Unit4 解透單元寫作

2/2Unit4解透單元寫作主題寫作——逆境和勇氣1.寫作任務(wù)假設(shè)你是李華，受學(xué)生會(huì)委托為校宣傳欄“英語(yǔ)天地”寫一則通知，請(qǐng)大家觀看一部英文電影，主要內(nèi)容包括：（1）放映時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；（2）影片內(nèi)容；（3）歡迎對(duì)影片進(jìn)行評(píng)論。注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右；（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.寫作思路（1）一審：體裁、結(jié)構(gòu)與主題體裁：應(yīng)用文——通知第一段：基本信息及影片內(nèi)容介紹結(jié)構(gòu)：兩段第二段：電影評(píng)價(jià)及歡迎對(duì)影片進(jìn)行評(píng)論主題：觀影通知（2）二定：時(shí)態(tài)與人稱時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主人稱：第三人稱（3）三明確：寫作要點(diǎn)基本信息：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、影片內(nèi)容電影介紹：故事梗概電影評(píng)議：電影評(píng)價(jià)、歡迎發(fā)表評(píng)論3.素材整理（1）關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)beduetodosth.預(yù)計(jì)做某事theexpeditionto去……的探險(xiǎn)aftertenmonths’voyage在十個(gè)月的航行后becrushedintopieces被壓成碎片getoutofdanger擺脫危險(xiǎn)inthefaceofadversity面對(duì)逆境bebelievedto被認(rèn)為voiceone’sopinion發(fā)表某人的看法（2）完成句子①這部英語(yǔ)電影，預(yù)計(jì)將在周五下午2點(diǎn)在學(xué)校大廳放映。TheEnglishfilm________________________________________at2pmonFridayattheschoolhall.②它講述了由著名的歐內(nèi)斯特沙克爾頓爵士帶領(lǐng)遠(yuǎn)征南極的故事。Itdepictsthethe________________SouthPole________________thefamousSirErnestShackleton.③不幸的是，經(jīng)過(guò)十個(gè)月的航行后，他們的船被冰擠壓成了碎片，他們不得不放棄船只。________,aftertenmonths’________,theirship________________intopiecesbyiceandtheyhadto________it.④正是船員們?cè)诿鎸?duì)逆境時(shí)的堅(jiān)持、忍耐力和決心拯救了他們。Itwasthecrewmembers’________,________and________inthefaceof________________savedthem.⑤人們認(rèn)為這部電影很有教育意義并且非常精彩。Thefilm________________________be________andwonderful.⑥看完電影后，歡迎所有學(xué)生發(fā)表對(duì)這部電影的看法。Allthestudentsarewelcometo________________________aboutthefilm________seeingthefilm.答案：①isduetobeshown②expeditionto,ledby③Unfortunately,voyage,wascrushed,abandon④perseverance,endurance,resolution,adversitythat⑤isbelievedto,instructive⑥voicetheiropinions,after4.高分作文NOTICEAnEnglishfilm,TheEndurance：Shackleton’sLegendaryAntarcticExpedition,isduetobeshownat2pmonFridayattheschoolhall.ItdepictstheexpeditiontotheSouthPoleledbythefamousSirErnestShackleton.In1914,ShackletonsailedtowardstheSouthPolebutunfortunately,aftertenmonths’voyage,theirshipwascrushedintopiecesbyiceandtheyhadtoabandonit.Theyfinallysucceededingettingoutofdangerin1916.Itwasthecrewmembers’perseverance,enduranceandresolutioninthefaceofadversitythatsavedthem.Thefilmisbelievedtobeinstructiveandwonderful.Allthestudentsarewelcometovoicetheiropinionsaboutthefilmafterseeingthefilm.TheStudents’Union5.佳作背誦（1）佳作一假設(shè)你是校學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，你校將舉辦一次主題為“逆境和勇氣”的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)你給外籍教師史密斯太太寫封信，邀請(qǐng)她擔(dān)任演講比賽的評(píng)委。主要內(nèi)容包括：①寫信目的；②演講比賽舉辦的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和主題；③注意問(wèn)題。注意：①詞數(shù)80左右；②可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMrs.Smith,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaOnepossibleversion：DearMrs.Smith,AnEnglishspeechcontest,themed“AdversityandPerseverance”,willtakeplaceinourschool.Isincerelyinviteyoutoserveasajudge.Thecontestwillbeheldintheschoolhallfrom2to5pmonJune15.Tenqualifiedcandidateswilltakepart.Youarerequiredtoprovideathoroughanddetailedassessmentoftheirspeech.Besides,specificguidanceisalsowhatwearereallyexpected.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldbepresent.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua（2）佳作二假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Peter非常喜愛看小說(shuō)，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封電子郵件，向他介紹一本你最喜歡的小說(shuō)。主要內(nèi)容包括：①小說(shuō)名稱；②小說(shuō)內(nèi)容；③對(duì)你的影響。注意：①詞數(shù)80左右；②開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearPeter,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaOnepossibleversion：DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?I’dliketosharewithyoumyfavoritenovel.ThenovelisTheOldManandtheSea,tellingaboutanoldfishermanwhoneverabandonshishopeandfightswithgreatenduranceandperseverance.Althoughfinallyhefails,hisoptimisticattitudeandspiritofnevergivingupreallycount.Thenovelteachesmealot.Ishouldbeconfidentwhateveradversitymaylieahead.AslongasIpersevere,nothingcanpreventmegoingahead.Whataboutyou?Yours,LiHua【附】話題寫作常用表達(dá)和句型1.Itwastheirperseveranceandenduranceinthefaceofadversitythathelpedthemsucceedintheend.正是他們?cè)诿鎸?duì)逆境時(shí)的堅(jiān)持和忍耐力幫助他們最終獲得成功。2.Nodifficultycannotbeovercomeaslongaswehavefaithinourselves.只要我們自己有信念，沒有什么困難克服不了。3.Weareconvincedthat,wherethereisawill,thereisaway.我們相信，有志者事竟成。4.Oncewehavemadethedecision，wearesupposedtosparenoeffortstoachieveit.一旦我們做出決定，我們應(yīng)該不遺余力地去實(shí)現(xiàn)它。5.Thesecretofsuccessistosticktoyourgoalsandbeliefs.成功的秘訣在于堅(jiān)持自己的目標(biāo)和信念。6.Whateveradversitymaylieahead，aslongasIpersevere，nothingcanstopmefromgoingahead.無(wú)論前方有多困難，只要我堅(jiān)持下去，沒有什么可以阻止我前行。7.Thestorydepictsanoldmanwhoneverabandonshishopeandfightsagainstadversitywithgreaten