2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+柯利牧羊犬的命運與救助+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)柯利牧羊犬的命運與救助1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Linkstruckamatchandpushedthepileofgrasstoonesidewithhisfoot.Bythelightofthematch,hediscoveredadogcurledup(蜷縮)inaheap,withoneforelegstuckawkwardlyoutinfrontofhimatanimpossibleangle.Althoughthedogwasingreatpain,hestillgazedatthemanwhobentabovehimsoftly,withamixtureofprideandneedforhelpinhisbrowneyes.Movedbysuchanexpression,Linkkneltdowntoexaminehishurts.Herecognizedthedogasacollie(柯利牧羊犬).Thecollieremindedhimthatseveralyearsbefore,hehadeverwitnessedoneAiredalethrownfromacarandkilledbyaclose-followingvehicle.Judgingbythemudonthedog’ssnowychestandtheoilymarksonhisback,heguessedthiscolliemighthavesufferedasimilarfate(命運),landingsoheavilythatitbrokehisfrontlegandendedupintheditchcoveredinmudandoil.4續(xù)寫原文Linkcouldn’timaginehowlongthedoghadbeenlyingthereinpain.Seeingtheserioushurtsandhearinghishowl(嚎叫)ofpain,Linkwasataloss,notknowinghowtohelphimoutsuccessfully.Hehadplannedtoleavehimbehindbutavoiceinsidehimencouragedhimtostepforwardbravely.ThenLinksuddenlyrealizedthatmaybethekindestthingtodoforthedogwasputhimoutofhissuffering.Hegentlyapproachedthebadlyhurtanimal,whisperingsoftly,“Sorry,honey!Forgivemeplease!”Pickingupastoneoffthegroundwithaheavyheart,Linkturnedbacktowherethedoglay,thinkingtohimself,“Howterrible!DoIhavetherighttoendhislife?”Hisheartbeatwildlyashecastscaredglancesonthedog.However,atthethoughtofhisclosedeyesandhowls,hefinallymadethetoughestdecision.Watchingthepoordogclosely,hebalancedtherockandpreparedtodeliverthedeadlyblow.5段首句Paragraph1：Linkwasabouttostrikewithallhisstrengthwhenthedogopenedhiseyes.Paragraph2：Thedoctorinthepethospitaltookthedogintotheoperatingroom.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了蘇珊在新學(xué)校不自信，羨慕同學(xué)卡拉。一次文學(xué)課上卡拉表現(xiàn)出色，蘇珊渴望像她一樣受歡迎?；貞浧鹜暝谵r(nóng)場與爺爺?shù)目鞓窌r光，她找到了自信。體育課上老師讓大家爬樹，蘇珊成功爬上樹，贏得了大家的稱贊，也與卡拉建立了友誼。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Linkwasabouttostrikewithallhisstrengthwhenthedogopenedhiseyes.林克準備砸石頭時狗睜開了眼睛，這眼神讓林克心中一動，他決定放棄結(jié)束狗生命的想法，改為送狗去醫(yī)院。他小心翼翼地抱起狗，前往汽車。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Thedoctorinthepethospitaltookthedogintotheoperatingroom.寵物醫(yī)院的醫(yī)生將狗帶入手術(shù)室，林克在外面焦急等待。手術(shù)結(jié)束后醫(yī)生告知狗脫離危險，林克心中充滿喜悅。從此林克成為狗的朋友，照顧它直至康復(fù)。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Linkwasabouttostrikewithallhisstrengthwhenthedogopenedhiseyes.Hiseyeswerefulloftrustandapleadinglook.Linkfroze,unabletobringdownthestone.Hedecidedtotakethedogtothepethospital.Linkcarefullycarriedthedogtohiscaranddroveoff.13范文呈現(xiàn)Thedoctorinthepethospitaltookthedogintotheoperatingroom.Linkwaitedanxiouslyoutside.Afterhoursofwaiting,thedoctorcameoutandtoldLinkthatthedogwasoutofdanger.Linkwasoverjoyedandwenttoseethedog.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Linkwasabouttostrikewithallhisstrengthwhenthedogopenedhiseyes.Hiseyes,filledwithtrustandapleadinglook,stoppedLinkinhistracks.Thethoughtofendingthedog'slifesuddenlyseemedwrong.Hegentlyputdownthestoneandcarefullypickedupthedog,asifafraidtocauseitanymorepain.Withthedoginhisarms,hemadehiswaytothecaranddroveofftowardsthepethospital.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thedoctorinthepethospitaltookthedogintotheoperatingroom.Linkwaitedanxiouslyoutside,hisheartpoundingwithworry.Afterwhatseemedlikeaneternity,thedoctorfinallycameoutandinformedLinkthatthedogwasoutofdanger.ReliefwashedoverLink,andhewenttoseethedog,whichwasnowlyingonabed,lookingweakbutalive.