Unit5Wildanimals-【同步寫作課】2023-2024學(xué)年八年級(jí)英語(yǔ)上冊(cè)單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)(牛津譯林版)(原卷版+解析)

Unit5Wildanimals單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度倡議書：保護(hù)野生瀕危動(dòng)物說(shuō)明野生瀕危動(dòng)物現(xiàn)狀和保護(hù)措施本單元的話題是“野生動(dòng)物”，主要介紹野生瀕危動(dòng)物，包括介紹瀕危動(dòng)物的體型特征、生活習(xí)性和目前現(xiàn)狀、保護(hù)措施等相關(guān)內(nèi)容。在具體的寫作中，學(xué)生應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.能夠正確拼寫描述頻危動(dòng)物的相關(guān)詞匯；2.能夠恰當(dāng)使用相關(guān)短語(yǔ)和句型表達(dá)；3.能夠正確使用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞、動(dòng)詞不定式的表達(dá)?！驹~匯積累】Wildanimals：1. 鶴2. 麻雀3. 天鵝4. 鷹5. 海豚6. 松鼠7. 斑馬8. 編蝠9. 蜜蜂10. 狼Looks：1. 毛發(fā)2. 爪3. 尾巴4. 羽毛5. 骨頭6. 皮膚7. 象牙【短語(yǔ)積累】 想生活在野外 野生動(dòng)物 成為餐桌上的菜 隨時(shí) 同情它們 處境危險(xiǎn) 跑得非?？? 動(dòng)物世界之王 看起來(lái)很可愛(ài) 只有10天大 出生 不再是個(gè)小寶寶 體重超過(guò)了35千克 一開始 喝母乳 面臨嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題 在野外 主要以食用一種特殊種類的竹子為生 變得越來(lái)越小 結(jié)果 采取行動(dòng) 立刻 建立更多的熊貓保護(hù)區(qū) 制定法律來(lái)保護(hù)大熊貓 需要為大熊貓做些事情 在他們的一生中 生病 半年后 出生時(shí) 跳來(lái)跳去 互相玩耍 可以看到、聽到和聞到很遠(yuǎn)的東西 能不停地跑數(shù)小時(shí) 從不為取樂(lè)而捕殺 失去生存區(qū)域 對(duì)人類有危險(xiǎn) 失去他們的生命 不再買毛皮大衣 行動(dòng)起來(lái)保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物 需要我們的保護(hù) 不應(yīng)該因?yàn)槿魏卫碛啥鴼⑺浪鼈? 跑得快 能游泳和攀爬 喜歡單獨(dú)生活 厚的皮毛 多數(shù)吃肉和魚 吃植物和昆蟲 有大大的身體 寬大的腳掌 擅長(zhǎng)攀爬和游泳 在四周慢慢地活動(dòng) 在白天 冬眠 采取行動(dòng)來(lái)阻止這件事 沒(méi)有熊剩下 加入我們 滅絕 嚴(yán)重的局面 因……殺害……【句型積累】1.Lions

are

the

kings

of

the

animal

world.

獅子是動(dòng)物界的王者。

2.Could

/

Would

/

Will

you

please

(not

)

do

….?

請(qǐng)你（不要）做….，好嗎？

3.They

may

become

dishes

on

the

table

any

time.他們可能隨時(shí)會(huì)成為餐桌上的菜肴。

4.I

think

so.

我認(rèn)為是的。

5.I

don’t

think

so.

我認(rèn)為不是這樣。

6.When

Xi

Wang

was

born,

she

weighed

just

100

grams

and

looked

like

a

white

mouse.

希望出生時(shí)僅重100克，看起來(lái)像只白鼠。

7.When

she

was

20

months

old,

she

learnt

to

look

after

herself.她20個(gè)月時(shí)學(xué)會(huì)了照顧自己。

8.It

is

very

difficult

for

pandas

to

have

babies.

大熊貓很難有幼崽。

9.Also,

giant

pandas

live

mainly

on

a

special

kind

of

bamboo.此外，大熊貓主要以一種特殊的竹子為生。

10.However,

the

bamboo

forests

are

becoming

smaller

and

smaller.

然而竹林正變得越來(lái)越小。

11.If

we

do

nothing,

soon

there

may

be

none

left!

如果我們什么都不做，不久可能就一只也不剩了。

12.However,

we

do

believe

that

where

there

is

Xi

Wang,

there

is

hope.

然而，我們相信，哪里有希望，哪里就有希望13.The

bamboo

forests

are

very

important

to

them.

竹林對(duì)他們非常重要。14.They

may

be

playing

with

each

other.

他們可能正互相玩耍。

15.Bees

always

remember

to

come

back

the

same

way

as

they

went.

蜜蜂總是記得按原路返回。

16.Tigers

like

to

live

alone.

老虎喜歡獨(dú)居。

17.Tigers

can

run

for

hours

without

stopping.

老虎能夠跑數(shù)小時(shí)而不停止。

18.It’s

a

great

pity!

/

What

a

pity!

太遺憾/可惜了！

19.They

have

feelings

of

happiness

and

sadness.

他們有高興和傷心的感覺(jué)。

20.We

should

not

kill

them

for

any

reason.

我們不應(yīng)該因任何原因殺害它們。

21.We

hope

you

can

accept

our

invitation

and

join

us.

我們希望你能接受我們的邀請(qǐng)并加入我們。

22.Otherwise,

there

may

be

no

bears

left

in

the

world.

否則世界上可能不會(huì)有熊剩下了。

=Otherwise，maybe

there

will

be

no

bears

left

in

the

world.

23.We

shouldn'tt

buy

fur

coatsany

more.

我們?cè)僖膊粦?yīng)該買皮外套了。

【諺語(yǔ)積累】1.Toprotectanimalsistoprotectourselves!保護(hù)動(dòng)物就是保護(hù)我們自己！2.Lovelife,stopkilling,wehaveacommonearth.關(guān)愛(ài)生命，停止殺戮,我們擁有一個(gè)共同的地球。3.Don'tletmanbethelastanimal.不要讓人類成為最后一種動(dòng)物。4.Treatanimalswell,liveinharmony!善待動(dòng)物,和諧生存!【萬(wàn)能寫作模板】介紹動(dòng)物體形特征...arebigandheavy/strong/small/lovely/cute.Theyhave....介紹動(dòng)物體形特征Their...are....介紹動(dòng)物的生活習(xí)性Theyeatmeat/fish/plants/insects.Theycan....介紹動(dòng)物的生活習(xí)性Theyaregoodat....Theyseldom/often...介紹目前現(xiàn)狀和改善舉措介紹目前現(xiàn)狀和改善舉措Peoplecatch/hunt...for....Asthesayinggoes...Weshouldtakeactionto....（2023春·山東泰安·九年級(jí)校考階段練習(xí)）5月22日是世界野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)日，某英文雜志正在征集保護(hù)動(dòng)物方面的文章，你對(duì)此很感興趣，上網(wǎng)了解到國(guó)寶級(jí)保護(hù)動(dòng)物金絲猴也被列為瀕危動(dòng)物，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇介紹金絲猴的英語(yǔ)短文投稿，并呼吁大家保護(hù)金絲猴。名稱：金絲猴(goldenmonkey)居住地：中國(guó)西南地區(qū)外貌：身體瘦長(zhǎng)，尾巴與體長(zhǎng)相當(dāng)，毛灰黃色。生活習(xí)性：群居；吃昆蟲(insects)、鳥，樹葉、水果等瀕危原因：由于濫伐森林(deforestation)，它們的居住地遭到破壞；人類獵殺獲取它們的毛皮(fur)，數(shù)量減少要求：1.內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含提示中的所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意通順、連貫；3.詞數(shù)不少于100，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。GoldenmonkeysareaChinesetreasure(珍寶).MostofthemliveinSouthwestChina.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

GoldenmonkeysareaChinesetreasure(珍寶).MostofthemliveinSouthwestChina.

Goldenmonkeysareverycutewithgoldenhair.Theirtailsarealmostaslongastheirbodies.Theyliveintheforestsormountainsingroups.Goldenmonkeysloveeatingleaves,flowers,andfruits.Sometimes,theyeatinsectsandbirds.

Butnow,goldenmonkeysareoneoftheanimalsindanger.Humanbeingskillthemfortheirfur.Theirlivingplacesarebecomingfewerandfewerbecauseofdeforestation.

AsfarasIamconcerned,animalsarehumanbeings’bestfriends.It’sreallyimportantforustoprotectthem.Ourgovernmenthassetupmanynaturereservestoprotectthem.Wecanalsotryourbesttoprotecttheenvironment.

Ihopetherewillbemoreandmoregoldenmonkeysinthefuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第三人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹金絲猴的外貌和生活習(xí)性；第二步，介紹金絲猴的瀕危原因；第三步，最后表達(dá)自己的看法[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①indanger處于危險(xiǎn)中②becauseof因?yàn)棰踑sfarasIamconcerned就我而言[高分句型]①It’sreallyimportantforustoprotectthem.（動(dòng)詞不定式作主語(yǔ)）②Ourgovernmenthassetupmanynaturereservestoprotectthem.（動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)）③Ihopetherewillbemoreandmoregoldenmonkeysinthefuture.（省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句）一、中譯英。（翻譯要點(diǎn)：先判斷句子：主謂賓還是主系表，有形容詞的句子大多是主系表）1.它們有龐大的身體、又短又壯的腿和大爪子。_______________________________________________________2.大多數(shù)熊吃肉和魚,但一些也吃植物和昆蟲。_______________________________________________________3.非常遺憾的是許多野生動(dòng)物沒(méi)有足夠的食物吃。_______________________________________________________4.想到瀕危動(dòng)物就令人難過(guò)。_______________________________________________________5.不幸的是,許多獵人捕獲熊以獲取它們的毛皮和爪子。_______________________________________________________6.我們應(yīng)該采取行動(dòng)阻止這種行為。_______________________________________________________7.否則,世界上可能一只熊也不剩了。_______________________________________________________【答案】1.Theyhavelargebodies,shortandstronglegsandlargepaws.2.Mostbearseatmeatand(4)fishbutsomealsoeatplantsand(5)insects.3.It’sapitythatmanywildanimalsdon’thaveenoughfoodtoeat.4.It’ssadtothinkoftheanimalsindanger.5.Sadly,manyhunterscatchbearsfortheirfurandpaws.6.Weshouldtakeactiontostopthis.7.Otherwise,theremaybenobearsleftintheworld.二、英漢互譯。Hello!WearestudentsfromThailand,andwewanttosavetheelephants.1.TheelephantisoneofThailand’ssymbols.Ourfirstflaghadawhiteelephantonit.Thisisasymbolofgoodluck.2.大象是聰明的動(dòng)物。Theycanplaysoccerormusic.Theycanalsodrawwell.Peoplesaythat“anelephantneverforgets”.3.Elephantscanwalkforalongtimeandnevergetlost.Theycanalsorememberplaceswithfoodandwater.Thishelpsthemtolive.4.但大象正處于極大危險(xiǎn)之中。Peoplecutdownmanytreessoelephantsarelosingtheirhomes.Peoplealsokillelephantsfortheirivory.Todaythereareonlyabout3,000elephants.5.Wemustsavethetreesandnotbuythingsmadeofivory.RememberthatMarch13thisThaiElephantDay.1．2．3．4．5．【答案】1．大象是泰國(guó)的象征之一。2．Elephantsaresmartanimals.3．大象能夠長(zhǎng)時(shí)間行走而且從不迷路。4．Butelephantsareingreatdanger.5．我們必須拯救樹木，且不買象牙制品。（一）（2022春·廣東廣州·八年級(jí)?？计谥校┘僭O(shè)你是一只華南虎（SouthChinatiger），請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下檔案，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語(yǔ)自我介紹。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）（2022春·河南商丘·七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）動(dòng)物是人類的好朋友，但很多動(dòng)物瀕臨滅絕?，F(xiàn)學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)刊就此話題向?qū)W生發(fā)起征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇文章。提示：1）選擇一種瀕危動(dòng)物進(jìn)行描述（外貌、習(xí)性）；2）該種動(dòng)物瀕臨滅絕的原因；3）拯救該瀕危動(dòng)物的措施（至少兩點(diǎn)）。要求：1）文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名和校名；2）詞數(shù)70左右。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（三）（2023春·遼寧沈陽(yáng)·八年級(jí)?？计谥校┘偃缒闶抢钊A，剛剛加入WWF，請(qǐng)你以“Howtoprotectendangeredanimals”為題，寫一篇倡議書，號(hào)召大家保護(hù)瀕危動(dòng)物。內(nèi)容包括：1.為什么要保護(hù)瀕危動(dòng)物；2.如何保護(hù)（至少3條建議）；3.發(fā)出倡議注意：1.詞數(shù)80~100，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.短文須包括所給內(nèi)容信息，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。HowtoprotectendangeredanimalsNowadays,alotofanimalsareindangerofdisappearingbecauseofhumanbehaviour.Inmyopinion,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（四）（2022春·四川綿陽(yáng)·七年級(jí)東辰國(guó)際學(xué)校?？计谥校┘僭O(shè)你是張倩，英語(yǔ)課上，同學(xué)們以“EndangeredAnimals”為主題討論了自己喜歡的但處于瀕危的動(dòng)物，請(qǐng)結(jié)合表格中討論的結(jié)果，用英文寫一篇短文并談?wù)勛约旱母惺?。NameFavoriteAnimalReasonActiontoHelpTonyGiraffesBeautifulandgentle(溫柔的)Workasavolunteer(志愿者)intheforestsLisaTigersBrave(勇敢的)andsmartRaise(籌集)moneyforthemZhangQianElephants……要求：1.語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫、通順，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)生信息；2.80詞左右。（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）Someofmyclassmateshaveadiscussionaboutendangeredanimals.Hereistheresult.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（五）（2022秋·廣東廣州·八年級(jí)統(tǒng)考階段練習(xí)）根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示用英文寫一段文章，簡(jiǎn)要介紹一下中國(guó)的國(guó)寶(nationaltreasure)——大熊貓(panda)。字?jǐn)?shù)：80詞左右。首句已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。產(chǎn)地：中國(guó)四川，甘肅等省份（province）；體貌特征：黑白相間毛皮（blackandwhitefur），大眼睛，圓耳朵，身體雖胖但動(dòng)作敏捷(movenimbly)，非常招人喜愛(ài)；喜好：最愛(ài)吃竹子（bamboo）；會(huì)爬樹、游泳；壽命：一般20-25年；數(shù)量：現(xiàn)在野外(wild)生存(survive)的僅有1,000多只，我們必須盡力保護(hù)好它們。PandasareChina’snationaltreasure.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（一）（2023·青海西寧·統(tǒng)考中考真題）用下列五個(gè)詞或其適當(dāng)形式確立主題、自擬題目，寫一篇標(biāo)題精準(zhǔn)、主題鮮明、立意新穎、文意完整、至少五句話的短文，并用下劃線標(biāo)記所使用的五個(gè)詞。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）（2020·貴州遵義·統(tǒng)考中考真題）2020年3月3日是聯(lián)合國(guó)第七個(gè)"世界野生動(dòng)植物日"，我國(guó)提出了"維護(hù)全球生命共同體"的主題。我們的世界因這些生物而豐富多彩、妙趣橫生。保護(hù)它們，就是守護(hù)我們的未來(lái)。下面，讓我們一起來(lái)聽聽熊貓惜惜的傾訴吧！假如你是熊貓惜惜，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息給人類朋友寫一封80詞左右的書信。要求：1.信中包含所給信息內(nèi)容；2.適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。注意：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2.書信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。1.基本信息：13歲，來(lái)自四川，中國(guó)的象征；愛(ài)好（自主發(fā)揮）。2.我的煩惱：朋友少，家園常常遭到破壞……3.我的愿望或建議（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩條）。參考詞匯：symbol(n.象征)、destroy(v.破壞)Dearfriends,MynameisXixi._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Xixi（三）（江蘇泰州·中考真題）

十月四日是世界動(dòng)物日，你校組織以“Iwanttobeavolunteerofprotectinganimals”為題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。假如李明參加比賽，請(qǐng)你以“李明”的名義寫一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿推薦自己，內(nèi)容如下：品質(zhì)善良，善待動(dòng)物；勤勞，做額外事；愛(ài)好……（至少兩點(diǎn)）事跡組織慈善義演，為SaveChina’sTigers籌款；……（至少一點(diǎn)）感悟動(dòng)物是人類的朋友；保護(hù)動(dòng)物就是保護(hù)我們自己；打算……（至少兩點(diǎn)）要求：1.詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右。演講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.所寫短文必須包括以上內(nèi)容，自由發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容必須圍繞主題。3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。（參考詞匯：額外的extra）Iwanttobeavolunteerofprotectinganimals

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參考答案1.【答案】例文：

Hi,I’maSouthChinatiger.Ihaveorangeandblackfur.Iusuallyweigh150kilogramsand2metreslong.Ilikeeatingmeat,suchaspigs,deer,sheepandsoon.I’mgoodatswimming,butI’mnotgoodatclimbingtrees.Ioftenswiminwater.Ilikelivingalone,butIdon’tfeellonely.Iusuallylivefor20years.TheforestsinSoutheastChinaaremyhome.Icanhardlyseemycompanionsthere,becausehumanbeingsdestroyourhomes.Theyoftencutdowntrees,andsomepeopleevenkillusforourbonesandskin.

SoIhopepeopleprotectusbecausewearealsopartoftheearth.First,Ihopethecountrycanestablishmorenaturereservestoprovideuswithmoreplacestolive.Second,Ihopethegovernmentcanmakesomelawstoprotectusandletpeoplestopkillingus.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第一人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示介紹華南虎的特征、體重、身長(zhǎng)等基本信息；第二步，介紹目前華南虎的現(xiàn)狀、困難以及求援。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①begoodat擅長(zhǎng)②cutdown砍倒③providesbwithsth提供某人某物[高分句型]①SoIhopepeopleprotectusbecausewearealsopartoftheearth.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句）②Ihopethecountrycanestabilshmorenaturereservestoprovideuswithmoreplacestolive.（that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句）2.【答案】例文Therearemanyanimalsindanger.Animalsareourfriends.Oneoftheseanimalsistheelephant.Theelephantisverybig.Theyhavealongnose.Ilikethembecausetheyareveryclever.Theycanplayfootballordancetomusic.Theycanalsopaintwell.Elephantscanwalkforalongtimeandnevergetlost.However,elephantsareingreatdanger.Peoplecutdownmanytrees,soelephantsarelosingtheirhomes.Peoplealsokillthemfortheirivory.Ihopeeveryonecandosomethingtosaveelephants.First,weshouldnotbuythingsmadeofivory.Second,wemustsavethetrees.Weshouldbefriendlytoanimalsbecausetheyareourgoodfriends.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說(shuō)明文，關(guān)于瀕危動(dòng)物；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏所給的提示內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。擇一種瀕危動(dòng)物進(jìn)行描述；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。解釋該種動(dòng)物瀕臨滅絕的原因；第三步，拯救該瀕危動(dòng)物的措施。呼吁大家保護(hù)瀕危動(dòng)物。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①oneof……之一②getlost迷路③cutdown砍倒[高分句型]①Ihopeeveryonecandosomethingtosaveelephants.（省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句）②Weshouldbefriendlytoanimalsbecausetheyareourgoodfriends.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）3.【答案】例文：HowtoprotectendangeredanimalsNowadays,alotofanimalsareindangerofdisappearingbecauseofhumanbehaviour.Inmyopinion,animalsareourfriends.Wemustprotectthem.Thenhowcanwesaveendangeredanimals?First,weshouldcutdownasfewtreesaspossibleandplantmoretreesbecausetheforestishometomanywildanimals.Then,ifwestoppollutingwater,creatureslikefishcanlivesafely.What’smore,creatingmorenaturereservesisveryhelpful.Aboveall,weshouldstoppeoplefromkillinganimals,sellingorbuyingwildanimalproducts.

Ifwetryourbest,wewillliveinharmonywiththeminthefuture.Solet’stakeactiontoprotectanimalsfromnowon.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，依次介紹保護(hù)瀕危動(dòng)物的原因、如何保護(hù)瀕危動(dòng)物以及發(fā)出保護(hù)瀕危動(dòng)物的倡議，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。本文要倡導(dǎo)的是保護(hù)瀕危動(dòng)物；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“不要亂砍亂伐、不要污染水源、創(chuàng)造更多的自然保護(hù)區(qū)以及阻止人們買賣野生動(dòng)物”等方面具體闡述如何保護(hù)瀕危動(dòng)物；第三步，發(fā)出倡議。號(hào)召人們從現(xiàn)在開始保護(hù)動(dòng)物，人與動(dòng)物和諧生活。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①ishometo是……的家園②inharmonywith與……和諧相處③takeactionto采取行動(dòng)……[高分句型]①weshouldcutdownasfewtreesaspossibleandplantmoretreesbecausetheforestishometomanywildanimals.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句）②Ifwetryourbest,wewillliveinharmonywiththeminthefuture.（if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句）4.【答案】例文Someofmyclassmateshaveadiscussionaboutendangeredanimals.Hereistheresult.Tonylovesbiganimalslikegiraffes.Hethinkstheyarebothbeautifulandgentle.Peoplecanhelpthesegiraffesbyworkingasvolunteersintheforests.Lisa’sfavoriteanimalsaretigers.Somepeoplethinktigersarescary,butshethinkstheyarebraveandsmart.Inordertogivethemahelpinghand,wecanraisemoneyforthem.Whataboutme?Ilikeelephantsbest.Becausetheyaresmartandfriendly.Throughadvertising,peoplecanrealizetheimportanceofprotectingelephants.Ithinkeveryoneisresponsibleforprotectinganimals.Meanwhile,humansandanimalsshouldliveinharmony.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：要求以“EndangeredAnimals”為主題，結(jié)合表格內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作。適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，介紹討論的結(jié)果；第二步，分別介紹三個(gè)人最喜歡的動(dòng)物、原因和行動(dòng)；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)，希望人們保護(hù)動(dòng)物，與動(dòng)物和諧相處。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①workas擔(dān)任②Inorderto為了③raisemoneyfor為……籌集資金④beresponsiblefor對(duì)……負(fù)責(zé)[高分句型]①Inordertogivethemahelpinghand,wecanraisemoneyforthem.（不定式表目的）②Ithinkeveryoneisresponsibleforprotectinganimals.（省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句）5.【答案】例文PandasareChina’snationaltreasure.TheyliveinSichuanProvince,ShanxiProvince,GansuProvinceandsoon.Theyhaveblackandwhitefur,bigeyesandroundears.Althoughtheyareveryfat,theycanmovenimbly.Theyareverycuteandmostpeoplelovethem.Theylikeeatingbamboobest.Eachpandaneedstoeatalotofbambooeveryday.Theycanclimbtreesandswim.Apandausuallylivestwentytotwenty-fiveyears.Thereareonlyover1,000pandasinthewild.Wemusttryourbesttoprotectthem.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說(shuō)明文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中介紹大熊貓的要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出寫作內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。展開介紹大熊貓的體貌特征、喜好、壽命、數(shù)量；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。呼吁大家保護(hù)大熊貓，情感升華。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①alotof大量的②tryourbesttodo盡力去做③inthewild在野外[高分句型]Althoughtheyareveryfat,theycanmovenimbly.（although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句）6.【答案】Possibleversionone：AnimalWorldDoyoulikewatchingTVinyoursparetime?Asforme,AnimalWorldismyfavoriteprogrambecauseit’saboutthepresentsituationoftheanimals.Animalsareourgoodfriends.Butsomeofthemareingreatdangerandthenumberisbecomingsmallerandsmaller.That’swhyweshouldplayaroleinprotectingthem.Possibleversiontwo：AFamilyMemberNowadays,animalsarenotonlyourgoodfriends,butalsoourfamilymembers.Somepeoplewouldratherplaywithapetathomethantakepartinsomemeaninglesssocialactivities.Petsalwaysstaywithusanytimeandmakeusrelaxedwhenwearestressedout.Theydon’tcareaboutwhethertheirownersarerichornot.That’swhymorepeoplekeeppets.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇小作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟（第一篇）]第一步，介紹自己喜歡看的電視節(jié)目；第二步，講述動(dòng)物們目前的危險(xiǎn)處境；第三步，建議要保護(hù)動(dòng)物。[寫作步驟（第二篇）]第一步，介紹動(dòng)物和人類的關(guān)系；第二步，介紹養(yǎng)寵物的好處。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①inyoursparetime在你空閑時(shí)間②ingreatdanger處于極大的危險(xiǎn)中③playaroleindoingsth在做某事中扮演角色④takepartin參加⑤stressout過(guò)度勞累⑥careabout關(guān)心[高分句型]①Asforme,AnimalWorldismyfavoriteprogrambecauseit’saboutthepresentsituationoftheanimals.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句）②Nowadays,animalsarenotonlyourgoodfriends,butalsoourfamilymembers.（“notonly…butalso”連接并列結(jié)構(gòu)）7.【答案】例文：Dearfriends,MynameisXixi.I’moneofyourfavoriteanimals—Panda.IcomefromSichuan,China.Iam13yearsold.IamanationaltreasureofChinaandasymbolofChina.Iusuallyliketoplaywithmyfriends.Ialsolikeclimbingtreesandsittingonthetrees.Ilikebamboosbest.It’smyfavoritefood.ButI’vehadsomeproblemsrecently.MyhomeisoftenbrokenandIdon’thavemuchroomtomovearound.Myfriendsarefewerandfewerbecausesomepeoplehavedestroyedmyhome.ThereisnoonetoplaywithmeandIamverylonely.Myfavoritefoodisgettinglessandless.I’mreallysad.Ihopehumanfriendscanhelpme.Ihopethatpeoplecanprotecttheenvironmentandgivememorespacetolive.Ifyoucancutdownfewertrees,myfriendsandIwillbeveryhappy.

Yours,Xixi【詳解】1.題干解讀：文章是一篇書信作文。主要是以熊貓惜惜的身份向人類寫一封信。先是介紹自己，然后告訴自己的煩惱以及期待和愿望。要把題目中給出的要求都寫進(jìn)去，要注意人稱之間的轉(zhuǎn)換和時(shí)態(tài)的應(yīng)用，還要注意語(yǔ)句之間的連貫。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章分三段描寫。第一段是對(duì)自己簡(jiǎn)單的介紹；第二段介紹自己的一些煩惱和憂慮；第三段寫自己的期望。整個(gè)文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整思路清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思通俗易懂。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：oneof；comefrom；playwith；likedoing；movearound；cutdown。句型：because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句；Ihope+賓語(yǔ)從句；if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句。8.【答案】例文：

Iwanttobeavolunteerofprotectinganimals

Hello,everyone.I’mLiMing.Iwanttobeavolunteerofprotectinganimals.I’mgladtomakeaspeechhere.Iamkindtoothers.Iamgoodwithanimals.IalwaysworkhardandIamwillingtodoextratasks.Ilikeplayingfootballandtheguitar.IhaveeverorganizedraisingmoneyforSaveChina’sTigers.AndIkeepsomehomelesslittleanimals.

Animalsareourfriends.Weshouldloveeachother.Iamalwaysthinkingprotectinganimalsisprotectingourselves.IfIcanbeavolunteer,Iwillworkharderanddomoremeaningfulthingstoprotectanimals.Iwillannouncemorepeopleloveanimalslikeme.Imusttrymybesttomaketheworldmoreunited.

Thanksforlistening!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出。注意按要求補(bǔ)充好省略的地方，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接所給開頭，介紹自己的品質(zhì)、愛(ài)好和事跡；第二步，闡述自己關(guān)于保護(hù)動(dòng)物的感悟，并表達(dá)未來(lái)的打算。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①bekindto對(duì)……友好②raisemoney籌錢③tryone’sbest盡最大努力[高分句型]IfIcanbeavolunteer,Iwillworkharderanddomoremeaningfulthingstoprotectanimals.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）

Unit5Wildanimals單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度倡議書：保護(hù)野生瀕危動(dòng)物說(shuō)明野生瀕危動(dòng)物現(xiàn)狀和保護(hù)措施本單元的話題是“野生動(dòng)物”，主要介紹野生瀕危動(dòng)物，包括介紹瀕危動(dòng)物的體型特征、生活習(xí)性和目前現(xiàn)狀、保護(hù)措施等相關(guān)內(nèi)容。在具體的寫作中，學(xué)生應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.能夠正確拼寫描述頻危動(dòng)物的相關(guān)詞匯；2.能夠恰當(dāng)使用相關(guān)短語(yǔ)和句型表達(dá)；3.能夠正確使用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞、動(dòng)詞不定式的表達(dá)?！驹~匯積累】Wildanimals：1.crane 鶴2.sparrow麻雀3.swan天鵝4.eagle鷹5.dolphin海豚6.squirrel松鼠7.zebra斑馬8.bat編蝠9.bee蜜蜂10.wolf狼Looks：1.fur毛發(fā)2.paw爪3.tail尾巴4.feather羽毛5.bone骨頭6.skin皮膚7.ivory象牙【短語(yǔ)積累】wouldliketoliveinthewild 想生活在野外wildanimals野生動(dòng)物becomedishes onthetable成為餐桌上的菜anytime隨時(shí)havepityonthem同情它們beindanger處境危險(xiǎn)runveryfast跑得非常快thekingsoftheanimalworld動(dòng)物世界之王looksocute看起來(lái)很可愛(ài)onlytendaysold只有10天大beborn出生notasmallbabyanymore不再是個(gè)小寶寶weighover35kilograms 體重超過(guò)了35千克inthebeginning一開始drinkhermother’smilk 喝母乳faceseriousproblems面臨嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題inthewild在野外livemainlyonaspecialkindofbamboo主要以食用一種特殊種類的竹子為生becomesmallerandsmaller變得越來(lái)越小asaresult 結(jié)果takeaction采取行動(dòng)rightaway立刻buildmorepandareserves建立更多的熊貓保護(hù)區(qū)makelawstoprotectpandas制定法律來(lái)保護(hù)大熊貓needtodosomethingforgiantpandas需要為大熊貓做些事情duringtheirlives在他們的一生中g(shù)etsick生病halfayearlater半年后atbirth 出生時(shí)jumparound跳來(lái)跳去playwitheachother互相玩耍cansee,hearandsmellthingsfaraway 可以看到、聽到和聞到很遠(yuǎn)的東西canrunforhourswithoutstopping能不停地跑數(shù)小時(shí)neverkillforfun從不為取樂(lè)而捕殺loselivingareas失去生存區(qū)域bedangeroustohumans 對(duì)人類有危險(xiǎn)losetheirlives 失去他們的生命notbuyfurcoatsanymore不再買毛皮大衣acttoprotectwildanimals行動(dòng)起來(lái)保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物needourprotection 需要我們的保護(hù)shouldnotkillthemforanyreason不應(yīng)該因?yàn)槿魏卫碛啥鴼⑺浪鼈價(jià)unfast跑得快abletoswimandclimb能游泳和攀爬liketolivealone喜歡單獨(dú)生活thickfur 厚的皮毛mosteatmeatandfish多數(shù)吃肉和魚eatplantsandinsects吃植物和昆蟲havelargebodies有大大的身體largepaws寬大的腳掌begoodatclimbingandswimming擅長(zhǎng)攀爬和游泳movearoundslowly在四周慢慢地活動(dòng)inthedaytime在白天sleepthroughthewinder 冬眠takeactiontostopthis 采取行動(dòng)來(lái)阻止這件事nobearsleft沒(méi)有熊剩下joinus加入我們dieout滅絕serioussituation嚴(yán)重的局面kill…for…因……殺害……【句型積累】1.Lions

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