2025屆高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習+一塊巧克力引發(fā)的道德掙扎之旅+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習一塊巧克力引發(fā)的道德掙扎之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Ihavealwaysbeenfondofallsortsofchocolates,especiallybitterbakingchocolate.Mymotherhadpurchasedabarofit,andsomehow,Icouldn’tgetitoutofmymind.Iwasassistingmyfatheronthefarm.Justthen,anideastruckme.Icouldcutoffachunk(厚塊)ofthechocolate.Mymotherwouldsurelynoticeit,butbeforeshediscoveredwhohaddoneit,IcouldadmitthatIhadtakenit.Probably,Imightnotevenreceiveaspanking(打屁股).Iwaiteduntilmymotherwentouttofeedthechickens.Then,ItoldmyfatherthatIwouldgoinsideforsomewater.ItookdownthebarandwasabouttocutitwhenIheardmymothercomingback.Ireactedswiftly,slippingthechocolateintomypocketandrunningout.Beforereturningtohelpmyfather,Iwenttothebarnandhidthechocolatethere.4續(xù)寫原文Onmywayout,Icalmeddownabitandcouldthinkmoreclearly.ItoldmyselfthatIhadn’tactuallystolentheentirebarofchocolatebecauseIonlyintendedtotakeasmallpiece.IfIputthewholebarback,Iwouldn’thavedoneanythingwrong.Ialmostdecidedtoputitallback.Butjustthinkingaboutthatchocolatemademytonguealmosttasteitssmoothbitterness.IstartedthinkingthatifIslicedabouthalfaninchofftheendwithasharpknife,mymothermightnevernoticeit.Suddenly,Irememberedwhatmyfatherhadsaidonce—someofthefamilymoneywasminebecauseIhadhelpedearnit.Whywouldn’titbeokaytothinkthatthebarofchocolatehadbeenboughtwithmyownmoney?Thatseemedtofixeverything.5段首句Paragraph1：ThatnightIcouldn’tsleep,wonderinghowIcouldmakeitsecretly.Paragraph2：Bymoonlight,justasIwasabouttocutit,myfathersaid.“Son!”6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了“我”一直鐘情于苦烘焙巧克力，看到母親買的巧克力后便心生貪念。在幫父親干農(nóng)活時，“我”想趁母親喂雞時偷切一塊巧克力，可剛拿到還沒來得及切就被母親回來打斷，“我”匆忙將巧克力藏到谷倉。之后“我”內(nèi)心開始掙扎，先是安慰自己只拿一小塊不算偷，后來又想用父親說自己掙錢的話來合理化拿巧克力的行為，在欲望與道德之間來回拉扯，不知最終是否會真的偷吃巧克力，陷入了糾結(jié)的境地。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：ThatnightIcouldn’tsleep,wonderinghowIcouldmakeitsecretly.那個夜晚，我躺在床上輾轉(zhuǎn)反側(cè)，腦海中不斷浮現(xiàn)出巧克力那絲滑的苦味和醇厚的口感，心心念念著怎樣才能神不知鬼不覺地將其據(jù)為己有。月光如水，透過窗戶灑在屋內(nèi)，像是在為我的“行動”提供掩護。我悄悄起身，輕手輕腳地走向藏著巧克力的谷倉，心臟砰砰直跳，緊張得手心都冒出了汗。好不容易來到谷倉，我顫抖著雙手拿出巧克力和小刀，深吸一口氣，正要將刀落下，把那朝思暮想的一小塊切下來時，突然，窗外傳來了一絲細微的聲響，讓我瞬間僵在了原地，心也提到了嗓子眼兒。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Bymoonlight,justasIwasabouttocutit,myfathersaid.“Son!”就在這千鈞一發(fā)之際，父親那低沉而熟悉的聲音在我耳邊響起：“兒子！”這一聲仿佛一道驚雷，將我從那被欲望驅(qū)使的混沌中驚醒。我驚恐地轉(zhuǎn)過頭，看到月光下父親那高大的身影，他的眼神中似乎帶著洞察一切的銳利。我嚇得手一哆嗦，刀和巧克力差點掉落在地，臉上一陣發(fā)燙，羞愧得恨不得找個地縫鉆進去。我知道，自己那點小心思在父親面前無所遁形。父親緩緩向我走來，我的心也隨之沉到了谷底，不知道接下來等待我的會是什么，是嚴厲的斥責，還是深刻的教誨……11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)ThatnightItossedandturnedinbed,mymindconsumedwiththoughtsofthatbarofchocolatehiddeninthebarn.Imagesofitsrich,darksurfaceandthesmoothbitternessthatawaitedmytastebudsdancedbeforemyeyes.Iplannedeverydetailmeticulously,envisioningmyselfsneakingoutofthehouseunderthecoverofdarkness.Themoonlightwouldbemyaccomplice,guidingmywaytothebarn.IrehearsedhowIwouldquietlyretrievethechocolatefromitshidingplaceand,withasharpknifeIhadsecretlytakenfromthekitchen,carefullysliceoffapiecejustsmallenoughthatmymothermightnotnoticeitsabsence.Myheartracedwithamixtureofexcitementandguilt,buttheallureofthechocolatewastoostrong,andsleepeludedmeasIwaitedfortherightmomenttoexecutemyplan.13范文呈現(xiàn)Bymoonlight,justasIwasabouttocutit,myfathersaid.“Son!”Hisvoicecutthroughthesilencelikeaknife,startlingmesomuchthatInearlydroppedthechocolateandtheknife.Myhandstrembled,andmyfaceflushedwithshame.Islowlyturnedaroundtofacehim,myeyesdowncast,unabletomeethisgaze.IknewIhadbeencaughtred-handed,andallmyelaborateplanshadcomecrashingdown.Therewasalong,heavysilenceasIwaitedforhimtospeak.Iexpectedascolding,oratleastasternlectureabouthonestyandrightandwrong.Butinstead,hejuststoodthere,lookingatmewithamixtureofdisappointmentandunderstanding.Itwasthatlookthatmademefeelevenworsethananypunishmenthecouldhavegivenme.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Lyinginbedthatnight,mymindwasobsessivelyoccupiedbythebarofchocolatestashedawayinthebarn.Thepicturesofitssumptuousdarksurfaceandthesilkybitternessthatwassettotitillatemytastebudswereconstantlyparadingbeforeme.Everysingledetailhadbeenpainstakinglyplanned.Visualizingmyselfstealingoutofthehouseunderthecoverofthemoonlessnight,withthemoonlightactingasmyaccomplice,Irehearsedhowtoquietlyextractthechocolatefromitshidingplace.Armedwithasharpknifeprocuredfurtivelyfromthekitchen,Iwasonthevergeofslicingoffapiecesodiminutivethatitcouldpotentiallyeludemymother'snotice.Myheartwasthumpingwildly,atempestuousblendofexcitementandguiltchurningwithinme.Theirresistibleallureofthechocolateheldmeinitsthrall,andthus,sleepevadedmeasIimpatientlyawaitedtheopportunemomenttoexecutemysurreptitiousplan.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Underthepalemoonlight,justasthebladewasabouttomakecontactwiththechocolate,outofthebluecamemyfather'svoice,"Son!"Itcleavedthroughthestillnesslikeaboltoflightning,startlingmetosuchanextentthatthechocolateandtheknifenearlyslippedfrommygrasp.Myhandswerequivering,andaflushofshamesuffusedmycheeks.Slowly,Iwheeledaroundtoconfronthim,myeyesdowncast,