宿遷專版2020中考英語復(fù)習(xí)方案第三篇話題寫作妙解話題寫作07情感表達(dá)課件

話題寫作（七）情感表達(dá)第三篇

話題寫作妙解【話題點睛】話題來源于學(xué)生日常生活中對某件事情的經(jīng)歷及感受,常見的情感類表達(dá)有愛、快樂、微笑、幸福、痛苦和煩惱等?！緟⒖贾V語】1.Asmilemakesyoutenyearsyounger.笑一笑,十年少。2.Joyandsorrowarenext-doorneighbors.悲喜常相伴。3.Laughteristhebestmedicine.笑是最好的藥。4.Worrykillsmorementhanwork.憂慮比勞累更傷人。常用表達(dá)【相關(guān)短語】thanksfor因……感謝……;makenewfriends結(jié)交新朋友;lookafter/takecareof照顧;keepintouch保持聯(lián)系;befriendlyto對……友好;bringback帶回【亮點句型】學(xué)校的感受1.I'dliketothankyouforgivingmeunselfishloveandhelp.2.Youalwaysencouragedmetostudyharder.3.Althoughyouwereverystrictwithme,Iunderstoodwhatyousaidintheend.4.I'msothankfultoyouforyourkindhelpthatI'llworkharderandtrytodobetterinthefuture.家庭的感受1.I'dliketoshowmythankstoyouforyourdevotiontometheseyears.2.I'msuremyparentswillgetonwellwitheachothersoon.3.Weshouldhavegoodhabitsandtryourbesttotakeexerciseeveryday.4.I'llspendmoretimestayingandcommunicatingwithyou.5.WhenIfailedanexamandfeltstressed,youweretheonetoencourageme.6.Ibelieveifwedoso,wecanhaveahappylife.Ⅰ.根據(jù)漢語意思完成句子。1.在我去上學(xué)和回來的路上,你們總是和我在一起。

toandfromschool,youwerealwayswithme.

2.我將會盡我最大的努力去理解你,并且為你做我所能做的。I'll

tounderstandyouanddowhatIcanforyou.

基礎(chǔ)寫作Onmywaytrymybest3.我擔(dān)心他們,并且非常害怕失去我的家。I'm

themand

losingmyfamilyverymuch.

4.堅持你的夢想,你一定能做到的!

yourdreamandyoucanmakeit!

5.父親鼓勵我,并在必要時給我?guī)椭ather

meandgavemea

whennecessary.

worriedaboutafraidofSticktoencouragedhandⅡ.用括號內(nèi)所給提示,將下列句子譯成英語。1.自我出生起,父母就一直無微不至地照顧我。(takegoodcareof).2.我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會與家人好好相處。(getalongwellwith).SinceIwasborn,myparentshavetakengoodcareofmeWeshouldlearntogetalongwellwithourfamily3.學(xué)生不應(yīng)該被允許花太多時間玩電腦游戲。(beallowedtodo)________________________________________________________________________________________________4.他們總是因為一些不必要的事情爭吵。(becauseof)

____________________________________________________________________________________5.沒有老師的幫助,我就不會通過這次考試。(without)

.Thestudentsshouldn'tbeallowedtospendmuchtimeplayingcomputergames.Theyalwaysarguewitheachotherbecauseofsomeunnecessarythings.Withouttheteacher'shelp,Icouldn'tpasstheexam

[2019·天水]“你養(yǎng)我長大,我陪你變老?！备改赣H一直在為我們的成長默默付出,成長要學(xué)會感受愛、回報愛。今天你即將畢業(yè),是向父母表達(dá)感激的好機(jī)會。請根據(jù)以下所給要點,寫一篇英語短文。[要求](1)給我生命,一直照顧我成長;(2)努力工作,為我提供良好的生活和教育條件;(3)擁有愛心,教我學(xué)會……;(4)今天,我要為你們……(自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點)。典例分析

[注意事項](1)詞數(shù):80左右,開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名、人名等信息。Youbringmeup.Iwillbewithyouinyourlife.Youareimportantpersonsintheprocessofmygrowth._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路點撥】1.要點提煉:主題是表達(dá)你對父母的感激,同時也表達(dá)出你對父母的愛。注意語言表達(dá)要有情感,短文可以從以下幾個方面展開:(1)父母的付出,如照顧、幫助、鼓勵、教育等;(2)我對父母的回報,如努力學(xué)習(xí)、希望父母永遠(yuǎn)幸福、健康等。2.確定時態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(談?wù)摤F(xiàn)在父母對我的付出)和一般將來時(我將要對父母的回報)。3.確定人稱:第一人稱?！緦懽骷軜?gòu)】【佳作欣賞】Youbringmeup.Iwillbewithyouinyourlife.Youareimportantpersonsintheprocessofmygrowth.Yougivemelifeandtakecareofmeallthetime.WhenIhaveproblemswithmystudyandlife,youarealwayspatientenoughtohelpandencourageme.Inordertoletmeliveapleasantlifeandreceiveagoodeducation,youalwaysworkhardfrommorningtoeveningeveryday.Youarealsopeoplewhohaveheartsfulloflove.Youarereadytohelppeopleinneed.Youteachmetobeakindperson.Inthepast,Ineversaid“Iloveyou”toyou.TodayIwillgraduate,andIwanttosayittoyouloudly.Iwillstudyhardertogetbetterresults.Ihopeyouwillbehappyandhealthyforever.【名師點評】1.本文表達(dá)對父母的感恩之情,處處流露著真情實感。文章具體描述了在成長過程中,父母是如何對“我”付出的,體現(xiàn)了父母對子女無私的愛。在短文的結(jié)尾處,作者表達(dá)了要努力學(xué)習(xí)取得好的成績來回報父母的付出,首尾呼應(yīng)。2.文章中運用了一些從句和短語,如when,who,takecareof,inorderto等,體現(xiàn)了作者扎實的基本功。A分享是一種行為方式,也是一種良好的品質(zhì)(quality)。人生處處充滿分享,懂得分享非常重要。分享快樂,快樂加倍;分擔(dān)煩惱,煩惱減半。請根據(jù)以上觀點,結(jié)合思維導(dǎo)圖所示,以“MySharingExperience”為題,寫一篇100詞左右的短文。實戰(zhàn)演練[要求](1)短文須包括所有要點提示,語句通順,意思連貫,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(2)題目和開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)個人真實姓名和校名。[參考詞匯]befullof,cut…inhalf,thanksto,overcomeMySharingExperienceSharingisawayofbehavioraswellasagoodqualityofpeople.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One

possible

version:MySharingExperienceSharingisawayofbehavioraswellasagoodqualityofpeople.Lifeisfullofsharing.Ithinkit'simportanttosharehappinessandsadnesswithothers.WhenIwasten,Imovedtoanewdistrict.Facingthestrangesurroundings,Ifeltlonelyandupset.Itwasmyneighbor,Tim,whohelpedmefindpleasureagain.Heshowedmearoundandintroducednewfriendstome.Healsosharedhisfavouritebooks,musicandlearningmethodswithme.Wesoonbecamegoodfriends.Thankstohissharing,Ibegantosharewithothers.Asweknow,whenhappinessisshared,itwillbedoubled;whenaproblemisshared,itislikecuttingitinhalf.Sharingbringsuspleasure,confidenceandcouragetoovercomedifficulties.Let'sopenourheartstosharewithothersinourfuturelife!B

[2019·蘇州]假定你是蘇華,最近你的澳大利亞筆友Nathan犯了一些錯誤,倍感懊惱,寫了一封郵件向你訴說。為幫助他排解困惑,請你根據(jù)他的郵件內(nèi)容并結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷,用英語回信開導(dǎo)他。To:suhua@From:nathan@Subject:LearningfrommistakesDearSuHua,I'munhappythatI'vemadesomemistakesrecently.They'retroublingmealotthesedays.Ireallyneedyourhelp.Wouldyoupleaseshareyourexperiencewithme?

·Doyouagreethateveryonemakesmistakes?

·Canyoutellmeoneofyourmistakes?

·Howdidyoudealwithyourproblem?

·Whathaveyoulearnedfromthemistake?I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Allthebest,Nathan[注意](1)詞數(shù):90左右,開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);(2)回復(fù)須包括所有要點,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;(3)文中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。DearNathan,I'msorrytoknowthatyouarenothappythesedays.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________