熱點18旅游2020-2021學(xué)年中考英語最具熱度話題作文（教師版）

熱點18旅游旅游無疑是今年的火爆熱點之一，它為我們的生活帶來了快樂。今天，選擇的2021年中考英語寫作預(yù)測話題是：旅游?！绢A(yù)測題目】（一）下圖是某街區(qū)的平面圖,最近來此旅游的人很多,為方便游客,請寫一份旅游指南。(詞數(shù)不少于60個單詞)WeletoCenterStreet.First,takeataxifromtheairport._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WeletoCenterStreetTakeataxifromtheairport.GoalongRiverStreetandturnleftatthefirstturning.ThengodownBridgeStreetandturnright.NowyouareonCenterStreet.CenterStreetisagoodplacetohavefun.It’saverybusystreet.Youcanenjoyflowersinthegarden.It’sbetweenthepostofficeandtherestaurant.Ifyoulikereading,youcangotothebookstore.Andwhenyouarehungry,youcaneatintherestaurant.It’sacrossfromthebookstore.【解析】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)所給的圖示寫一篇旅游指南。這是一篇看圖作文，我們要仔細觀察圖片中所標注的街道、場所的名稱，分清方向等信息，用正確的英語介紹里面的這些場所。這篇作文跟我們教材中所學(xué)的指路這一話題非常相關(guān)，里面會涉及一些短語和句型，因此學(xué)生們可以從教材上所學(xué)的這些知識著手。寫作時，要注意空間順序，敘述要有條理，不能雜亂無章。使用祈使句和并列句，這些句型在這個場景中是經(jīng)常用到的。注意動詞的正確形式，使用正確的介詞短語。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型，增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者按照題目所給的圖示，介紹了圖上的街道、場所的位置關(guān)系等信息。首先短文的內(nèi)容完整，包括了文章需要的所有信息。整篇短文表達有序，作者按照了從下向上的順序，依次介紹，這樣處理，使文章很有條理。這篇短文里主要使用了祈使句和and連接的并列句，還使用了復(fù)合句。文章里比較好的句型有GoalongRiverStreetandturnleftatthefirstturning.、ThengodownBridgeStreetandturnright、Ifyoulikereading,youcangotothebookstore.、Andwhenyouarehungry,youcaneatintherestaurant等。（二）假如你叫Jane,這個暑假你們?nèi)覝蕚涑鋈ヂ糜?，就下列?nèi)容給旅行社的經(jīng)理寫一封信。注意：1、字數(shù)80詞左右，開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù);2、不得在文中透露自己的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱，否則不予評分。Dearmanager,Mywholefamilywantto_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Jane【答案】Dearmanager,MywholefamilywanttohaveajourneytoDalianduringthesummerholiday.ItwillbeginonJuly10th,andthejourneywilllastfortendays.Wewillgotherebyplane.Couldyouhelpmebooksevenairtickets?Then,wewanttobookahotelwhichisnotexpensive.Weneedthreeroomsforsevenpeople,andwhat’sthemostimportant,thehotelshouldnotbefarfromtheocean.Wewilltakeawalkalongthebeachinthemorning,andwewillgoswimmingandplayingvolleyballonthebeachafterlunch.Besides,myfatherandIwillgosurfinganddivingintothewaterintheafternoon.Itwillbegreatfun.Intheevening,wewilleatmanydifferentkindsofseafood.Itwillbeanexcitingvacationandwewillhaveagoodtime.Wearelookingforwardtothisjourney.Thankyouforyourhelpingus.Yours,Jane【解析】試題分析：本篇作文為應(yīng)用文，要求用英文寫一封信，告知旅行社經(jīng)理關(guān)于旅游的主要事項。要求：1．書信應(yīng)包括圖中所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,并補充相關(guān)內(nèi)容；2．信中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；3．詞數(shù)控制在80字左右。（開頭和結(jié)尾不計入詞數(shù)）。4．要注意時態(tài)運用，表達清楚，語法正確，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不要出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫錯誤?！緦懽髁咙c】：這篇書信要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，字數(shù)符合要求，成功地完成了寫作任務(wù)。并準確運用時態(tài)，表達清楚，語法正確，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。亮點是表示順序詞的運用，使文章更具條理性，思維清晰，表達清楚，例如ItwillbeginonJuly10th,，Then,wewanttobookahotelwhichisnotexpensive.，Besides,myfatherandIwillgosurfinganddivingintothewaterintheafternoon.等。（一）假如在英語課上，老師讓同學(xué)們就自己喜歡的旅游方式展開討論。請你根據(jù)下面的表格提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀阆矚g哪種旅游方式并說明理由。團隊旅游

1.有導(dǎo)游，不會迷路；

2.不必自己找賓館；

3.結(jié)識朋友，相互幫助。

個人旅游

1.自由安排時間；

2.選擇自己喜歡的旅游景點；

3.學(xué)會照顧自己。

注意事項:1.詞數(shù)不少于60；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名或姓名。參考詞匯:團隊旅游travelwithagroup；個人旅游travelalone;安排arrange;景點sightsHello,myclassmates.Ofthetwowaysoftravel,Ilike____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello,myclassmates.Ofthetwowaysoftravel,Iliketravellingwithagroupbetterthantravellingalone.That’sbecauseifwehaveaguideleadingtheway,wewon’tgetlost.Andthereisnoneedforustolookforahotelbyourselves.Inthisway,wecanmakelotsofnewfriendsandlearntohelpeachother.Anyway,weshouldgeteverythingreadybeforewestart.Sotravellingwithagroupisachancetocooperatewithothers.【解析】試題分析：作者介紹了在團隊旅游和個人旅游之間進行選擇自己喜歡的旅游方式，作者選擇了團隊旅行。并介紹了團隊旅行的優(yōu)點。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等?！玖咙c說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，作者把為什么喜歡團隊旅游的原因交代的很清楚，Inthisway,wecanmakelotsofnewfriendsandlearntohelpeachother；weshouldgeteverythingreadybeforewestart..這些句子給文章增色不少。（二）在英語課上，同學(xué)們就自己喜歡的旅游方式展開了討論。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，匯報討論結(jié)果，并談?wù)勛约旱南敕āF隊旅游有導(dǎo)游，不會迷路不必自己找旅館結(jié)識朋友，相互幫助個人旅游自由安排時間選擇自己喜歡的旅游景點學(xué)會照顧自己你的想法……注意：1.文章必須包括表中全部內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)；2.想法至少在兩句以上；3.詞數(shù)為80—100，開頭已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：團隊旅游travelwithagroup；個人旅游travelalone；安排arrangeRecently,wehavediscussedthewaystogotravelling.Hereistheresult.Somestudentschoosetotravelwithagroup.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently,wehavediscussedthewaystogotravelling.Hereistheresult.Somestudentschoosetotravelwithagroup.Withaguide'shelp,theywon'tgetlostandtheydon'tneedtolookforhotelsbythemselves.Besides,theycanmakefriendsandhelpeachotherwhiletravelling.However,otherstudentsprefertotravelalone.That'sbecausetheycanarrangetheirtimefreelyandchoosetovisittheirfavouritesights.What'smore,it'sachanceforthemtolearntolookafterthemselves.Forme,I'dliketotravelalone.IwanttospendenoughtimevisitingtheplacesIlike.Inthisway,Icanenjoymyvacationbetter.【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達是一篇討論結(jié)果報告，結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息，介紹喜歡的旅游方式。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文應(yīng)運用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后表達出自己的看法與觀點。寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。文中g(shù)etlost，withaguide’shelp,lookfor,besides,makefriends,preferto,lookafter等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中還使用了表語從句，固定句型It’s+形容詞/名詞+for+sb.+todosth.等，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。（三）山東泰山被聯(lián)合國教科文組織定為世界自然文化遺產(chǎn)。假設(shè)外國友人到你學(xué)校參觀后準備去旅游。請結(jié)合以下要點和圖片向外國友人簡單介紹泰山：1.位于山東中部，是中國著名旅游勝地。每年有大批中外游客去旅游觀光。2.乘汽車大約要2個小時，也可以乘火車。3.登山便可領(lǐng)略。注意：字數(shù)不少于80詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐字翻譯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MountTaiisoneofthemostfamousmountainsinChina.ItisinthemiddleofShandongProvince.EveryyearthousandsofChineseandforeignersvisitthere.It’snotfarfromhere.Ittakesyouabouttwohourstogettherebybus.Youcanalsogotherebytrain.AutumnisthebestseasontoclimbMountTai.Onthetopofthemountain,youcanenjoytheseaofclouds,wondrouspines,uniquerocksaroundyouandthesunrise.Andthesunriseiswonderful.MountTaiisreallyaniceplacetovisit.【詳解】本文是一篇旅游景點的介紹英語作文一般分為三個部分第一部分：交代寫作的目的：介紹泰山的情況——是我國最著名的山峰之一。第二部分：文章主體部分：介紹泰山的具體信息——地理位置，交通方式，旅游季節(jié)等。第三部分：總結(jié)全文。（四）根據(jù)下表提示，寫一篇有關(guān)北京的旅游指南，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。要求語言通順，條理清晰，詞數(shù)不少于90詞.

China

Aboutthecountry

location

InAsia

Beijing,thecapital

Oldandbig

longhistory

Oneofthefourancientcivilizationsintheworld

Placestovisit

Beijing

VisitthePalaceMuseum,

tryBeijingduck

Weather

Verydifferentaroundthecountry

Others

Language

Chinese

Money

RMB

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BeijingisthecapitalofthePeople'sRepublicofChinaandoneofthefourancientcivilizationsintheworld.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】BeijingisthecapitalofthePeople'sRepublicofChinaandoneofthefourancientcivilizationsintheworld.Itisoldandbig.InBeijing,wecanvisitthePalaceMuseumandwecantryBeijingduck.TheweatherinBeijingisverydifferentaroundcountry.ThepeopleinChinaspeakChinese.WeuseRMB.【解析】試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點一定齊全。句子要完整，表達準確，注意時態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強文章的邏輯性。寫作亮點：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達準確流利，要點齊全。文中有一些好的表達方式如InBeijing,wecanvisitthePalaceMuseumandwecantryBeijingduck.TheweatherinBeijingisverydifferentaroundcountry.ThepeopleinChinaspeakChinese.等等。（一）假如你是北京的李麗，下周你在哈爾濱讀中學(xué)的表妹來北京旅游．請根據(jù)以下提示給她寫一封信，并告訴她在北京旅游期間做一名文明的（well﹣mannered）中學(xué)生．寫作要點：1、歡迎她來北京．2、介紹北京的情況．（1）下周天氣：白天最高溫度超過330C；（2）交通方式：最好乘坐地鐵；（3）必去的名勝：長城．3、對她在北京旅游期間如何做一名文明的中學(xué)生提出具體建議．寫作要求：1、不得使用真實的姓名和學(xué)校名．2、可適當(dāng)加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫．3、字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理清晰．4、至少80詞．DearLiLan，Howareyoudoing？___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!YoursLiLi．【答案】DearLiLan，Howareyoudoing？WeletoBeijing．BeijingislocatedintheeastofChinaandattractsmoreandmorepeopleathomeandabroadtovisit，studyandevenlivedthereforalongtime．Thereasonwhybeijingissopopularisthatitisneitherhotinsummernorcoldinwinter．Notonlyisitthecapitalofchina，butalsoitisrecognizedasthepolitical，educational，andculturecenter．Ifyouwanttohaveanenjoyablejourney，Isuggestyouclimbthegreatwall．BecausethefamoussayinginChinaisthatthemanwhodoesnotreachthegreatwallisnotatrueman．Theweatherwillbehotnextweekendsandthehighesttemperatureisabove30degrees．Soyoushouldwearcoolclothes．Thetransportationisveryconvenientbecausethesubwaynearlycoversthewholecity．Soyouhadbettertakethesubwaytogoout．Beijingisacivilizedcityandyoushouldbeacivilizedstudent．ZunlaoaiyouisthetraditionalvirtueoftheChinesenation．Ifyousitnexttotheoldorthesick，pleasetaketheinitiativeseat．Lookingforwardtoyouring.Bestwishes!Yours,LiLi【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達以來“北京旅游”為話題，結(jié)合所給的寫作材料，寫一封書信。介紹北京的情況，以及寫出文明旅游的要求。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會使用到一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達出人物的感想和看法。寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。文中Weleto,thecapitalof,takethesubway,hadbetter,lookingforwardto，and、so等詞(組)的恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；本文還采用了豐富的句型，比如:句型notonly...butalso...；賓語從句、條件狀語從句、原因狀語從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯的范文。（二）國慶節(jié)即將到來，你的筆友想去三亞旅游，正好今年暑假你和父母去了三亞旅游。請根據(jù)自己的所見、所感及所給的信息向你的筆友介紹三亞之旅.AtriptoSanyaLocationinthesouthofHainanWeatherhotintheday,coolatnightTotalsize(面積)about1919.58squarekilometers,thesecondlargestcityCharactersblueseaandbeautifulbeachesThemostfamoustouristattractions(旅游勝地)BuddhiststatueofGuanyin(海上觀音),NanshanTemple(南山寺),YalongBay(亞龍灣),Theendsoftheearth(天涯海角),WuzhizhouIsland(蜈支洲島)Activitiesgoswimming,gosurfing(沖浪),gofishing,godiving(潛水),playbeachvolleyball…Foodseafood,coconutjuice,fruitTransportationbyair,bytrain…Feelings…要求：1.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2.必須包含所給提示，并做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)不少于70左右。(短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但須把省略號的部分補充完整，不計入總詞數(shù))AtriptoSanyaIhadawonderfultriptoSanyawithmyparentsthissummerholiday.Letmetellyouaboutit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Soasyoucansee,Sanyaisawonderfultouristresorttoenjoyyourholiday.I'msureyouwillhaveagreattimethere.【答案】AtriptoSanyaIhadawonderfultriptoSanyawithmyparentsthissummerholiday.Letmetellyouaboutit.SanyaisinthesouthofHainananditisabout1919.58squarekilometers,thesecondlargestcityinHainan.It'shotintheday,coolatnight.It'sfamousforblueseaandbeautifulbeachesthere.ThemostfamoustouristattractionsareBuddhiststatueofGuanyin,NanshanTemple,YalongBay,TheendsoftheearthandWuzhizhouIsland.TherearelotsofthingstodoinSanya,youcangoswimming,gosurfing,gofishing,godivingandplaybeachvolleyballandsoon.It'swonderful.Alsoyoucanenjoytheseafoodanddrinkcoconutjuiceandtastelotsoffruit,theyareverydelicious.IfyougotoSanya,youcangotherebyairorbytrain.Inthecityyoucangoanywherebybus,bybikeandbytaxi.It'sveryconvenient.Ithinkitwasrelaxingtospendmylastholiday.Soasyoucansee,Sanyaisawonderfultouristresorttoenjoyyourholiday.I'msureyouwillhaveagreattimethere.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目是寫一篇風(fēng)景介紹，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。要求根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容提示來寫一篇介紹三亞風(fēng)景區(qū)的信件，主要介紹三亞的位置，天氣，旅游點及當(dāng)?shù)靥厣龋蛇m當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來敘述；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時；用一般現(xiàn)在時描述三亞景區(qū)的相關(guān)信息；描述細節(jié)時，細節(jié)描寫細致；并同時要結(jié)合所給信息敘述完整，保證條理清晰。（三）考試結(jié)束,我們背上包,帶上自己,去旅游。假如你是李華,今天你們班英語課上進行了討論。請根據(jù)以下信息給遠在英國的筆友Peter寫封電子郵件,告訴他討論的情況,并說說你喜歡的旅游方式和理由。寫作要點:1.討論的話題:去旅游。2.同學(xué)們的旅游方式:(1)50%的同學(xué)想進行一次自己計劃的"自由行"(DIYtour)(2)30%的同學(xué)想進行一次簡單的"跟團旅游"(packagetour)3.說說你喜歡的旅游方式和理由。寫作要求:1.不得使用真實的姓名和學(xué)校名。2.可適當(dāng)加入細節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實,行文連貫。3.字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理清晰。4.至少80詞。DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?Recentlywehavediscusseddifferentwaystogotravelling.HalfofthestudentschooseaDIYtour.Itisconvenientforthemtoarrangetheirtimefreelyandchoosetovisittheirfavouritesights.Inaddition,itisalsoagoodchanceforthemtolearntolookafterthemselves.However,30percentofthestudentspreferapackagetour.Withaguide’shelp,theywon’tgetlostandtheydon’tneedtolookforthehotelsbythemselves.Besides,theycanmakesomenewfriendsandhelpeachotherwhiletravelling.Personally,IremendaDIYtourbecauseIcanspendenoughtimevisitingtheplacesIlike.Inthisway,Icanenjoymyvacationbetter.Bestwishes!YoursLiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：這篇書面表達屬于議論文寫作，但寫作時要按照電子郵件格式寫。在寫作時應(yīng)承接開頭，主體部分結(jié)合學(xué)生的觀點并說明原因，最后表明自己的觀點和理由。2.例文點評：文章采用三段式，簡潔明了；第一段先表示問候，第二段開門見山，用一般現(xiàn)在時介紹了兩種不同的旅游方式并詳細說明了理由，