高二上學(xué)期英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)之人與動(dòng)物類(lèi)課件

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)

人與動(dòng)物類(lèi)類(lèi)型一：可愛(ài)型動(dòng)物故事情節(jié)人與動(dòng)物和諧相處，相親互助類(lèi)型二：兇猛型動(dòng)物故事情節(jié)人與動(dòng)物發(fā)生沖突，成功脫險(xiǎn)類(lèi)型一：可愛(ài)型動(dòng)物故事情節(jié)——人與動(dòng)物和諧相處，相親互助可愛(ài)型動(dòng)物，如狗，鳥(niǎo)等，主要構(gòu)思陪伴、忠誠(chéng)，或者人救助動(dòng)物生命，動(dòng)物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情節(jié)。日常家養(yǎng)人救動(dòng)物動(dòng)物救人人狗和諧：父母決定給Poppy買(mǎi)一條小狗作伴，幫助Poppy擺脫孤獨(dú)和想念的故事（2020年1月浙江高考）人貓和諧：作者的丈夫從討厭貓到向貓求助，趕走土撥鼠的故事（2021年3月一模）人狗和諧：作者和作者的丈夫幫助了一條流浪狗的故事（2023年三新聯(lián)盟高二期末）類(lèi)型二：兇猛型動(dòng)物故事情節(jié)——人與動(dòng)物發(fā)生沖突，成功脫險(xiǎn)兇猛的動(dòng)物，如狼、熊等，一般會(huì)給人造成生命威脅，所以主要是以遇險(xiǎn)、脫險(xiǎn)的故事情節(jié)為主。人狼大戰(zhàn)：騎車(chē)旅途遭遇狼wolf追趕，脫險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷（2017年6月浙江高考）人熊大戰(zhàn)：北極探險(xiǎn)者給北極熊拍照，遭遇polarbear追趕的驚險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷（2020年6月浙江高考）人狗和諧：作者和作者的丈夫幫助了一條流浪狗的故事（2023年三新聯(lián)盟高二期末）1

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liveonafarmwheredogsarepartofthelandscape.YetthedogIspotteddidn’tquitefitin,asImoveddownmydrivewaythatchillylateFebruaryday.AtfirstglanceIthoughtitwasmybrother’sChihuahua.Butasecondglanceraiseddoubts,forIknewmybrother’slittlehousedogwasnocandidateforaswiftrunacrossayard.SoIfiguredthisunknowndogwouldsoonfinditswayhome,andIhadtaskstodo.Who:________Where:_______What:_____________________________________________

讀人物讀要素I；adogafarm①I(mǎi)spottedaunknowndogthatlostitswayhome.2

Afewdayslater,whilewalkingpastthedoortothebackofmyhouse,Isawthedeck甲板

swing秋千moving.Clearly,someoneorsomethinghadsetthatswinginmotion.Beinghomeandalonethatevening,thethoughtofanunknownpresencewanderingaboutsetmeonedge.3

Nextmorning,standingdirectlyinmyfrontyard,bitingongrass,wasthattinydogIhadspottedearlier.Icalledmyhusbandtotakealook.Butwhenthedogheardthefrontdooropen,sheranawayforthesafetyofthenearbywoods.Who:__________________________What:_______________________________________________________________________________________________

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①Theunknowndogwanderingnearmyhouse.myhusband②Thedogwastoofeartoranawayforsafety.4

Itwasjustamatteroftimebeforethebadweatherorthewolveswouldbethedeathofsuchasmallanddefenselessdog.Werealizedthepoorthingmusthavebeenwaitingsecretlyaroundourhouseforweeks.MyhusbandandIformulated制定

arescueplan.Weplacedfoodandwaternearthedeckswing.Thenextmorning,thefoodandwaterhadbeenconsumed消耗,soweputoutmore.Ittookseveraldaysofputtingoutfoodandwaterbeforewecaughtthedogintheact,andanothertwoweeksafterthatbeforethedogfeltcomfortableenoughtoapproachoneofus.What:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

①Thebadweatherorthewolveswouldbethedeathofsuchasmallanddefenselessdog.②MyhusbandandImakearescueplanforthedog.③Finallythedogfeltcomfortableenoughtoapproachoneofus.5

Oneaftemoon,Icamehomeandfoundmyhusbandholdingouthishandwhileleaning傾向forwardinthedeckswing.Iwitnessedahappydogtailwaggingfuriouslyandeatinghot-dogpiesesfrommy

husband'shand.Thestagewassetforthefinalpartofourplan:topersuadethedoginside.What:__________________________________________________________________________________________①Thestagewassetforthefinalpartofourplan:topersuadethedoginside.IntroductionProblemClimaxResolutionConclusionIignoredtheunknowndog.MyhusbandandIformulatedarescueplanforthelittledog.Afterafewweeks,wewantedtopersuadethedoginside.STORYMOUNTAIN

Afewnightsafterward,whenitwaspouring,Iopenedthedoorandthedogwasthere.Momentslater,holdingthehotdog,myhusbandannounced,“Thedogisback.”.Love讀情節(jié)

小狗蜷縮著，凍得瑟瑟發(fā)抖。（根據(jù)首段第一句定第二句）丈夫手里拿著熱狗，期待等著小狗。（根據(jù)第二段第一句定首段尾句）（根據(jù)首尾句填充情節(jié)）動(dòng)作我打開(kāi)門(mén)嚇跑了小狗。心理?yè)?dān)心并希望小狗能進(jìn)屋里。動(dòng)作我突然想到一個(gè)主意。心理從冰箱拿出熱狗環(huán)境振奮，期待小狗吃了丈夫手上的熱狗心理丈夫：高興（根據(jù)故事發(fā)展設(shè)定結(jié)局）現(xiàn)在，小狗和我們一起生活得很安心幸福。小狗漂亮而外向可愛(ài)，在充滿愛(ài)的房子里融化了我們的心。動(dòng)作小狗進(jìn)屋后，我關(guān)上了門(mén)。（根據(jù)首尾句填充情節(jié)）動(dòng)作小狗到處打量屋里環(huán)境，打量我和丈夫語(yǔ)言建框架雨很大，很冷心理小狗：驚慌；恐懼心理小狗：逐漸平靜，不再害怕丈夫輕聲安撫小狗動(dòng)作小狗愿意被抱起，也意味著救援成功完成。Afewnightsafterward,whenitwaspouring,Iopenedthedoorandthedogwasthere.Momentslater,holdingthehotdog,myhusbandannounced,“Thedogisback.”.（根據(jù)第二段第一句定第二段第二句）Paragraph1:

Afewnightsafterward,whenitwaspouring,Iopenedthedoorandthedogwasthere.Itcurledup蜷縮inalawnchairoutsideourhouse,trembling發(fā)抖becauseofchill寒冷.Istartled驚嚇herandsheleaped跳躍fromthechairandvanished消失intothepouringrain.

Icomforted安慰myselfwiththehopethatthestormwouldpersuade說(shuō)服ourlittlefriendtoreturntoourwarmhouse.Thenanideahitme.Ikeptthedooropenandracedtotherefrigerator冰箱forsomehotdogs.Icutthemupandmadeatrailof一堆hot-dogpiecesfromthedoorintothelivingroom.Myhusband’schairwasattheendofthetrail小徑.Hesatandwaited等待withmorehot-dogpiecesinhishand.參考范文Paragraph2:

Momentslater,holdingthehot-dog,myhusbandannounced宣告,“Thedogisback.”

Thelittledogwarily小心翼翼ateherwaytomyhusband’soutstretched展開(kāi)的hand.Whenshereached走近himIshut關(guān)thedoor.Shepanicked驚嚇andracedaroundlookingforawayout.Then,shetired累andwewitnessed看到anastonishingtransformation.Shestopped,fixed固定，盯著

hereyesonmyhusband,andthenturnedhergaze目光towardme.Notrembling.Myhusbandspokesoftlyassheallowedhimtolift舉起hergingerly小心翼翼tohislap腿.Herfearwasgone.Ifawaggingtailisanyindicator指令,therescuewascomplete.Now,thelittledogsleepsonmyshouldereverynight.Sheisbeautifulandoutgoing,meltingourheartsinahousefilledwithlove.Despitethechillautumnwind,theirhomewasfilledwiththewarmthoflove1.Acatmiaows/mews/purr2.Adogyaps/yelps/barks/snarls.3.Acockcrows.4.Alionroars.5.Awolfhowls.6.Abee/mosquitohums/buzzes.

貓“喵喵”叫狗吠公雞啼獅吼狼嚎蜂/蚊子“嗡嗡”叫描寫(xiě)動(dòng)物“叫”素材積累1.apairoflargewateryeyes2.twobigroundeyes3.beady/sparkling/twinklingeyes4.anoselikeasmallblackgem5.long/muscular/skinny/spindlylegs6.furisaswhiteassnow

7.alonglittletail兩只圓溜溜的大眼睛一顆黑寶石般的鼻子皮毛像雪一樣潔白一條長(zhǎng)長(zhǎng)的小尾巴描寫(xiě)“外貌”素材積累小珠般圓亮的/亮晶晶的/閃閃發(fā)亮的眼睛一雙水汪汪的大眼睛長(zhǎng)的/肌肉發(fā)達(dá)的/皮包骨的/干瘦的腿1.wagthetail2.smell/sniff3.bark/yap/yelp4.lick5.puttheearsup6.shakethewholebody

搖尾巴嗅狗吠舔把耳朵豎起來(lái)抖動(dòng)全身描寫(xiě)“動(dòng)作”素材積累1.bitethecornerofthecoat2.holdittightlywiththepaws3.fallonitsback4.runaroundme5.leaptoitsfeet6.restthenoseinitspaws

咬住衣角用爪子緊緊按住摔得四腳朝天圍著我跑跳起來(lái)把鼻子擱在爪子里描寫(xiě)“動(dòng)作”素材積累可愛(ài)型動(dòng)物高興TheyweregladtoseePoppycomingbacktoherusualself（他們很高興看到Poppy又回到以前的自己）,guidingthelittledogondailywalksandevenintroducingtoitherfavoritetoys.微情節(jié)可愛(ài)型動(dòng)物忠誠(chéng)Smilingeversobright（笑得更加燦爛。）,hecalledouttohisparents,whotuggedhiminforalonghug.微情節(jié)可愛(ài)型動(dòng)物陪伴Herparentswatchedthemplayingaroundandsmiledwithrelief（輕松地笑了）–Poppywasbacktoheroldcheerfulself!微情節(jié)兇猛型動(dòng)物害怕Terrified（非常害怕）,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.微情節(jié)兇猛型動(dòng)物害怕Seeingtheapproachofthepolarbear,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch（被恐懼嚇呆，害怕到動(dòng)也不能動(dòng)）微情節(jié)兇猛型動(dòng)物害怕MywifeElligraspedmyclothesandtrembled,swallowinghard（抓住我的衣服，顫抖著，使勁吞口水）微情節(jié)兇猛型動(dòng)物害怕Thinkingofthewolf’sbloodymouth,Macwasnearlydeadwithfright（幾乎給嚇?biāo)溃┪⑶楣?jié)兇猛型動(dòng)物害怕Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror（被一種強(qiáng)烈的恐懼感所控制）,mypalmssweating.微情節(jié)兇猛型動(dòng)物求助Atthesightofit,Elliwavedherhandswildly（瘋狂地?fù)]手）,screaming,“Help!”微情節(jié)兇猛型動(dòng)物獲救Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtospot（驚奇地發(fā)現(xiàn)）thatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.微情節(jié)兇猛型動(dòng)物獲救Iwentneartheinnocentoneandhelditinmyhandandwipedthepuppy（擦干小狗）tillhehadbecomedry.微情節(jié)主題升華可愛(ài)型動(dòng)物陪伴、珍愛(ài)生命、自然和諧、忠誠(chéng)等兇猛型動(dòng)物難忘的經(jīng)歷、獲得教訓(xùn)、感謝他人救助等主題升華家養(yǎng)動(dòng)物結(jié)局：共同生活小貓默默地陪伴著我。盡管我們生活得很艱難，但這只狗的陪伴讓日子過(guò)得有了意義。盡管寒風(fēng)凜冽，他們的家卻充滿了愛(ài)和團(tuán)聚的溫暖Thekittenkeptcompanywithme

inhersilentway.Thoughwe’dhadatoughlife,thedog’scompanymadethedayscount.Despitethechillautumnwind,theirhomewasfilledwiththewarmthofloveandreunion.在掙扎著做出決定后，他最終還是把小鳥(niǎo)放生了。猴子一跳到樹(shù)頂上就消失在森林中了。當(dāng)狼朝森林跑去時(shí)，他回頭看了看，臉上露出了感激的表情。主題升華人救動(dòng)物結(jié)局：依依惜別Afterstruggling

tomakeadecision,heeventuallyletgoofthebird.Nosoonerhadthemonkeyjumpedontothetopofthetreethanitdisappearedintotheforest.Asthewolfranoffintotheforest,

helookedbackwithathankfulexpressiononhisface.主題升華兒子的努力讓我感動(dòng)。我從來(lái)沒(méi)有像現(xiàn)在這樣為他感到驕傲。隨著我對(duì)這些雞越來(lái)越多的關(guān)注和照顧，我和它們建立起密切的關(guān)系。這些小動(dòng)物教會(huì)我尊重和珍惜生命，感恩節(jié)也因此更加有意義。Theeffortsmysonhadmadetouchedmyheart.NeverbeforehadIbeenprouderofhim.Withtheincreasingattentionanddevotiontothechickens,Iformeda

closebondwiththem.Thelittlecreaturestaughtmetorespectandtreasurelife,forwhichThanksgivingmademoresense.

溫馨結(jié)局：收獲感悟

Itwasahotandwetdayinlatesummer.Iwasayoungdadworkinginalocalwoodfactory.Itwasdangerous,back-breakingworkthatpaidverylittle.

IntheyearIhadworkedthere,onlyfourotherpeoplehadn’tquitandbeenreplacedwithnewfaces.Thoseofuswhostayeddidsoonlybecausetherewasnootherworktofindtosupportourfamilies.

Onedaytheelectricfansweren’tworkingandallofuswerecoveredinsweatandsawdust.WhenIlookedaroundeveryface,theylookedangryandfrustrated.Suddenly,avoicecalledout:“Hey!There’sadeerinhere.Alostlittledeerhadwanderedthroughtheopenloadingbaydoorsandwasnowhidinginfearinbetweenthehugepilesofwood.Allofusstoppedworkingandwentlookingforherassheranaboutcrazilylookingforawayout.

NowmostpeoplewhereIlivehuntdeerformeatinthefallbuttreatthemwithgreatkindnesstherestoftheyear.Manywillevenbuybagsofcorntohelpfeedthemduringthecoldwintermonths.Itwasnosurprisethenthatallofusweresoonquicklyworkingtogethertofreethislittledeer.Byblockingoffalltheotherroutes,wewereabletoguidehercrazysearchbacktotheopenbaydoors.

Wewatchedasshejumpedoutofthebuildingandbackintothewoods.Thenwewalkedbackintowork.Inoticedsomething,though.Oneveryface,therewasajoyfulsmile.Itseemedasifthisonesingleactofkindnesshadenergizedusagainandremindedusofwhatlifewasallabout.原文大意：

作者在一家木材廠辛苦工作，這天來(lái)了一只迷路的小鹿，所有人都停下手中的工作去找她，而她則瘋狂地四處尋找出路。最后大家很快就一起努力解救這只小鹿，小鹿回到了樹(shù)林，作者發(fā)現(xiàn)每個(gè)人的臉上都洋溢著快樂(lè)的微笑，最后有人提議每個(gè)月的這一天為森林野生動(dòng)物做一些志愿者工作。線索：作者向樹(shù)林里望去——發(fā)現(xiàn)小鹿快樂(lè)玩?！髡呦萑氤了肌髡呋氐轿葑印と颂嶙h做志愿者工作——作者感悟PPT模板:///moban/Paragraph1：

Iwentoutofthehouseandlookedintothewoodsagain.看到小鹿在森林里玩耍時(shí)的感受和想法。PPT模板:///moban/Paragraph2：

WhenIreturnedtothehouse,theworkerswerelaughingandtalkinghappily.工人提議為森林野生動(dòng)物做一些志愿者工作，作者也感悟到用善行充實(shí)每一天，生活才會(huì)更加美好和諧。Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.

AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.

Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.

Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).

Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeita