2025屆中考英語復(fù)習(xí)寫作培優(yōu)冊（外研版廣西專用）11-人與社會-主題11 科技發(fā)明與創(chuàng)新

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高頻主題三階寫作指導(dǎo)人與社會主題11

科技發(fā)明與創(chuàng)新（新科技的出現(xiàn)與應(yīng)用；新科技/人工智能利弊談；個人隱私與網(wǎng)絡(luò)安全；航天科技發(fā)展）【教材模塊/單元鏈接】外研版人教版譯林牛津版七（上）M7

因特網(wǎng)的使用九（上）M9

發(fā)明&科技進步九（全）U6

發(fā)明八（下）U3

了解計算機九（下）U3

機器人如何幫助我們一階

素材積累與訓(xùn)練素材積累短語與句型作用與影響1.be

used

to

do

sth.

被用來做某事2.change

one’s

life改變某人的生活3.with

the

development

of

隨著……的發(fā)展4.make

a

lot

of

progress

取得很大的進步5.have

a

great

influence

on

對……產(chǎn)生很大的影響信息技術(shù)1.go

on

the

Internet

上網(wǎng)2.surf

the

Internet

網(wǎng)上沖浪3.chat

online

在線聊天4.make

e-friends

交網(wǎng)友5.text

message

手機短信6.check

the

email

檢查郵件7.keep

in

touch

with

與……保持聯(lián)系8.search

for

information

查找信息對某種科技或發(fā)明的看法1.On

the

one

hand…，on

the

other

hand…

一方面……，另一方面……2.from

my

point

of

view/in

my

opinion/as

for

me

在我看來3.All

in

all/In

short/In

a

word/In

conclusion，I

believe…

總之，我相信……開頭句1.

With

the

development

of

science

and

technology，people

have

been

used

to

the

life

with

the

Internet.［外研七（上）M7］2.Nowadays，people

spend

much

time

on

the

Internet.

They

can

do

many

things

with

the

Internet.

［外研七（上）M7］3.The

Internet

is

changing

the

world.4.There

are

many

inventions

that

have

changed

the

world.［人教九（全）U6］5.As

we

all

know，smart

products

change

our

life

greatly.6.Among

many

inventions，I

think

the

most

useful

for

me

is

the

bicycle.中間句某發(fā)明/科技的功能1.I

listen

to

music

or

watch

movies

on

the

computer

every

Friday

night.

［外研七（上）M7］2.Today，with

the

invention

of

the

computer

and

electronic

technology，it’s

easy

to

get

information

on

the

Internet.［外研九（上）M9］3.I

came

up

with

a

good

idea

for

my

invention.

It’s

a

special

box

which

is

used

for

holding

wastes.

It

can

move

and

speak

different

languages.

As

soon

as

people

throw

away

wastes

on

the

street，they

will

be

cleaned

up

by

the

box

at

once.［人教九（全）U6］4.Home

robots

help

with

housework

so

that

people

have

more

time

to

do

things

they

enjoy.5.The

electric

car

can

not

only

save

energy

but

also

protect

the

environment.6.ChatGPT

offers

advice

and

helps

us

when

we

are

feeling

down.對生活的負(fù)面影響1.I

think

learning

online

for

a

long

time

is

bad

for

our

eyes.2.Not

everything

we

read

on

the

Internet

is

true

or

good

for

us.3.Depending

on

the

robots

too

much

may

make

people

lazier.結(jié)尾句表達觀點1.In

my

opinion，home

robots

can

make

our

lives

easier.2.All

in

all，smart

products

have

both

advantages

and

shortcomings.

I

believe

that

if

we

use

them

correctly，it

will

help

us

live

a

more

convenient

life

in

the

future.3.Only

when

we

obey

the

rules

above

can

we

build

a

healthy

online

world.俗語/諺語1.Every

coin

has

two

sides.凡事都有兩面性。2.The

question

mark

is

the

key

to

any

science.問號是開啟任何一門科學(xué)的鑰匙。高分模板介紹某科技/發(fā)明

Inventions

are

very

important

in

our

daily

life.

My

favorite

invention

is__________（發(fā)明名稱），which

was

invented

by

__________in__________（發(fā)明者和發(fā)明時間）.

As

we

all

know，__________is

one

of

the

most

important

inventions（發(fā)明的重要地位）.

It

is

made

of/from__________（制作材質(zhì)）.

It

looks

like

__________

（樣子）.

When

it

is

invented，it

will

__________

（它的使用方法）.

In

my

opinion，I

hope

__________

can

help

us

in

these

ways（用途）.On

the

one

hand，__________.

On

the

other

hand，__________

（具體介紹兩種用途）.

With

the

help

of__________，people

can

__________

（繼續(xù)介紹用途）.

Thanks

to

the

invention

of

__________（發(fā)明名稱），it

has

made

our

life

__________

（對發(fā)明的看法或感受）.句型訓(xùn)練1.You

can

create

or

invent

something.

You

know

more

about

its

knowledge

first.（用Only

when引導(dǎo)的倒裝句升格句子）_______________________________________________________________________________________Only

when

you

know

more

about

its

knowledge

first

can

you

create

or

invent

something.2.I

start

the

car

and

it

can

fly

like

a

bird.（用as

soon

as引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句升格句子）_______________________________________________As

soon

as

I

start

the

car，it

can

fly

like

a

bird.3.The

car

is

cheap

and

environmentally

friendly.（用not

only…but

also…

升格句子）_________________________________________________________The

car

is

not

only

cheap

but

also

environmentally

friendly.4.I

want

to

invent

a

special

car.

The

car

can

swim

in

water

and

run

on

land.（用定語從句升格句子）__________________________________________________________________________I

want

to

invent

a

special

car

that/which

can

swim

in

water

and

run

on

land.5.人工智能的快速發(fā)展對我們的生活產(chǎn)生了巨大的影響。（漢譯英）_____________________________________________________________The

rapiddevelopment

of

AI

has

a

great

influence

on

our

life.二階

主題典例探究

發(fā)明不僅給我們的生活帶來便利，而且還能促進社會進步和發(fā)展。近日，Invention雜志正在征集有關(guān)各類發(fā)明的英文稿件。請以“A

useful

invention”為題，寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.你心目中最有用的發(fā)明是什么（智能手機、掃地機器人……）；2.這個發(fā)明的基本信息（發(fā)明時間、發(fā)明者、功能……）；3.你的看法。注意：1.詞數(shù)為80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱；4.短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：invent（v.

發(fā)明），convenient（adj.

方便的）A

useful

invention

Inventions

allow

us

to

live

happy

and

easy

lives.

Among

all

the

inventions，I

think

the

most

useful

one

is

______________________寫作剖析一、仔細(xì)審題1.文體：本文要求介紹自己心中最有用的發(fā)明的基本信息，是一篇________；2.時態(tài)：介紹發(fā)明歷程，用____________，介紹發(fā)明的功能，用____________；3.人稱：介紹發(fā)明的歷程及發(fā)明的功能，用第____人稱。說明文一般過去時一般現(xiàn)在時三二、構(gòu)思框架，列出要點構(gòu)思框架列出要點1.______________移動電話2.__________計算機3.______________掃地機器人4.____________________在某年被發(fā)明5.______________________以許多方式被使用6._________________提供快速的服務(wù)7._________________上網(wǎng)沖浪mobile

phonecomputercleaning

robotbe

invented

in+年份be

used

in

many

waysoffer

fast

servicesurf

the

Internet8.__________________

開闊我們的視野9._______________聽音樂10._____________看視頻11.______________________搜索信息12._____________放松自己13._____________明智地使用它14.______________給某人帶來某物open

up

our

eyeslisten

to

musicwatch

videossearch

for

informationrelax

oneselfuse

it

wiselybring

sb.

sth.三、遣詞造句，連句成文A

useful

invention

Inventions

allow

us

to

live

happy

and

easy

lives.

Among

all

the

inventions，I

think

the

most

useful

one

is

the

mobile

phone.

The

first

mobile

phone

was

invented

for

US

Army

in

1938

in

America.

Until

1973，Martin

Cooper

from

Motorola

Company

invented

the

first

mobile

phone

for

the

ordinary

people

to

use.

Since

then，the

world

has

been

changed

because

of

the

useful

invention.

They

are

used

in

many

ways.

First，they

offer

fast

and

convenient

service

for

communication.

We

can

talk

with

our

parents

or

our

friends

for

a

long

time

on

mobile

phones.

We

can

also

surf

the

Internet

on

them.

That

helps

us

open

up

our

eyes

to

the

outside

world.

And

when

we

are

tired，we

can

listen

to

music

to

relax

ourselves.

Our

life

becomes

more

colourful

because

of

the

invention

of

mobile

phones.

There

is

no

doubt

that

the

mobile

phone

plays

an

important

part

in

our

daily

life.

I

think

we

should

use

it

wisely

so

that

it

will

bring

us

much

more

fun.三階

寫作實戰(zhàn)訓(xùn)練

假設(shè)你是李華，學(xué)?？萍脊?jié)將舉辦題為“AI

in

our

life”的英語演講比賽。請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇英文演講稿，包含以下內(nèi)容：AI

in

daily

lifesmartphones，cleaning

robotsThe

influence

of

AImake

work

and

study

more

efficient，help

with

housework，bring

great

convenience

and

progress

to，lose

jobs，depend

on

AI

too

muchYouropinion...注意：1.詞數(shù)為80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱；4.短文開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear

teachers

and

fellow

students,

As

we

all

know，AI

changes

our

lives

greatly.

With

the

development

of

science

and

technology,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

we

can

see

all

kinds

of

AI

products

in

our

daily

life.

For

example，smartphones

can

make

our

work

and

study

more

efficient

while

cleaning

robots

can

help

with

housework.

They

all

bring

great

convenience

and

progress