作文 08 黑龍江卷 - 三年(2019-2021)中考英語滿分作文解析

作文08黑龍江卷2021年真題在線（2021黑龍江綏化市）為了迎接全國愛牙日，你們學(xué)校下周要舉行“愛牙周”活動，號召學(xué)生們保護牙齒。請你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容，以“GoodHabits,StrongTeeth”為題，寫一篇海報文稿，宣傳本次活動。周二在報告廳聽取牙齒保護的報告。周三召開班會。內(nèi)容包括：演講、觀看保護牙齒的圖片或視頻、設(shè)計傳單……分享保護牙齒的方法。周六去商場和公園發(fā)放傳單，號召全民養(yǎng)成愛牙的好習(xí)慣。提示詞∶lecturehall（報告廳）design（設(shè)計）leaflet（傳單）要求∶1.根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文章不得出現(xiàn)任何真實信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.詞數(shù)不得少于80詞。（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）請在答題卡上把你的作文寫在相對應(yīng)的題號后的指定區(qū)域內(nèi)GoodHabits,StrongTeethForthecoming“ToothCareWeek”,ourschoolwillhavesomeactivitiestotellstudents________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’sprotectourteethandenjoylife!考題解析【詳解】1.題目解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根據(jù)表格，寫一篇宣傳文稿，分別介紹周二、周三和周六的活動。開頭結(jié)尾已給出，完善正文部分，正文可直接呈一段。注意條理清晰。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一人稱書寫，時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。需正確使用時間介詞和時態(tài)，多使用從句和比較級。滿分范文GoodHabits,StrongTeethForthecoming“ToothCareWeek”,ourschoolwillhavesomeactivitiestotellstudentshowimportantitistoprotectteeth.OnMonday,we’lllistentoareportontoothcareintheschoollecturehall.ThenonWednesday,weplantohaveaclassmeeting.Studentswillgivespeeches,watchvideosorpicturesabouthowtotakegoodcareofteeth.Afterthat,eachclassisrequiredtodesignaleaflet,tellingpeopletobrushteethoften,eatlesssugarandseethedentistsontime.OnSaturday,wearegoingtohandouttheseleafletsatparksorstores.Wehopemoreandmorepeoplewilldevelopgoodhabitstohavehealthyandstrongteeth.Let’sprotectourteethandenjoylife!真題在線（2021年黑龍江齊齊哈爾）值此畢業(yè)之際，學(xué)生會主席倡議大家“攜手愛校園，為母校獻禮”，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文。介紹你將如何為母校獻禮。要求：1字跡工整，段落清晰，表達清楚，語法正確，行文連貫；2.要點必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)：80-100詞。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Howtimeflies!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考題解析【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹你將如何為母校獻禮，注意要點齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要以第一人稱來介紹，時態(tài)以一般將來時為主。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹要做什么；第三段收尾，提出希望。保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。滿分范文Howtimeflies!It’stimetoleavemyschool.NextMonday,I’llgobacktodosomethingforit.HerearethethingsthatIwilldo.First,Iwillpickuptherubbisharoundtheschool.I’llcleanthewindowsanddoors,too.ThenI’llgivetheyoungerschoolmatessomeusefuladvice.Forexample,dothehomeworkbythemselvesorlistentotheteacherscarefully.NextI’llgiveawaymynotes.It’sreallyhardtosaygoodbye.Iwishmyschoolwillhaveabetterfuture.真題在線（2021年黑龍江雞西市）同學(xué)們都知道安全的重要性，在生活中危險無處不在，你知道如何保護自己的安全嗎?請結(jié)合自己的實際生活，談?wù)効捶āＬ崾?1.家庭安全；2.校園安全；3.戶外安全……Asweallknow,dangeriseverywhereinourlife...(文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。)_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考題解析【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞“如何保護自己的安全”寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時。從生活安全，學(xué)校安全和戶外安全等方面，結(jié)合實際生活提出自己的想法和觀點。寫作時保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強，無語法和標(biāo)點錯誤。滿分范文【答案】例文Asweallknow,dangeriseverywhereinourlifeandsafetyisthefirst.Soit’snecessarytoknowsomewaystoprotectus.Don’tletchildrenplayinthekitchenathome,becausetheymayburnthemselves.It’seasytoslipandfallonawetfloor.Besuretokeepthebathroomfloordryafterhavingashowerorbath.Don’ttakeanyknifetoschool,becauseitmayhurtyourclassmatesbyaccident.Whenyougoacrosstheroad,youmustobeythetrafficrules.Don’tletthechildrengoswimmingalone.Ihopethesetipscanhelpyou.真題在線（2021年黑龍江雞西市）12．為了有效地控制新冠疫情的蔓延，2021年我國實施了免費接種疫苗的政策。請根據(jù)提示列出接種疫苗后的注意事項。提示詞:wine(酒)內(nèi)容包括:1.三天之內(nèi)不洗澡；2.多喝水，不喝酒；3.多吃水果和蔬菜；4.不吃魚類和蛋類；5.適當(dāng)?shù)膽敉膺\動，不熬夜。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考題解析【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞疫苗接種后需要注意的事項寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時，多用祈使句句式。分為兩段式：第一段引出主題；第二段介紹需要注意的事項。寫作時保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強，無語法和標(biāo)點錯誤。滿分范文【答案】例文InordertoeffectivelycontrolthespreadofCOVID-19,Chinacarriesoutapolicyoffreevaccinationin2021.Thereareafewthingstolookoutforaftervaccination.First,don’ttakeashowerinthreedays.Next,drinkmorewater,anddon’tdrinkwine.Third,eatasmanyfruitsandvegetablesaspossible.Fourth,don’teatfishandeggs.Lastbutnotleast,dooutdoorsportsproperly,don’tstayuplate,andgetplentyofsleep.真題在線（2021年黑龍江雞西市）17．仔細觀察圖片，展開合理想象，然后寫一篇短文。提示詞:volunteer;theoldpeople’shomes要求:1.話題作文和圖示作文任選其一。2.詞數(shù):80—100之間。3.字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考題解析【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示詞語和圖片提示，寫出一篇有關(guān)參加志愿者活動的作文，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。

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寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要圖片內(nèi)容緊密聯(lián)系起來，用第一人稱來寫作，時態(tài)以一般過去時為主，要做到要點齊全，無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。滿分范文【答案】例文：Lastweek,severalofmyclassmatesandItookpartinavolunteeractivityheldbythecommunity.Wewenttotheoldpeople’shomesbybus.There,welearnedaboutthehealthsituationoftheoldpeopleandhelpedthemcleanup.Somecleanedtheyardandsomecleanedtheroom,suchassweepingthefloorandcleaningthetableandsoon.Wewerebusyallafternoon.Weweretired,butwewerehappy.Iwilltakepartinsuchactivitiesinthefuture.2020年1．假定你是王偉,你的英國筆友David來信問及你們學(xué)校在暑假期間對學(xué)生的安全要求。請你根據(jù)以下要點給他回一封電子郵件。家庭安全：小心用火用電,外出時關(guān)好門窗；游泳安全：不獨自去游泳,不去河、湖游泳；交通安全：過馬路要當(dāng)心,不在馬路上玩耍。提示詞：electricity(n.電)注意：1、詞數(shù)80左右；2、請不要逐句翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。DearDavid,Gladtoreceiveyoure-mail.Ourschoolhasmadesafetyrulesforustofollow.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,WangWei【答案】參考范文：DearDavid,Gladtoreceiveyoure-mail.Ourschoolhasmadesafetyrulesforustofollow.Letmetellyousomethingaboutthem.Weareaskedtobecarefulwithelectricitywhenweareusingit.Itisdangeroustoplaywithfire,foritmaycauseterribleaccidents.Weshouldmakesuredoorsandwindowsareshutbeforeweleave.Besides,wearenotallowedtoswimalone,especiallyindeepriversorlakes.Ifwereallywantto,wemustgototheswimmingpoolwithourparentsorteachers.What'smore,followingtrafficrulesisalsoveryimportant.Everyoneshouldwatchoutwhencrossingtheroad.Andourschoolwarnsusnottoplayontheroad.Ithinktheserulesarenecessarybecausesafetycomesfirst.Haveagoodsummerholiday!Yours,WangWei【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文，假定你是王偉,你的英國筆友David來信問及你們學(xué)校在暑假期間對學(xué)生的安全要求。要求根據(jù)要點提示，給他回一封電子郵件。首先要注意郵件的格式，然后認真審題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。2.例文點評：本文時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。文章緊扣題目要點，內(nèi)容完整，表述準確，語言的表述符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。3.高分亮點：短語：playwith，makesure，what'smore，watchout，warnsb（not）todosth。句型：Itisdangeroustoplaywithfire.玩火是危險的。Itis+形容詞+todosth.去做某事是……的，固定句型。Ithinktheserulesarenecessarybecausesafetycomesfirst.我認為這些規(guī)則是必要的，因為安全第一。Ithink后接賓語從句，because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句。二、通知2．難忘的初中生活即將結(jié)束。你們班計劃舉行"告別初中生活"的主題班會。假如你是班長,根據(jù)以下提示,用英語寫一則通知。要點如下：1、時間：7月18日下午3:00；2、地點：班級；3、活動內(nèi)容：對老師用話語表達謝意,同學(xué)交流、合影等等。Boysandgirls,Thewonderfulmiddleschoollifewillgototheend.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Don'tbelate!That'sall.Thankyou!David【答案】例文：Boysandgirls,Thewonderfulmiddleschoollifewillgototheend.Wearegoingtohaveaclassmeetingat3:00ontheafternoonofJuly18.Thethemeoftheclassmeetingissayinggoodbyetoourmiddleschoollife.Itwillbeheldinourclassroom.Weshouldsayathankfulwordtoourteachers.Wecanchatfreelywithourclassmatesandtakesomephotos.Don'tbelate!That'sall.Thankyou!David【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于通知寫作。在寫作時應(yīng)緊接開頭繼續(xù)寫作，根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示介紹主題班會的時間、地點以及活動的內(nèi)容。2.例文點評：例文主要用第一人稱進行寫作，主要采用一般將來時態(tài)來寫作。介紹班會的具體信息，敘述完整且條理清晰。3.高分亮點：短語：gototheend;haveaclassmeeting;sayinggoodbyeto;chatfreelywith;takesomephotos。句型：weshoulddo和wecando表示建議的句子；and表示并列的句子；Don'tdo…祈使句的否定形式。三、材料作文3．說起小動物，你的腦海中會浮現(xiàn)哪些畫面，干凈活潑的貓咪，還是對主人忠誠不二的小狗？這些可愛又有靈性的小動物讓我們的生活豐富多彩，充滿樂趣。你最喜歡的小動物是什么？你和它之間發(fā)生過怎樣令人難忘的故事？小動物在你的生活中有怎樣重要的位置？寫一篇短文來和大家分享一下。要求：1.短文中須包括圖表中包含的全部信息，條理清楚、行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、地名和校名等。3.詞數(shù)不少于80詞。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Ithinkanimalsareourfriends.Ilikeanimalsverymuch.Oncemymotherboughtagoldfishformeasagift.Itlookedverybeautiful.Ilikeditverymuch.Iputitinabigbowlandfediteveryday.IthoughtIshouldtrymybesttolookafterit.Butoneday.Ifounditwasdead.Itmademeverysad.MymothersaidthatitwastoofullbecauseIfedittoomuch.Fromthenon,IrealizedIshouldlearnaboutthehabitsofsmallanimalsinordertocareforthemwell.【詳解】題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求你根據(jù)提示寫一篇短文，講述你最喜歡的小動物以及你和它之間的故事。

例文點評：文章主要采用第一人稱展開敘述，時態(tài)以一般過去時為主；文章主要分為三段：第一段總述自己對動物的看法；第二段詳細描述自己和小寵物金魚之間發(fā)生的故事；第三段發(fā)表自己的感悟，認為我們應(yīng)該了解小動物的生活習(xí)性來好好照顧它們。文章層次分明、邏輯清晰、敘事有條理。

高分亮點：

短語：like...verymuch；buysth.forsb.；put...in；tryone'sbesttodo；lookafter；makesb.+adj.；learnabout；inordertodo。

句型：that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句；because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。4．你即將告別初中校園，請為學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們介紹一下初中的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗，幫助他們更好地適應(yīng)初中的學(xué)習(xí)生活。內(nèi)容包括：1、課前的自主預(yù)習(xí)；2、課上的具體做法；3、課后的復(fù)習(xí)方法；4、表達祝愿。寫作要求：1、詞數(shù)為80左右；開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2、寫作過程中注意分段和標(biāo)點；前三個要點至少各寫出兩句話；3、句式靈活多樣，行文連貫流暢；4、文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實的學(xué)校名稱及姓名。I'dliketosharesomeexperienceinstudying.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】[例文]I’dliketosharesomeexperienceinstudying.Ifyouwanttobeagoodstudent,youmustdothreethings.First,youmustpreviewlessonsfortomorrowinordertofollowtheteachereasily.Findoutthepointsyoudon’tunderstandinadvance.Second,youmustlistentotheteacherverycarefullyinclass.Thisisveryimportantbecausetheteacherwillexplaintheproblemsveryclearly.Third,youmustfinishyourhomeworkontime.Afteryoudohomework,youwillknowwhatyouhavelearnedmoreclearly.Hopefullyyoucanenjoyyourschoollifeandhaveabrightfuture.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題為材料作文，題目已給出要點提示，只需要按照要點提示進行寫作即可。時態(tài)應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第二人稱為主。2.例文點評：例文分三段，第一段用于引出給學(xué)弟學(xué)妹建議這個主題，第二段則根據(jù)要點提示給出了課前、課上、課后的學(xué)習(xí)建議，第三段則表達了對學(xué)弟學(xué)妹的祝福。例文層次分明，要點齊全，思路清晰，熟練使用First、Second、Third等序數(shù)詞，使句與句之間銜接自然流暢，是一篇優(yōu)秀的例文。3.高分亮點：短語：inorderto，findout，inadvance，listento，ontime。句型：（1）Ifyouwanttobeagoodstudent,youmustdothreethings.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）（2）Findoutthepointsyoudon’tunderstandinadvance.（祈使句）（3）Thisisveryimportantbecausetheteacherwillexplaintheproblemsveryclearly.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）5．(B)2020年是不同尋常的一年?！靶鹿谝咔椤钡谋l(fā)使我們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活發(fā)生了很大的變化，同時也引發(fā)了人們的思考。請你根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖談?wù)劇靶鹿谝咔椤睅Ыo我們的影響以及我們從中得到的啟示。要求：不少于90詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。TheoutbreakofCOVID-19hasmadeabigdifferencetoourlife.Wehaveto____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】[例文]TheoutbreakofCOVID-19hasmadeabigdifferencetoourlife.WehavetostayathomeinsteadofgoingoutduringtheSpringFestival.Itmadeusfeelquitebored.Sincewetookonlineclassesathome,therewerenoteachersorclassmatesaround.Wemissedourteachersandclassmatesverymuch.AllofushadtowearmaskstoprotectourselvesfromCOVID-19whengoingout.WhatcanwelearnfromtheoutbreakofCOVID-19?First,weshoulddevelophealthylivinghabitstoensureusahealthybodyandagoodmood.Second,weshouldhelpothersinneed.Third,weshouldcherisheverymomentwithourlovedones.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題為材料作文，要求就COVID-19的爆發(fā)以及其帶來的影響寫一篇文章。文章時態(tài)應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在時或過去時，人稱用第一人稱。2.例文點評：例文分兩段，第一段寫了COVID-19的爆發(fā)給我們生活帶來的影響，第二段則寫了疫情的爆發(fā)給我們帶來的啟示。例文思路清晰，敘述流暢，包含了所有題目所給要點，符合要求，是一篇合格的范文。3.高分亮點：短語：insteadof，allof，protectsb.from，learnfrom。句型：（1）Sincewetookonlineclassesathome,therewerenoteachersorclassmatesaround.（since引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句，therebe句型）（2）AllofushadtowearmaskstoprotectourselvesfromCOVID-19whengoingout.（when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句的省略形式）6．B：2020年是非同尋常的一年，在舉國上下抗擊疫情的同時，教育部發(fā)出了“停課不停學(xué)”的號召，鼓勵中小學(xué)生在線學(xué)習(xí)。但長時間觀看電腦或手機，缺乏戶外鍛煉的機會，影響視力和身心健康。假如你是LinHui，請從以下三個方面說明在這個特殊時期里你是如何保持健康的。ExerciseDoeyeexercises,dobodybuildingexercises(健身操)…EatinghabitsEathealthyfood…Mood(情緒)Behappy,smile…要求：1.字跡工整，表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2.要點必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作出適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)：80—100詞，首句己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Hello!IamLinHui.Letmeintroducemylifehabits._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Hello!I'mLinHui.Letmeintroducemylifehabits.First,Ineedtodoeyeexercisesbetweenclassestomakemyeyesrelax.Ican'tgoouttoplaybecauseoftheepidemic(疫情).SoIcandobodybuildingexercisesindoorseveryday.Second,Ihavehealthyeatinghabits.Iofteneatalotofvegetablesandfreshfruit.Idon'teattoomuchmeat.Last,beinghappyisanotherwaytokeephealthy.WhenI'mlonelyorunhappy,Iusuallytrytomakemyselfrelaxbylisteningtomusicorchattingwithmyfriends.Ioftensmile.Ithinksmilemakesmehappyandhealthy.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題屬于材料作文，題目的開頭已給出。要求根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容從三個方面說明自己是如何在特殊時期保持健康的。寫作時要緊扣材料內(nèi)容并進行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。適當(dāng)使用副詞和連詞等增加亮點。寫好時，再閱讀一遍，減少語法錯誤，不要犯單詞拼寫上的錯誤。

2.例文點評：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的例文。例文緊扣題目要求，根據(jù)以第一人稱，假設(shè)自己是LinHui，從表格提示的三個方面（運動、飲食習(xí)慣和情緒）來寫了自己如何在特殊時期保持健康。例文簡明扼要，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語言表達到位。

3.高分亮點：

短語：lifehabits；needtodosth.；doeyesexercises；makesth.+adj.；goout；becauseof；everyday；alotof；toomuch；keephealthy；trytodosth.；chatwith。

句型：以let開頭的祈使句；so連接的并列句；否定句；when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句；賓語從句。7．A：臨近畢業(yè)，學(xué)校開展了組內(nèi)自評和互評活動。假設(shè)你是Sunshine小組的組長請對組員LiMing進行綜合素質(zhì)評價，并寫一份“綜合素質(zhì)評價報告”。內(nèi)容：1.他的愛好；2.他的優(yōu)點（兩條）；3.他的缺點或存在的問題；4.根據(jù)所提到的缺點，提出適當(dāng)?shù)慕ㄗh。要求：1.字跡工整，表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫，用第三人稱寫；2.詞數(shù)：30—50詞，首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。ReportofQualityEvaluation(評價)forSunshineGroupNameLiMingAge15SexBoyClassClass9,Grade3ScoreAComment(評語)LiMingisamemberofmygroup._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：LiMingisamemberofmygroup.Helikesreadingbooks.Heiskindandhelpful.Healwayshelpsotherswhentheyareintrouble.Hestudieshardanddoeswellinallthesubjects.Butheiskindofshy.Hedoesn'tlikemakingfriends.Ihopehecancommunicatewithothers.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題屬于材料作文，題目的開頭已給出。要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容寫一份對組員LiMing的綜合素質(zhì)評價報告。寫作時要緊扣材料內(nèi)容并進行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。適當(dāng)使用副詞和連詞等增加亮點。寫好時，再閱讀一遍，減少語法錯誤，不要犯單詞拼寫上的錯誤。

2.例文點評：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的例文。例文緊扣題目要求，根據(jù)四點內(nèi)容提示對LiMing進行了綜合素質(zhì)評價并給出了適當(dāng)?shù)慕ㄗh。例文簡明扼要，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語言表達到位。

3.高分亮點：

短語：amemberof；likedoingsth.；studyhard；dowellin；kindof；makefriends；communicatewithsb.。

句型：when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句；否定句；賓語從句。四、啟事類8．(A)假如你是Gina，今天早晨你在走廊撿到了一部手機，紅色外殼（case），殼上面有星星圖案。你推測它可能是位女老師的。請寫一則招領(lǐng)啟事讓失主去廣播室（broadcastingroom）找李老師認領(lǐng)。Found______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Gina【答案】例文：FoundI’mGina.Ifoundasmartphoneintheschoolhallway.Ithasaredcaseandtherearesomestarsinthecase.Ithinkitmaybeawomanteacher’s.IgaveittoMr.Li.Ifitisyours,pleasegotothebroadcastingroomandaskMr.Liforit.Gina【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一則給材料作文，由于是一則招領(lǐng)啟事，寫作時只要將材料提供的內(nèi)容，介紹清楚物品的情況即可，同時要符合應(yīng)用文體的格式。文章要用一般現(xiàn)在時。2.例文點評：文章是一則啟事，語言精悍，表達準確意思明確，通俗易懂，主要寫出了這則啟事的目的，物品描述清晰。3.高分亮點：短語：givesthto；gotosp；ask…for。句型：Ithink+賓語從句；If引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句；Therebe句型。五、話題作文9．春節(jié)是我國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。請你結(jié)合下面的漢語提示為外國友人介紹春節(jié)的習(xí)俗及我們的慶?；顒印Ｌ崾荆?、打掃房間以掃除壞運氣。2、吃年夜飯慶祝新年的到來。3、家人們觀看春節(jié)晚會。4、穿上新衣去拜年。5、孩子們會收到壓歲錢。1.___________________________________________________________________________________________2.___________________________________________________________________________________________3.___________________________________________________________________________________________4.___________________________________________________________________________________________5.___________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：As

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festival.【詳解】1.題干解讀：文章是一篇話題作文。主要是以“春節(jié)”為主題，向外國友人介紹春節(jié)的一些習(xí)俗和我們在春節(jié)要做的一些事情和慶?；顒?，要把題目中的要點都要寫出來，要注意語言的連貫性。2.例文點評：文章分三段描寫。第一段總體描述春節(jié)是最重要的節(jié)日，人們會為此會做很多準備；第二段分別具體的描寫在春節(jié)要做的一些事情以及慶?；顒樱坏谌慰偨Y(jié)在春節(jié)每個人都會過的很愉快。整個文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整思路清晰，語言表達準確，用詞恰當(dāng)，意思明確易懂。3.高分亮點：短語：oneofthe+最高級+復(fù)數(shù)名詞；a

lot

of；inorderto；getridof；pay

a

visit

to；have

a

good

time。句型：because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句；and引導(dǎo)的并列句；that引導(dǎo)的定語從句。10．假如你是中學(xué)生李平，曾經(jīng)在你們班學(xué)習(xí)的交換生Peter看了你發(fā)布的朋友圈，他對你們班上周舉行的主題班會很感興趣。請你根據(jù)以下信息給他寫一封信，向他介紹班會的情況并和他交流一下中學(xué)生如何才能實現(xiàn)自己的理想。寫作要點：1.班會的主題：我的理想2.介紹你和幾名同學(xué)的理想：（1）趙勇：想成為一名勇敢的警察；（2）張紅：想做一名志愿者；（3）你：想成為一名優(yōu)秀的醫(yī)生。3.說說中學(xué)生如何才能實現(xiàn)（realize）自己的理想（ideal）。寫作要求：1.不得使用真實的姓名和學(xué)校名。2.可適當(dāng)加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫。3.字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理清晰。4.至少80詞。Dearpeter,I'mwritingtotellyousomethingabouttheclassmeetingheldlastweek.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing【答案】例文：Dearpeter,I'mwritingtotellyousomethingabouttheclassmeetingheldlastweek.Thethemeofitwas“MyIdeal”.Ourmonitorhostedthemeeting.Duringit,allofustookanactivepartinthediscussionandsharedouropinionswitheachother.ZhaoYongisgoingtobeabravepoliceman.Hehopestohelppeopleindanger.ZhangHongwantstobeavolunteer,shewillhelppeopleinneedespeciallythedisabledandthehomeless.Mydreamistobeanexcellentdoctor,Ithinkit’sameaningfuljob,becauseIcansavepeople’slivesandhelpthemoutofdanger.Torealizeourideals,Ihavesomeopinions.Firstly,wemusttrytoworkharderfromnowonandlearnasmuchknowledgeaspossible.Secondly,weshouldbelieveourselves,becauseconfidenceisthekeytosuccess.Besides,it’salsoimportanttofindouthowsuccessfullypeoplediditsothatwecanlearnfromthem.Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing【詳解】題干解讀：這是一篇話題作文，介紹班會的情況，班會的主題是談?wù)摾硐?，通過分析可知，除了短文開頭介紹上周班會情況，我們應(yīng)該使用一般過去時態(tài)，其他內(nèi)容可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，注意謂語動詞要隨著時態(tài)和人稱的變化而改變。2.例文點評：例文采用分段式，文中銜接流暢，在寫作的時候選擇了一些相對高級的詞匯，也運用多種句型，句式豐富多彩，避免單一化，增加了文章的亮點，潤色了文章的內(nèi)容。3.高分亮點：短語：hostthemeeting；takeanactivepartin；indanger；ameaningfuljob；fromnowon；learnfrom。句型：①Ithinkit’sameaningfuljob,becauseIcansavepeople’slivesandhelpthemoutofdanger.②Secondly,weshouldbelieveourselves,becauseconfidenceisthekeytosuccess.③Besides,it’salsoimportanttofindouthowsuccessfullypeoplediditsothatwecanlearnfromthem.2019年1．話題作文：構(gòu)建和諧社會，創(chuàng)建美麗校園是我們每一名中學(xué)生的責(zé)任，但在我們的身邊經(jīng)常看到一些不文明的行為。請以“Howtobeapolitestudent”為題，談?wù)勗谛?nèi)和校外如何告別不文明行為，做一名優(yōu)秀的中學(xué)生。提示詞：harmonioussociety（和諧社會），behavior（行為）【答案】HowtobeapolitestudentAsastudent,it’sourdutytomakeaharmonioussociety.Butwecanoftenseetheimpolitebehavioraroundus.Whatshouldwedotobeapolitestudent?Atschool,weshouldnotonlystudyhardbutalsofollowtheschoolrules.Wearesupposedtohelpotherswhoareintroubleinsteadoftroublingtheminpublic.Also,wemustrespectourtea