北師大版高三英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)類型二第7講續(xù)寫話題團(tuán)隊(duì)合作課件

第三部分寫作專題突破類型二讀后續(xù)寫第7講續(xù)寫熱門話題團(tuán)隊(duì)合作閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。(2024·廣東六校聯(lián)考)AnAforMrsBIwassittingnexttoMissyinmyninth-gradeworldhistoryclasswhenMrsBartlettannouncedanewproject．Ingroups，weweretocreateanewspaperontheculturewewerestudying．Onapieceofpaper，wewrotethenamesofthreefriendswewantedinourgroup．Aftercollectingalltherequests，MrsBinformedusthatshewouldtakeintoconsiderationthenameswechoseandwouldletusknowtheresultsthenextday．IhadnodoubtIwouldgetthegroupofmychoice．Onlyafewpeoplebehavednormallyintheclass，andMissywasoneofthem．Iknewwehadchoseneachother．Thenextday，Ianxiouslywaitedfortheclass．Afterthebellrang，MissyandIstoppedtalkingasMrsBcalledforourattention．Shestartedtocalloutnames．Whenshereachedthethirdgroup，Missy'snamewascalled．So，I'mingroupthree，Ithought．Thesecond，thirdandfourthmembersofthegroupwerecalled．Mynamewasnotincluded．Therehadtobesomemistake!ThenIheardit．Thelastgroup:“Mauro，Juliette，Rachel，Karina．”Icouldfeelthetearswellinmyeyes．HowcouldIfacebeinginthatgroup—theboywhorarelyspokeEnglish，onegirlwhowasalwayscoveredbyskirtsthatwentdowntoherankles，andtheothergirlwhoworeweirdclothes．Oh，howbadlyIwantedtobewithmyfriends．IfoughtbacktearsasIwalkeduptoMrsB．ShelookedatmeandknewwhatIwastherefor．IwasdeterminedtoconvinceherIshouldbeinthe“good”group．“Why...？”Istarted．Shegentlyplacedahandonmyshoulder．“Iknowwhatyouwant，Karina，”shesaid，“butyourgroupneedsyou．Ineedyoutohelpthemgetapassinggradeonthisassignment．Onlyyoucanhelpthem．”Iwasstunned(說(shuō)不出話)．Iwasconfused．Iwasamazed．ShehadseensomethinginmeIhadn'tseen．“Willyouhelpthem？”sheasked．Istoodstraighter．“Yes，”Ireplied．Icouldn'tbelieveitcameoutofmymouth，butitdid．Ihadcommitted．注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。Ibravelywalkedtowheretheothersinmygroupsat．____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Intheend，MrsBgaveusanAonthatassignment．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________寫作指導(dǎo)：Ⅰ．梳理原文細(xì)節(jié)，理清篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。Ⅱ．依據(jù)首句提示，構(gòu)思后續(xù)情節(jié)。第一段：由續(xù)寫第一段及續(xù)寫第二段的提示語(yǔ)可知，第一段可寫我們通力合作，最終任務(wù)順利完成。第二段：由續(xù)寫第二段的提示語(yǔ)和材料標(biāo)題可知，第二段可寫我的團(tuán)隊(duì)獲獎(jiǎng)后的心情和表現(xiàn)，以及我的感悟，最后要回扣標(biāo)題“AnAforMrsB”，把成就歸功于MrsBartlett。范文佳作：I

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assignment．Sheexplainedtothewholeclassthatournewspaperwaswell-laid-outwithrichculturalknowledge．Itwasthrillingtoseeourpainstakingeffortsfinallypaidoff．Wehuggedtightly，ourjoyandhappinessbeyonddescription．Atthemoment，IsuddenlyrealizedthatitwasMrsB'sinsightthatbroughtoutthepotentialinfourofherstudents，adeepsenseofgratituderisinginsideme．Andthankstoher，I'velearnedtodiscoverothers'strengths．SheistheonewhotrulydeservesthegradeA．話題佳句：1．Fromthenon，webegantoworkasafineteamandfinallyfinishedourprojectontime．從那時(shí)起，我們開始作為一個(gè)優(yōu)秀團(tuán)隊(duì)進(jìn)行工作，最終按時(shí)完成了這個(gè)項(xiàng)目。2．Uncontrollably，awaveofguiltwashedovermeasIheardthebadnews．當(dāng)我聽到這個(gè)壞消息時(shí)，我感到一陣無(wú)法控制的悔恨。3．Atthesametime，allofthemlaughedwithexcitement，andthelaughterechoedintheroom．與此同時(shí)，他們都興奮地笑了起來(lái)，笑聲回蕩在房間里。4．Themiracleisthis:themoreweshare，themorewehave．這就是奇跡：我們與他人分享的越多，我們擁有的就越多。5．Thatday，Mikelearnedthebiggestlessonofhislife:itisalwaysbettertoworkasateamthantoworkalone．那天，Mike學(xué)到了人生中最重要的一課：團(tuán)隊(duì)合作總比單干好。6．Itrustedmydoctorstohealmybody，butIdependedonthegrouptohealmyspiritandprovidemewithauniquefellowship．我相信我的醫(yī)生能治愈我的身體，但我依靠這個(gè)團(tuán)隊(duì)來(lái)治愈我的精神，并為我提供一種獨(dú)特的友誼。7．Butfortheircommonefforts，theycouldn'thavereceivedsomuchintheirproject．沒有他們的共同努力，他們就不可能在這個(gè)項(xiàng)目上取得如此大的成就。8．Thewholeexperienceremindedmethatteamworkwaskeytooursuccessintheassignedproject．這整個(gè)經(jīng)歷提示我，團(tuán)隊(duì)合作是我們成功地完成這項(xiàng)任務(wù)的關(guān)鍵。9．Asitturnsout，thereisalwaysawayoutofanydifficultsituationwithourjointefforts．事實(shí)證明，只要我們通力合作，就總有辦法擺脫任何困境。10．Ayearlater，withtheirjointandcontinuouseffort，thebeachregaineditsbeautyandMariaandPeterregainedtheirlong-awaitedpleasure．一年后，在他們共同的不斷努力下，海灘恢復(fù)了它的美麗，Maria和Peter獲得了等待已久的快樂。