讀后續(xù)寫“自我成長”類范文12篇 講義-2024屆高考英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

讀后續(xù)寫“自我成長”主題12篇

八第Q一篇4ttj

WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoentera

writingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.Myfamilycame

fromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.Writingwassodifficultand

painfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingof

theTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharder

thanhedid.

So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?

Hisreply:"BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou'rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithink

youhaveagoodshotatthis.^^Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.

IchosePaulRevere'shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith（車艮匠）

inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeople

thatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse's

mouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse'schoice.

Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Have

doubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.1gottired.Ihaddoubts.I

wantedtoquit.But,likeReveredhorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmy

spelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.Icheckedoutahalfdozen

booksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.

WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,and

said,“Great.Now,writeitagain.']wroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinally

finishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfI

didn'twin,Iwouldn'tcare.

Pl:A先卬weeZslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethe

P2:1toteacher'sofficeaft"theawardpresematiern.

范文：

P】：A炎坡weekslai",whe幾Ialmostforgotthecontest,the%camethe

?Onthatseeminglyordinaryday,myteachersuddenlyinformedmethatIwon

thesecondprizeandtherewouldbeanawardpresentationforthewriting

contestwinners.Itwasreallyadelightfulsurprise.

?Whenthedayfinallyarrived,Ifoundmyselfstandingamongagroupof

talentedwriters.Aseachwinnerwascalledtothestage,applauseandcheers

filledtheair.

?Walkinguptoreceivemyaward,Ifeltasurgeofprideandaccomplishment,

knowingthatmyhardworkanddedication/devotion/commitmenthadbeen

recognized.

P2:Iwenttoteacher'sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.

?Onseeingme,hegavemeasincerecongratulationandsharedhisjoyinseeing

mesucceed.

?Iexpressedmyheartfeltappreciationforpushingmebeyondmycomfort

zone,forbelievinginmyabilitytotellstories,andforexploringmylovefor

writing.Itwasamomentofdeepconnectionandmutualrespect.

?Thatday,Ilefttheofficewithasenseofconfidencetocontinuepursuingmy

passionforwriting,andtheknowledgethatwithdetermination/persistence,

eventhemostdifficultandpainfulchallengescouldbeconquered.

最終自測(cè)：

4上卬weekslater,Ialmostforgotthecontest、therecamethe

。在那個(gè)看似普普通通的一天，我的老師突然告訴我，我獲得了二等獎(jiǎng)，還

會(huì)有一個(gè)獲獎(jiǎng)?wù)叩念C獎(jiǎng)典禮。這真是一個(gè)令人愉快的驚喜。

e當(dāng)這一天終于到來時(shí)，我發(fā)現(xiàn)自己站在一群才華橫溢的作家中間。當(dāng)每個(gè)

獲勝者都被召集到舞臺(tái)上時(shí)，空氣中彌漫著掌聲和歡呼聲。

?走上去接受我的獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)，我感到一陣驕傲和成就，因?yàn)槲抑牢业呐ぷ?/p>

和投入已經(jīng)得到了認(rèn)可。

[wetomyteacher'sofficeafleriheaward"esentation.

令見到我，他向我表示了衷心的祝賀并分享了他看到我成功的喜悅。

令我表達(dá)了我衷心的感激，他推動(dòng)我走出了舒適區(qū)，他相信我講故事的能力，

他探索我對(duì)寫作的熱愛。這是一個(gè)深深聯(lián)系和相互尊重的時(shí)刻。

令那天，我離開了辦公室，帶著一種繼續(xù)追求我對(duì)寫作的熱情的自信，并知

道通過決心/堅(jiān)持，即使是最困難和痛苦的挑戰(zhàn)也可以被克服。

第二篇

BobandIhungoutthewholesummer,runninginthefield,swimminginthelake

andexploringeverywherejoyfully.

Itwasatypicalsummerafternoon.Bobsuggestedweskipalanguagelessonto

playbasketball.Aha!Iwouldshowmydefense,lay-upsandthree-pointshooting.I

lovedtoexplore,Ilovedsports,andIlovedbasketballmost.IbelievedIwouldbethe

nextLeBronJames.

ButmypassionforsportscametoasuddenstopwhenIbeganexperiencing

extremebackpainlaterthatday.Afterseveralvisitstodoctors,finallyIwastoldthat

aspine（脊柱）surgerywasnecessary.Unfortunately,thesurgeryaccidentally

damagedmyspinalcord（脊髓）.Iwasinthewardhangingfacedowntorelievethe

pressureonmyspine.

Afterfour-monthrehabilitationtraining（康復(fù)訓(xùn)練）inhospital,realityslowlyset

in-Iwasunabletowalkagain.Icouldn'tbelievethisshouldhavehappenedtome,

thatitwasn'tpossibletorecover,thatIwouldn'tbecomeafamousbasketballplayer,

thatmylifeasIhadknownit,wasover.Myfuturewouldbechainedtoawheelchair.

Iwasjust16yearsold!

Backhome,Ilearnedhowharditwasgoingtobetogetaroundinawheelchair.I

withdrewfrommyfriendsandmybasketball.AtBob'srepeatedinvitation,Iagreed

togotoourregularswimminghole.Unabletomakeitdowntheriverbankalone,T

wastooproudtoaskforhelp.WhenIfinallyrealizedmypridewouldkeepmeaway

frompeopleandsportsIloved,IletBobcarrymeonhisbacktotheriver'sedge.

Allowingotherstohelpwasaturningpoint.Irealizedmyattitudewasthe

biggestbarrierIhadtoface.HowcouldIexpectotherstoseemypotentialifIdidn't

seeitmyself?HowcouldIrealizemybasketballdreamifIwithdrewintomyself?

Pl:Oneday.Bobtookmetoawheelchairbasketballgame.

P2;WithBob'sencouragement,IdecidedtohaveaZAJatmydream.

范文：

Paral:Oneday.Bobtookmeioawheelchairbasketballgame.

?Itwasaneye-openingexperienceforme.AsIwatchedtheplayerscontrolling

theirwheelchairswithincrediblespeedandprecision,myadmirationfor

themgrew.Theydisplayedalevelofdeterminationandresiliencethat

inspiredme.

?Bobtoldmethateverythingdependedonmyownattitudetowardsmy

disability,thatphysicallimitationsdidn'thavetobeaharriertopursuingmy

dreams,andthattheloveforlifecouldtriumphoveranydifficulty,

?Hiswordsignitedasparkwithinme.

???

Para2:WithBob'seficourageinent,/decidedtohaveatryatdream.

?Insteadofwithdrawingintomyself,IfocusedonwhatIcouldachieve.

Throughendlesstrainingandfirmcommitment,Ibegantoadaptmyskillsto

theworldofwheelchairbasketball.

?Itwasn'taneasyjourney,butwitheachmilestoneIreached,myconfidence

improved,andIrediscoveredmypassionforthegame.

?Isetoffonanewchapterofmylife,provingtomyselfandtheworldthata

positiveattitudecanconqueranyobstacle.

最終自測(cè)：

Cheday,Bobtookmetoawheelchairbasketba/l父ame.

令這對(duì)我來說是一次大開眼界的經(jīng)歷。當(dāng)我看著球員們以令人難以置信的速

度和精確度控制他們的輪椅時(shí)，我對(duì)他們的欽佩不斷增多。他們表現(xiàn)出了

一種激勵(lì)著我的決心和韌性。

令Bob告訴我，一切都取決于我自己對(duì)殘疾的態(tài)度，身體上的限制不一定是我

追求夢(mèng)想的障礙，對(duì)生活的愛可以戰(zhàn)勝任何困難。

令他的話在我心中點(diǎn)燃了一股火花。

WithBob勺encouYcigeme*Idecidedtohaveatryatmydream.

令我沒有退縮，而是專注于我所能實(shí)現(xiàn)的目標(biāo)。通過無盡的訓(xùn)練和堅(jiān)定的承

諾，我開始讓我的技能適應(yīng)輪椅籃球的世界。

令這不是一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的旅程，但隨著我每達(dá)到一個(gè)里程碑，我的信心都提高了,

我重新發(fā)現(xiàn)了我對(duì)比賽的熱情。

令我開始了我人生的新篇章，向自己和世界證明，積極的態(tài)度可以克服任何

障礙。

第三篇

They'dbeenplanningthisforever.Fromherbirth,mostlikely.Mya'smother,

Helenalovedhostingparties.AndAuntBeatricelovedbirthdays.Together,they'd

makeherSweetSixteenahundredtimesbigger,bolder,andbrighterthanitneededto

be.Theyselectedathemeeveryyearandstucktoit.Herfourteenthhadbeenthe

“SnowWhite,,andherninthhadbeenthe“Frozen”.Theynevertoldherwhatthe

themewasthedaybefore.She'djustwakeupherbirthdaymorning,abrandnew

birthdayoutfit（——套月艮裝）laidneatlyonherdresser（anoutfitrelatedtothetheme,of

course)andshewouldopenherdoortoseetheadventurethatlayaheadofherthat

day.

Myahadafewguessesastowhatthisyear'sthemewouldbe.Aplayonthe

words"SweetSixteen“waslikely—acandythemedparty,perhaps?Butshe'dhada

bakingpartyafewyearsago—andHelenawasanythingbutrepetitive.Myadidn't

haveanyinterestincars,soshedoubtedasports-carpartywasonthemenu.She'd

triedtolookthroughhermother'spurchasehistoryonline,buthermotherhadbeen

carefulenoughtodeleteeverythingrecent.Sotheonlyclueleftwasthebirthday

outfitshewouldreceivethenextmorning.

May1st,Myawoke.Thebrightsunlightbeggedhereyestoopenandsheloved

thedaythatherbirthdaytookplace.ItwasalwaysniceoutonMay1standitnever

rained.Thismorningwasnodifferentthanherpreviousbirthdays.Shesatupinher

bedandlookedtoherdresserbeforeslippingoutofbedandinspectingtheoutfit.She

unfoldeditandhelditagainstherbody,seeinghowitwaslike.Itreacheddown,just

abovetheankle.Myadressed,eyedherselfinthemirrorandfounditwasnotso

muchaprettyoutfitasshehadreceivedbefore.Itwastotallyoneforblue-collar

workers!

Paral:Suddenly,herihemghtswereimerri卬tedbyaknock.

Para2：everythingdone,herfacesheme卬asweeZsmile.

范文：

Paral：Suddenly,herthoughtswereinterruptedbyaknock.

?Itwasmumandaunt,whoweredressedinthesameoutfitastheypreparedfor

Mya."Readyforthisyear'sthemeparty,littleblue-collarworker?”Theylooked

herdirectintheeyeswithhighexpectancy.

?NeverhadMyaexpected/anticipatedsuchathemebirthdayparty.Concealing

herdisappointment,shemanagedtoforceasmilewithgreateffort.Inching

herway,Myafollowedmumandaunttoarosegarden.

?Uponarrival,bloomingrosescameintohersight,releasingapleasant

fragrance.Momrevealedtoherthattheirjobwastoremovetheweedssothat

theroseswouldgrowmoreluxuriant.Thoughunwilling,Myarolledupher

sleevesandbentdowntopulltheweedsoutrowafterrow.

Para2：Witheverythingdone,herfaceshonewithasweetsmile.

?ExhaustedasMyawasaftertidyingupandweedingtherosegarden,shefeltan

unprecedentedsenseofaccomplishmentandjoysurgingthroughher.

Severaldropsofsweattricklingdownherredandpinkcheeks,sheturnedto

MumandAunt:"Thisisnotbad.AndIfeelI'vegrownupenoughtohelpyou

withsomething.^^

?Auntsteppedclose,moppingthesweatfromMya'sforeheadwhileMum

pulledMyaintoherarmsandplantedabigkissonherforehead.

?ThesuninMaywasstillshiningbrighter.Staringatthewell-keptgarden,Mya

couldnothelpbutexclaim,“Thisisthebestbirthdaypartyever.”

最終自測(cè)：

Paral：Suddenly,herthoughtswereinterruptedbyaknock.

今是媽媽和阿姨，她們穿著和給米婭準(zhǔn)備的一樣的衣服。”準(zhǔn)備好今年的主題

生日會(huì)了嗎，小藍(lán)領(lǐng)工人?”她們滿懷期待地直視著她的眼睛。

令米婭從來沒有預(yù)料到這樣一個(gè)主題生日聚會(huì)。掩飾自己的失望，她竭力強(qiáng)

顏歡笑。米婭慢慢地走著，跟著媽媽和阿姨來到了一個(gè)玫瑰園。

令一到，盛開的玫瑰就進(jìn)入了她的視線，散發(fā)出令人愉悅的香味。媽媽向他

透露她們的工作是除草，這樣玫瑰花才會(huì)長得更茂盛。米婭雖然不愿意，

但還是卷起袖子，彎下腰，一排又一排地拔掉雜草。

Para2：Witheverythingclone,herfaceshonewithasweetsmile.

今雖然在清理完玫瑰園的雜草后，米婭筋疲力盡，但她感到一種前所未有的

成就感和快樂涌遍全身。幾滴汗順著她紅撲撲的臉頰流下來，她轉(zhuǎn)向媽媽

和阿姨:“這真不錯(cuò)。我覺得我已經(jīng)長大了，可以幫你們做點(diǎn)事兒了。”

。阿姨走上前，擦去米亞額頭上的汗水，媽媽把米婭抱在懷里，在她額頭上重

重地吻了一下。

。五月的日頭依然炙熱?？粗拇蚶磉^的花園，米婭不禁呼喊道:“這是有史

以來最好的生日派對(duì)?！?/p>

第四篇

OnSaturday,wegatheredatthehalltowitnesstheawardceremonyforthe

seniorscouts（童子軍）.Receivinganawardonsuchadaywasagreathonorforany

scout,andalldesiredtobethescoutselectedtogivethesummaryoftheyear's

activitiesfortheassociation.

Iwasnottheoneselectedtogivethesummaryandforthat,Iwasgrateful.Icould

hardlystandinfrontofalargecrowdtomakeaspeech,butSeancould.Hewas

selectedtodothehonorbecausehewasthePresidentoftheBoyScouts.Myjobwas

muchsimpler.BeingtheVice-President,1wasverymuchbehindthescenes,content

toensurethateverythingwasinsmoothrunningorder.

Itwasanhourtogobeforetheceremonybegan,and1hadputthefinishing

touchestothestage.Walkingdownthestage,Isawmyteammatesinastateof

panic（恐慌）.Whentheysawme,theyrantometotellmethatSeanmetwithatraffic

accidentandwouldnotmakeittotheawardceremony.Someoneelsehadtogivethe

summary.Allofthemlookedhopefullyatme,andIcouldfeelmykneesbeginningto

collapse.

Alltheirargumentsagainstmyunwillingnesswerereasonable.Ihadacopyofthe

speechaswellasthebenefitofhavingseenSeanrehearse（排練）it.Iwasthe

Vice-Presidentandthereforeshouldtakehisplace.Finally,Iwasfirmlytoldnotto

turnitdownanylongerandtheysaidthattheywereconvincedthatIwoulddothe

rightthing.Isankdownontothefloor,totallyshockedbythesituation.

IknewIwasnotaconfidentspeaker,andthethoughtofpresentingasummaryin

frontofsomanydistinguishedguestshorrifiedme.Tothinkthatthefameofthe

scoutswouldtakeabeatingbecauseofme!Theburdenofresponsibilitytroubledme

greatly.

Buttherewasreallynowayoutofthesituation.Intheend,Iquicklyrehearsed

thespeechandgotreadytogoonstageforthepresentation.Ilookedcalm,butinside

Iwasatrembling.Althoughtheykeptencouragingme,Istillfeltveryworriedthat

mypoorperformancewouldcostustheopportunitytowinanaward.Soonafter,I

wascalledtodothepresentation.Havingbutterfliesinmystomach,Iwalkedonto

thestage.

Buttherewasreallynowayoutofthesituation.

41stoodonthestage,heartbeatviolently.

范文：

P】:Buttherewasreallyttowayofthesiiitaiion.

?Feelingitmyresponsibilitytobeconfrontedwiththereality,intheend,

Iadjustedmyselfpromptly,gotdownto

rehearsingthespeechandwasreadytogoonstageforthe

presentation.

?ThoughIappearedcalmandcomposed,tensioncamefloodingovermeinside.

Withmyteammates7encouragingwords,Istillfeltveryworried

thatmypoorperformancewould

costustheopportunitytowinanaward.

?Notlongafter,Iwascalledtodothepresentation.Havingbutterflies

inmystomach,I

walkedontothestage.

P2:As/stoodcmthesZage,〃2yheartbeatviolenHy.

?Myfaceturningpaleandmymindgoingblank,

IcouldnotrememberwhatIwas

supposedtoutter.

?WhenIwasatalosswhattodo,Isawmyteammatescasttrustfullooksatme,

whichrelievedmealot.ItwasthenthatIrealizedIshouldtrymy

bestforourteam.

?Notfeelinglikesittingonpinsandneedlesanymore,Ireorganizedmythoughts,

andproceededtospeakintothemicrophone.WhenIwasfinished,allmy

teammates

stoodup,theaudienceburstingintothunderousapplause.

最終自測(cè)：

Buttherewasrea/lynowayoutofthesituation.

令覺得有責(zé)任面對(duì)現(xiàn)實(shí)，最終，我迅速調(diào)整了自己，開始著手排練演講，準(zhǔn)備

上臺(tái)做表演。

令盡管我顯得鎮(zhèn)定自若，但緊張情緒涌上了我的內(nèi)心。有了隊(duì)友們鼓勵(lì)的話，

我仍然非常擔(dān)心我糟糕的表現(xiàn)會(huì)讓我們失去獲獎(jiǎng)的機(jī)會(huì)。

今不久之后，我就被叫去做演講。我很忐忑地走上了舞臺(tái)。

AsIstoodonthestage,刀2yheartbeatviolenHy.

今當(dāng)我站在舞臺(tái)上時(shí)，我的心怦怦直跳。臉色蒼白，頭腦一片空白，我不記得

我應(yīng)該說些什么了。

令當(dāng)我不知所措怎么做時(shí)，我看到我的隊(duì)友們信任地看著我，這讓我松了一口

氣。就在那時(shí)，我意混到我應(yīng)該為我們的團(tuán)隊(duì)盡最大的努力。

令不再感到坐立不安了，我重新組織了我的思想，繼續(xù)對(duì)著麥克風(fēng)講話。當(dāng)我

完成后，我所有隊(duì)友都站了起來，觀眾席中爆發(fā)出了雷鳴般的掌聲。

第五篇

Thoughhisfather,grandmothers,uncles,auntsandcousinswereallgoingtobe

there,itwouldbethefirsttimeforHasan,athoroughlypampered（嬌生慣養(yǎng)的）child,

tobewithouttheconstantmotheringofhishelicoptermother.

AtfirstHasantriedtoemotionallyblackmail（要挾）hismotherintonotgoing,

butaftershepromisedtobringbackhisfavoritetoysandcandies,heunwillinglylet

hergo.

Whenhewenttodropoffhismotherattheairport,hehadtearyeyesashe

wonderedhowhewasgoingtosurvivewithoutherforthenexttwoweeks.Although

hefeltlikecryinglikeababy,hewastooembarrassedtocryoutloud.Butwhenhis

fatherhuggedhim,Hasancould'tstopcryinginhisarms.Whentheyreturnedhome,

Hasan,whohadalwaysbeentoldbyhimotherwhattodo,nowhadnoonetotell

himtowashhishandsorfinishhisdinner.Thoughhewasveryupsetabouthis

mother'sleaving,suddenlyhealsorealizedthepotentialforpartying,awayfromhis

mother'sdiscipline（管教）.Therewouldbenochecksorbalances.Hecouldstayup

late,eatjunkfoodandusetheInternettohisheart'scontent.

Backfromschool,hewouldthink,"Homework?I'llmakethemostofmy

freedomandhavesomefuninstead!,9Hasanstartedtostayuptillhecouldnolonger

stayawakeandthenwokeupwithalotofdifficultyatseveninthemorning,barely

makingittoschoolontime.Butafterafewdays,hispartyingstartedcatchingup

withhim.Inschool,hewasbarelymanagingtostayawake.Thingsstartedgettingout

ofcontrol.Hishomeworkremainedundone.Hefailedhistests.Hefeltweakfrom

eatingonlyjunkfood.

Oneday,histeacherfinallydemandedtoknowwhatwasgoingonwithhim.

Theteacher'swordssankintohisbrainandmadesensetohim.

范文：

Oneday,histeacherfinallydemandedio/mowwhatwasgoingcmwithhim.

UnabletofigureoutwhyHanson'sonce-promisingschoolperformancehadtakena

nose-dive,hecalledHasantohisofficeandinquiredaboutitwithconcern.Head

droopingandtonguetied,Hasanstammeredoutwhathadhappenedrecently.Upon

hearingHasan'sreply,theteacherutteredindisbelief,"Hasan,youareruiningyour

bodyandsoulandevenyourfuture.Truefreedomcomesfromself-disciplineand

responsibilityratherthanindulgenceinyourowndesire.Youneedtotakeyour

responsibilityforattendingyourself.,,

Theteacher'swordssankintohisbrainandmadesensetohim.

Nowherecognizedtheconsequenceofhisrecklessbehaviorandneededtomake

amendswithoutdelay.Fromthatdayon,determinedtogetbackontrack,heassigned

timeforstudy,setupasleepingtimeandsaidnoiojunkfoodandcomputergames.

Gradually,hebecameactiveinclassandimprovedhistestscores,whichsuiprised

hisfatherandteacheralot.Thisexperiencewaslikeawake-upcall,always

remindinghimthatdisciplineandresponsibilitymatteredmostinhislife.

最終自測(cè)：

Oneday,histeacherfinallydemandedtoknowwhatwasgoingonwithhim.

令因?yàn)椴幻靼诐h森曾經(jīng)很有希望的學(xué)校表現(xiàn)為什么急轉(zhuǎn)直下，他把哈桑叫到自

己的辦公室，關(guān)切地詢問此事。

令垂著頭，舌頭打結(jié)般，哈桑結(jié)結(jié)巴巴地說出了最近發(fā)生的事情。

。聽到哈桑的回答，老師難以置信地說：“哈桑，你正在毀掉你的身體和靈魂，

甚至你的未來。真正的自由來自于自律和責(zé)任，而不是對(duì)你自己欲望的放縱。

你需要承擔(dān)起責(zé)任好好照顧自己?！?/p>

Theteacher飛wordssankEtohisbrainandmadesensetohim.

令現(xiàn)在，他認(rèn)清了自己魯莽行為的后果，需要立即彌補(bǔ)贖罪。

令從那天起，他決心回到正軌，分配了時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)，安排了睡覺時(shí)間，對(duì)垃圾食

品和電腦游戲說不。漸漸地，他在課堂上活躍起來，提高了考試成績，這讓

他的父親和老師非常驚喜。

令這段經(jīng)歷就像一個(gè)警鐘，一直提醒他，紀(jì)律和責(zé)任在他的生活中是最重要的。

第八篇

Istillrememberthedaywhenwedecoratedthehouse.Iwastenanditwastwo

weeksbeforeChristmas.Iwaslookingforwardtomypresents.SinceI'mthe

youngestinthefamily,allofthefamilymemberswouldgivemeagiftonewayor

another.Sometimesitwasacookieorahugbutitwasalwaysthere.Iwastheonly

centreofattentionanditwasfeelinggood.

MyunclesusuallywouldaskmewhatIwantedbeforeChristmasandthatyearI

knewwhatIwanted.ItwasthespaceshipIsawintheads.Iwasdreamingofopening

abiggiftbox,anditwasthere.ButthatyearitcameinawaythatIwasn'texpecting.

ItwastwoweeksbeforeChristmas.Justtwoweeks.Shecouldn'twait.Mydear

mothertoldmyfatherthatitwastime,andthenwewenttothehospital.Afteran

hour,theytoldmethatIhadasisternow.But1didn'twantasister.Iwanteda

spaceship.Thenextfewdayswentsofast.Noonewascaringaboutme.Everyone

wastalkingaboutherandIknewthatmylifeisnevergoingtobethesameever

again.Iwasn'treadytogrowup,tobeabigbrother.Butitjusthappenedinan

instant.

OnthedaybeforeChristmas,everyonewasinourhome,talkingonlyaboutmy

newbornsister.Myfamilywasbecominghers.Evenmyunclesdidn'taskme

anythingaboutthegift.ShestoleeverythingI'deverhad,mylifeandmypresents.

Thinkingaboutthis,Icriedtosleep.Ihadanightmare（噩夢(mèng)）andwokeupatthe

middleofthenight.Shadowswereallaroundme,andIwasdefenselessandsoweak.

Iranintomyparents9bedroombutcouldn'twakeupmypoorparentswhowerejust

toowornout.Iwasstandingneartheirbed,tryingnottocrywhenIsawher.Shewas

av/akeandlookingatmewithherbigeyesinhersmallbed.

Paragraph1Suddenlyalongshadowcameintothebedroomandshestarted

Paragraph2:Afte『havingcomfortedher,somethingslowlychangedinsideme.

范文：

Suddenlyalongshadowcameintothebedroomandsheslaved（匚￥山*.

■Feelingpanicatfirst,Ithenrealizedthatitwasjustacarpassingby.Butshefelt

uneasy,hermouthwide-opened,armswaving,andlegskickingintheair.

■Ithoughtshemightbescaredtoo,soIheldoutmyhandtoholdhers,pattingher

onthebackwiththeother.Ievenmovedabitclosertoherlittlebed,whispering

myfavouritesongtoherears,justasmymumdidwhenIgotscared.

■Surprisingly,sheseemedtounderstandmeandstoppedcrying.Lookingintoher

bigeyes,Ibreathedasighofrelief,somethingmeltinginmyheart.

A/ierhavingcoinforiedher,someihings/ow/ychanaedinside

?Thesenseoflonelinessfadedawayandwasreplacedbytheresponsibilityof

beinganelderbrotherandthebondbetweensiblings.Eventhoughherarrival

tookoverthecentreofthewholefamilyinitially,shestartedtobecomethecentre

ofmyattentiontoo.

■Withhercuteroundfaceandsparklingeyes,shealsowonmyloveandcarefor

her.Ilookedaroundandfoundmyparents,awake,smilingatmewithmistyeyes.

■Withashadowofahappyfamilycastonthewindow,Ifeltmylittlesisterwas

thebestgiftI'deverreceived.

最終自測(cè)：

Suddenlya10ngshadowcameintothebedroomandshestartedcrying.

令一開始我很恐慌，然后我意識(shí)到那只是一輛路過的車。但她感到不安，張

大了嘴巴，揮舞著手臂，雙腿踢著。

令我想她可能也會(huì)害怕，所以我伸出手握她的手，用另一只手拍她的背。我

甚至離她的小床更近了一點(diǎn)，對(duì)著她低聲唱著我最喜歡的歌，就像我害怕

時(shí)我媽媽所做的那樣。

令令人驚訝的是，她似乎聽懂了我，也不再哭了。我望著她的大眼睛，松了

一口氣，有什么東西在我的心中融化了。

Afterhavingcomfortedher,somethingslowlychangedinsideme.

令孤獨(dú)感消退了，取而代之的是作為哥哥的責(zé)任和兄妹之間的紐帶。盡管她的

到來最初接管了全家人的中心，但她也開始成為我關(guān)注的中心。

令她那可愛的圓臉和閃閃發(fā)光的眼睛，也贏得了我對(duì)她的愛和關(guān)心,我環(huán)顧

四周，看見了我的父母，醒著，淚眼朦朧地對(duì)我笑。

令窗戶上投著幸福家庭的影子，我覺得我妹妹是我得到過的最好的禮物。

第七篇

Thetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywere

planningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhenthey

broughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchicken

porridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.

JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairs

quietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.Theyputsomericeinto

apotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggs

intoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintothe

eggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.

EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoo

hotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothe

sinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoit

cookednicely.

ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.The

nextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,

Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.Jenna

toldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheponidge.But

Jeffshandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhis

handincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceof

breadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

Pl:Asthelookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

P2:Theca門，iedihebreakfastupstairsandwokeiheirmotheri(p.

范文：

PI:Asthetwi〃slookedaroimdthemindisappoinhnem,iheirfaiherapDeared.

?"Dad,sorry,wemadethekitchensuchamess."Jeffmurmured,lowering

hisheadinshame.

?Takingaglanceatthekitchenandthedownheartedkids,fatherfetchedthe

medicineboxandappliedsomemedicinetoJenna'shand."Nevermind.Let'sdo

itagainbeforeyourmumwakeup.”

?Potcleaned,thetwinsrepeatedthesameprocess,butthistimeunderthe

patientguidanceoftheirfather.SoonthedeliciousandinvitingFrenchtoast

andchickenporridgewereready.

P2:ThefwinscarriedthebreakfastuDstairsandwokeiheirmother

?Beforeshecouldutteraword,JennaandJeffexclaimedinchorus,"Happy

Mother'sDay!Thankyousomuchforwhatyoudidforusandthankyoufor

beingour

?Asenseofdelightdeprivingherofallpowerofutterance,Momhuggedthe

twinstightly,tearsofjoywellingupinhereyes.

?"Ifitweren'tDad'shelp,wecouldn'tfinishit;7Jennaadded.Atthistime,father

camefrombehind,steppedforwardandthrewhisarmsaroundthem.

?Theyfeltblissfulasiftheywereinpossessionofeverything.Indeed,love

shouldbemadeknowntolovedones.

最終自測(cè)：

Pl:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,[heirfatherappeared.

令.“爸爸，對(duì)不起，我們把廚房弄得一團(tuán)糟?！苯芊蛐呃⒌氐拖骂^，喃喃地

說。

令看了一眼廚房和沮喪的孩子們，父親拿起藥盒，把一些藥涂在詹娜手上。

“沒關(guān)系。讓我們?cè)谀銒寢屝褋碇霸僮鲆淮伟伞！?/p>

令洗了鍋，雙胞胎重復(fù)了同樣的過程，但這次是在他們父親的耐心指導(dǎo)下。

很快，美味而誘人的法式吐司和雞粥就準(zhǔn)備好了。

P2:Thetwinscarriedihebreakfastupstairsandwokeiheirmotherup.

令媽媽還沒來得及說話，詹娜和杰夫就齊聲喊道：“母親節(jié)快樂！非常感謝您

為我們所做的一切，也非常感謝你是我們的媽媽?！?/p>

令高興得說不出話來，媽媽緊緊地?fù)肀еp胞胎，喜悅的淚水從眼里涌出。

e“要不是爸爸的幫助，我們也做不完。”詹娜補(bǔ)充說。這時(shí)，父親從他們身后

上前一步，伸出雙臂摟住他們。

令他們感到幸福，好像他們擁有了一切。的確，愛應(yīng)該讓你所愛的人知道。

第八篇

Therearelotsofchancesinfrontofus.Whetheryoucanseizethemornot

dependsonthechoicesyoumake.ThisremindsmeofonechoiceImadeduringmy

childhood.

Twotickets.Onlytwoticketstothefinalbasketballgame.

ThreepairsofeyesfocusedontheticketsinDad'sout-stretchedhand.Mike,the

oldest,askedthequestionrunningthrougheveryone'smind,“Onlyoneticketforus

three?But,Dad,whichofuswillgowithyou?”Avery,theyoungest,repeatedthe

questionquietly.IaskedDadiftherewasanychancetogetmoretickets.Imightbe

themiddlesister,butIwasjustaseagerasmybasketball-crazybrothersforanight

outwithDad.Dadsaidhe'dgottheticketsfromafriendandtherewereonlytwo

available.

Seeingthatnoneofuswouldgiveupthechance,Dadtoldushewouldchoose

whichofthethreeofusdeservedtogobythefollowingmorning.

Thenextmorning,wehurriedintothekitchenandlookedforDad,onlytofind

thathehadgoneout.WeweretoldtogetstartedonourSaturdaycleanupassoonas

wefinishedbreakfast.Mikecomplainedthathecouldn'tconcentrateonchoreswith

thegameamereelevenhoursaway.Heslurpedthelastofhismilk,grabbedthe

basketballandheadedtowardsthebackdoor.Averydashedafterhisbrother.BeforeI

realizedit,thedoorsnappedshut.IglancedoutthewindowandsawMikepract