義 高二學(xué)下期期末統(tǒng)一考試英語試題讀后續(xù)寫+大學(xué)錄?。菏渑c覺醒+講

讀后續(xù)寫：

IwasinNewYorkCityonaschooltrip.Icalledhomefromapayphone,andmy

littlesister,Alex,saidfourenvelopeshadarrived:Georgetown,Cornell,Williamand

MaryandtheUniversityofMassachusetts.Shethenopenedandreadthemtomein

herten-year-oldvoice:"Weregretthatwedonothaveaplaceforyou.."Rejected

fromGeorgetown."Youwereoneofmanyqualifiedcandidates..."Rejectedfrom

Cornell.Andnumberseventy-threeonawaitinglistofseventy-fiveatWilliamand

Mary.

AcceptedtoUMass,mysafetyschool.Ididn'tdigesttherejections

immediately.ItouredtheUnitedNations,tooktrainhomeandwentbackto

school.ThenIrealizedthatotherpeoplehadgottenintoschoolstheyreallywanted

togoto.Uptothatpointinmyseventeenyears,Ihadn'treallyfailedatanything.1

gotgoodgrades,madetheschoolteamandscoredwellonmySATs.1hadn't

experiencedanymajordisappointmentsinmylife,nodeaths,nodisease,nodivorce,

nocavities(鵠齒)even.Sobeingrejectedseemeddisastrous.

IhadalwaysassumedI'dgotooneofthe"goodschools."1reallywantedtobe

chosen:Thisistheplaceforsmartpeople,andwewantyou.UMass,ontheother

hand,hadthereputationofbeingapartyschooltowhich,comeSeptember,I'dbe

headedwiththeguvwhosatnexttomeintenth-gradehistoryandwho,duringtests,

lefthisbookopenonthatfloorandturnedthepageswithhisfeet.

IdidnotgetactivelikemyfriendHeather,who,havingbeenrejectedbyherfirst

choice,madeILoveLucy-styleplanstodrivetotheDukecampuswithhersoccer

ballandherscience-fairprojecttoshowtheadmissionsboard(招生委員會(huì))exactly

whattheywererejecting.Isimplysaidthingslike,“Tvedecidedtogiveupthe

undergraduatedegreeandtakeacake-decoratingcourse.??Thesubtextinthiswas:

I'mstupid.Theworldisn'tfair.

注意：

(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右：

(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答

Iremainedbitteruntiloneday,myfathersatmedown.

Deeplytouchedbyhiswords,Ibegantoreassessmysituation.

01剖析語篇細(xì)節(jié)

對(duì)提示句Pl,P2做逐詞逐句的解讀，理解其背后深意；

回溯原文，找到對(duì)應(yīng)的文本，確定基本元素，時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，人物，所涉及的物品，

細(xì)節(jié)等信息；

試圖對(duì)時(shí)間線，地點(diǎn)線結(jié)合P1,P2的提示句，看是否有所變化，以確定是否需要

展開；

構(gòu)思情節(jié)

讀懂最后2段尤其是最后工段的信息，合理結(jié)合生活實(shí)際，構(gòu)思文章，并完成

confusion,frustration,setback,disappointment,annoyance,worries,

成長前的困擾

情境描寫+消極情緒的累積玲高潮

成長中的蛻變

成長的動(dòng)機(jī)+過程中變化的心情

成長后的升華

成長后的收獲+積極情緒（喜悅、滿足和驕傲等）

原文梳理

認(rèn)真梳理原文，增強(qiáng)語料積累

IwasinNewYorkCityonaschooltrip.Icalledhomefromapayphone,and

mylittlesister,Alex,saidfourenvelopeshadarrived:Georgetown,Cornell,

WilliamandMaryandtheUniversityofMassachusetts.Shethenopenedandread

themtomeinherten-year-oldvoice:"Weregretthatwedonothaveaplacefor

you.yRejectedfromGeorgetown."Youwereoneofmanyqualifiedcandidates.,y

RejectedfromCornell.Andnumberseventy-threeonawaitinglistofseventy-five

atWilliamandMary.

AcceptedtoUMass,mysafetyschool.Ididn'tdigestthe

rejectionsimmediately.ItouredtheUnitedNations,tooktrainhome

andwentbacktoschool.ThenIrealizedthatotherpeoplehadgotteninto

schoolstheyreallywantedtogoto.Uptothatpointinmyseventeenyears,Ihadn't

reallyfailedatanything.1gotgoodgrades,theschoolteamandscoredwellon

mySATs.Ihadn'texperiencedanymajordisappointmentsinmylife,nodeaths,

nodisease,nodivorce,nocavities（鵠齒）even.Sobeingrejected

seemeddisastrous（disaster）.

IhadalwaysassumedI'dgotooneofthe'“'goodschools.n1reallywanted

tobechosen:Thisistheplaceforsmartpeople,andwewantyou.UMass,onthe

otherhand,hadthereputationofbeingapartyschooltowhich,comeSeptember,I'd

beheadedwiththeguywhosatnexttomeintenth-gradehistoryandwho,during

tests,lefthisbookopenonthatfloorandturnedthepageswithhisfeet.

IdidnotgetactivelikemyfriendHeather,who,havingbeenrejectedbyherfirst

choice,madeILoveLucy-styleplanstodrivetotheDukecampuswithhersoccer

ballandherscience-fairprojecttoshowtheadmissionsboard（招生委員會(huì)）

exactlywhattheywererejecting.Isimplysaidthingslike,"I'vedecidedtogive

uptheundergraduatedegreeandtakeacake-decoratingcourse."Thesubtextin

thiswas:I'mstupid.Theworldisn'tfair.

短語和生詞

1.beonaschooltripbe+on+sth處于做某事的過程中；-近義短語：onafield

trip,duringaschoolexcursion

-例句：Wewenttothemuseumonaschooltriplastyear.

2.calledhome

-近義短語：phonedhome,contactedhome

-例句：Icalledhometocheckonmyfamily.

3.payphone

-生詞：付費(fèi)電話

-近義詞：publicphone,coin-operatedphone

-例句：Heusedapayphonetomakeacallsincehiscellphonedied.

4.Weregretthat...

-近義短語：Wearesorrythat...,Weapologizefor...

-例句：Weregretthatwecannotofferyouaplaceatthistime.

5.qualifiedcandidates

-近義短語：eligibleapplicants,suitablecandidates

-例句：Thereweremanyqualifiedcandidatesfortheposition.

6.safetyschool

-生詞［保底學(xué)校

-近義短語：backupschool,fallbackoption

-例句：UMasswashersafetyschool,butshestillappliedtoherdream

colleges.

7.digesttherejections

-生詞：消化拒絕

-近義短語：processtherejections,cometotermswiththerejections

-例句：Ittookhersometimetodigesttherejectionsfromhertopchoices.

8.madetheschoolteam

-近義短語：gotintotheschoolteam,wasselectedfortheschoolteam

-例句：Hemadetheschoolteamafterseveralroundsoftryouts.

9.majordisappointments

-近義短語：significantsetbacks,bigletdowns

-例句：Hehadneverfacedanymajordisappointmentsinlifeuntilnow.

10.failedatanything

-近義短語：experiencedfailure,fallenshort

-例句：Shehadneverfailedatanythingbefore,sotherejectionwashardto

accept.

11.oneofthe"goodschools"

-近義短語：oneoftheprestigiousschools,oneofthetopuniversities

-例句：Hedreamedofattendingoneofthe"goodschools"hisparentshad

mentioned.

12.partyschool

-生詞［以聚會(huì)聞名的學(xué)校

-近義短語：schoolwithapartyculture,socialschool

-例句：Theuniversityhadareputationasapartyschool,buthewasmore

focusedonacademics.

13.getactive

-近義短語：takeaction,becomeinvolved

-例句：Insteadoffeelingsorryforherself,shedecidedtogetactiveandpursue

otheroptions.

14.firstchoice

-近義短語：topchoice,preferredoption

-例句：Dukewasherfirstchoice,butshedidn'tgetin.

15.takeacake-decoratingcourse

-生詞［學(xué)習(xí)蛋糕裝飾課程

-近義短語：enrollinabakingcourse,takeaculinaryclass

-例句：Aftertherejection,shejokedabouttakingacake-decoratingcourse

insteadofgoingtocollege.

16.Theworldisn'tfair

-近義短語：Lifeisn'tfair,Thingsareunfair

-例句：Afterbeingrejected,hebitterlyremarked,nTheworldisn'tfair/

Iremainedbitteruntiloneday,myfathersatmedown.

原因狀語,heaskedwhatwastroublingme賓從?Iopenedmyheartto

him,pouringoutmyfrustrationsabouttherejectionsandmyfearsforthefuture定

語.“IalwaysthoughtI'dgetintooneofthegoodschools,Dad賓從.NowIfeellikea

failure,likeI'mnotgoodenough.'1Afterlistening

,myfatherremindedmeofallmyaccomplishments心ecountless

projectsIhadexcelledin,theteamsIhadled,andtheawardsIhadearned紅色定

從，黃色并列，形成排比感.Heconcluded

“Iunderstandhowpainfultheserejectionsfeel賓從，buttheyarenotareflectionof

yourworth.Iknowyouhavethestrengthtoovercomethischallenge,andIwillbe

heretosupportyoueverystepoftheway."

分詞短語做原因狀語,Ibegantoreassessmy

situation.Myfatherhelpedmerealizethatdwellingontherejections非謂語動(dòng)詞

短語做主語wouldonlyhindermefromreachingmyfullpotential.賓從True

successisnotdefinedbyprestige,butbyhowwerespondtolife's

challenges.Shiftingmymindsetfromself-pitytodetermination分詞短語做伴隨狀

,IdecidedtoembracetheopportunitiesattheUniversity

ofMassachusetts,knowingmyjourneywouldbeshapedbymywillingnessto

grow.Witharene、within.,Idivedintomy

studies,joinedcampusorganizations,anddiscoverednewpassionsthatenrichedmy

lifeinways[Ihadneverimagined]定從套定從.Theinitialdisappointment

soon女ooewaytoanticipationandexcitement.Lookin

,Iamforevergratefultomyfather/brhisunwaveringsupportand

wisdom,whichhavebeeninvaluableinshapingtheperson[Iamtoday】定從套定從.

短語和生詞

1.remainedbitter

-生詞：依然苦澀

-近義短語：stayedresentful,continuedtofeelbitter

-修！I句：Heremainedbitteraboutthesituationforalongtime.

2.satmedown

-近義短語：talkedtomeprivately,hadaseriousconversationwithme

-快！J句：Mymothersatmedowntodiscussmyfutureplans.

3.openedmyheart

-生詞：敞開心扉

-近義短語：sharedmyfeelings,confidedin

-例句：Sheopenedherhearttoherbestfriendaboutherstruggles.

4.pouredoutmyfrustrations

-近義短語：ventedmyfrustrations,expressedmyfrustrations

-例句：Hepouredouthisfrustrationsafterthedifficultweekatwork.

5.feellikeafailure

-生詞：感覺像個(gè)失敗者

-近義短語：thinkI'mafailure,believeI'vefailed

-快！]句：Afterlosingthegame,shefeltlikeafailure.

6.listeningattentively

-生詞：專心聆聽

-近義短語：payingcloseattention,listeningcarefully

-快！I句：Hewaslisteningattentivelytothespeaker'severyword.

7.painfulrejections

-近義短語：hurtfulrejections,difficultrejections

-例句：Thepainfulrejectionsfromuniversitiesmadehimdoubthisabilities.

8.reflectionofyourworth

-生詞：你價(jià)值的反映

-近義短語：measureofyourvalue,indicationofyourworth

-例句：Thesesetbacksarenotareflectionofyourworthasaperson.

9.overcomethischallenge

-近義短語：getpastthisobstacle,conquerthisdifficulty

-例句：Heknewhehadthestrengthtoovercomethischallenge.

10.supportyoueverystepoftheway

-生詞：全程支持你

-近義短語：bewithyouthroughout,helpyouthrougheverything

-例句：Filsupportyoueverystepoftheway,nomatterwhatyoudecide.

11.reassessmysituation

-近義短語：rethinkmyposition,reevaluatemysituation

-例句：Afterspeakingtohisfather,hebegantoreassesshissituation.

12.dwellingontherejections

-生詞：糾結(jié)于拒絕

-近義短語：focusingontherejections,obsessingovertherejections

-例句：Dwellingontherejectionswon'thelpyoumoveforward.

13.reachingmyfullpotential

-生詞：發(fā)揮我全部潛能

-近義短語：realizingmyfullpotential,achievingm