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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Iwasnever“thatgirl”—theonewhohadcharmingappearance,andwhoenjoyedacolorfulsociallife.Iwasanothergirlentirely,onewhowasconsidered“nicegirls”,andthetopstudentinclass.NotthatIdidn’tcareaboutfriendsorfun,Ijustdidn’tthinkitwasworthputtinglotsoftimeandeffortintochanginghowIlooked,howIacted,evenasIstartedhighschool.Marissawas“thatgirl”—funtobearound,goodtoknow.Wearedifferent,butourfriendshipbeganthefirsttimewemetatanexcitingsoccermatch,ontheseconddayoffreshmenyear.Theexcitementofthegameandoursharedinterestinsoccerconnectedus,Iwasdeeplyimpressedwithherenthusiasm,whilesheadmiredmycalm.Ourconversationswentsmoothly,andourrelationshipquicklyturnedintoaclosebond.However,astheschoolyearprogressed,Marissa’soutgoingpersonalitybegantoconflictwithmyreservednature.Shestoodoutinsocialsituations,constantlyaskingmetoattendpartiesandsocialevents.WhileIappreciatedhereffortstoincludeme,Ifeltawkwardanduncomfortabletobeforcedintounfamiliarsurroundings.Ouronceharmoniousfriendshipstartedtocrack,Itriedtoturndownherinvitations,butinvain.Oneevening,Marissapersuadedmetoattendalargepartyataclassmate’shouse.Surroundedbyloudmusicandstrangefaces,Ifeltuneasyandupset.Marissawasthequeenoftheparty,leavingmefeelingextremelylonely.Herpersonalityattractedotherstoher,creatingabarrierbetweenus.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Atthatmoment,Irealizedthegrowingdividebetweenus.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Sincethen,weworkedtogethertofindabalanceofourpersonalities._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:“我”是個(gè)內(nèi)向的學(xué)霸,而Marissa是個(gè)外向受歡迎的女孩,我們因一場(chǎng)足球賽結(jié)緣成為好友。但隨著時(shí)間推移,性格差異使我們的友誼出現(xiàn)裂痕,Marissa常邀“我”參加社交活動(dòng),讓“我”感到不適,在一次派對(duì)上,“我”倍感孤獨(dú),這讓“我”意識(shí)到我們之間的隔閡在加深。5處伏筆及續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)伏筆:“我”和Marissa性格迥異,“我”內(nèi)向,Marissa外向。回應(yīng):在續(xù)寫(xiě)中,我們通過(guò)坦誠(chéng)交流,互相理解并接納對(duì)方的性格。“我”嘗試克服內(nèi)心的不安,參加一些小型聚會(huì),而Marissa也會(huì)陪“我”去圖書(shū)館等安靜的地方,兩人找到性格互補(bǔ)的相處方式,使友誼更加穩(wěn)固,不再因性格差異而產(chǎn)生沖突。伏筆:Marissa常邀“我”參加社交活動(dòng),“我”雖感激但內(nèi)心抗拒。回應(yīng):Marissa意識(shí)到這一點(diǎn)后,在組織活動(dòng)時(shí)會(huì)更加考慮“我”的感受,選擇一些更安靜、氛圍更舒適的場(chǎng)合,或者提前告知“我”活動(dòng)的具體情況,讓“我”有心理準(zhǔn)備,從而不再讓“我”感到被強(qiáng)迫和不自在,增進(jìn)了彼此的信任和理解。伏筆:在派對(duì)上“我”感到孤獨(dú),凸顯兩人之間的隔閡?;貞?yīng):事后“我”向Marissa傾訴內(nèi)心感受,她表示理解并道歉,這一情節(jié)成為我們修復(fù)友誼的契機(jī),讓我們更加珍惜彼此,學(xué)會(huì)站在對(duì)方角度思考問(wèn)題,避免類(lèi)似情況再次發(fā)生,使友誼得以升華。伏筆:“我”一開(kāi)始認(rèn)為外貌和社交生活不值得花費(fèi)時(shí)間精力改變,暗示“我”對(duì)自身性格和生活方式的堅(jiān)持?;貞?yīng):在尋找相處平衡的過(guò)程中,“我”雖然有所改變,但也保留了自己的本真,Marissa也尊重“我”的選擇,沒(méi)有強(qiáng)行改變“我”,而是共同探索適合兩人的相處模式,體現(xiàn)了友誼中的相互尊重和包容。伏筆:兩人因足球賽結(jié)緣,最初相處和諧,為后面友誼的修復(fù)和升華做鋪墊?;貞?yīng):后來(lái)我們會(huì)一起回憶起初次見(jiàn)面的場(chǎng)景,重溫當(dāng)時(shí)的快樂(lè)和默契,這讓我們更加堅(jiān)定要維護(hù)好這份友誼,也意識(shí)到彼此的友誼基礎(chǔ)深厚,即使遇到困難,也能通過(guò)溝通和理解克服,使友誼更加長(zhǎng)久。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)情感線(xiàn):第一段:“我”起初因意識(shí)到與Marissa的隔閡而內(nèi)心痛苦、失落,對(duì)友誼的未來(lái)感到迷茫和擔(dān)憂(yōu),甚至有些生氣和埋怨,但同時(shí)也有一絲不舍和期待,希望能挽救這段友誼。第二段:從決定修復(fù)友誼開(kāi)始,我們逐漸變得更加包容、理解和信任對(duì)方,內(nèi)心充滿(mǎn)溫暖和欣慰,對(duì)友誼的發(fā)展充滿(mǎn)信心和期待,感受到彼此的成長(zhǎng)和友誼的升華。故事線(xiàn):第一段:“我”悄悄離開(kāi)派對(duì),回家后心情沉重,思考著是否要與Marissa談?wù)勎覀兊挠颜x。幾天后,“我”鼓起勇氣約她見(jiàn)面,坦誠(chéng)地說(shuō)出在派對(duì)上的感受以及這段時(shí)間內(nèi)心的掙扎,擔(dān)心我們的友誼無(wú)法繼續(xù)。Marissa聽(tīng)后十分震驚和自責(zé),她表示沒(méi)有意識(shí)到自己的行為給“我”帶來(lái)這么大的傷害。第二段:我們約定以后要更加坦誠(chéng)地交流彼此的感受和需求。Marissa會(huì)在邀請(qǐng)“我”參加活動(dòng)前,先詢(xún)問(wèn)“我”的意愿,并選擇一些更合適的場(chǎng)合。“我”也會(huì)努力克服自己的內(nèi)向,嘗試參加一些小型的聚會(huì),和Marissa一起享受社交的樂(lè)趣。同時(shí),我們也會(huì)保留各自的空間,做自己喜歡的事情,如一起看足球賽、“我”教Marissa學(xué)習(xí)功課等,讓友誼在相互尊重和理解的基礎(chǔ)上更加穩(wěn)固和美好。主旨升華句Truefriendshipisn'taboutbeingthesame,butaboutacceptingandlovingeachother'sdifferences,andgrowingtogetherthroughthechallenges.(真正的友誼不在于彼此相同,而在于接受和喜愛(ài)對(duì)方的差異,并在挑戰(zhàn)中共同成長(zhǎng)。)Inthejourneyoffriendship,weoftenencounterbumpsandturns.Butitisthroughthesetrialsthatwelearnthevalueofunderstanding,compromise,andthebeautyofabondthatcanwithstandthetestofourdiverseselves.(在友誼的旅程中,我們常常會(huì)遇到坎坷和曲折。但正是通過(guò)這些考驗(yàn),我們才懂得理解、妥協(xié)的價(jià)值,以及一種能夠經(jīng)受住我們不同自我考驗(yàn)的紐帶之美。)Thecracksinourfriendshipbecametheopeningsfornewgrowthanddeeperconnection.Wediscoveredthatwhenwearebraveenoughtofacethetruthandworktogether,wecanbuildabridgethatspansoverourdifferencesandleadsustoamorefulfillingandlastingrelationship.(我們友誼中的裂痕成為了新的成長(zhǎng)和更深層次聯(lián)系的契機(jī)。我們發(fā)現(xiàn),當(dāng)我們足夠勇敢地面對(duì)真相并共同努力時(shí),我們可以搭建一座跨越差異的橋梁,引領(lǐng)我們走向一種更充實(shí)、更持久的關(guān)系。)Friendshipislikeadelicateflowerthatneedsbothsunshineandraintobloom.Ourdifferencesweretherain,andoureffortstounderstandandaccepteachotherwerethesunshine,allowingourfriendshiptoblossomintosomethingmorebeautifulandresilientthaneverbefore.(友誼就像一朵嬌嫩的花朵,需要陽(yáng)光和雨水才能綻放。我們的差異是雨水,而我們努力理解和接受對(duì)方就是陽(yáng)光,使我們的友誼綻放出比以往任何時(shí)候都更美麗、更有韌性的花朵。)Insteadoflettingourdifferencesdriveusapart,wechosetoletthembringuscloser.Welearnedthatinthetapestryoffriendship,everythread,nomatterhowdifferent,weavestogethertocreateauniqueandpreciouspatternthatenrichesourlivesinwayswecouldneverhaveimagined.(我們沒(méi)有讓差異使我們分開(kāi),而是選擇讓它們使我們更親近。我們懂得了在友誼的織錦中,每一根線(xiàn),無(wú)論多么不同,都交織在一起,創(chuàng)造出一種獨(dú)特而珍貴的圖案,以我們從未想象過(guò)的方式豐富著我們的生活。)寫(xiě)作示范第一篇Paragraph1:
Atthatmoment,Irealizedthegrowingdividebetweenus.Iquietlyslippedoutoftheparty,myheartheavywithdisappointmentandconfusion.Onmywayhome,Icouldn'thelpbutquestionwhetherourfriendshipwasdoomedtofail.Fordays,IavoidedMarissa,unsureofhowtoaddresstheissue.ButthethoughtoflosingherasafriendmademesadderthantheawkwardnessIfeltatthoseparties.Finally,Igatheredthecouragetoaskhertomeetmeatourfavoritecoffeeshop.Withatremblingvoice,ItoldherhowIhadfeltleftoutanduncomfortableattheparty,andhowIfearedourfriendshipwasslippingaway.Marissa'seyeswidenedinsurpriseandthenfilledwithremorse.Paragraph2:
Sincethen,weworkedtogethertofindabalanceofourpersonalities.Marissabecamemoremindfulofmyfeelingsandstartedsuggestingquieterget-togethers,likemovienightsathomeorwalksinthepark.I,inturn,madeanefforttostepoutofmycomfortzoneandjoinherforsomeofthesmallersocialeventssheorganized.Wealsodiscoverednewsharedintereststhatdidn'trequireabigcrowd,suchaspaintingclassesandvolunteeringatthelocalanimalshelter.Ourfriendshipgrewdeeperandmoremeaningfulaswelearnedtoappreciateandcelebrateeachother'suniqueness.Werealizedthattruefriendshipisn'taboutconformingtoeachother'slifestylesbutaboutsupportingandlovingoneanotherthroughalloflife'sadventures.第二篇Paragraph1:
Atthatmoment,Irealizedthegrowingdividebetweenus.Ifeltapangoflonelinessandsadnesswashoverme.Standinginthecornerofthenoisyroom,IwatchedMarissalaughandchatwithothers,andIknewIcouldn'tcontinuelikethis.Thenextdayatschool,Iwasdistanttowardsher,notknowinghowtohandlethesituation.Marissanoticedmycoldnessandconfrontedme.Ifinallyblurtedoutmyfeelings,tearswellingupinmyeyes.ItoldherthatwhileIcherishedourfriendship,Icouldn'tkeepupwithhersocialwhirlwind.Marissawastakenaback,butshelistenedintently.Paragraph2:
Sincethen,weworkedtogethertofindabalanceofourpersonalities.Wedecidedtohave"friendshipdays"wherewewouldalternatechoosingtheactivity.Oneweek,Marissatookmetoasmallconcertofalocalbandsheloved,andthenext,Iintroducedhertothepeacefulworldofthelibrary'sreadingnook.Wealsomadeapacttocommunicateopenlyandhonestlyaboutourfeelingsbeforeanysocialevent.Slowly,thetensionbetweenusdissolved,andourfriendshipbecamestronger.Welearnedthatbyrespectingandunderstandingeachother'sdifferences,wecouldcreateafriendshipthatwasbothcomfortableandexciting.Wewerenolongertryingtofitintoeachother'smoldsbutwerebuildingauniquebondthatcelebrate
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