ContinuationWriting（11）優(yōu)化句子結(jié)構(gòu)

ContinuationWriting（11）優(yōu)化句子結(jié)構(gòu)Miniscenewriting:初階版Itwastherushhouroftheday.Everyoneontheroadwasinhasteforwork.Suddenly,therecameabig“bang”!Amanwithhismotorcyclecrashedintoawoman.Bothofthemfelltotheground.Althoughthewomanfeltveryangry,shestillendeavoredtorisetoherfeetbutinvain.Shelayflatandgroanedloudly.Itseemedthatshewasinjuredseriously.Themangotaguiltyface.Hesparedeveryefforttohelpthewomangetup.Atthesametime,heapologizedwithsincerity,“I'msosorry!”Thenapolicemancameandsentbothofthemtothenearbyhospital.高階版Duetotherushhouroftheday,everyoneontheroadwasinhasteforwork.Suddenly,therecameabig“bang”!Amanwithhismotorcyclecrashedintoawoman,bothofwhomfelltotheground.Angryasshefelt,shestillendeavoredtorisetoherfeetbutinvain.Lyingflatandgroaningloudly,sheseemedtohavebeeninjuredseriously.Withaguiltyface,themansparedeveryefforttohelpthewomangetup,apologizingwithsinceritymeanwhile.Thencameapoliceman,whothensentbothofthemtothenearbyhospital.Appreciateabundantsentencepatternsandpracticethem:I.分詞做狀語他們圍坐在篝火旁，有說有笑，非常放松。Version1:Theysataroundthebonfire,chattingandlaughing,feelingratherrelaxed.Version2:Sittingaroundthebonfire,theychattedandlaughed,feelingratherrelaxed.心里充滿了忐忑不安，Sheldon站在舞臺中間開始輕微地顫抖。Version1:Filledwitheaseandrestlessness,Sheldonstoodonthecentreofthestageandbegantoquiverslightly.Version2:Seizedwitheaseandrestlessness,Sheldonstoodonthestagecenter,beginningtoquiverslightly.practice:我坐在房間里看著雨拍打窗戶。___________________________________________________________風(fēng)卷起雪像一條巨大的毯子圍繞著我們，使得很難看清楚。___________________________________________________________除非被邀請說話，你在會議上應(yīng)該保持安靜。___________________________________________________________她的父親躺在地上，被困在卡車下。___________________________________________________________II.With+O+C做狀語1.“With+O+C”結(jié)構(gòu)中，賓補(bǔ)C與賓語O之間,存在主動關(guān)系，用doing。溺水的男孩在水中無助地掙扎，他的雙手高高地舉過頭頂。Thedrowningboystruggledinthewaterindespair,withhisbothhandsholdinguphighoverhishead.救上岸之后，男孩緊緊地抱住男人，感激的淚水無聲地從臉頰流下來。Afterbeingsaved,theboyhuggedthemanfirmly,withtearsofgratitudestreamingdownhischeeksinsilence.“With+O+C”結(jié)構(gòu)中，賓補(bǔ)C與賓語O之間,存在被動完成關(guān)系，用done。葛朗臺的妻子病入膏肓了，她的眼睛里含滿了淚水Becauseofherincurabledisease,Grandet'swifewashelpless,withhereyesfilledwithtears.然而，葛朗臺只是惱怒地咕噥著，眼睛緊盯著閃閃發(fā)光的金子——他壓根兒不愿意為他妻子的病發(fā)一個子兒。However,Grandetgrumbledwithannoyancewithhiseyesgluedtotheglitteringgold——hewasreluctanttowasteasinglepennyforhiswife'sdisease.practice:他爭論時臉上出現(xiàn)了一種不情愿的表情。_______________________________________________________________________這個女孩安靜地坐在那里，眼睛仍然盯著那個玩具娃娃。_______________________________________________________________________有那個善良的女孩帶領(lǐng)我們，我們毫不費(fèi)勁地找到了圖書館。_______________________________________________________________________這個老人飯后經(jīng)常帶著他的貓散步。_______________________________________________________________________III.獨(dú)立主格做狀語什么是獨(dú)立主格？非謂語動詞作狀語，其邏輯主語須與主句主語保持一致。若不一致，非謂語動詞形式須另帶主語，從而構(gòu)成復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)。這種結(jié)構(gòu)稱為"獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)"。1.非謂語動詞與邏輯主語形成主動關(guān)系，用doing.我根本不知道車開到哪里了，樹木包圍著我，四下不見任何房子。Ihadtheslightestideawheremycarhadtakenmeto,forestssurroundingmeandnohouseinsight.2.非謂語動詞與邏輯主語形成被動完成關(guān)系，用done.Susan感到非常難受，她的貓?jiān)诎峒視r走失了。Version1:Susanwasoverwhelmedwithgrief,hercatgettinglostduringthehousemoving.(原因)Version2:Susanoverwhelmedwithgrief,hercatgotlostduringthehousemoving.(結(jié)果)2)貓終于找到了，他們告別的鄰居,開車走了。Thecatfinallyfound,theysaidgoodbyetotheirneighboranddroveoff.practice:1.牛群分散在田野，有的在吃草，有的靜靜地躺在陰涼角落里。_______________________________________________________________________2.由于眼睛摔壞了，她看不見黑板上的字。_______________________________________________________________________所有的設(shè)備都修好了，他們開始投入工作。任務(wù)完成后，他們開了個派對慶祝._______________________________________________________________________IV.兩個形容詞做狀語1.兩個形容詞作狀語表結(jié)果，放句尾。1.在媽媽的指導(dǎo)下，我彈了8小時的鋼琴，又累又餓。Undermymother'sinstruction,Ispent8hoursplayingthepiano,exhaustedandhungry.由于我思想不集中，連續(xù)彈錯了好幾個音，感到又絕望又自責(zé)。Duetomyabsentmind,Icontinuedtoplaysomewrongnotes,desperateanddevastated.2.兩個形容詞作原因狀語，一般放在句首1.又渴又餓，Henry疾步走進(jìn)了一家小餐廳，想先弄點(diǎn)吃的填飽肚子。Thirstyandhungry,Henryquickenedhispaceintoasmallrestaurantwiththehopeofsomethingtostuffhisstomach.2.勢利又傲慢，那個服務(wù)員對穿得破破爛爛的Henry的到來視若無睹。Snobbishandarrogant,thewaiterturnedablindeyetoHenrywhowasinrags.practice:放松又解脫,我長長地舒了一口氣。_______________________________________________________________________既渴望又興奮，她揮舞著她的黃色衣服，想要吸引別人的注意。_______________________________________________________________________絕望又無助，Jane跪下來，眼淚順著臉頰流下來。_______________________________________________________________________欣喜又激動，媽媽緊緊地抱住了Henry,一句話都說不出來。_______________________________________________________________________V.倒裝句讀后續(xù)寫中的倒裝句，經(jīng)常使用的有兩類，一類是完全倒裝句，另一類是部分倒裝句。1.完全倒裝句1.突然間，門鈴響了。(there+Vi+S結(jié)構(gòu))Allofasudden,therecameadoorbell.2.Jane打開門，門口立著一棵高大的圣誕樹，裝飾著漂亮的絲帶和閃亮的星星(介賓+Vi+S結(jié)構(gòu))Janeopenedthedoor,infrontofwhichstoodabigChristmastreedecoratedwithbeautifulribbonsandsparklingstars.2.部分倒裝句1.他做夢都沒想到，他作弊會被老師當(dāng)場逮住。(否定詞放句首倒裝)Neverinhiswildestdreamdidheimaginethathewouldbecaughtcheatingintheexamonthespotbytheteacher.2.他是如此地羞愧，以至于他可以感到熱血因懊惱而直往臉上沖，心跳加速，膝蓋發(fā)軟。(So...that的倒裝)Soashamedwashethathecouldfeeltheboilingbloodrushingtohisfaceinguilt,hisheartracingandhiskneesweakening.practice:1.我們剛到機(jī)場，飛機(jī)就起飛了(Hardly...when/Nosooner...than...)_______________________________________________________________________2.只有當(dāng)他回到了家，他才知道發(fā)生了什么。(Onlywhen.../Notuntil...)_______________________________________________________________________3.遠(yuǎn)處有一個廢棄的農(nóng)場。(Therebe...)_______________________________________________________________________4.從山洞沖出一只老虎，看起來異常兇猛。(介賓+Vi+S,which...)_______________________________________________________________________VI.各類從句高中的從句，一般包括名詞性從句(主從、表從、賓從和同從)、定語從句和狀語從句。1.名詞性從句/定語從句我非常喜歡看動畫片。讓我印象深刻的是哪吒，他是個叛逆但勇敢的孩子。哪吒從來沒有經(jīng)歷過害怕的感覺，這部分是因?yàn)樗苈斆?。他相信，我命由我不由天。Ilikewatchingcartoons.WhatimpressesmemostisNezha(主從),whoisarebelliousbutbraveboy(定從).Nezhaneverexperiencedandfear,andthat'spartlybecausehewasparticularlyintelligent(表從).Hebelievesthatheisthemasterofthedestiny(賓從)/Heholdsthebeliefthat