2024-2025學年新教材高中英語Unit5Intothewild表達作文巧升格學案外研版必修第一冊

PAGEUnit5Intothewild動物介紹本單元的寫作項目是介紹動物，此類文章以說明為主要表達方式，用來介紹動物的類屬、生活習性、生存狀態(tài)、外貌特征等。在寫作時多用一般現(xiàn)在時。[基本框架]1．開頭——總體概括介紹該動物的狀況。2．主體——進行具體介紹該動物的具體狀況。3．結尾——做總結來描述該動物目前的狀況、境況以及我們應當實行的應對措施。[常用詞塊]1．beequaltoitinsize在個頭大小上和它相等2．feedonflowersandleaves以花朵和樹葉為食3．theincreasinglydemandontheantelope'sfur對藏羚羊的毛皮的需求量漸漸增大4．dieoutinthenearfuture在不久的將來將滅亡5．givebirthtothreebabypandas產(chǎn)下了三個熊貓寶寶6．thousandsoftouristscomingtoappreciatethebeautifulbirds成千上萬的來觀賞漂亮鳥兒的游客7．thedecreasingnumberofthebirdsthatmigratehere遷徙到這里的鳥兒的數(shù)量越來越少8．calloneveryonetoworkasavolunteertohelpus號召大家做志愿者來幫忙9．takeimmediatemeasurestoprotecttheirhabitatsfrombeingdestroyed實行緊急措施來愛護它們的棲息地免遭破壞10．beawareoftheimportanceofprotectingmothernature意識到愛護大自然母親的重要性[常用語句]精彩開頭1．Thegiantpandaisananimalthat/whichlivesinthemountains.大熊貓是一種生活在山里的動物。2．Itfeedson/livesonbamboos.它靠吃竹子為生。3．Thebirdhasbeautifulwingswithsomeblackspotsonsomefeathers.這種鳥有著漂亮的翅膀，一些羽毛上有著黑色的斑點。豐滿主體1．Manytreesarebeingcutdownandmoreandmoreforestsarelost，makinganimalslosetheirhomestolivein.很多樹木被砍伐，越來越多的森林消逝，使得動物失去了家園。2．Manyfieldsarebeingturnedintodesert，whichmakestheanimalslivingtherehavenoplacetofindfoodtoeat.很多土地正在變成沙漠，這使得生活在那里的動物沒有地方找食物吃。3．Manyanimalsarebeingkilledsothatsomeofthemareindangerofdyingout.很多動物被捕殺，因此有些動物面臨滅亡。4．Toprotectpandas，measuresshouldbetakentosetupsomenaturereserves.為了愛護大熊貓，應當實行措施建立一些自然愛護區(qū)。余味結尾1．Inaword，wemusttakesomemeasurestopreventrareanimalsfromextinction.總之，我們必需實行一些措施來防止珍稀動物滅亡。2．Finally，weshouldletpeopleknowtheimportanceofprotectingendangeredanimals.最終，我們應當讓人們知道愛護瀕危動物的重要性。假定你是大熊貓繁殖基地的工作人員李華，請你為大熊貓寫一篇解說詞，并向前來參觀基地的美國客人介紹中國的這種特有的物種。內容包括：1．主要生活在四川、陜西和甘肅的山區(qū)；2．以竹子為食；3．憨態(tài)可掬；4．瀕危緣由：棲息地削減及氣候改變。留意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當增加細微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：大熊貓繁殖基地(giantpandabreedingbase)[學生習作]Ladiesandgentlemen，welcometoseepanda.NowIwilltellyousomethingaboutit.Thepandaislovelywithblackandwhitehair.ItisveryspecialinChina，eveninthewholeworld.ItlivesinSichuan，ShaanxiandGansuProvinces.Theyeatbamboos.Manypeoplecometothegiantpandabreedingbasetoseethem.However，becauseofsomereason，thenumberofthemisbecomingsmallerandsmaller.Inordertoprotectthem，weshouldtakesomemeasures.Webelievethenumberofgiantpandaswillgreatlyincreaseverysoon.Wishyouagoodtimehere.Thanks.名師點評：1．寫作內容太過于口語化；2．對熊貓的視察細致，描述不夠重點突出；3．未能指出愛護熊貓的緣由以及愛護措施。[升格作文]Ladiesandgentlemen，welcometoourgiantpandabreedingbase.I'dliketointroducethisuniquespeciestoallofyou.AsasymbolofChina，thegiantpandaisaspecialChinesespecies，mainlylivinginthemountainsofSichuan，ShaanxiandGansuProvinces.Theyfeedmostlyonbamboos.Theylooksocuteinappearancethattheyarepopularamongpeopleallovertheworld.However，theyareindangerofextinctionbecauseofthelossoftheirnaturehabitatandtheclimatechange.Inordertoprotectgiantpandasfromdyingout，wehavetakenmanypracticalmeasures.Webelievethenumberofgiantpandaswillgreatlyincreaseverysoon.Wishyouagoodtimehere.Thanks.依據(jù)要求寫一篇關于瀕危動物——金絲猴(goldenmonkey)的短文。詞數(shù)80左右。1．棲息地：中國2．外貌：金黃色，有點灰；尾巴和身體一樣長。3．生活環(huán)境：海拔1500－3000米的森林。4．生活習性：群居，吃水果、干果，在樹上活動；5．它們的數(shù)量削減了，呼吁人們愛護金絲猴。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[參考范文]ThegoldenmonkeysLivingonlyinChina，goldenmonkeysareprotectedbytheChinesegovernment.Theirfurisgoldenandabitgrey.Theirtailsareaslongastheirbodies.Themalegoldenmonkeysarebigandstrongwhilethefemaleonesaremuchsmaller.Goldenmonkeysliveinforestswhichare1，500－3，000meters