應用文：分享露營經(jīng)歷+講義-江浙皖高中發(fā)展共同體 高三上學期10月月考英語試題

應用文寫作假定你是李華，上周末你們?nèi)胰敉饴稜I。請你給英國朋友Chris寫一封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括：(1)露營過程；(2)你的感想。注意：(1)寫作詞數(shù)應為80個左右；(2)請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouacampingexperiencemyfamilyengagedinlastweekend._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,LiHua

【簡析】這道題很明顯是模仿6月高考題而出的了，相關話題早年浙江卷考過續(xù)寫，也就是2017年11月講健忘媽媽的那一篇，當然2017年6月浙江卷應用文寫郊游，部分內(nèi)容或許也可以用上。露營雖然對高中生來說，不一定都經(jīng)歷過，但是大致知道是和吃喝玩樂以及帳篷有關，所以大體不會寫偏?！緦忣}】文體：分享｜告知信話題：露營時態(tài)：過去時為主（上周末）人稱：第一人稱（Iorwe）【要點剖析】要點一：露營過程。事件的三要素為時間、地點、人物，由于背景信息已經(jīng)給出了時間和人物，即上周末和myfamily，所以我們需要自行添加地點。思考：露營的地點一般有哪些？海灘邊（喝點小酒、吃點燒烤、吹吹海風）、小河/湖泊邊（可以野餐等）、山區(qū)（像黃山頂可以看日落，看云海）、專門露營基地、公園等等，自己對哪個地點熟悉就選哪個寫。然后整體的露營過程可以按照時間順序來寫，同時結(jié)合層級順序，最重要的是全文要體現(xiàn)話題詞匯。要點二：你的感想。這里需要思考感想的切入點，這里主要提供三個點參考。第一個就是根據(jù)同行的人，既然一起去的是家人，那么就可以從親情切入；第二個就是話題本身，可以劃分到人與自然主題語境，那就從大自然角度切入；第三個就是結(jié)合學生身份，從校園生活切入，可以說遠離繁忙校園生活，放松身心等。當然，這三個切入點并不是孤立的，而是可以相結(jié)合的?！局\篇布局】開頭：段首句已經(jīng)給出，通過主位推進，我們通?？梢栽诤竺婕右痪湓?，比如用一到兩個形容詞來概述這個經(jīng)歷，同時這兩個形容詞是能貫穿以下內(nèi)容，所以不建議用太籠統(tǒng)的詞，比如good，great，fantastic，fabulous等，可以用稍微具象的詞，比如說fun-filled充滿樂趣的，那么你的整個露營過程就是要圍繞fun展開，又比如說educational有教育意義的，那么露營過程中你的相關事件就是要來體現(xiàn)這個詞。這個知識點在“演講與辯論”的時候尤其要注意。I’mwritingtosharewithyouacampingexperiencemyfamilyengagedinlastweekend.Itwasarelaxingandrefreshinggetaway.正文：我們家住海邊，雖然沒有親身在海邊露營，但大致也是見到過很多游客露營場景，所以這里選海灘邊來寫。Earlythatmorning,assoonaswearrivedatthepicturesquebeachinXiangshan,Icouldn’twaittopitchthetent.Aftersettlingin,wefiredupthegrillforabarbecueandsippeddrinks,savoringtheraremomentsofleisure.Asthesunbegantoset,westrolledalongtheshore,collectingseashellsandenjoyingthecoolsandbeneathourfeet.Canyouguessthehighlightoftheday?Withoutadoubt,itwaswhengatheredunderaskyfullofstars,sharingstories—rangingfrommyschoollifetomom’stalesofyouthanddad’sentrepreneurialadventures.Thistripallowedmetounwindfromthepressuresofschoolandstrengthenedmybondwithmyfamily.Beingclosetonaturedidbring

meadeepsenseofpeace.結(jié)尾：從對方思考，為什么要告知英國朋友Chris？可能是對方也對露營感興趣，可以邀請對方一起，興趣共鳴的同時加深友誼；分享該經(jīng)歷，讓對方了解中國生活方式，促進文化交流。Ireallyhopeyoucanjoinusforournextcampingadventureandsharethewonderfulmoments!【參考范文】DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouacampingexperiencemyfamilyengagedinlastweekend.Itwasourfirsttimeonacampingtrip,inwhichmyfamilysleptunderthestarsintheWildernessPark.Wehadnosoonersetupthetentthanitstartedtorain.Whileweenjoyedthesoundoftheraindrippingonourtent,playinggamesandchattingaboutourdailylifestories,mompreparedsomesnacksanddrinksforus.Wemadewet-weathercampingfun.I’mgratefulforthecampingtrip.NotonlydidIenjoythebeautyofnature,butIlearnedthereisplentyofentertainmenttobefoundinexploringnature.Yours,LiHua下水文1DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouacampingexperiencemyfamilyengagedinlastweekend.Wedrovetoabeautifulspotbythelake,setupourtents,andenjoyedthetranquilityofnature.Intheevening,wecookedoveranopenfireandsharedstoriesunderthestars.Thenextday,wewentfishingandhiking,whichwasbothrelaxingandinvigorating.Thewholeexperiencewasincrediblyrefreshing.Itmademerealizehowimportantitistodisconnectfromthedigitalworldandreconnectwithnature.Ifeltasenseofpeaceandunitywithmyfamilythat'shardtofindinourbusylives.I'malreadylookingforwardtoournextadventure.Yours,LiHua下水文2DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouacampingexperiencemyfamilyengagedinlastweekend.Weventuredintothemountains,wherewespenttwodayssurroundedbylushforestsandcrispair.Thefirstdaywasallaboutsettingupcampandexploringthenearbytrails.Wemarveledatthewildlifeandthebreathtakingviews.Onthesecondday,wechallengedourselveswithamoredemandinghiketoawaterfall.Itwasatoughclimb,buttherewardwasworthit.Thesoundofwatercascadingdownandthemistonourfaceswasexhilarating.Thatnight,wecookedasimplemealandenjoyedthesolitude,awayfromthecity'shustleandbustle.Thiscampingtripwasareminderofthesimplejoysinlife.Ittaughtmethevalueofpatienceandteamwork,asweallworkedtogethertoovercomechallenges.Icamebackwitharenewedappreciationforthegreatoutdoorsandthebondsweshareasafamily.Yours,LiHua下水文3DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouacampingexperiencemyfamilyengagedinlastweekend.Wechoseapicturesquespotnearariver,wherewespenttheweekendimmersedinnature'sembrace.Theprocessofpitchingourtentsandpreparingourcampsitewasafun-filledfamilyaffair.Wespentourdaysfishingbytheriverbankandournightsroastingmarshmallowsoverthecampfire.Thehighlightwasastargazingsessionwhereweidentifiedconstellationsandsharedlegendsaboutthestars.Itwasasereneandpeacefulexperiencethatallowedustoslowdownandappreciatethesimplepleasuresoflife.Thiscampingtripwasamemorableadventurethatbro