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第1頁/共1頁育華中學(xué)23-24學(xué)年高一第二學(xué)期期中測試英語學(xué)科閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Tom’sfamilywasasmallfamilyonthecoastallineofasmallvillage.Tomwas11yearsold.Hewastall,darkandhandsomeandhadalotofdreams.Hehadalwaysdreamtoflivinginacity.Hewasalwayshisdad’scharm,ashewasnotquitehappytospendtimewithhismom.Allhecouldrememberabouthismomwasherscars,redandwhitescarsonherface,neckandhands.Healwaysfeltunpleasanttoseehismom’sface.Butwhathedidnotknowwasthathismomscratchedherbeautytosavehimfromafirewhenhewasoneyearold.Notwantingtoburdenhimwithit,Tom’sparentskeptitasecret.HismomMariausedtodrophimtoschoolandpickhimupeveryday.Hefeltawkwardtoseehismomwiththatscarredfacestandinginfrontoftheschoolgate.Ashewaslaughingandchattingwithhisfellowschoolmates,allofthembecamesilentandstartedstaringatthegate.So,Tomturnedtowardsthegatewithalotofcuriosity.Hefrozewhenseeinghismom,facecoveredwithapieceofcloth.Tomfeltashamedandrushedoutoftheschoolwithlotsofanger.Withdayspassingby,Tomstartedtodislikehismommore.Hedidnotliketogetpickedupordroppedbyhismom.Hefeltthatshewasuglyandsoabnormal.Ashegrewold,hestoppedgoingoutwithhertothemarketoranywhereoutside.Kamalatriedherbesttomakehersonhappy,gothimeverythingthathewantedandgavehimhisspace.Sheunderstoodwhathersonwasgoingthroughandfeltpityforherselfandsadforherson,asshewashelpless.WhenTomturned16,hewassenttoacityhighschool80kilometersawayfromhiscoastalvillage.Theverythoughtofnotbeingwithhisuglymothermadehimveryhappy.Threeyearslater,thencameTom’sgraduationceremony.Hisparentsdidn’twanttobeabsentfromsuchanimportantoccasion,sotheymanagedtobetherewithoutinformingTom.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Tomwasshockedwhenhesawhisparentsappearattheceremonyhall._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hesitatingforamoment,Tom’sfathertoldhimeverythingthathappenedmanyyearsago._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Possibleversion:Tomwasshockedwhenhesawhisparentsappearattheceremonyhall.Hestoodrootedtothefloorforamoment,notknowingwhattodo.Secondslater,hetriedtocontainhimselfandawkwardlywalkeduptogreethisfather,ignoringhismother’sexistence.Butwhenheheardotherswhisperingabouthismum’suglyface,embarrassmentcameoverhim.Withangerwrittenallonhisface,hepushedhismumhardoutofthehall.SeeingTom’smumleavewithdeepsorrow,hisfatherfollowedherout.Hesitatingforamoment,Tom’sfathertoldhimeverythingthathappenedmanyyearsago.Hismumgotburntseverelytosavehiminaterriblefire.Tearsstreameddownhisfacewhenherecollectedhowmuchhehadhurtheralltheseyears,howhehadignoredherandherealizedtheamountofpainandagonyshehadgonethrough.Aftertheceremony,hefoundhismumandembracedher,saying“Sorry”againandagain.Fromthenon,hethoughtofhismom’sfaceevenwithscarsasthemostbeautifulfaceintheworldandhismomasthemostrespectedwomanintheworld.文章大意:這篇文章講述了Tom的故事,他是一個(gè)11歲的男孩,夢想著離開他所在的小村莊,去城市生活。Tom不喜歡他的母親Maria,因?yàn)樗樕嫌邪毯郏@讓他感到不舒服。他不知道的是,這些疤痕是母親在火災(zāi)中救他時(shí)留下的。隨著Tom長大,他越來越不喜歡和母親一起外出。當(dāng)Tom16歲時(shí),他去了一個(gè)遠(yuǎn)離家鄉(xiāng)的城市高中,他對此感到很高興,因?yàn)樗辉傩枰湍赣H一起生活。三年后,在他高中畢業(yè)典禮上,他的父母沒有告訴他就出現(xiàn)了,這讓他感到震驚。幾處伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng):1.伏筆:Tom對母親臉上的疤痕感到尷尬?;貞?yīng):在畢業(yè)典禮上,父母突然出現(xiàn),可能會(huì)引發(fā)Tom對母親疤痕背后故事的了解。2.伏筆:Maria對Tom的理解和給予他空間。回應(yīng):在畢業(yè)典禮上,可能會(huì)展示Maria對Tom的愛和犧牲,以及Tom對母親看法的改變。3.伏筆:Tom對城市生活的向往。回應(yīng):畢業(yè)典禮可能是Tom人生的一個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn),他可能會(huì)開始理解家庭的重要性。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)(分兩段):1.描述Tom在畢業(yè)典禮上看到父母突然出現(xiàn)時(shí)的反應(yīng),以及他內(nèi)心的震驚和混亂。2.描述父親向Tom透露母親疤痕背后的故事,以及這一啟示對Tom的影響。主旨升華句:1.Thetruemeasureofbeautyisnotskindeep;itliesintheactsofloveandsacrifice.2.Sometimes,themostimportantlessonsinlifearelearnednotintheclassroom,butatthefeetofourparents.3.Theloveofamotherisaflamethatburnsthroughadversity,illuminatingthepathtounderstandingandcompassion.4.Thescarswebeararenotjustmarksonourskin,butstoriesofourjourney,writteninthelanguageoflove.5.Itisinthemomentsofrevelationthatwecometoappreciatethedepthofamother'sloveandthetruemeaningoffamily.三篇寫作范文:范文一:Tomwasshockedwhenhesawhisparentsappearattheceremonyhall.Hisheartracedashewatchedthemnavigatethroughthecrowd,hismother'sfacestillmarredbythescarshehadoncefoundsorepulsive.Astheyapproached,hewasovercomewithamixofemotions,buttheprideintheireyeswasunmistakable.Theyhadcometocelebratehisachievement,andinthatmoment,hefeltapangofguiltfortheyearsofdistancehehadputbetweenthem.Hesitatingforamoment,Tom’sfathertoldhimeverythingthathappenedmanyyearsago.Asthestoryunfolded,Tom'seyeswelledupwithtears.Hesawhismotherinanewlight,herscarstransformedfromasourceofshametoabadgeofhonor.Thegraduationceremonybecamemorethanjustanacademicmilestone;itwasamomentofprofoundgratitudeandanewfoundappreciationforthesacrificesmadebyalovingmother.范文二:Tomwasshockedwhenhesawhisparentsappearattheceremonyhall.Thesurprisewasoverwhelming,butwhatstruckhimmostwasthelookofloveandprideonhismother'sface,thefacehehadoncefoundsohardtobear.Astheyembraced,hefeltasurgeofemotionshehadneverexpected.Hesitatingforamoment,Tom’sfathertoldhimeverythingthathappenedmanyyearsago.Therevelationwaslikeathunderbolt,andashelistened,thescalesfellfromhiseyes.Hesawhismother'sscarsnotasadeformitybutasatestamenttoherbraveryandlove.Thegraduationday,whichwasmeanttocelebratehisacademicsuccess,turnedintoacelebrationoflove,forgiveness,andtheunbreakablebondbetweenamotherandherson.范文三
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