進(jìn)階練14 書信作文（滿分范文）專練-新高考英語(yǔ)一輪總復(fù)習(xí)（上海專用）（解析版）

PAGE1PAGE2進(jìn)階練14書信作文（滿分范文）專練（解析版）學(xué)校:___________姓名：___________班級(jí)：___________考號(hào)：___________一、其他應(yīng)用文(共0分1．（2023·上?！ひ荒＃┘偃缒闶敲鲉⒅袑W(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你校學(xué)生會(huì)正在征集志愿者活動(dòng)方案，請(qǐng)?jiān)谝韵氯?xiàng)活動(dòng)中選擇一項(xiàng)：一、深入社區(qū)宣傳環(huán)保知識(shí)；二、擔(dān)任“奉賢博物館”義務(wù)講解員；三、去孤兒院為孩子們上興趣課。請(qǐng)你給學(xué)生會(huì)寫封郵件，內(nèi)容須包括：1.你的選擇及理由；2.你準(zhǔn)備如何做。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearSir/Madam,Ourschoolwillholdavolunteeractivity,whichmaybechosenfromthefollowingthreeprogrammes:publicizingknowledgeofenvironmentalprotectiontocommunities,beingavolunteerguidefortheFengxianMuseumandconductinginterestinglessonstokidsintheorphanage.Inmyopinoin,beingavolunteerguidefortheFengxianMuseumissuitableforstudents.TherearetworeasonswhyIchoosethesecondactivity.Tostartwith,it’savaluableopportunityforstudentstohaveabetterknowledgeoftheFengxianMuseum,duringwhichtheycanbroadentheirhorizons.Besides,it’sbeneficialforstudentstoimprovetheircommunicationskillsespeciallyEnglishspeakingbecausetherearemanyforeignersvisitingit.IfI’mluckyenoughtobechosenasoneguide,Iwillcherishthegoldenopportunityandmakefullpreparations,suchassearchingmaterialsontheInternetandaskingteachersforhelp.SincerelyLiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給校學(xué)生會(huì)寫封郵件在三個(gè)志愿者活動(dòng)策劃中選擇某一項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，并闡述選擇的理由和要如何做。【詳解】1.詞匯積累項(xiàng)目：programme→project除此之外：besides→moreover珍惜：cherish→treasure尋求某人的幫助：asksbforhelp→seeksb’shelp2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Inmyopinoin,beingavolunteerguidefortheFengxianMuseumissuitableforstudents.拓展句：Inmyopinoin,beingavolunteerguidefortheFengxianMuseumissuitableforstudents,fromwhichstudentscanlearnalot.【高分句型1】Tostartwith,it’savaluableopportunityforstudentstohaveabetterknowledgeoftheFengxianMuseum,duringwhichtheycanbroadentheirhorizons.（運(yùn)用了介詞+which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】IfI’mluckyenoughtobechosenasoneguide,Iwillcherishthegoldenopportunityandmakefullpreparations,suchassearchingmaterialsontheInternetandaskingteachersforhelp.（運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）2．（2023·上海閔行·統(tǒng)考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你們學(xué)校將組織一次高三學(xué)生參觀大學(xué)的活動(dòng)，學(xué)生可以從“專業(yè)及課程介紹(MajorandCourseDescriptions)”;“參觀圖書館、實(shí)驗(yàn)室(Library&LaboratoryVisiting)”;“隨班學(xué)習(xí)體驗(yàn)(OnSpotStudying)”和“與教授面對(duì)面(DialoguewithProfessors)”四個(gè)活動(dòng)中選取兩個(gè)作為主要活動(dòng)，特此向高三學(xué)生征求意見。請(qǐng)你寫一封郵件給活動(dòng)組織者，內(nèi)容須包括：1.你最感興趣的兩個(gè)活動(dòng);2.你對(duì)這兩個(gè)活動(dòng)感興趣的理由。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Hearingthattheschoolwillorganizeanactivityforseniorthreestudentstovisittheuniversity,Iamveryexcitedandhappy.WhatIwanttoparticipateinarethetwoactivities,MajorandCourseDescriptionsandOnSpotStudying.Firstofall,IamfondoftheactivityMajorandCourseDescriptions,whichcanhelpmehaveadeeperunderstandingoftheuniversity'sprofessionalcoursesandclarifythedirectionformyfuturestudy.Besides,IamdeeplyinterestedintheactivityOnSpotStudying.Intheactivity,Icantrulyexperiencethelearningatmosphereoftheuniversity.Meanwhile，itoffersmeangoodchancetoknowmoreabouthowthestudentsintheuniversitytakecourseseveryday，whichwillmakemedecidewhetherIshouldchangethewaythatIlearninthemiddleschool.

Allinall,theactivityofvisitingtheuniversityisofgreathelptoourfutureplanning.Iamlookingforwardtothearrivalofthatday.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給活動(dòng)組織者寫一封信，說明你對(duì)學(xué)校組織的高三學(xué)生參觀大學(xué)的活動(dòng)中感興趣的兩個(gè)活動(dòng)以及對(duì)這兩個(gè)活動(dòng)感興趣的理由【詳解】1.詞匯積累喜歡：befondof→enjoy高興的：happy→pleased→delighted此外：besides→what’smore機(jī)會(huì)：chance→opportunity2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Hearingthattheschoolwillorganizeanactivityforseniorthreestudentstovisittheuniversity,Iamveryexcitedandhappy.拓展句：BecauseIhearthattheschoolwillorganizeanactivityforseniorthreestudentstovisittheuniversity,Iamveryexcitedandhappy.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】WhatIwanttoparticipateinarethetwoactivities,MajorandCourseDescriptionsandOnSpotStudying.（運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Meanwhile,itoffersmeangoodchancetoknowmoreabouthowthestudentsintheuniversitytakecourseseveryday，whichwillmakemedecidewhetherIshouldchangethewaythatIlearninthemiddleschool.（運(yùn)用了how與whether引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句以及that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）3．（2023·上海黃浦·統(tǒng)考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設(shè)你是海平中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李明，你所在的社區(qū)將在暑假開設(shè)面向小學(xué)生的日間托管服務(wù)，現(xiàn)招募社區(qū)高中生志愿者，要求每一位志愿者能根據(jù)自己的特長(zhǎng)開設(shè)一門微課程。請(qǐng)寫一封應(yīng)聘信(信中請(qǐng)不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的個(gè)人信息)，信的內(nèi)容須包括：1)簡(jiǎn)單的自我介紹；2)你準(zhǔn)備開設(shè)的微課程的名稱和主要內(nèi)容；3)你開設(shè)這門微課程的理由。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSir/Madam,IamLiMingfromClass1,Senior3ofHaipingMiddleSchool.I’mwritingtoapplyforthepositiontohelptheprimaryschoolstudentsinourcommunity.Iamverygoodatmathematics,andIoftenmakesomemicro-coursesforprimaryschoolstudents.Iplantosetupamicro-course,thenameofwhichis“Mathematicsinourdailylife”.Thiscoursemainlyintroduceshowtousemathineverydaylifesothatprimaryschoolstudentscanhaveadeeperunderstandingoftheimportanceofmathematicsthroughexamples.Thereasonwhythismicro-courseissetupisthatmanystudentsarenotinterestedinlearningmathematics.What’smore,mathematicsisrarelyusedinreallife,somanypeoplethinkthatlearningmathematicsismeaningless.Ihopethiscoursecanhelpmoreprimaryschoolstudents,andIalsohopetogetthisopportunitytoimprovemyself.Yours,LiMing【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封應(yīng)聘信應(yīng)聘社區(qū)高中生志愿者，內(nèi)容包括簡(jiǎn)單的自我介紹，準(zhǔn)備開設(shè)的微課程的名稱和主要內(nèi)容以及開設(shè)該課程的理由?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累計(jì)劃：plan→intend而且：what’smore→moreover機(jī)會(huì)：opportunity→chance提高：improve→promote2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：I’mwritingtoapplyforthepositiontohelptheprimaryschoolstudentsinourcommunity.拓展句：I’mwritingtoapplyforthepositionwhereIcanhelptheprimaryschoolstudentsinourcommunity,【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Iplantosetupamicro-course,thenameofwhichis“Mathematicsinourdailylife”.（運(yùn)用了“介詞+which”引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Thereasonwhythismicro-courseissetupisthatmanystudentsarenotinterestedinlearningmathematics.（運(yùn)用了why引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句和that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句）4．（2023·上海長(zhǎng)寧·統(tǒng)考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生李華。學(xué)校將開設(shè)講座“上海老洋房”，現(xiàn)就講座內(nèi)容征求學(xué)生的意見。請(qǐng)給負(fù)責(zé)的王老師寫封郵件，具體提出你的建議。內(nèi)容須包括：1)你對(duì)講座內(nèi)容的具體建議；2)簡(jiǎn)述你的理由。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMr./Ms.Wang,Learningthatourschoolisseekingforstudents’adviceconcerningthelecturerelatedtotheoldwestern-stylehousesinShanghai,Iamveryexcited.Hence,Iamwritingtosharemyviews.First,itisnecessarytoshowsomephotosoftheseoldhouses.Thisundoubtedlywouldleaveusadeepimpressionoftheirappearance.Besides,anotheraspectshouldbeincludedintothelectureistheprofoundculturebehindthesehistoricalbuildings.Becauseitisculturalfactorsthatmakethesehousesvaluable.Lastbutnotleast,howaboutofferingtheaudiencesomeusefultipsastohowtopreservethesepreciousbuildings?Onlybyknowingthatcanweprotectthemefficiently.Asabigfanoftheseoldbuildings,Isincerelyhopeyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Respectfullyyours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以學(xué)生李華的身份為學(xué)校即將舉辦的“上海老洋房”講座提供建議，提出講座應(yīng)該包含什么內(nèi)容，并指明提出這些建議的理由。【詳解】1.詞匯積累關(guān)于：about→concerning深厚的：deep→profound保護(hù)：protect→preserve考慮：consider→takesth.intoconsideration2.句式拓展合并簡(jiǎn)單句原句：First,itisnecessarytoshowsomephotosoftheseoldhouses.Thisundoubtedlywouldleaveusadeepimpressionoftheirappearance.拓展句：First,itisnecessarytoshowsomephotosoftheseoldhouses,whichundoubtedlywouldleaveusadeepimpressionoftheirappearance.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Becauseitisculturalfactorsthatmakethesehousesvaluable.(運(yùn)用了itis+被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that+其他成分的強(qiáng)調(diào)句句型)[高分句型2]Learningthatourschoolisseekingforstudents’adviceconcerningthelecturerelatedtotheoldwestern-stylehousesinShanghai,Iamveryexcited.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句)5．（2023·上海青浦·統(tǒng)考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設(shè)你是浦潤(rùn)中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李青。你的學(xué)校即將舉辦“回眸五十年”紀(jì)念活動(dòng)，你在學(xué)生會(huì)參與相關(guān)的準(zhǔn)備工作，并負(fù)責(zé)向來賓介紹學(xué)校的變化，等等。請(qǐng)就此給你的英國(guó)好友Alan寫封郵件交流你的想法。你的郵件必須包括：1.介紹紀(jì)念活動(dòng)的主要內(nèi)容；2.描述你所見聞的學(xué)校變化；3.簡(jiǎn)述你對(duì)學(xué)校發(fā)展的期許。(注：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及學(xué)校名稱。)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearAlan,Myschoolisabouttoholdacommemorativeeventcalled“LookingBackonFiftyYears”attheendofthismonth.Iwillparticipateintherelevantpreparationsasamemberofthestudentunionandberesponsibleforintroducingthechangesintheschooltoguests.Becausethiseventissoimportant,Ineedsomeadvicefromyou.Thiscommemorativeeventconsistsofthreeparts:invitingtheprincipaltogiveaspeech,leadinggueststovisittheschoolachievementexhibitionandholdingacelebrationparty,whichwillbesignificant.Asisknown,ourschoolhasundergonetremendouschangesinthepast50years.State-of-the-artteachingequipmentandevenartificialintelligencedevicestoassistinteachinghavebeenequippedinourschool.Besides,therearevariousculturalclubsandcommunitiestoenrichourleisurelife.Hopemyschoolwillbecomebetterandbetter!Yours,LiQing【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給你的英國(guó)好友Alan寫封郵件介紹你學(xué)校即將舉辦“回眸五十年”紀(jì)念活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括紀(jì)念活動(dòng)的主要內(nèi)容、你所見聞的學(xué)校變化和對(duì)學(xué)校發(fā)展的期許。【詳解】1.詞匯積累參加：participatein→joinin此外：besides→what’smore希望：hope→wish幫助：assist→help2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Myschoolisabouttoholdacommemorativeeventcalled“LookingBackonFiftyYears”attheendofthismonth.拓展句：Myschoolisabouttoholdacommemorativeeventwhichiscalled“LookingBackonFiftyYears”attheendofthismonth.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Thiscommemorativeeventconsistsofthreeparts:invitingtheprincipaltogiveaspeech,leadinggueststovisittheschoolachievementexhibitionandholdingacelebrationparty,whichwillbesignificant.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Becausethiseventissoimportant,Ineedsomeadvicefromyou.（運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)）6．（2023春·上?！じ呷虾Ｊ写笸袑W(xué)?？茧A段練習(xí)）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是啟明中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生古月胡，你校計(jì)劃引入一款人工智能批改系統(tǒng)來輔助教師批改作業(yè)與部分試卷。有些同學(xué)表示支持，但也有部分同學(xué)表示了擔(dān)憂。因此學(xué)校委托學(xué)生會(huì)征詢大家對(duì)人工智能批改系統(tǒng)的意見。給學(xué)生會(huì)寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容須包括：1)你對(duì)人工智能批改系統(tǒng)的看法；2)你的理由。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearPresidentoftheStudentUnion,

Iamfortunatetolearnthatwiththeprogressofscienceandtechnology,ourschoolplanstointroduceanartificialintelligencegradingsystemtoassistteachersingradinghomeworkandsometestpapers.Somestudentssupportit,whileothersopposeit.Frommyperspective,thiskindofgradingsystemisnotinfluencedbysubjectiveemotions,contributingtoachievingeducationalfairness.Moreover,itisnotonlytimelyandcost-effective,butcanalsoreceivecontinuousandpositivefeedback,whichisofgreathelptoforeignlanguagelearners.Whatisthemostimportantforusisthatthegradingsystemcanforceustopromoteourabilitytoimprovestandardizedanswers.Isincerelyhopethatthisartificialintelligencegradingsystemcanbeappliedtoourschoolassoonaspossible.Yours,GuYuehu【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給學(xué)生會(huì)寫一封郵件表達(dá)對(duì)人工智能批改系統(tǒng)的看法。【詳解】1.詞匯積累進(jìn)步：progress→improvement引入：introduce→bringin幫助：assist→help支持：support→areinfavorof2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Frommyperspective,thiskindofgradingsystemisnotinfluencedbysubjectiveemotions,contributingtoachievingeducationalfairness.拓展句：Frommyperspective,thiskindofgradingsystemisnotinfluencedbysubjectiveemotions,whichcontributestoachievingeducationalfairness.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Frommyperspective,thiskindofgradingsystemisnotinfluencedbysubjectiveemotions,contributingtoachievingeducationalfairness.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)contributingto充當(dāng)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)）【高分句型2】Whatisthemostimportantforusisthatthegradingsystemcanforceustopromoteourabilitytoimprovestandardizedanswers.（運(yùn)用了What引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句和that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句）7．（2023·上海浦東新·統(tǒng)考三模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生李華，學(xué)校擬舉辦“漢語(yǔ)文化周”活動(dòng)，現(xiàn)在向全校師生征集活動(dòng)策劃案。請(qǐng)給學(xué)生會(huì)寫一封郵件表達(dá)你的想法。你的郵件須包括以下內(nèi)容：1)介紹具體活動(dòng)方案；2)說明理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearStudentUnion,I’mwritingtosharemyideafortheupcoming“ChineseCultureWeek”eventatMingqiHighSchool.IproposethatwehostaseriesofactivitieshighlightingtraditionalChineseartsandculture.Firstly,wecouldorganizeacalligraphyworkshopwherestudentscanlearnhowtowriteChinesecharactersusingbrushandink.Thiswouldnotonlygivestudentsachancetolearnanewskill,butalsotoappreciatethebeautyandmeaningbehindChinesecharacters.Secondly.wecouldholdascreeningofaniconicChinesemovieorTVshow.Suchas“MonkeyKing”or“DreamoftheRedChamber”.ThiswouldprovidestudentswithaglimpseintoChinesehistoryandculture,andfostercross-culturalunderstanding.Finally,wecouldinviteaguestspeakertotalkabouttraditionalChinesemedicine,suchasacupunctureorherbalremedies.Thiswouldallowstudentstolearnaboutalternativeapproachestohealthcareandbroadentheirperspectivesonhealthandwellness.Ibelievethathostingtheseactivitiesduring“ChineseCultureWeek”wouldbebeneficialforseveralreasons.Firstly,itwouldhelppromoteculturaldiversityandunderstandingamongourstudentbody.Secondly,itwouldprovidestudentswithanopportunitytolearnaboutChinesecultureandhistory,whichisimportantintoday’sglobalizedworld.Lastly,itwouldbeafunandengagingwaytocelebrateourschool’scommitmenttopromotingculturalexchangeandeducation.Thankyouforconsideringmyproposal.Ilookforwardtohearingyourthoughtsonthismatter.[241words]Sincerely,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的活動(dòng)策劃案。要求考生向?qū)W生會(huì)寫一封郵件，表達(dá)自己對(duì)于學(xué)校擬舉辦的“漢語(yǔ)文化周”活動(dòng)所設(shè)想的活動(dòng)策劃案?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累首先：firstly→firstofall機(jī)會(huì)：chance→opportunity最后：finally→lastly/lastbutnotleast提高、促進(jìn)：promote→enhance/improve考慮：consider→thinkabout2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：IproposethatwehostaseriesofactivitieshighlightingtraditionalChineseartsandculture.拓展句：IproposethatwehostaseriesofactivitieswhichwillhighlighttraditionalChineseartsandculture.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Firstly,wecouldorganizeacalligraphyworkshopwherestudentscanlearnhowtowriteChinesecharactersusingbrushandink.（運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Secondly,itwouldprovidestudentswithanopportunitytolearnaboutChinesecultureandhistory,whichisimportantintoday’sglobalizedworld.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句）8．（2023·上海·盧灣高級(jí)中學(xué)?？既＃〥irections:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.76.每年4月22日是世界地球日(WorldEarthDay)。為積極響應(yīng)世界地球日活動(dòng)，你校學(xué)生會(huì)開展了宣傳海報(bào)的評(píng)比活動(dòng)?，F(xiàn)已初評(píng)得出如下的前三名海報(bào)，并在全校范圍評(píng)選最佳海報(bào)。寫封郵件給你校學(xué)生會(huì)，內(nèi)容須包括：你選出的最佳海報(bào)及其簡(jiǎn)介;你的理由。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dearstudentunion,Ilikethesecondpicture.Fromthispicture,wecanknowthatoriginally,theearthhasaclearbrook,greenforest,andthebluesky.Ancienttimes,howmanypoetspraisingtheearthbeautifulenvironment!Butnowtheearthisinbadcondition.Forexample,insomeplaces,theairandwaterpollutionissoseriousthatitcausesmanydeaths.Atthesametime,manyanimalsandplantsareindangerbecauseofthedestructionoftheirhabitats.Ithinkthispictureisareminderofustoprotectourearth.Ihopewehumanbeingscanrealizetheproblem.Weshoulddosomethinggoodfortheearth,suchascleaningupbeachesandwater,pickinguprubbish,andgivespeechestocallonmorepeopletotakeaction.TodayisWorldEarthDay,andmillionsofpeoplehavecontributedtoprotectingtheenvironment.

Butcanwesavetheearthonlybyoneday’swork?Thefutureofourplanetdependsonourefforts.WhatweshoulddoistomakeeverydayEarthDay.Onlybytakinggoodcareofiteverydaycanwehopetoliveinharmonywithnature.Therefore,Ihopethispicturecanbethebestone.【詳解】1.詞匯積累干凈的：clear→clearn同時(shí)：Atthesametime→Meanwhile照顧：takegoodcareof→lookafter號(hào)召：callon→callupon2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Atthesametime,manyanimalsandplantsareindangerbecauseofthedestructionoftheirhabitats.拓展句：Atthesametime,manyanimalsandplantsareindangerbecausetheirhabitatsaredestroyed.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】wecanknowthatoriginally,theearthhasaclearbrook,greenforest,thebluesky.（運(yùn)用了that連接的賓語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Weshoulddosomethinggoodfortheearth,suchascleaningupbeachesandwater,pickinguprubbish,

andgivespeechestocallonmorepeopletotakeaction.（運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)并列作賓語(yǔ)）9．（2023·上海徐匯·統(tǒng)考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是明啟中學(xué)的李平。你的朋友Jenny來信說：隨著大學(xué)申請(qǐng)和期末考試的臨近，她十分忙碌，經(jīng)常熬夜，沒有時(shí)間參加喜歡的社團(tuán)活動(dòng)和社交生活，她感到難以平衡學(xué)業(yè)、課外活動(dòng)和社會(huì)生活。請(qǐng)你寫封郵件給她，內(nèi)容包括：1.分析她面臨的主要問題；2.提出相應(yīng)的建議和理由。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJenny,WordscannotexpresshowsorryIamtohearthatyoucan’tbalanceamongacademic,extra-curricularactivitiesandsociallifebecauseyoucannotadapttothebusyschoollife,likeworryingaboutschoolwork,andhavingnotimetorelax.Don’tworry.Iwillofferyousometips.Firstofall,Irecommendthatyouhaveabalanceddiet,whichcangiveyoumoreenergytostudyharderthanbefore.Inaddition,itwouldbeofgreatbenefitifyoutakeanactivepartinsomeextra-curricularactivities.Thatway,youcanmakenewfriends,whichcouldmakestressoffyourshoulder.Lastbutnotleast,Isuggestthatyouturntoyourteachersforhelpsinceteachers’encouragementandstudymethodwillalwaysliftyouup.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillfindmysuggestionspracticalandwishyougetridofthosetroublesassoonaspossible.

Yours,LiPing【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假如你是李平，你的朋友Jenny臨近大學(xué)申請(qǐng)和期末考試。她寫信向你訴說了她的困擾：感到難以平衡學(xué)業(yè)、課外活動(dòng)和社會(huì)生活。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給她寫一封回信。【詳解】1.詞匯積累建議：tip→advice/suggestion表達(dá)：express→convey能夠：can→beableto/becapableof此外：inaddition→besides2.句式拓展合并簡(jiǎn)單句原句：Don’tworry.Iwillofferyousometips.拓展句：Don’tworrybecauseIwillofferyousometips.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]WordscannotexpresshowsorryIamtohearthatyoucan’tbalanceamongacademic,extra-curricularactivitiesandsociallifebecauseyoucannotadapttothebusyschoollife,likeworryingaboutschoolwork,andhavingnotimetorelax.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句和because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]Lastbutnotleast,Isuggestthatyouturntoyourteachersforhelpsinceteachers’encouragementandstudymethodwillalwaysliftyouup.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句和since引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句)10．（2023春·