專題10 書面表達-沖刺2023年中考英語必考題型終極預(yù)測（江蘇專用）

沖刺2023年中考英語必考題型終極預(yù)測（江蘇專用）專題10書面表達1．（2022·江蘇·揚州中學(xué)教育集團樹人學(xué)校三模）分享是一種智慧，分享的幸福是雙倍的幸福，分擔(dān)的痛苦是一半的痛苦。請觀察以下圖片，并根據(jù)圖片所涵蓋的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇題為“LearntoShare”的短文。要求：(1)表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；(2)必須包括表格中所有要點內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；(3)詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；(4)不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。LearntoShareLearningtoshareisaprocesstolearnhowtoleadahappylife._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2022·江蘇·鹽城市鹽都區(qū)實驗初中二模）你校舉辦了“中學(xué)生安全教育日”英語征文活動，請根據(jù)所給提示，以“LiveaSafeLife”為題，寫一篇短文參賽。注意事項：1.詞數(shù)：100詞左右(文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息；3.文章必須包含所提供的主要信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。LiveasafelifeAsmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．（2022·江蘇·連云港市新海初級中學(xué)三模）“雙減”政策(即：減輕義務(wù)教育階段學(xué)生作業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)和校外培訓(xùn)負(fù)擔(dān))的實施在社會引起廣泛關(guān)注。作為親身經(jīng)歷的學(xué)生，必須應(yīng)對新的挑戰(zhàn)，規(guī)劃好自己的時間和學(xué)業(yè)，適應(yīng)這一重大變化。請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇短文。Yourchanges?homework?after-schoolclasses→Youropinions...→Yourplansschoolworkhobbiessports...(2-3points)注意事項：1.短文須自擬，要求觀點明確、語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；2.提供信息非限定性內(nèi)容，僅供參考，但文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名或校名等信息；3.詞數(shù)在90個左右，短文已給出部分不計入總詞數(shù)；4.短文必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。相關(guān)詞匯：雙減DoubleReduction；政策policyAstheDoubleReductionpolicyhasbeencarriedout,wehavechangedalotthisterm.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．（2022·江蘇·鹽城市鹿鳴路初級中學(xué)三模）三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束，你一定有許多心里話想對父母、恩師、同學(xué)或者朋友說。某校廣播站正在舉行“我想對你說”為主題的征文活動，請根據(jù)以下問題提示，用英語完成征文。提示：(1)Whodoyouwanttosayto?(2)Whatwillyousaytohimorher?(3)Whydoyouwanttosayso?注意:1.詞數(shù):100詞左右；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、班級等信息；3.文章必須包含所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。Iwanttosay“________”to__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．（2022·江蘇·泰州中學(xué)附屬初中三模）有人如此比喻：散文是海水，詩是濃縮的咸鹵，格言是結(jié)晶的鹽粒。格言給人們以啟迪、指導(dǎo)、幫助和教誨，幫助人們完成優(yōu)秀人格的自我塑造，順利地度過人生的荒海。請在下列格言中任選一句自己喜愛的格言，并根據(jù)要求寫一篇短文。1、Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.行動比語言更響亮。2、Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。3、Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失敗乃成功之母。Tips:1、What’syourunderstandingofthemotto?2、Whydoyoulikeitbest?3、WhoorWhatcomestoyourmoodfirstwhenyoureadit?Why?4、Howdoesitinfluenceyou?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（2022·江蘇·無錫市華莊中學(xué)二模）由賈玲導(dǎo)演及主演的電影《你好，李煥英》是一部充滿溫情的電影，激發(fā)了觀影者對身邊人感情的共鳴。你觀影之后感觸頗多，發(fā)現(xiàn)許多感恩的人和事，要就此寫一份日志。感恩父母悉心照顧、不辭辛勞……感恩老師耐心教導(dǎo)、善于激勵……感恩同學(xué)合作分享、互相幫助、共同進步感想和打算我很幸運……（請結(jié)合自身實際，但不得提及自己的姓名相關(guān)信息）要求：1.上面的提示供參考，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要使語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚；2.段落開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；要求寫100個詞左右。TodayIwatchedafilmcalledHi,Mom.IttellsastoryofJiaandhermothershowingherlongingandregretatfailingtoseehermotherbeforeshedied.Iwastouchedbyitsrawemotion.Ihavebecomea15-year-oldmiddleschoolstudent.Duringthepastfewyears,IhavegainedalotandIdon’twanttobeapersonfullofregretlikeJiainthefilm.Sofirst,Ishouldsaythankstomydearparents.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．（2022·江蘇·建湖縣匯杰初級中學(xué)三模）在我們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，能夠全身心地投入到一件事情中去，享受做事情的過程，是一種幸福！但求耕耘，不問收獲！某英文網(wǎng)站正在以”全身心投入（Devotion)”為主題的征文活動。假如你是慧潔，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，包含下列問題：1.Whatdidyoudevoteyourselfto?2.Howdidyoudoit?3.Whathaveyoulearntfromtheexperience?...注意：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息；2.詞數(shù)100詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Devotion________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．（2022·江蘇·揚州市江都區(qū)第三中學(xué)二模）每個人心中都有一個自己的榜樣，他們無時無刻不在激勵著我們克服困難，勇往直前。請你以“Myrolemodel”為題，根據(jù)以下提示問題談一談你心目中的榜樣。提示詞語：rolemodel提示問題：1.Whoisyourrolemodel?2.Whatisyourrolemodellike?3.Whyishe/sheyourrolemodel?4.Whatcanyoulearnfromhim/her?要求：1.表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2.詞數(shù)100詞左右；3.不得使用真實姓名，校名和地名。MyRoleModel________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．（2022·江蘇·東臺市實驗中學(xué)三模）家是以愛為圓心，幸福為半徑的圓；家是人生的起點，更是幸福的源泉。在你的日常生活中，有哪些與家人共度的快樂時光呢？請以“TheHappiesttimewithMyFamily”為題，根據(jù)下面的寫作要點和要求，用英語寫一篇短文，分享你的幸福故事。寫作要點：1.Whenisyourhappiesttime?2.Whatdoyouusuallydowithyourfamilyatthattime?3.Whyisityourhappiesttime?要求：1.詞數(shù)：100詞左右(文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))；2.短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；3.文章必須包含所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。TheHappiestTimewithMyFamilyAsafamoussayinggoes,“Eastorwest,homeisthebest.”_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．（2022·江蘇·無錫外國語學(xué)校二模）假設(shè)你是無錫市第五中學(xué)的張穎，你的英國筆友珍妮想了解中國學(xué)生課外閱讀的情況。請根據(jù)下圖提示，給她回一封電子郵件。注意事項：1.回復(fù)的郵件須包括所給內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順，意思連貫，并展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.所給斜體字提示為非限定性內(nèi)容，僅供參考；3.詞數(shù)在100個左右，回復(fù)郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；4.回復(fù)的郵件中不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。DearJenny,Thankyouforyouremail.Iwouldliketotellyousomethingabout________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,ZhangYing11．（2022·江蘇·梅嶺中學(xué)教育集團運河中學(xué)二模）假如你是心理老師Mrs.Wang，九（2）班同學(xué)給你發(fā)了一封求助郵件，請你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容，用英語給Peter回一封電子郵件，幫助他分析情況并提出合理建議。DearMrs.Wang,

I’mPeterfromClassTwo,GradeNine.Ihavemetaproblem,beingshorterthanotherstudentsinmyclass.Andtheyoftenplayjokesonme.I’mfeelingangryandoftenwanttofightwiththem.Couldyouhelpme?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Peter要求：1.表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2.必須包括提示中的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)在100詞左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)；4.不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。DearPeter,Thanksforyourletter.IhopeIcanhelpyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,Mrs.Wang12．（2022·江蘇·常州市武進區(qū)星辰實驗學(xué)校二模）近年來，國家越來越重視中小學(xué)生的勞動教育，要求各學(xué)校對學(xué)生進行熱愛勞動、熱愛勞動人民的教育。假如你是Sigmund，請閱讀初三學(xué)生林濤的求助信，根據(jù)來信內(nèi)容用英文寫一封回信，幫助解決問題。DearSigmund,Ihearthatourgovernmentnowpaysmuchattentiontoeducationonthehard-workingspiritamongstudentsinChina.Studentsshouldgetbasicworkingabilityfortheirlifeandtheirowndevelopment.However,asaGradeNinestudent,IspendsomuchtimeonmystudythatIseldomdoanyhouseworkathomeorvoluntaryworkinsociety.

Iwanttobeanexcellentstudenttodevelopthehard-workingspirit.CanyoutellmewhatIcandobothinandoutoftheschool?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LinTao注意事項：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2.表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.詞數(shù)不少于100，開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：educationonthehard-workingspirit勞動教育DearLinTao,I’mgladthatyouworksohardinyourstudy.However,asastudent,weshouldalsolearntodosomethingmeaningfulforourschool,familyandourcountry.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案：1．例文LearntoShareLearningtoshareisaprocesstolearnhowtoleadahappylife.It’sveryimportanttolearntosharewitheachother.Sharingmeanslettingsomeoneelsehaveorusesomethingthatbelongstoyou.Youcansharesomebeautifulpictures,favoritemusic,differentideasandalsosomehobbiesandexperience.Andtherearedifferentwaystosharethings.Forexample,IcansharewithotherpeoplefacetofaceorbyQQandemail.Inaword,sharingisnotonlyinterestingbutalsohelpfulforustogrowup.Wecanlearnalotfromsharingandenjoyourlifebetter.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，給材料的作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，開頭已給出，引出本文話題；第二步，介紹分享的重要性以及可以分享什么事物；第三步，總結(jié)概括。[亮點詞匯]①eachother彼此，互相②belongto屬于③forexample例如[高分句型]①Learningtoshareisaprocesstolearnhowtoleadahappylife（動名詞作主語）②Andtherearedifferentwaystosharethings.（therebe句型）2．范文：LiveasafelifeAsmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.Herearesomeofmysuggestions.Firstly,weshouldeathealthyfoodsuchasfruitandvegetableseveryday.It’swisetostayawayfromtoocoldfoodinsummer.Secondly,it’snecessarytofollowtrafficruleswhencrossingtheroad.Don’tridesidebyside.It’swrongtotouchmobilesontheway.Besides,becarefulwhenwemakefriendsonline.We’dbetternottellothersourtelephonenumber,addressorpasswords,especiallystrangers.Finally,weoughtnottorunaftereachotheratschool.Moreover,whenhavingsports,remembertoprotectourselvesfromdanger.Inaword,safetymustcomefirst.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，要求以“LiveaSafeLife”為題，結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容進行寫作，適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“給出安全的生活的建議”來引出重點介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“飲食、道路安全、交友，校園安全”幾個方面重點介紹；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，安全必須是第一位的。[亮點詞匯]①keep...inmind記?、趕tayawayfrom遠離③hadbetter最好④runafter追趕[高分句型]①Secondly,it’snecessarytofollowtrafficruleswhencrossingtheroad.（It固定句型）②Besides,becarefulwhenwemakefriendsonline.（when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）3．范文：AstheDoubleReductionpolicyhasbeencarriedout,wehavechangedalotthisterm.Weusedtohavelotsofhomework,butnowit’sbecomingmuchlesssothatwehaveenoughtimetosleep.Moreover,Idon’tgotoafter-schoolclassesanymore.Ithinkthepolicyisgoodforusstudents.Wecanhavemoretimetoimproveourselves.Forexample,Ihavemorefreetimeformyhobbiesandsports.Buthowcanwegetusedtothenewchangesquickly?Here’smyplan.Firstofall,Ishouldmakefulluseofthetimeatschoolanddealwithalltheproblemsintime.Next,takingexerciseisasimportantasschoolwork.Iwillwalkorridetoschooleveryday.It’sagoodwaytokeephealthy.IamcrazyaboutplayingfootballsoIcanplayfootballwithmygoodfriendsatweekends.Finally,I’lltakeupsomemeaningfulhobbiestomakemylifemoreinteresting.I’llspendmoretimewithmyparents.IhopeIcangrowuphealthilyandhappily.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時，一般過去時和一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中“寫兩到三點自己的計劃”一項，適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。開門見山說明“雙減”政策帶來了許多變化；第二步，具體闡述政策給自己帶來的變化和自己對政策實施的觀點；第三步，最后介紹政策之下自己的計劃，書寫結(jié)語，表達自己的愿望。[亮點詞匯]①usedtodosth.過去常常做某事②getusedto習(xí)慣于③becrazyabout熱衷于④takeup開始從事[高分句型]①takingexerciseisasimportantasschoolwork.(動名詞作主語)②I’lltakeupsomemeaningfulhobbiestomakemylifemoreinteresting.(動詞不定式作目的狀語)4．例文Iwanttosay“Iloveyou”tomydadDad,youarethebestdadintheworld.Withyourcareandlove,Ihadthreehappyyearsofmyjuniorschoollife.AndtodayIjustwanttosay“Iloveyou”toyou.Dad,youarealwaystakingsogoodcareofmethatIgrowuphappilywithoutgettinghurt.WheneverIneedyourhelp,youwillbethere.Moreover,youalwaysencouragesmeintimesothatIcanregainconfidence.Aboveall,youareagoodlistener.Thankyouforlettingmebemyself.Itisyourhelp,encouragementandlisteningthatmakeagreatdifferencetome.Onthewaytomygrowth,youremainthesunshineallthetime,whichwarmsme,especiallywhenintrouble.Ihopethatoneday,justlikeyou,whenIhavechildrenofmyownIcanbetherockonwhichtheystand.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點，突出寫作重點；注意使用一些連接詞，使得上下文邏輯連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，補充題目，點明想對誰說以及說什么；第二步，闡述為什么想說這句話，主要介紹這個人在成長路上對自己的幫助、愛護等；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達自己的希望和決心。[亮點詞匯]①takegoodcareof好好照顧②growup長大③encourage鼓勵④sothat以便；所以⑤aboveall最重要的是，尤其是[高分句型]①Moreover,youalwaysencouragesmeintimesothatIcanregainconfidence.（sothat引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句）②Itisyourhelp,encouragementandlisteningthatmakeagreatdifferencetome.（強調(diào)句）③Onthewaytomygrowth,youremainthesunshineallthetime,whichwarmsme,especiallywhenintrouble.（which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）5．例文MyfavouritemottoisWherethereisawill,thereisaway.Ithinkthatoneofthemostimportantthingstosuccessisafirmresolution.Ifamandoesn’thaveastrongwilltowinthefinalvictory,hewillneversucceedinhislife.WheneverIseethismotto,IthinkofmanymemoriesofmyEnglishstudy.WhenIenteredthemiddleschool,IhadsomanydifficultieswithmyEnglish.Iwasnotabletounderstandtheteacherinclass,andIcouldn’tmasterthewordsandphrases.ForatimeIwantedtogiveup.Later,ImadearesolutiontoimprovemyEnglish.Ilistenedtotheteachercarefullyinclass,keptonreadingEnglisheverydayandspokeasmuchaspossible.StepbystepImadegreatprogressinEnglish.Fromthisthing,Ireallyunderstandthismotto.Thereisnothingdifficultintheworld.Ifyoumakeupyourmindtodoit,youwillcertainlyaccomplishyourend.SoIwillnevergiveupeasily.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”和“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：要求任選一句自己喜愛的格言，并根據(jù)要求寫一篇短文。學(xué)生不要遺漏提示中的要點，適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，寫作時保持主謂一致。[寫作步驟]第一步，首先引出話題，寫出自己喜愛的格言；第二步，具體闡述如何理解格言、為什么喜歡這個格言、它能讓你想起的人或事等；第三步，講述這個格言對你的影響。[亮點詞匯]①thinkof想起②beabletodosth.能夠做某事③giveup放棄④asmuchaspossible盡可能[高分句型]①Ithinkthatoneofthemostimportantthingstosuccessisafirmresolution.（賓語從句）②Ifamandoesn’thaveastrongwilltowinthefinalvictory,hewillneversucceedinhislife.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）③WhenIenteredthemiddleschool,IhadsomanydifficultieswithmyEnglish.（When引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）6．參考例文TodayIwatchedafilmcalledHi,Mom.IttellsastoryofJiaandhermothershowingherlongingandregretatfailingtoseehermotherbeforeshedied.Iwastouchedbyitsrawemotion.Ihavebecomea15-year-oldmiddleschoolstudent.Duringthepastfewyears,IhavegainedalotandIdon’twanttobeapersonfullofregretlikeJiainthefilm.Sofirst,Ishouldsaythankstomydearparents.Theytakecareofmewithoutanycomplaint.Theyworkhardtosupportthewholefamily.Theyarealwaystryingtheirbesttomakemeliveabetterlife.Second,I’mthankfultoallmyteachersfortheirgreathelpandsupport.Theyarepatientenoughtospendlotsoftimeexplainingproblemstome.Besides,theyalwaysencouragemewhenIamintrouble.It’sselflessofthemtodevotetheirtimetoeducation.Finally,Ialsofeelverygratefultomyclassmates.Weworktogetherandsharethingswitheachother.Weoftenhelpeachotherandlearnfromeachother.Asaresult,wehavemadegreatprogress.IthinkIamluckytohavesomuchloveandcare.Iwillneverforgetthesehappydaystogether.Iamgoingtodowellinthefuturesothattheycanbeproudofme.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇日志，屬于材料作文寫作；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：文章開頭以及要點已經(jīng)給出，按照提示的要點逐點闡述，可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接短文開頭，引出話題；第二步，首先表達要感謝父母，接著按照要點闡述父母如何照顧和關(guān)愛我們；其次表達感謝師長，結(jié)合具體事例闡述老師們的耐心教導(dǎo)和鼓勵；接著再表達對同學(xué)的感謝，可結(jié)合具體事例闡述同學(xué)間的互幫互助、共同成長；第三步，抒發(fā)自己的感情及打算并書寫結(jié)語。[亮點詞匯]①takecareofmewithoutanycomplaint毫無怨言地照顧我②bethankfultosbforsth因某事感激某人③beintrouble遇到困難④devoteone’stimetosth把某人的時間奉獻在某事上[高分句型]①Besides,theyalwaysencouragemewhenIamintrouble.（when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句）②It’sselflessofthemtodevotetheirtimetoeducation.（it作形式主語，動詞不定式作真正的主語）③Iamgoingtodowellinthefuturesothattheycanbeproudofme.（sothat引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句）7．范文：Fiveyearsago,Istartedtodevotemyselftopainting,whichturnedouttobeoneofthemostimportantexperiencesinmylife.Oneday,Isawsomeofmyschoolmatespaintingintheartroom.Thecolorfulpicturescaughtmyattentionimmediately.IwassodrawntothebeautyinfrontofmethatIjoinedthePaintingClub.Afterthat,nomatterwhateverhappened,Istillwasontimetoeachartlessonandfinishedeachpaintingcarefully.Bydoingthis,IdevelopedmyabilityanddecidedthatIwantedtocompletelydevotemyselftopainting.NotonlydidIwincountlessawardsbutalsomypaintingjourneyhelpedmegrowintoabetterperson.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般過去時”為主；③提示：寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，考生要注意不要遺漏信息提示，可適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。表明自己全心投入到畫畫中去的觀點。第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。講述自己是如何愛上繪畫的以及自己的做法是怎樣的。第三步，書寫結(jié)語。簡單地闡述自己在這次經(jīng)歷中的收獲。[亮點詞匯]①devoteoneselfto全身致力于②infrontof在……之前③ontime按時④notonly…butalso…不僅……而且……[高分句型]①Fiveyearsago,Istartedtodevotemyselftopainting,whichturnedouttobeoneofthemostimportantexperiencesinmylife.（which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）②NotonlydidIwincountlessawardsbutalsomypaintingjourneyhelpedmegrowintoabetterperson.（倒裝句）8．例文：

MyRoleModel

Perhapseveryonehasarolemodelinhisheartthatencourageshimtoovercomedifficultiesandkeepgoingbravely.Metoo.Myrolemodelismydeskmate.

Mydeskmate’snameisRose.Sheisabeautifulandexcellentgirl.Shealwaysgetsthebestgradesinourgrade.Iadmireherbecausesheiscleverandhard-working.Also,sheishelpfulandkind.Shealwaysexplainsquestionstomeandotherclassmates.Sheisalsotalented.Shecanplaythepianoandsingverywell.Sheisevengoodatplayingvolleyballandswimming.

Howgreatmydeskmateis!Iwillworkharderandhelpothersmoreasshedoes.Iwilltakeupanewhobbylikeplayingthepianoorvolleyball.IbelieveIwillbebetter.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的每一項，適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。開門見山說明每個人都有自己的榜樣，并闡明自己的榜樣是誰；第二步，具體闡述榜樣的特點和是自己榜樣的原因；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，說明自己在榜樣身上學(xué)到的東西，并表達自己的感受。[亮點詞匯]①explainsth.tosb.向某人解釋某事②playthepiano彈鋼琴③begoodat擅長于④takeup開始從事[高分句型]①Perhapseveryonehasarolemodelinhisheartthatencourageshimtoovercomedifficultiesandkeepgoingbravely.(that引導(dǎo)的定語從句)②Shealwaysgetsthebestgradesinourgrade.(運用形容詞的最高級)9．例文：Asafamoussayinggoes,“Eastorwest,homeisthebest”.Thisistrueforme.IalwaysfeelhappyandrelaxedwhenIamwithmyfamily.Myhappiesttimewithmyfamilyistheweekend.It’satimewhenallmyfamilystaytogether.MyparentsandIalwayshavemealstogether.Wealwayshaveachancetotalkaboutinterestingthings.Wemaygotothemoviesordosomeshoppingtogether.Takingashorttripinthecountrysidealwaysbringsusgreatfun,too.Inshort,theweekendisthehappiesttimewithmyfamily.Ithelpsmeunderstandmyparentsbetterandshowmylovetothem.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示；寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“寫作要點”中的要求，可適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，分析題目，明確題目要求；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。介紹自己與家人共度的快樂時光是什么時候、都會做些什么；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。說明自己喜歡這些時光的原因。[亮點詞匯]①staytogether聚在一起②haveachancetodosth有機會做某事③dosomeshopping買東西[高分句型]①It’satimewhenallmyfamilystaytogether.(when引導(dǎo)定語從句)②Takingashorttripinthecountrysidealwaysbringsusgreatfun,too.(動名詞作主語)10．例文DearJenny,Thankyouforyouremail.Iwouldliketotellyousomethingabouttheextra-curricularreadinginourschool.Infact,moststudentsinourschoolhaven’trealizedtheimportanceofextra-curricularreading.Therefore,thetimedevotedtoreadingislimited.Somestudentsprefercomicbookstoclassicreadingmaterials.Herearethereasons.Somestudentshaven’tformedagoodhabitofreading.Othershavesolittleinterestinreadingthattheywouldratherspendtimeonvideosorcomputergames.Somepeoplehavenotimeorinterest.Readingisgoodforbothourlifeandstudy,whichcanopenupanewworldtous.Soitisnecessaryforstudentstotakeupreading.Sincelastyear,Ihavereadmanyworldclassics,suchasaDreamofRedMansions.IhavelearnedalotaboutChinesehistory.

Bestwishes!Yours,ZhangYing【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在完成時”；③提示：注意回復(fù)的郵件須包括所給內(nèi)容要點，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步：表明寫作意圖。根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容要點，給英國筆友珍妮回一封電子郵件，介紹一下中國學(xué)生課外閱讀的情況。第二步：具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。首先點明主題；其次介紹中國學(xué)生課外閱讀的現(xiàn)狀；接著介紹學(xué)生不喜歡閱讀的原因；接下來介紹閱讀的好處；最后介紹我的閱讀經(jīng)歷。第三步：書寫結(jié)語。表示祝福。[亮點詞匯]①wouldlike想要

②theimportanceof……的重要性③prefer…to…比起……來，更喜歡……

④wouldrather寧愿；寧可

⑤openup打開[高分句型]①Othershavesolittleinterestinreadingthattheywouldratherspendtimeonvideosorcomputergames.（so…that…引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句，表示“如此……以至于……”）②Readingisgoodforbothourlifeandstudy,whichcanopenupanewworldtous.（which引導(dǎo)的定語從句）

③Soitisnecessaryforstudentstotakeupreading.（Itis+形容詞+forsb.+todosth.”意為“對某人來說做某事怎么樣”）11．例文DearPeter,Thanksforyourletter.IhopeIcanhelpyou.Yousaidyouhavesometrouble