中考英語人教版總復習主題寫作突破課件主題五社會服務(wù)2

主題五社會服務(wù)主題透析教材鏈接七下Unit3Howdoyougettoschool?八下Unit2I’llhelptocleanupthecityparks.八下Unit3Couldyoupleasecleanyourroom?頭腦風暴素材積累一、主題詞塊1.

從事……;作為……

2.

不但……而且……

3.

打電話

4.

撿起;拾起

5.

和某人相處得好

workas…notonly…butalso…calluppickupgetalongwellwithsb.二、高分句型1.Foroneweek,she

anyhouseworkand

.

.

有一個星期,她沒做任何家務(wù)活,我也沒做。2.Andinthecommunity,I

avolunteer

.thepeoplewhoareoldordisabled.在社區(qū)里,我是一名志愿者,

幫助老年人或殘疾人。

didnotdoneitherdidIworkastohelp3.Besides,Ihave

gotthestrongfeelingofsatisfaction

become

.andresponsible.

此外,我不僅獲得了強烈的滿足感,而且變得越來越獨立和有責任心。4.

feelgoodabouthelpingotherpeople,

tospendtimedoingwhatIlovetodo.

我不僅對幫助別人感覺很好,而且還能花時間做我喜歡做的事情。5.

,Iwillenjoymyselfinthesummerholiday.總而言之,我會在暑假玩得很開心。

notonlybutalsomoreandmoreindependentNotonlydoIbutalsoIgetAllinall典例剖析(2023眉山)勞動創(chuàng)造美好生活,勞動實踐從我做起。作為一名中學生,請你根據(jù)下表要點,以“LaborIsGlorious(勞動光榮)”為題,向校報“英語園地”欄目投稿。勞動實踐在學校,和同學一起打掃教室和操場;在家里,做飯、洗衣服、整理房間;在社區(qū),做志愿者,幫助老人或殘疾人勞動收獲學到一些基本生活技能,學會照顧自己;獲得滿足感,變得更加獨立和有責任心發(fā)出倡議……注意:(1)詞數(shù)100左右(標題和開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù));(2)可適當發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫;(3)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、學校等信息。LaborIsGloriousIt’swellknownthatlaborisglorious.

第一步“五定”審題體裁記敘文人稱第一人稱時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時、現(xiàn)在完成時要點勞動實踐;勞動收獲;發(fā)出倡議思路承接給出的開頭,寫“勞動實踐”;分層表達“勞動收獲”;發(fā)出倡議,積極參加日常勞動等第二步“三段”謀篇第三步潤色成文【基礎(chǔ)版】LaborIsGlorious

It’swellknownthatlaborisglorious.Ioftendosomelaboractivitiesineverydaylife.Forexample,Icleantheclassroomandplaygroundwithmyclassmatesatschool.Icookdishes,washclothesandtidyroomsathome.Andinthecommunity,Iworkasavolunteertohelptheoldordisabled.Bydoingthese,I’velearnedsomebasiclifeskillstotakecareofmyself.I’vegotthestrongfeelingofsatisfactionandIbecomemoreandmoreindependentandresponsible.Laborcreatesabetterlife.Let’stakeanactivepartindoingthedailylabor.【升格版】LaborIsGlorious

It’swellknownthatlaborisglorious.Asamiddleschoolstudent①,Ioftendosomelaboractivitiesineverydaylife.Forexample,Icleantheclassroomandplaygroundwithmyclassmatesatschool.Icookdishes,washclothesandtidyroomsathome.Andinthecommunity,Iworkasavolunteertohelpthepeoplewhoareoldordisabled②.升格說明①as…短語的使用,補充說明了“我”的身份。②定語從句的使用,突出了作者要幫助的對象,起到了強調(diào)的作用。Bydoingthese,I’velearnedsomebasiclifeskillstotakecareofmyself.Besides,Ihavenotonlygotthestrongfeelingofsatisfactionbutalsobecomemoreandmoreindependentandresponsible.③

Allinall,laborcreatesabetterlife,solet’stakeanactivepartindoingthedailylabor.④③besides的使用,使上下文連接更緊密;notonly…butalso…連接兩個并列的成分,簡化了句子結(jié)構(gòu)。④allinall的使用,使表達更有說服力;so連接并列句,使句式表達更豐富。名師點評

本文布局合理,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,表達連貫。作者能嚴格按照提示要點進行表達,文章長短句結(jié)合,句式豐富,如含定語從句的復合句,notonly…butalso…連接的并列謂語,so連接的并列句等;另外,銜接詞and,besides等的巧妙使用,使短文連接更緊密。學以致用1.圖表提示類·志愿活動

青少年利用課余時間參加志愿者服務(wù)活動,

對其成長具有重要意義,可以幫助他們學習新技能,增強溝通能力和社

會責任感。暑假將至,請根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容提示,以“MyVolunteerWorkPlan”為題寫一篇英語短文,介紹你選擇的活動項

目及活動計劃,并談?wù)剠⒓又驹刚叻?wù)活動的意義。VolunteerWork◎Helpinthecitylibrary◎Holdacharitybazaar(義賣)◎Visittheoldpeople’shome◎Cleanupthecityparks◎Dovolunteerworkinahospital◎…要求:(1)可選擇表格中的1—2個活動項目,也可自擬活動項目;(2)語句通順,意思連貫,詞數(shù)80左右;(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名、地名等信息。MyVolunteerWorkPlan

Onepossibleversion:MyVolunteerWorkPlanThesummerholidayiscoming.Iamgoingtodosomevolunteerwork.Iwillhelptocleanupthecityparks.Ofcourse,Iwillaskmorepeopletojoinme.Iwillcallupmyfriendsandaskthemtocome.Wewillpickupthelitter,theplasticbagsandotherwastethings.Ihopeourcitywillbemorebeautiful.Besides,Iamgoingtovisitsickkidsinhospital.Ilovechildrenandenjoygettingalongwellwiththem.Iwillsingforthekidsatthecityhospitaltocheerthemup.Ihopetheycanbebettersoon.NotonlydoIfeelgoodabouthelpingotherpeople,butalsoIgettospendtimedoingwhatIlovetodo.Allinall,Iwillenjoymyselfinthesummerholiday.2.圖表提示類·愛心義賣上個月,你們班為Children’sHome的孩子們

組織了一次愛心義賣活動。請根據(jù)下表信息用英語寫一篇短文,向某

英語網(wǎng)站投稿,談?wù)劚敬位顒雍湍愕捏w會。ThingsyoudidThingsyou’velearned●handoutnotices●makethingslike…●sellthethings●giveawaythemoney●developlifeskills●…注意:(1)短文必須包括上表所有信息,可適當增加細節(jié);(2)你的體會至少兩條;(3)詞數(shù)80—100;(4)短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:charitysale義賣活動

Lastmonth,ourclasshadacharitysale.

Onepossibleversion:

Lastmonth,ourclasshadacharitysale.Twodaysbeforethesale,wehandedoutnoticestomakeoursaleknownbyothers.Thenwemadedifferentthingslikefoodandtoys.Itwassomuchfun!Wheneverythingwasready,westartedtosellthethings.Tooursurprise,alltheth