七年級上冊 英語 第二單元《Unit 2 Writing》課件

七年級上冊—上海教育出版社—英語—第二單元

DailyLifeUnit2Writing

Samdoesdifferentactivitiesaccordingtotimeorder.ThisisSam'sdailylifeatschool.theconclusion（總結(jié)）ofSam'sdayatschoolLeadinginToday,inourwritingclass,wearegoingtohelpagirlcalledFangFangtofinishherdailyschedule.6:30a.m.getup4–4:30p.m.playbasketballwith

friends

7a.m.havebreakfast4:45p.m.gohome7:30a.m.gotoschool6:30p.m.havedinner8:30a.m.–4p.m.haveclasses9:00p.m.gotobedTimeTimeActivitiesActivitiesPre-writing1234ACBDPre-writing

PutthepicturesintocorrectorderFangFangisaGrade

7student.FangFang(1)___________at6:30a.m.At7a.m.,FangFang(2)_____________.hasbreakfastgetsupSubject主語：FangFangTense時態(tài)：simplepresenttense一般現(xiàn)在時ShesheTip1personalpronoun代替重復(fù)出現(xiàn)的主語WhilewritingCompletethearticleaboutFangFang'sdailylifeTip2counjunctions讓句子更有邏輯性FangFanglivesclosetoschool,soshealways(3)_________________onfootat7:30a.m,andshe(4)________________from8:30a.m.to4p.m.goestoschoolhasclasses常見的連詞：and并列，but轉(zhuǎn)折，so/because因果，等等WhilewritingCompletethearticleaboutFangFang'sdailylifeAfterschool,she

(5)___________________________________________.

She(6)_________________at4:45p.m.playsbasketballwithfriends/classmatesgoeshomeusuallyalwaysTip3adverbsoffrequency的使用表達(dá)動作發(fā)生的頻率常見的頻度副詞：always,usually,often,sometimes,seldom,neverWhilewritingCompletethearticleaboutFangFang'sdailylifeFangFangusually(7)__________at6:30p.m.Shealways(8)____________________at9:00p.m.hasdinnergoes

tobed

FangFangusuallyhasdinnerat6:30p.m.Afterdinner,shesometimeswatchesTVordoeshomeworkintheevening.Shealwaysgoestobedat9p.m.detaileddescription（細(xì)節(jié)描寫）Tip4detaileddescription讓文章更加飽滿WhilewritingCompletethearticleaboutFangFang'sdailylife6:30a.m.getup4–4:30p.m.playbasketballwith

friends/classmates7a.m.havebreakfast4:45p.m.gohome7:30a.m.gotoschool6:30p.m.havedinner8:30a.m.–4p.m.haveclasses9:00p.m.gotobedWhatdoyouthinkaboutFangFang'sdailylife?Herdailylifeisveryhappy.WhilewritingTipsforwriting

Tips

1.personalpronouns的運用,避免主語的重復(fù)使用2.adverbsoffrequency

可以使日常生活描寫更生動3.conjunctions

增強句子之間的邏輯關(guān)系4.detaileddescription可以讓文章更飽滿PracticetimeTomisamiddleschoolstudent.Readhisdailyschedulemindmap,andpleasewriteanarticleabouthisdailylife.(nolessthan60words)PracticetimeTomisamiddleschoolstudent.He______________________at7:00a.m.Thenhe_____________________at7:30a.m._________________________________________________________Afterthat,___________________________,andhe_____________________from8:30a.m.to4:00p.m.頻度副詞+動詞usuallygetsuphasbreakfast補充細(xì)節(jié)，早餐吃了什么？Heofteneatsbreadanddrinkssomemilk.補充細(xì)節(jié)hegoestoschoolhasclassesPracticetimeAfterschool,he________________________________________.Then,he

________________________________________________________________at5:30p.m.______________________________________________________.Andthen,he

__________________________________around9:00p.m.Tom'sdailylifeisvery____________.頻度副詞+動詞alwaysdoessportswithfriends陳述活動+補充細(xì)節(jié)goeshometohavedinnerHeoftendoeshomeworkfrom7:00p.m.goestobedadj.regular有規(guī)律的Timeflies.時光飛逝。Timeandtidewaitfornoman.時光不等人。CherishyourtimeSummaryBeforewewriteanarticleaboutdailylife,weshouldanalyzethepicturesandtimetablecarefullytodecidethesubjectandtense.Whenwewriteaboutdailylife,weshouldpayattentiontothefourwritingtips.Afterwefinishwriting,weshouldcheckourworksandmakesureeachsentenceintheworksiscorrect.Rememberthetwoproverbsandcherishourtimeinthedailylife.HomeworkgetuprideabiketoschoolgotobedplaytabletenniswithfriendspracticeplayingtheguitarbreakfastonelessontoteachhavedinnerinthemorningtwolessonstoteachMaryisateacher.Readherdailyschedule,andpleasewriteanarticleaboutherdailylife.(nolessthan60words)ThankYou！七年級上冊—上海教育出版社—英語—第二單元

DailyLifeUnit2Writing（答疑）

答疑Question1在Dailylife的寫作中，我們可以不按照時間順序?qū)憜?？Question2在Dailylife的寫作中，有些時間在句末出現(xiàn)，例如7:30a.m.，這種情況如果是句號結(jié)尾，是否還要在a.m.后面加上句號？Question3初中階段英語寫作的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)有哪些？答疑Question1在Dailylife的寫作中，我們可以不按照時間順序?qū)憜?？Timeisacluefordailylifewriting,andthewholearticleappearsmorecoherentifwewritethearticleaccordingtothetime.答疑Question2在Dailylife的寫作中，有些時間在句末出現(xiàn)，例如7:30a.m.，這種情況如果是句號結(jié)尾，是否還要在a.m.后面加上句號？If'7:30a.m.'isintheendofthesentenceandatthesametime,thesentenceisendedwithfullstop,thereisnoneedtousethefullstop.Butifthesentenceisendedwithcomma,thecommacannotbeomitted.e.g.1Tomhasbreakfastat7:30a.m.e.g.2Tomhasbreakfastat