Alltheboycandoisstandthereandwaitingforthefirstbutlastcut.Thepicturetouchedmealot.Itrecalledmydeepmemoizeinmyheart.IstillrememberwhenIwasthenyearsold,Iwaskeenonpainting.Teachersandfriendswereflavouredofmywork.Butwiththestressfulcamefromstudy,Ihadtoputdownmyinterestingthingsbutgotostudy.Likemanyofpeers,wearetheonlychildinourfamily.Parentsholdgiantexpectationsonus.Toliveuptotheirexpectation,wehadtoburyourselvesintothebookandextralessons.WhatIfeltthoseyearswassadnessbutIcouldn'tcompliantevenaword,orIwouldmakethemsad.Ithinkparentsshouldn’tcutthetalentiftherekidsaregoodatsomething.Theyshouldcultivateitnotfocusthemonwhattheypaylessinteresting.That’sallIfeltwiththepicture.2+4+1=7Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,theboy’sfatherwanttocuttheboy’sdreamtomakeboyfollowtheparents’way.AsfarasI’mconcerned,thechildshouldhavetheirowndreamstoliveintheworldandgrewup.Tobeginwith,itisgoodforchildrentohavetheirowndreams.Itistheirlifegoalandtheycansparenoefforttochallengeallthetroublewithoutcomplaintment.What’smore,children’sowndreamscanhelpthemmoveindepenceandtheycanlivehappierwithoutparents.Finally,changechildren’sdreamswillincreasethegenerationalgapbetweenchildrenandparents.Allinall,Ithinkthatasforchildren,theyoughttofollowtheirowndreamsandforparents,theyareessentialtoencouragetheirchildren.Itishightimeforchildrentofollowtheirowndreams.（三）寫作步驟一）審題審清題目，注意不要偏題，不要遺漏內(nèi)容。如下面這道題，很多同學(xué)在寫的時(shí)候?qū)懲觊_(kāi)頭直接開(kāi)始提建議了，漏掉描述自己的高中學(xué)習(xí)生活，這樣導(dǎo)致分很低，因?yàn)閮?nèi)容定檔。所以大家一定要注意審題。Direction：WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.你的表弟Frank即將踏入高中學(xué)習(xí)，請(qǐng)你寫一封信給他，在信中簡(jiǎn)要描述你自己的高中學(xué)習(xí)生活，并以此給他的高中學(xué)習(xí)生活提些建議。（建議可以包括：規(guī)劃好日常生活、找到適合自己的學(xué)習(xí)方法、多參加課外活動(dòng)等）二）分段、列提綱作文一般都分成3段，開(kāi)頭—主體—結(jié)尾。分好段后用中文列一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的中文提綱，讓自己的思路更清晰，也能節(jié)省后面的寫作時(shí)間。如上面這篇作文可作如下提綱：開(kāi)頭（寫信背景和目的）：恭喜進(jìn)入高中，分享經(jīng)驗(yàn)。1.描述自己高中學(xué)習(xí)主體1)規(guī)劃好日常生活2.提建議：2)學(xué)習(xí)方法3)多參加課外活動(dòng)結(jié)尾（總結(jié)）：希望度過(guò)充實(shí)的3年三）過(guò)渡詞兩個(gè)方面：Foronething,Foranother/Ononehand,ontheotherhand三個(gè)方面：首先其次最后總結(jié)firstandforemostinthefirstplacefirstofalltobeginwithadditionally/inadditioninthesecondplacewhat’smoremoreover/furthermorebesideslastbutnotleasttoputitinanutshelltosumupashasbeenmentionedinconclusiontakingeverythingintoconsideration四）遣詞造句1、運(yùn)用萬(wàn)能單詞和萬(wàn)能句型萬(wàn)能單詞萬(wàn)能單詞不用并不影響句子，但用上確能給句子增添一點(diǎn)色彩。詞義萬(wàn)能單詞例句毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)undoubtedly；unquestionablyUndoubtedly/Apparently/Undeniably/surely,extracurricularactivities

(apparently)playasignificantroleinmyphysicalandmentaldevelopment.顯然地obviously；apparently不可否認(rèn)undeniably一定surely/definitely萬(wàn)能句型使用萬(wàn)能句型能讓簡(jiǎn)單句變成復(fù)合句，每篇文章可以用1到2句。詞義萬(wàn)能句型例句毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)Thereisnodoubtthat...Thereisnodoubtthatmoreandmorepeoplewillusecomputersatjobinthefuture.不可否認(rèn)Thereisnodenyingthat...Noonecandenythat...ThereisnodenyingthatourschoolnewspaperinEnglishservesasanexcellentfoodforthoughttargetingusstudents.不言而喻Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...Itgoeswithoutsayingthatonlywithalargeamountofknowledgefromeveryaspectcanwecreatepracticalideasinsteadofavaindream.普遍認(rèn)為Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat...Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatcertainamountofplayingtimeplaysanimportantroleinchildren’sgrowth.不用說(shuō)needlesstosayNeedlesstosay,lessclosecontactwithothersdoeshavebadeffectsonourrelationship.運(yùn)用以上所學(xué)知識(shí)寫一個(gè)段落關(guān)于“寫信給朋友提建議：如何克服考試焦慮”。句首句已給出。Howtoovercometestanxiety?Howtoovercometestanxiety?Firstandforemost,thereisnodoubtthatitis,toalargeextent,vitalandsignificantforyoutomakeacarefulpreparation,consequently,someeffectivepracticeisbadlyneeded.Additionally,noonecandenyhavingapositiveattitudeisapparentlyofgreathelptoyou,whichcanmakeyoudiligentandintelligent.Lastbutnotleast,needlesstosay,ifIwereyou,Iwouldtakeadeepbreathbeforewritingthetestpaper,consideringthatitwillhelpusconcentrateonourtestandbemoreconfident.Ifyoucarryoutthesemethods,Iamsureyouwillachieveanamazingsuccessinyourtest.總結(jié)書信提建議的句型：①itisbeneficial/advisable/significantforsbtodosth②youaresupposedtodo③doingsthisapparentlyofgreathelptoyou,which...④IfIwereyou,Iwould...2、運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和詞組（詳見(jiàn)教案15）高級(jí)詞匯高級(jí)詞匯指的是一些實(shí)詞要用高中詞匯書上的詞匯，而盡量少用初中詞匯。比如我們寫某事重要時(shí)不用初中學(xué)的important，而用高中詞匯vital/significant/critical/crucial等。高級(jí)詞組高級(jí)詞組指寫作能用詞組的地方一定要用詞組，詞組的靈活使用是高分作文的必備條件，所以要多積累和仿寫。比如我們寫考慮某事時(shí)不用單詞consider，而用詞組takesthintoaccount/consideration。3、運(yùn)用高級(jí)句型（詳見(jiàn)教案16）高級(jí)句型使用高級(jí)句型能讓句子多樣化，為作文加分的必備項(xiàng)！作文中要多使用從句、非謂語(yǔ)、強(qiáng)調(diào)倒裝、虛擬語(yǔ)氣、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等。比如用定語(yǔ)從句寫旅游的益處：Thereisnodenyingthattravelingisasignificantwaytobroadenourhorizons,whichenrichespeople’smindandexperience.寫作中常用諺語(yǔ)背誦：1.Missedchanceswillneverreturn.機(jī)不可失，失不再來(lái)。2.Easiersaidthandone.說(shuō)起來(lái)容易做起來(lái)難.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成.4.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作不玩耍,聰明孩子也變傻.5.It’snevertoooldtolearn.活到老,學(xué)到老.6.Romewasnotbuiltinaday.偉業(yè)非一日之功.7.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患難見(jiàn)真情.8.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失敗是成功之母.9.Actionspeakslouderthanwords.行動(dòng)勝過(guò)語(yǔ)言.10.Everymanhashisfaults.金無(wú)足赤,人無(wú)完人.11.Nopains,nogains.不勞無(wú)獲。12.Nothingistoodifficulttoawillingheart.俗話說(shuō)，世上無(wú)難事，只怕有心人。五）檢查寫完之后一定要留時(shí)間檢查一遍，注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、人稱等。平時(shí)寫作時(shí)一定要養(yǎng)成檢查的習(xí)慣。先自己檢查，然后可以同學(xué)之間相互檢查，培養(yǎng)自己的糾錯(cuò)能力，最后拿給老師檢查。當(dāng)堂知識(shí)檢測(cè)1．Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.最近明啟中學(xué)對(duì)教師是否會(huì)被人工智能取代這一話題開(kāi)展了調(diào)查，調(diào)查結(jié)果如下圖。假如你是該校高三學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)就此話題談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ瑢懸黄?50-180的作文，文章內(nèi)容需涵蓋：1.簡(jiǎn)要描述圖表；2.你認(rèn)為教師是否會(huì)被人工智能取代；3.你的理由。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently,ourschoolconductedasurveyonthetopicofwhetherteacherswillbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.10%ofrespondentswereunsure.34%saidtheythoughtteacherswouldbereplacedbyartificialintelligence,while56%saidno.Personallyspeaking,teacherswon’tbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.Becauseinadditiontoteachingstudentsknowledge,teachershaveamoreimportantmission,whichistoeducatepeople.Intermsofeducatingpeople,teacherspossessqualitiesthatcannotbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.Besides,artificialintelligenceisonlyapartialreplacementofteachers’labor,andcannotreplacetheroleofteachers.Thisisbecausealthoughrobotshavecommunicationfunctionssuchasdialogueandmovement,theyarefarfromtherichanddelicatefeelingsofhumanbeings.Thatistosay,thepossibilityofteachersbeingreplacedisverysmall,andteachersbecomeoneofthejobsthatartificialintelligenceisdifficulttoreplace.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表作文，最近明啟中學(xué)對(duì)教師是否會(huì)被人工智能取代這一話題開(kāi)展了調(diào)查，調(diào)查結(jié)果如下圖。假如你是該校高三學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)就此話題談?wù)勀愕目捶?，寫一?50-180的作文，文章內(nèi)容需涵蓋：1.簡(jiǎn)要描述圖表；2.你認(rèn)為教師是否會(huì)被人工智能取代；3.你的理由。【詳解】1.詞匯積累取代：replace→supersede擁有：possess→takepossessionof重要的：important→significant也就是說(shuō)：thatistosay=inotherwords2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.拓展句：Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,whoknowhowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Becauseinadditiontoteachingstudentsknowledge,teachershaveamoreimportantmission,whichistoeducatepeople.(運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ))2．假設(shè)你是光明中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李明。近期，年級(jí)組正在策劃18歲成人禮儀式，其中一個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)為“說(shuō)說(shuō)你的故事”，籌備組現(xiàn)面向本校全體高三學(xué)生征集真實(shí)故事案例。請(qǐng)給籌備組寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容須包括：1)你印象最深的一件事情；2)此事對(duì)你的啟發(fā)和影響。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:DuringthepastthreeyearsintheGuangmingseniorhighschool,Ihavehadmanyunforgettableexperiences.Oneofthemostunforgettablethingswaswhenourclasspreparedforagroupsingingcompetition.Inordertowinthecompetition,weallwentforit.Duringtheweekbeforethecompetition,wepractisedsinginginourfreetime.Althoughitwasahardjob,everyparticipanttookitseriouslyanddidtheirbest.Thankstooureffort,wewonthefirstprize.Hearingtheexcitingnews,wewereallwildwithjoy.Themovementremindedmeofanoldsaying-Nopains,nogains.Itwashardwork,butduringthecourseofpreparation,wedevelopeddeepfriendship,confidenceaswellasunderstanding!【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文是一篇開(kāi)放作文。年級(jí)組正在策劃18歲成人禮儀式，要求考生給籌備組寫一封郵件說(shuō)說(shuō)自己印象最深刻的一件事，以及此事對(duì)自己的啟發(fā)和影響?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累難忘的：unforgettable→memorable為了：inorderto→inaneffortto困難的：hard→tough由于：thanksto→owingto2.句式拓展同義句原句：Hearingtheexcitingnews,wewereallwildwithjoy.拓展句：Whenweheardtheexcitingnews,wewereallwildwithjoy.【高分句型1】Oneofthemostunforgettablethingswaswhenourclasspreparedforagroupsingingcompetition.（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Althoughitwasahardjob,everyparticipanttookitseriouslyanddidtheirbest.（運(yùn)用了although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句）3．假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，目前擔(dān)任學(xué)校社團(tuán)負(fù)責(zé)人。近期，你校被評(píng)為社團(tuán)明星學(xué)校，為了在報(bào)紙上分享你校社團(tuán)情況，請(qǐng)你以“ClubsinMySchool”為題，寫一篇文章，內(nèi)容須包含：1.對(duì)你校社團(tuán)進(jìn)行分類；2.具體描述每一類社團(tuán)的特色。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:ClubsinMySchoolToenrichstudents’life,ourschoolorganizesavarietyofclubsinmyschool.Almosteverystudentinourschoolparticipatesinaclub,whichmakestheirschoollifecolorful.Generallyspeaking,theclubsinmyschoolcanbeclassifiedintotwotypes:sportsclubandartclub.Sportsclubarepopularamongstudents.Therearebasketballclub,footballclub,swimmingclubandsoon,whichareorganizedbystudentswiththesameinterest.Sostudentstherecanmakefriends.Besides,theycannotonlyplaysportsinfreetime,butalsotheycanlearnsomesportsskills.Artclubincludingmusicclub,paintingclubandsoon,givesstudentsachancetoadmiretheart.Also,itprovidesstudentssomeknowledgeaboutart.Meanwhile,studentstherecanhavetheaccesstotheinstrument,suchaspiano,Erhuandsoon.Allthestudentsinmyschoolliketheclubs.SoIthinktheclubsareverysignificant.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生以“ClubsinMySchool”為題，寫一篇文章，內(nèi)容須包含學(xué)生對(duì)校社團(tuán)進(jìn)行分類，并具體描述每一類社團(tuán)的特色?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累等等：andsoon→andthelike此外：Besides→Inaddition機(jī)會(huì)：chance→opportunity同時(shí)：Meanwhile→Atthesametime2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Artclubincludingmusicclub,paintingclubandsoon,givesstudentsachancetoadmiretheart.拓展句：Artclubwhichincludesmusicclub,paintingclubandsoon,givesstudentsachancetoadmiretheart.【高分句型1】Almosteverystudentinourschoolparticipatesinaclub,whichmakestheirschoollifecolorful.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】Therearebasketballclub,footballclub,swimmingclubandsoon,whichareorganizedbystudentswiththesameinterest.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)4．Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)準(zhǔn)備為文學(xué)社、英語(yǔ)社、體育社、藝術(shù)社等各社團(tuán)招募新成員。假如你是其中一個(gè)社團(tuán)的負(fù)責(zé)人，請(qǐng)你寫一篇宣傳稿介紹你們社團(tuán)的情況。文章必須包括：●簡(jiǎn)單介紹你們社團(tuán)的特色或優(yōu)勢(shì)●簡(jiǎn)要描述你們社團(tuán)的發(fā)展規(guī)劃___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I’mLiHua,theorganizeroftheEnglishclub.Ifoundedthisclubtoincreasestudents’interestinEnglishandimprovestudents’oralEnglishskills.WehaveEnglishclubgameseveryweekend.Studentscanplayfreely,thusimprovingtheirconfidenceinlearningEnglish.Forexample,wewillorganizeEnglishdramaperformances,whichmanystudentswillcometowatchandshowtheirinterestin.Inaddition,wealsoinvitesometeacherstoguideusonhowtoperformEnglishdramaseverytwoweeks.Thissemester,wewillcontinuetocarryoutspecialtrainingactivities.Theywillexpandstudents’Englishknowledge.Ifyouwanttobecomeamemberoftheclub,youwillbefreetopracticeEnglisheveryweekend.Lookingforwardtoyourjoiningus.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生作為學(xué)校其中一個(gè)社團(tuán)的負(fù)責(zé)人，寫一篇宣傳稿介紹社團(tuán)的情況，簡(jiǎn)單介紹社團(tuán)的特色或優(yōu)勢(shì)，并描述社團(tuán)的發(fā)展規(guī)劃?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累建立：found→setup有興趣：showinterestin→beinterestedin此外：inaddition→besides繼續(xù)：continue→goon2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Thissemester,wewillcontinuetocarryoutspecialtrainingactivities.Theywillexpandstudents’Englishknowledge.拓展句：Thissemester,wewillcontinuetocarryoutspecialtrainingactivities,whichwillexpandstudents’Englishknowledge.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Forexample,wewillorganizeEnglishdramaperformances,whichmanystudentswillcometowatchandshowtheirinterestin.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Ifyouwanttobecomeamemberoftheclub,youwillbefreetopracticeEnglisheveryweekend.（運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句）5．Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是明啟中學(xué)的學(xué)生李明，學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備開(kāi)展“發(fā)現(xiàn)春天”的社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，并在校園網(wǎng)上征集大家的意見(jiàn)，請(qǐng)你發(fā)貼簡(jiǎn)要闡述你的設(shè)計(jì)方案。內(nèi)容需要包括：1）活動(dòng)線路與內(nèi)容。2）推薦理由。

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSir/Madame,

Knowingthatourschoolwillholdasocialpracticeactivitytitled“DiscoveringSpring”,Iamverydelightedtopresentmydesign.

Itismysuggestionthatallteachersandstudentstakepartinoutdoorhiking.TherouteisfromourschooltoBeiHaiFolkCultureVillagewithalengthofthirtykilometers.AllstudentsarerequiredtotakeaplasticbagtopickuprubbishthrownbytouristsonthewayandinBeiHaiFolkCultureVillagestudentscanvisitthevillagetobuyhand-madearticlesmadebycraftsmenandenrichthemwithcolorfullocalculture.

AsfarasI’mconcerned,tostartwith,it'sabetterchoicetohelpstudentsdevelopakindofbearinghardshipsspiritwhichishelpfulfortheirfuturelife.Besides,Studentsareencouragedtopickuprubbishonthegroundtoraisetheirawarenessofenvironmentprotection.Inaddition,allstudentsneedanoccasiontoescapeforawhilefromtheirhardstudyandhaveagoodrest.

Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful.Yours,LiMing【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇意見(jiàn)征集，要求考生以李明的身份為學(xué)校即將開(kāi)展的“發(fā)現(xiàn)春天”社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)建言獻(xiàn)策，并闡述你的設(shè)計(jì)方案。【詳解】1.詞匯積累非常：very→morethan參加：takepartin→participatein購(gòu)買：buy→purchase有益的：behelpful→bebeneficial2.句式拓展并列句變簡(jiǎn)單句原句：TherouteisfromourschooltoBeiHaiFolkCultureVillageanditisthirtykilometerslong.拓展句：TherouteisfromourschooltoBeiHaiFolkCultureVillagewithalengthofthirtykilometers.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Knowingthatourschoolwillholdasocialpracticeactivitytitled“DiscoveringSpring”,Iamverydelightedtopresentmydesign.（現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)和that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Studentsareencouragedtopickuprubbishonthegroundtoraisetheirawarenessofenvironmentprotection.（被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)）課后鞏固提高6．Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李明，最近學(xué)生會(huì)對(duì)本校全體學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一項(xiàng)關(guān)于“博物館免費(fèi)開(kāi)放政策”的問(wèn)卷調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下表所示，寫一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告，內(nèi)容須包括：1)對(duì)調(diào)查結(jié)果的簡(jiǎn)單描述;2)對(duì)數(shù)據(jù)的原因分析;3)你的看法。1博物館免費(fèi)情況下會(huì)考慮67.86%2免費(fèi)才去3.57%3持無(wú)所謂態(tài)度28.57%___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently,Iconductedaquestionnairesurveyonthe"freeadmissionpolicyofmuseums"amongseniorhighschoolstudents.Asisshowninthepicture,67.86%ofstudentswouldconsidermuseumsfreeofcharge,whichreallysurprisesme.3.57%ofstudentswentforfree.28.57%holdtheindifferentattitude.Butwhataccountsforthehugegapbetweenstudents?Inmyopinion,67.86%ofthestudentsmayliketostudybutthefamilyconditionsarenotgood,thereisnosuchexpenditure,sotheywillconsiderfreeofcharge.3.57%ofstudentsarenotinterestedinmuseumsbecausetheydonotlovestudying,soitisfreeforthemtogo.However,28.57%ofthestudentsareindifferentbecausetheirfamilyconditionsaregoodandtheyliketogotomuseumstoincreasetheirknowledge.Theywillgothereanyway.Personally,undertheconditionoffree,studentsshouldvisitthereregularlytolearnsomeextracurricularknowledge,whichwillbeofgreathelptoenrichtheirexperience,broadenourknowledgeandmakeusaknowledgeableperson.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李明，最近學(xué)生會(huì)對(duì)本校全體學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一項(xiàng)關(guān)于“博物館免費(fèi)開(kāi)放政策”的問(wèn)卷調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下表所示，寫一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告，內(nèi)容須包括：對(duì)調(diào)查結(jié)果的簡(jiǎn)單描述；對(duì)數(shù)據(jù)的原因分析；你的看法。【詳解】1.詞匯積累免費(fèi)：freeofcharge→forfree→fornothing有益的：beofgreathelp→behelpful就個(gè)人而言：personally→inone’sopinion拓寬：broaden→widen2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Recently,Iconductedaquestionnairesurveyonthe“freeadmissionpolicyofmuseums”amongseniorhighschoolstudents.拓展句：Recently,Iconductedaquestionnairesurveywhichisonthe“freeadmissionpolicyofmuseums”amongseniorhighschoolstudents.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Asisshowninthepicture,67.86%ofstudentswouldconsidermuseumsfreeofcharge,whichreallysurprisesme.（運(yùn)用了as和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】However,28.57%ofthestudentsareindifferentbecausetheirfamilyconditionsaregoodandtheyliketogotomuseum