高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫專題之個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)類+牧場(chǎng)女孩的成長(zhǎng)之旅+講義

PAGE10閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Papaalwayswantedaboy,acowboy,tohelponourranch（牧場(chǎng)）.IknowhewishesIwereaboy.He'salwayscallingme"Joey"insteadof"Josefina."WheneverIasktohelpherd（放）thecowshereattheranch,Papasays,"That'smen'swork."ItwasSaturdaymorning.IflewintothekitchenwhenIsmelledthedelicioussmellofbreakfast.Papahadalreadyfinishedeatingandwasputtingonhisrubberboots（橡膠靴子）Withoutaword,hewalkedoutintotheheavyrain."IsPapamadatmeorjusttheworldingeneral?"IaskedMama."We’vebeenhavingalotofrain.Yourfather'sworriedaboutthecows,"sheexplained."Unlesshecandrivethemtohighground,theywillbeindanger.Heneedshelp.""I'mprettygoodonahorse,"Isaid."I'vegotprizestoproveit."Shelaughed."YouknowhowPapafeelsaboutyoungladiesdrivingcows."Idid,butIdecidedtomakeanofferanyway.WhenPapagotback,Iwaswaitingatthedoor."Icouldhelpifyou'donlyletme,"Itoldhim.Hestoodthereforwhatseemedlikeanhour,andthensaid,"Gogetyourraincoat,Joey.""It'sJosefina!"Iracedbackintothehouse.Werodeintothegrassland,PapaonabighorsenamedMiguelandmeonmyhorse,Isabella.Webegancallingthecowsassoonaswereachedtheriver.Finally,wefoundourred-and-whitecowsinathicket（灌木叢）.Wegotthecowsoutofthethicketandherdedthemtowardhigherground.Buttheystoppedatthedeepriverthatstoodinourway.Finally,thefirstcowsteppedintothewater,andtheothersfollowed.PapaswamacrossonMiguel,thenturnedtowatchme,"Holdontight,Joey.".AsIsabellawalkedin,Ifeltcoldwateraroundmylegs.Thenmyhorsetripped（絆倒）andwentunderexcept-forherhead.Igotwetallthewayuptomyback.Smiling,Papasaid,"Atruecowboyisbrave,Joey.""Cowgirl,"Icorrectedhim.注意∶1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:We’djustgottenonthegroundwhenloudthunder（雷聲）almostmadeIsabellajumpoutfromunderme._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:IcouldsmellthewonderfulsmellofMama'scookingaswerodepasttheranchhouse.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意故事圍繞一個(gè)渴望在牧場(chǎng)幫忙的女孩展開。女孩的父親一直想要個(gè)男孩來(lái)幫忙，總是把她叫成“Joey”而不是“Josefina”，且認(rèn)為放奶牛是男人的工作。一個(gè)下雨的周六早上，父親擔(dān)心奶牛安危去趕牛，女孩主動(dòng)提出幫忙，父親最終同意。他們騎馬趕到草原，找到奶牛并將其趕往高地，途中遇到河流，女孩在過(guò)河時(shí)馬摔倒，她全身濕透，但父親鼓勵(lì)她是勇敢的“牛仔”，她糾正說(shuō)是“女牛仔”。二、伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)（一）伏筆父親對(duì)男孩的期望及對(duì)女孩的態(tài)度：為后續(xù)女孩努力證明自己、爭(zhēng)取在牧場(chǎng)幫忙的機(jī)會(huì)做鋪墊，在續(xù)寫中可體現(xiàn)女孩通過(guò)行動(dòng)逐漸改變父親的看法。女孩的騎馬技能和獲獎(jiǎng)經(jīng)歷：暗示女孩有能力在牧場(chǎng)工作，續(xù)寫中可利用這一點(diǎn)讓女孩在后續(xù)情節(jié)中發(fā)揮優(yōu)勢(shì)。下雨的天氣和父親對(duì)奶牛的擔(dān)憂：推動(dòng)故事發(fā)展，營(yíng)造緊張氛圍，續(xù)寫中可進(jìn)一步描寫惡劣天氣帶來(lái)的挑戰(zhàn)及女孩的應(yīng)對(duì)。（二）續(xù)寫回應(yīng)第一段：可寫雷聲對(duì)馬和女孩的影響，以及女孩如何在這種突發(fā)情況下保持冷靜或應(yīng)對(duì)，進(jìn)一步展現(xiàn)她的勇敢和成長(zhǎng)。第二段：描寫回到牧場(chǎng)后的情景，如父親和女孩的互動(dòng)、母親的反應(yīng)等，體現(xiàn)家庭氛圍的變化和女孩的成就感，突出女孩在經(jīng)歷這次事件后的情感收獲。三、續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（一）第一段描述雷聲響起后馬的反應(yīng)和女孩的處境，如馬是否受驚、女孩如何控制馬等。女孩的心理活動(dòng)，可能包括害怕但又努力克服的想法，以及對(duì)完成任務(wù)的決心。父親的反應(yīng)和可能給予的指導(dǎo)或鼓勵(lì)。（二）第二段描寫回到牧場(chǎng)時(shí)的環(huán)境和女孩的感受，如疲憊但滿足等。父親和母親對(duì)女孩的態(tài)度變化，例如父親的認(rèn)可、母親的欣慰等。女孩對(duì)這次經(jīng)歷的感悟或總結(jié)，可體現(xiàn)她對(duì)自己的新認(rèn)識(shí)和成長(zhǎng)的體會(huì)。四、故事線女孩渴望幫忙-父親因雨擔(dān)心奶牛-女孩主動(dòng)請(qǐng)纓-父女趕牛過(guò)河-馬受驚-繼續(xù)趕牛-成功回到牧場(chǎng)五、感情線女孩從渴望得到父親認(rèn)可，到面對(duì)困難時(shí)的堅(jiān)定和勇敢，再到最后可能獲得父親認(rèn)可的喜悅和成就感，以及家庭氛圍中情感的變化，如父親對(duì)女孩態(tài)度的轉(zhuǎn)變，母親的欣慰等。六、主旨升華句Inthefaceofchallenges,agirl'sdeterminationandcouragecanbreakthroughgenderlimitationsandwinrespectandrecognition.（在面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)時(shí)，一個(gè)女孩的決心和勇氣可以突破性別限制，贏得尊重和認(rèn)可。）Thejourneyofayoungheartisfilledwiththepursuitofself-worth,andeverystepofgrowthiswrittenwithperseveranceandbraveryintherainandthunderoflife.（一顆年輕的心的旅程充滿了對(duì)自我價(jià)值的追求，在生活的風(fēng)雨雷電中，每一步成長(zhǎng)都用毅力和勇敢書寫。）Throughthetrialsoftheranchandthethunderofthestorm,agirldiscoversherinnerstrengthandredefinesherplaceinaworldthatonceunderestimatedher.（通過(guò)牧場(chǎng)的考驗(yàn)和風(fēng)暴的雷聲，一個(gè)女孩發(fā)現(xiàn)了自己內(nèi)心的力量，并在一個(gè)曾經(jīng)低估她的世界中重新定義了自己的位置。）Intherealmoftheranch,wheretraditionsoncedefinedroles,agirl'sbravestepsandunwaveringspiritchangetheperceptionandlightupthepathofself-actualization.（在牧場(chǎng)這個(gè)曾經(jīng)由傳統(tǒng)定義角色的領(lǐng)域，一個(gè)女孩勇敢的步伐和堅(jiān)定的精神改變了觀念，照亮了自我實(shí)現(xiàn)的道路。）Againstthebackdropoftheranchandthesymphonyofnature'selements,agirl'sgrowthunfolds,teachingusthattruecourageknowsnogenderanddreamscantranscendexpectations.（在牧場(chǎng)的背景和自然元素的交響樂(lè)中，一個(gè)女孩的成長(zhǎng)展開，告訴我們真正的勇氣不分性別，夢(mèng)想可以超越期望。）七、寫作范文范文一第一段We’djustgottenonthegroundwhenloudthunderalmostmadeIsabellajumpoutfromunderme.Thepoorhorsewasclearlyfrightened,andittookallmystrengthtoholdontightandcalmherdown.Icouldfeelmyheartpoundinginmychest,butIknewIhadtobebrave.Papashouted,"Staycalm,Joey!Keepcontrolofthehorse!"ItookadeepbreathandtriedtosootheIsabellawithgentlewordsandpats.Afterafewtensemoments,sheseemedtosettleabit.Wecontinuedtoherdthecows,butthethundermadethetaskevenmorechallenging.Thecowswerealsogettingrestless,butImanagedtokeepthemmovingintherightdirection,determinednottoletPapadown.第二段IcouldsmellthewonderfulsmellofMama'scookingaswerodepasttheranchhouse.Whenwefinallystopped,Papalookedatmewithanewfoundrespectinhiseyes."Youdidagoodjoboutthere,Josefina,"hesaid,usingmypropernameforthefirsttimeinawhile.Mamacameout,sawmywetandmuddystate,andrushedtohugme."You'reabravegirl,"shesaidwithasmile.Aswesatdowntoeat,Ifeltasenseofprideandaccomplishment.IhadproventomyselfandtoPapathatIcouldhandlethetasksontheranch,notasaboy,butasacapableanddeterminedgirl.ThisexperiencehadnotonlystrengthenedmybondwithmyfatherbutalsomademerealizethatIcouldovercomeanyobstaclewithcourageandperseverance.范文二第一段We’djustgottenonthegroundwhenloudthunderalmostmadeIsabellajumpoutfromunderme.Isabellarearedup,andIhadtoholdonfordearlife.Myheartraced,butIrememberedwhatPapahadtaughtmeaboutstayingcalminsuchsituations.IspokesoftlytoIsabella,tryingtocalmhernerves.Paparodeoverquickly,"It'sokay,Joey.Justkeephersteady."Inodded,takingdeepbreathstosteadymyselfaswell.Thecowsweregettingmoreagitatedbythethunder,anditwasastruggletokeepthemmovingtowardshigherground.ButIrefusedtogiveup.Iusedallmyskillsanddeterminationtokeeptheherdtogetherandmovingforward,showingthatIwasjustascapableasanycowboy.第二段IcouldsmellthewonderfulsmellofMama'scookingaswerodepasttheranchhouse.Aswedismounted,Papaputhishandonmyshoulder."Youdidreallywelltoday,Josefina.I'mproudofyou."Ibeamedwithpride.Mamagreeteduswithawarmsmileandsaid,"Mylittlecowgirlisallgrownup."Atthedinnertable,wetalkedabouttheday'sadventure.Irealizedthatthroughthisexperience,IhadnotonlyhelpedPapawiththecowsbutalsoearnedhisrecognition.Itmademeunderstandthatgenderdoesn'tmatterwhenitcomestodoingwhatyouloveandbeingbrave.Iwasdeterminedtocontinueprovingmyselfandmakingavaluablecontributiontotheranch,asaconfidentandfearlessgirl.Thisdaymarkedanewbeginninginmyrelationshipwithmyfatherandmyplaceontheranch.參考答案We'djustgottenonthegroundwhenloudthunderalmostmadeIsabellajumpoutfromunderme.Isoftlystrokedandpattedher