高考英語“展示而非講述”策略在讀后續(xù)寫中的運(yùn)用課件

“展示而非講述”策略在讀后續(xù)寫中的運(yùn)用Tell：Thegirlsare________.prettybeautifulgood-lookinglovelycharmingattractive兩彎似蹙非蹙籠煙眉，一雙似喜非喜含情目。態(tài)生兩靨之愁，嬌襲一身之病。淚光點點，嬌喘微微。閑靜似姣花照水，行動似弱柳扶風(fēng)。心較比干多一竅，病如西子勝三分。

——曹雪芹·《紅樓夢》LinDaiyuisa_______girlwitha____figure.Hereyesarebrimfuloflove.Shewasasgentleasa______reflectedinthewater.delicateslimflowerShow只見船尾一個女子持漿蕩舟，長發(fā)披肩，全身白衣，頭發(fā)上束了條金帶，白雪一映，更是燦然生光。那船慢慢蕩近，只見這女子方當(dāng)韶齡，不過十五六歲年紀(jì)，肌膚勝雪，嬌美無匹；容色絕麗，不可逼視。

——金庸·《射雕英雄傳》HuangRongisa_______prettygirlwith_____skinlikeSnowWhite.Sheisdressed________with______hairfallingoverher___________.youngfairinwhitelongshouldersHowto“Show”關(guān)注細(xì)節(jié)描寫，使抽象的、籠統(tǒng)的概念具體化，使讀者能夠身臨其境，感同身受。外貌描寫情緒表達(dá)細(xì)化動作……外貌描寫appearance身材/年齡/膚色/五官頭發(fā)/穿著/裝扮bedressedin+服裝/顏色wear+妝容/首飾/鞋帽thin→______苗條_______極瘦fat→plump胖乎乎stout肥壯obese肥胖__________超重overweightslimskinnyof________height/build中等身材mediumbe+身材+with+膚色/頭發(fā)/五官..._____淺色的；白皙的______深色的blonde金黃色的curly卷的______濃密的ponytail馬尾辮braids發(fā)辮__________小胡子______絡(luò)腮胡goatee山羊胡fairdarkthickmoustachebeardbedressedin+服裝/顏色wear+妝容/首飾/鞋帽be+身材+with+膚色/頭發(fā)/五官...Tell:Thebabyislovely.Show:

Thebabyissmall,_____witha___complexion(膚色).Shewearsawhite_______hat.plumpsweaterfair

bedressedin+服裝/顏色wear+妝容/首飾/鞋帽be+身材+with+膚色/頭發(fā)/五官...情緒表達(dá)emotion面部(face)/身體(body)聲音(voice)從“頭”到“腳”頭部：_______(額),eyebrow,_____(臉頰),lip,____(下巴)肢體：___(拳頭),thumb,____(指甲),waist內(nèi)部：brain,mind,heart,______(喉嚨),blood,bone,muscle,belly,stomachjawnailthroatforeheadcheekfistTryandMatchrollsb'seyessb'sjawdropalumpinsb'sthroatbitesb'snailsshrugsb'sshouldersb'sstomachrumblemakesb'sbloodboilaweightoffsb'smindsurprisedsad/movednervousangryuncaringhungrydisapprovedrelievedTryandMatchrollsb'seyessb'sjawdropalumpinsb'sthroatbitesb'snailsshrugsb'sshouldersb'sstomachrumblemakesb'sbloodboilaweightoffsb'smindsurprisedsad/movednervousangryuncaringhungrydispprovedrelievedGABCEFDH①Julie's______flushedwithpleasureatthecompliment.聽了這贊美的話，朱莉開心得滿臉通紅。②Tomclenchedhis___anddesiredtopunchJack.Tom握緊拳頭，想給杰克一拳。③Myheartbeganto____andmymind_________.我心跳開始加快，腦子里一片空白。④Jack______________andspokeinmeasuredtones.Jack清了清喉嚨，不慌不忙地說起話來。cheeksfistracewentblankclearedhisthroat叫shout:cry,yell,_______(尖叫),bark/howl/_____(吼叫)說say：respond/reply,explain,complain,continue,argue,warn,announce,____(補(bǔ)充說),_______(低聲說),_____(嘆氣),demand(質(zhì)問),stammer(結(jié)巴)...聲音(voice)roarscreamaddwhispersighTell:Shewasangry.Show:

“I'llneverbelieveyouagain!”She______athim.Herwholebody__________________.Saltytears________downherpalecheekstoherdry___.roaredwasshakinglikealeafstreamedlipsshakelikealeaf渾身發(fā)抖面部/身體/聲音細(xì)化動作Movement精選動詞，提供細(xì)節(jié)Tell:Tomsavedthegirloutoftheburninghouse.Show:

Tom______thedooropenwithgreatforce,onlytofindthegirllyingunconsicousonthefloor.Withoutdelay,he___________,________hernosefromthechokingsmokeand______downstairs.走walk→rush/dash/_______(沖),wander(漫步),pace(踱步),march(齊步走),storm(氣沖沖地走),skip(蹦蹦跳跳),limp(跛行),creep/tiptoe(躡手躡腳地移動),inch/edge(緩慢地移動)...kickedprotectedpickedheruprushedcharge21Attentionplease講述和展示也可相結(jié)合，即給出觀點，又添加細(xì)節(jié)說明該觀點，這既能迅速傳達(dá)信息，又能使描寫生動具體。Shetrembledwithfearandgasped.Shebowedherheadinshame.由于篇幅限制以及突出重點的需要，應(yīng)牢記細(xì)節(jié)描寫是為主題服務(wù)，要注意掌握描寫的度，無需面面俱到。THANKSTell:Macwasscared.Show:

“救命!”Mac歇斯底里地用顫抖的聲音喊道。汗水和淚水順著他的面頰流下來。他迅速溜進(jìn)汽車，砰的一聲關(guān)上門。2017.6浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫“狼口逃生”Tips:hysterically,sweat,slide,slamTell:Macwasscared.Show:

“Help!”Mac_____hy