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備戰(zhàn)2025年高考英語易錯題（新高考專用）易錯點26應(yīng)用文寫作（4大陷阱）-備戰(zhàn)2024年高考英語考試易錯題含答案易錯點26應(yīng)用文寫作目錄01易錯陷阱（4大陷阱）02舉一反三【易錯點提醒一】審題不清、格式、結(jié)構(gòu)易混易錯點【易錯點提醒二】語言平淡或復(fù)雜易混易錯點【易錯點提醒三】句子錯誤，漢式英語易混易錯點【易錯點提醒四】卷面易混易錯點03易錯題通關(guān)易錯陷阱1：審題不清、格式、結(jié)構(gòu)易混易錯點。【分析】應(yīng)用文中主要以以考查各類書信或電子郵件為主，如建議信、申請信、感謝信等。但近年高考也越來約多的涉及開放式或半開放式作文的考查。即命題人只給出一個話題，而不限制寫作內(nèi)容。有的考生盲目套用所謂寫作模板，文不對題，造成扣分降檔。因此，考生要想獲得高分，需要認(rèn)真審題，明確寫作體裁，避免格式錯誤，如將圖表類作文寫成建議信等。根據(jù)寫作內(nèi)容，明確文章結(jié)構(gòu)，做到條理清晰，布局合理。而很多考生沒有考慮到結(jié)構(gòu)這一點，只是想到哪，就寫到哪，造成文章顯得無層次感。或者盲目分段，達(dá)到五六段，顯得結(jié)構(gòu)混亂，影響得分。一般應(yīng)用文大都采用“三段式”寫作模式，從整體布局先勝一籌。另外，文章開頭應(yīng)當(dāng)開門見山，直接點題，結(jié)尾與開頭首尾呼應(yīng)，使文章整體更加和諧統(tǒng)一。易錯陷阱2：語言平淡或復(fù)雜易混易錯點。【分析】良好的開端就成功了一半。好的開頭和結(jié)尾是留給閱卷老師的第一印象。考生使用詞匯過于籠統(tǒng)、信息指向不明確，句子平淡無奇，全是簡單句的堆砌，沒有高級句式或經(jīng)常的詞匯和短語，毫無亮點。而有的考生為了追求所謂的長句、高級句式，一篇文章充斥的都是復(fù)雜的長難句式，閱讀體驗較差，也會影響得分。因此，應(yīng)當(dāng)運用精彩的開頭和結(jié)尾，多變的句式和詞匯，有了風(fēng)頭、豬肚和豹尾，自然會提升文章的整體檔次。易錯陷阱3：句子錯誤、漢式英語易混易錯點?！痉治觥靠忌蚧A(chǔ)詞匯和句型掌握不牢，導(dǎo)致無法正確運用正確的語言，把所找出的要點表達(dá)清楚。為突出主題，減少錯誤，除了在平時學(xué)習(xí)中大量積累詞匯、短語和句型外，在造句時還應(yīng)當(dāng)使用與話題相關(guān)的詞語和句型。最后檢查單詞拼寫、語法以及銜接等方面是否存在錯誤。易錯陷阱4：卷面易混易錯點。【分析】整潔優(yōu)美的卷面會成為加分的一個因素。有點考生不注意規(guī)范書寫，字母大小隨意，字跡潦草不清，亂涂亂畫，書寫馬虎等都會給閱卷者留下“臟、亂、差”等印象。【易錯點提醒一】體裁格式、結(jié)構(gòu)易混易錯點書信類建議信、申請信、感謝信、邀請信、求助信、投訴信、道歉信、祝賀信短文類演講稿、通知、投稿記敘文記人敘事類說明文說明事物類、圖畫、圖表作文議論文議論觀點、態(tài)度和解決方法類【例1】（2023·湖南長沙一中階段練習(xí)）假定你是李華，你所在的國際學(xué)校圖書館就即將到來的讀書節(jié)正在展開對“FavouriteBookGenresforThisYear’sReadingFestival”的調(diào)查。請使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：GenresProportionBiographies(人物傳記)≈55%Politicalcommentaries(評論)≈58%Classicliterature≈60%1.調(diào)查結(jié)果；2.喜愛理由；3.相關(guān)建議。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ReportonFavouriteBookGenresforThisYear’sReadingFestivalAccordingtothesurveyconductedbyourlibrary,thefollowingisananalysisofstudents’favouritebookgenresforthisyear’sReadingFestival.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【變式1】（2023·安徽安慶·七中模擬預(yù)測）假定你是李華,在美國迪士尼樂園(Disneyland)游玩時丟了錢包，該園的工作人員Henry幫你找到錢包并設(shè)法還給了你。請你寫封信向他表示感謝。要點如下：1.說明寫信原因；2.簡述事情經(jīng)過；3.表達(dá)謝意。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【變式2】（2023·福建龍巖·高三階段練習(xí)）假如你是李華，上周你校舉辦了英語音樂節(jié)活動，請你為校英語報寫一篇報道，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動目的；2.展示內(nèi)容；3.活動反響。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【變式3】（2023·廣西·統(tǒng)考三模）假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Chris在來信中提到他對中國古代建筑很感興趣，計劃明年暑假來中國參觀，希望你幫他推薦一個適合去的城市。請給他回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.推薦的城市及原因；2.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearChris,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【易錯點提醒二】語言平淡或復(fù)雜易混易錯點【例2】普通好詞goodexcellent,amazing,magnificent,splendid,wonderfulsotherefore,hence,asaconsequence,asaresultveryextremely,exceedingly,intenselyknowrecognize,realize,tell,pickouthappenoccur,takeplacepeopleindividuals,characters,folks【變式1】因此，我們最好使用某種便宜的東西。【變式2】要不是Jack的耐心和鼓勵，我就不會取得這么大的進(jìn)步。【變式3】當(dāng)你站在上面，你會情不自禁地想到古代中國人民是如何在沒有先進(jìn)的技術(shù)情況下完成它們的。【易錯點提醒三】句子錯誤、漢式英語易混易錯點【例3】HewanttocometoChinaforavisit.他想要來中國參觀。【變式1】Iamwrittingto...我給你寫信......;【變式2】Iamlookingforwardtoseeyouagain【變式3】Hesatthere,withhiseyesfocusingontheceiling.他坐在那兒，眼睛盯著天花板。（2023·廣東·高三廣州市第一中學(xué)校聯(lián)考）假定你是李華，你校交換生John給你發(fā)郵件說練習(xí)中國書法(calligraphy)太難，他深受挫敗，請你給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.鼓勵堅持下去并說明原因；2.給出如何學(xué)好書法的建議。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·內(nèi)蒙古赤峰·高三期中）假定你是李華，你的朋友Mary來信就如何有效地閱讀一本書向你征求意見。請你給她回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的；2.給出建議；3.表達(dá)期望。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·黑龍江大慶·高三鐵人中學(xué)校考期中）第三屆“一帶一路”國際合作高峰論壇將于2023年10月在中國舉辦。組委會向社會征集志愿者。假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，請按以下要求給組委會寫一封應(yīng)聘信。要求：（1）熱情、有禮（2）熟悉中國傳統(tǒng)文化；（3）英語口語流利。生詞：“一帶一路”國際合作高峰論壇theBeltandRoadForumforInternationalCooperationDearSirorMadam,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua（2023·福建廈門·高三?？茧A段練習(xí)）假定你是李華，第4屆亞殘運會(AsianParaGames)正在火熱進(jìn)行中，你從網(wǎng)上看到組委會正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封信，包括下列要點：1.介紹你的基本信息；2.說明你的優(yōu)勢；3.表示你希望被錄用。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于80；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearSir/Madam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Faithfully,LiHua（2023·湖南岳陽·高三校聯(lián)考階段練習(xí)）假定你是李華，你班將為美國交換生Barry舉行歡迎派對。請你給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容如下：1.舉行派對原因；2.具體事宜安排。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearBarry,Howiseverythinggoing?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua（2023·全國·高三階段練習(xí)）近期因疫情，同學(xué)們不得不居家上網(wǎng)課，據(jù)校學(xué)生會發(fā)布的相關(guān)調(diào)查顯示，一部分青少年在上網(wǎng)課期間缺乏計劃與自律，感到焦慮，甚至?xí)撩曰ヂ?lián)網(wǎng)游戲，熬夜刷短視頻，閑聊等，疏忽了學(xué)業(yè)，并受到父母責(zé)罵。請就此現(xiàn)象寫一篇英語短文，投稿校報英語專欄。內(nèi)容主要包括:1.簡述調(diào)查反饋；2.簡單評論；3.你的建議忠告。注意:1.詞數(shù)100-120左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；參考詞匯：epidemic流行病,疫情______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·全國·高三校聯(lián)考期中）假定你校英語俱樂部將舉行一場題為“TheInternet,GoodorBadforEnglishLearning?”的英語辯論賽，請你寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽。內(nèi)容包括：1.你的觀點；2.你的理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·浙江溫州·統(tǒng)考一模）假定你是李華，在外刊閱讀中遇到了困難，嘗試一些方法后仍未達(dá)到預(yù)期效果。請你給外教Marcus寫一封郵件尋求幫助，內(nèi)容包括：1.嘗試方法：2.請求指導(dǎo)。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卷的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearMarcus,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua（2023·河南信陽·統(tǒng)考一模）《中國日報》正在開展以“ShouldWeReadChineseClassics?”為題的討論，你受托對你校中學(xué)生讀書類型進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查。請根據(jù)以下調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.名著閱讀現(xiàn)狀；2.你的觀點。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·遼寧大連·大連八中?？既＃W(xué)校英文報正在開展以“HowtoSpendOurNationalHoliday”為題的討論。請根據(jù)表格中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.調(diào)查結(jié)果描述；2.簡單評論；3.你的建議。如何度過國慶節(jié)調(diào)查結(jié)果方式學(xué)習(xí)娛樂社會實踐，志愿活動人數(shù)百分比60%15%25%注意：(1)寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

易錯點26應(yīng)用文寫作目錄01易錯陷阱（4大陷阱）02舉一反三【易錯點提醒一】審題不清、格式、結(jié)構(gòu)易混易錯點【易錯點提醒二】語言平淡或復(fù)雜易混易錯點【易錯點提醒三】句子錯誤，漢式英語易混易錯點【易錯點提醒四】卷面易混易錯點03易錯題通關(guān)易錯陷阱1：審題不清、格式、結(jié)構(gòu)易混易錯點?！痉治觥繎?yīng)用文中主要以以考查各類書信或電子郵件為主，如建議信、申請信、感謝信等。但近年高考也越來約多的涉及開放式或半開放式作文的考查。即命題人只給出一個話題，而不限制寫作內(nèi)容。有的考生盲目套用所謂寫作模板，文不對題，造成扣分降檔。因此，考生要想獲得高分，需要認(rèn)真審題，明確寫作體裁，避免格式錯誤，如將圖表類作文寫成建議信等。根據(jù)寫作內(nèi)容，明確文章結(jié)構(gòu)，做到條理清晰，布局合理。而很多考生沒有考慮到結(jié)構(gòu)這一點，只是想到哪，就寫到哪，造成文章顯得無層次感?；蛘呙つ糠侄?，達(dá)到五六段，顯得結(jié)構(gòu)混亂，影響得分。一般應(yīng)用文大都采用“三段式”寫作模式，從整體布局先勝一籌。另外，文章開頭應(yīng)當(dāng)開門見山，直接點題，結(jié)尾與開頭首尾呼應(yīng)，使文章整體更加和諧統(tǒng)一。易錯陷阱2：語言平淡或復(fù)雜易混易錯點?！痉治觥苛己玫拈_端就成功了一半。好的開頭和結(jié)尾是留給閱卷老師的第一印象?？忌褂迷~匯過于籠統(tǒng)、信息指向不明確，句子平淡無奇，全是簡單句的堆砌，沒有高級句式或經(jīng)常的詞匯和短語，毫無亮點。而有的考生為了追求所謂的長句、高級句式，一篇文章充斥的都是復(fù)雜的長難句式，閱讀體驗較差，也會影響得分。因此，應(yīng)當(dāng)運用精彩的開頭和結(jié)尾，多變的句式和詞匯，有了風(fēng)頭、豬肚和豹尾，自然會提升文章的整體檔次。易錯陷阱3：句子錯誤、漢式英語易混易錯點。【分析】考生因基礎(chǔ)詞匯和句型掌握不牢，導(dǎo)致無法正確運用正確的語言，把所找出的要點表達(dá)清楚。為突出主題，減少錯誤，除了在平時學(xué)習(xí)中大量積累詞匯、短語和句型外，在造句時還應(yīng)當(dāng)使用與話題相關(guān)的詞語和句型。最后檢查單詞拼寫、語法以及銜接等方面是否存在錯誤。易錯陷阱4：卷面易混易錯點?！痉治觥空麧崈?yōu)美的卷面會成為加分的一個因素。有點考生不注意規(guī)范書寫，字母大小隨意，字跡潦草不清，亂涂亂畫，書寫馬虎等都會給閱卷者留下“臟、亂、差”等印象?！疽族e點提醒一】體裁格式、結(jié)構(gòu)易混易錯點書信類建議信、申請信、感謝信、邀請信、求助信、投訴信、道歉信、祝賀信短文類演講稿、通知、投稿記敘文記人敘事類說明文說明事物類、圖畫、圖表作文議論文議論觀點、態(tài)度和解決方法類【例1】（2023·湖南長沙一中階段練習(xí)）假定你是李華，你所在的國際學(xué)校圖書館就即將到來的讀書節(jié)正在展開對“FavouriteBookGenresforThisYear’sReadingFestival”的調(diào)查。請使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：GenresProportionBiographies(人物傳記)≈55%Politicalcommentaries(評論)≈58%Classicliterature≈60%1.調(diào)查結(jié)果；2.喜愛理由；3.相關(guān)建議。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ReportonFavouriteBookGenresforThisYear’sReadingFestivalAccordingtothesurveyconductedbyourlibrary,thefollowingisananalysisofstudents’favouritebookgenresforthisyear’sReadingFestival.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________易錯分析：審題不清易錯，要求中出現(xiàn)給出建議變單純按照建議信的模式寫容易錯?！敬鸢浮縍eportonFavouriteBookGenresforThisYear’sReadingFestivalAccordingtothesurveyconductedbyourlibrary,thefollowingisananalysisofstudents’favouritebookgenresforthisyear’sReadingFestival.Thesurveyrevealsthatstudentshavediversepreferences,withapproximately55%ofstudentsfavoringbiographies,nearly58%preferringpoliticalcommentaries,andaround60%fondofclassicliterature.Itisreportedthatbiographiesinspirereaderswithvaluablepersonalitiesofremarkablepeople.Politicalcommentariesprovidecriticalanalysisandmultipleperspectivesonpoliticalissues,encouragingstudentstothinkcritically.Theenduringappealofclassicliteraturetransportreaderstodiversesettingsandevokeemotionsandreflections.Asclassicliteratureemergesasthetopfavorite,werecommendanexhibitionshowcasingclassicliteraryworks,encouragingstudentstoexploretherichstorytellingandfosteradeeploveforliterature.Let’scelebratethejoyofreadingthisyearbyimmersingourselvesinthetimelessbeautyofclassicliterature!【變式1】（2023·安徽安慶·七中模擬預(yù)測）假定你是李華,在美國迪士尼樂園(Disneyland)游玩時丟了錢包，該園的工作人員Henry幫你找到錢包并設(shè)法還給了你。請你寫封信向他表示感謝。要點如下：1.說明寫信原因；2.簡述事情經(jīng)過；3.表達(dá)謝意。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________易錯分析：單純寫出感謝信的經(jīng)典句型，忽略要點要求中的“簡述事情經(jīng)過”?！敬鸢浮緿earHenry,I’mLiHua.Withthedeepestgratitude,I’mwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltthankstoyouforyourhelp.WhenIenjoyedmytripinDisneylandyesterday,Idiscoveredmywalletwasmissing.IwastotallyatalosswhereIcouldhaveleftit.Itcontainedallthemoney,myidentitycardandpassport,withoutwhichIwouldgetintogreattrouble.SoIfeltextremelyworriedandupset.Ihadnochoicebuttoturntoyou.Youpromisedmethatyouwouldmanagetofinditback.Luckily,youfoundit,andsentittomyhotelthismorning.Idoappreciateyourkindness.Thanksagainforyourhelp.Wishyouallthebest.【變式2】（2023·福建龍巖·高三階段練習(xí)）假如你是李華，上周你校舉辦了英語音樂節(jié)活動，請你為校英語報寫一篇報道，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動目的；2.展示內(nèi)容；3.活動反響。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________易錯分析：思維固化，總是以書信格式開頭或結(jié)尾易錯，內(nèi)容要點易忽略?！敬鸢浮縇astweek,ourschoolheldanEnglishMusicFestival,aimingtoimproveourEnglish-speakingabilityandpromotecross-culturalunderstanding.Thefestivalincludedvariousactivitiessuchassingingcontests,speechcompetitions,andbandperformances.TherewasalsoadisplayoftraditionalBritishfoodandachancetotrytraditionalChinesedishes.Theresponsetothefestivalhasbeenoverwhelminglypositive.StudentswereexcitedtohavetheopportunitytousetheirEnglish-speakingskillsinafunandrelaxedenvironment.Overall,thefestivalwasagreatsuccess,witheveryoneinvolvedenjoyingthemselvesandtakingsomethingvaluableawayfromtheexperience.【變式3】（2023·廣西·統(tǒng)考三模）假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Chris在來信中提到他對中國古代建筑很感興趣，計劃明年暑假來中國參觀，希望你幫他推薦一個適合去的城市。請給他回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.推薦的城市及原因；2.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearChris,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua易錯分析：審題不嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，把推薦信寫成單純的邀請信，忽略“推薦”的要點?！敬鸢浮緿earChris,KnowingyourkeeninterestinancientChinesearchitecture,IshallrecommendtoyouBeijing,acitywithpreciousarchitecturalheritage.Firstofall,theGreatWallisparticularlyprominent.Whenstandingonit,youcannothelpthinkinghowtheancientChinesecouldfinishtheconstructionwithoutanyadvancedtechnology.Additionally,attheheartofBeijingstandstheForbiddenCity,whichisthelargestwoodenpalaceintheworldandhasahistoryofover600years.InBeijing,youcanalsoexperienceothervariousstylesofChinesebuildings.Hopemyrecommendationcanbehelpful.AndeagertomeetyouthissummerinBeijing!Yours,LiHua【易錯點提醒二】語言平淡或復(fù)雜易混易錯點【例2】普通好詞goodexcellent,amazing,magnificent,splendid,wonderfulsotherefore,hence,asaconsequence,asaresultveryextremely,exceedingly,intenselyknowrecognize,realize,tell,pickouthappenoccur,takeplacepeopleindividuals,characters,folks【變式1】因此，我們最好使用某種便宜的東西。【低分】So,wehadbetterusesomethinginexpensive.易錯分析：單純字面翻譯，語言平淡無奇，沒有任何兩點?！旧墶縏herefore,wehadbettermakefulluseofsomethinginexpensive.【變式2】要不是Jack的耐心和鼓勵，我就不會取得這么大的進(jìn)步?！镜头帧縅ackwasverypatientandheoftenencouragedme.Otherwise,Iwouldn’thaveprogressedsomuch.易錯分析：句子平鋪直敘，語言平淡無亮點?！旧墶縃aditnotbeenforJack’spatienceandencouragement,Iwouldn’thavemadesuchgreatprogress.【變式3】當(dāng)你站在上面，你會情不自禁地想到古代中國人民是如何在沒有先進(jìn)的技術(shù)情況下完成它們的。【低分】Whenyoustandonit,youwillthinkhowtheancientChinesecouldfinishtheconstructionwhentheydidn’thaveadvancedtechnology.【升級】Whenstandingonit,youcannothelpthinkinghowtheancientChinesecouldfinishtheconstructionwithoutanyadvancedtechnology.【易錯點提醒三】句子錯誤、漢式英語易混易錯點【例3】HewanttocometoChinaforavisit.他想要來中國參觀。易錯分析：基礎(chǔ)知識和詞匯掌握不牢。主謂一致不熟悉?！驹斀狻康图壵Z法錯誤和單詞拼寫錯誤是文章扣分的一大因素。這些基礎(chǔ)詞匯和語法的熟練運用需要積累大量知識。【變式1】Iamwrittingto...我給你寫信......;易錯分析：單詞的變化形式掌握不牢，多由于發(fā)音不準(zhǔn)造成?！驹斀狻縲rite過去式wrote;過去分詞written;現(xiàn)在分詞writing?！咀兪?】Iamlookingforwardtoseeyouagain易錯分析：固定短語掌握存在知識漏洞。【詳解】下列短語中，to是介詞，后面需要跟動詞的ing形式。getdownto開始認(rèn)真做；stickto堅持；beaddictedto沉溺于；bedevotedto致力于等?！咀兪?】Hesatthere,withhiseyesfocusingontheceiling.他坐在那兒，眼睛盯著天花板。易錯分析：短語的基本用法掌握不牢出現(xiàn)漢語式英語?！驹斀狻縡ocusone’seyes/attention“集中注意力于”。focus與眼睛之間為動賓關(guān)系，應(yīng)改為：Hesatthere,withhiseyesfocusedontheceiling.（2023·廣東·高三廣州市第一中學(xué)校聯(lián)考）假定你是李華，你校交換生John給你發(fā)郵件說練習(xí)中國書法(calligraphy)太難，他深受挫敗，請你給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.鼓勵堅持下去并說明原因；2.給出如何學(xué)好書法的建議。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJohn,YousaidyouhadtroubleinpracticingChinesecalligraphy,whichmadeyouupset.Ihopeyoudon’tgiveuphalfway.Ifyoustickitout,Iamsureitwillbringyouapeacefulmindandauniqueculturalexperience.Astohowtoimprove,firstly,youshouldstrictlyfollowyourteacher’sinstructionsandmakeadjustmentswhenevernecessary.Secondly,alwaysobservethestructureofChinesecharacterswhenpracticing.Onlywhenyou’veunderstooditcanyouwriteitwell.Hopemyadvicewillbeofsomehelp.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生給交換生John寫一封電子郵件，鼓勵他堅持練習(xí)中國書法，說明原因，并給出如何學(xué)好書法的建議。【詳解】1.詞匯積累確定：besure→beboundto首先：firstly→tobeginwith應(yīng)該：should→besupposedto幫助：help→assistance2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Astohowtoimprove,firstly,youshouldstrictlyfollowyourteacher’sinstructionsandmakeadjustmentswhenevernecessary.拓展句：Astohowyoucanimproveyourcalligraphy,firstly,youshouldstrictlyfollowyourteacher’sinstructionsandmakeadjustmentswhenevernecessary.[高分句型1]YousaidyouhadtroubleinpracticingChinesecalligraphy,whichmadeyouupset.（運用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）[高分句型2]Onlywhenyou’veunderstooditcanyouwriteitwell.（運用了when時間狀語從句和部分倒裝）（2023·內(nèi)蒙古赤峰·高三期中）假定你是李華，你的朋友Mary來信就如何有效地閱讀一本書向你征求意見。請你給她回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的；2.給出建議；3.表達(dá)期望。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMary,It’sgreattohearfromyou.Knowingthatyouareseekingadviceonhowtoeffectivelyreadabook,I’mmorethandelightedtosharesomeinsightswithyou.Undoubtedly,pre-readingcomesthefirstplace.Beforedivingintoabook,itissuggestedthatyoutakeafewmomentstoskimthroughintroductionsorsummariesavailable.Thiswillgiveyouageneralideaofthebook’smainidea.Inaddition,youaresupposedtohighlightkeypointsandjotdownanyquestionthatariseswhilereading,thusstayingengaged.Finally,afterfinishingabook,itisnecessarytoreflectonwhatyou’velearnedtoreinforceyourunderstanding.Ihopethesetipsareofhelptoyou.Ifyouhaveanyfurtherquestions,pleasedon’thesitatetoreachout.Happyreading!Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給朋友Mary回一封郵件，就如何有效地閱讀一本書給她提建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累高興的：delighted→glad此外：inaddition→what’smore建議：advice→suggestion有幫助的：ofhelp→helpful2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Undoubtedly,pre-readingcomesthefirstplace.拓展句：Thereisnodoubtthatpre-readingcomesthefirstplace.【高分句型1】Beforedivingintoabook,itissuggestedthatyoutakeafewmomentstoskimthroughintroductionsorsummariesavailable.（運用了it作形式主語，that引導(dǎo)主語從句）【高分句型2】Inaddition,youaresupposedtohighlightkeypointsandjotdownanyquestionthatariseswhilereading,thusstayingengaged.（運用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句和狀語從句中的省略以及現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語）（2023·黑龍江大慶·高三鐵人中學(xué)?？计谥校┑谌龑谩耙粠б宦贰眹H合作高峰論壇將于2023年10月在中國舉辦。組委會向社會征集志愿者。假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，請按以下要求給組委會寫一封應(yīng)聘信。要求：（1）熱情、有禮（2）熟悉中國傳統(tǒng)文化；（3）英語口語流利。生詞：“一帶一路”國際合作高峰論壇theBeltandRoadForumforInternationalCooperationDearSirorMadam,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearSirorMadamThankyouforreadingmyletter.AstheBeltandRoadForumforInternationalCooperationiscoming,I'dlikeverymuchtobeavolunteer.Allourcitizensarelookingforwardtothisspecialevent.Firstofall,IpromiseIwill,withgreatpassion,trymybesttoserveourdistinguishedguestsfromhomeandabroadpolitely.Besides,IhavearichknowledgeofChinesehistory,especiallytraditionalculture,whichenablesmetospreadoursplendidculture.What'smore,I'mgoodatEnglishandChinese,whichwillplayanimportantroleincommunicationduringtheforum.Tosumup,IbelieveIcanbeaqualifiedvolunteer.IwilltrymybestifI'maccepted.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生對于第三屆“一帶一路”國際合作高峰論壇將于2023年10月在中國舉辦，組委會向社會征集志愿者這一情況，按以下要求給組委會寫一封應(yīng)聘信?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累熱情：passion→enthusiasm豐富的：rich→abundant總之：Tosumup→Inaword重要的：important→vital2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Allourcitizensarelookingforwardtothisspecialevent.拓展句：Allourcitizensarelookingforwardtothisspecialevent,whichcanmakeusmoreconfidentontheworldstage.【高分句型1】Besides,IhavearichknowledgeofChinesehistory,especiallytraditionalculture,whichenablesmetospreadoursplendidculture.（運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】AstheBeltandRoadForumforInternationalCooperationiscoming,I'dlikeverymuchtobeavolunteer.（運用了As引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句。）（2023·福建廈門·高三校考階段練習(xí)）假定你是李華，第4屆亞殘運會(AsianParaGames)正在火熱進(jìn)行中，你從網(wǎng)上看到組委會正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封信，包括下列要點：1.介紹你的基本信息；2.說明你的優(yōu)勢；3.表示你希望被錄用。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于80；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearSir/Madam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Faithfully,LiHua【答案】DearSir/Madam,Ihavelearnedthatvolunteersfor4thAsianParaGamesarewanted.Iamwritingtoapplyforthisposition.I’maSenior3student,andIbelieveIamqualifiedfortheposition.Theseyears,IhavebeenonseveralexchangeprogramsinAmerica,soIamconfidentwithmycommunicationskillsinEnglish.What’smore,asasuperfanofsports,withmyloveandknowledgeofsportsaswellasChinesecultureandhistory,IcanfulfillmyrolenotonlyasasuccessfulcoordinatorbutalsoaculturalambassadortospreadthesplendidChineseculture.Inaddition,thevoluntaryservicewillofferapreciouschancetocontributetooursociety,whichappealstomeverymuch.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldoffermetheopportunity.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Faithfully,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假定你是李華，第4屆亞殘運會(AsianParaGames)正在火熱進(jìn)行中，你從網(wǎng)上看到組委會正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封信?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累招募：want→recruit感謝地：grateful→thankful此外：inaddition→besides寶貴的：precious→valuable2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Theseyears,IhavebeenonseveralexchangeprogramsinAmerica,soIamconfidentwithmycommunicationskillsinEnglish.拓展句：HavingbeenonseveralexchangeprogramsinAmericathereyears,IamconfidentwithmycommunicationskillsinEnglish.[高分句型1]IhavelearnedthatEnglishvolunteersfor4thAsianParaGamesarewanted.(運用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)[高分句型2]Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldoffermetheopportunity.(運用了if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句)（2023·湖南岳陽·高三校聯(lián)考階段練習(xí)）假定你是李華，你班將為美國交換生Barry舉行歡迎派對。請你給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容如下：1.舉行派對原因；2.具體事宜安排。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearBarry,Howiseverythinggoing?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearBarry,Howiseverythinggoing?Onbehalfofourclass,Iwouldliketoextendawarmwelcometoyouasournewclassmate!Tohelpyougettoknowtheclassmatesbetterandtomakeyoufeelathomeinourschool,weareplanningawelcomepartyforyou.Thepartywillbeheldintheschoolauditoriumat6:00p.m.onFriday.Wehavearrangedavarietyofactivities,includingplayinggames,singingsongs,andsharingfood.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasedon’thesitatetocontactme.Lookingforwardtomeetingyousoon!Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給美國交換生Barry寫封郵件，告知他即將為他舉行的歡迎派對?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累代表：onbehalfof→innameof安排：arrange→schedule各種各樣的：avarietyof→various聯(lián)系：contact→getintouchwith2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Wehavearrangedavarietyofactivities,includingplayinggames,singingsongs,andshari