人教版中考英語復(fù)習(xí)九年級(jí)全冊(cè)Unit+14+寫作ABC課件

寫作ABC.寫作得法，事半功倍。.好詞好句天天記，下筆如有神仙幫。學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)1.了解寫作的篇章技巧，使文章具有整體性。2.掌握常用的連接詞或句型，令作文更有靈氣3.通過學(xué)和練提高寫作的技巧和自信。請(qǐng)你以“＿＿＿＿Ｉ“l(fā)lneverforget”為題寫一封信，向外國(guó)筆友介紹令你難以忘懷的一個(gè)人或一件事（物）。

“_________________________Ｉ“l(fā)lneverforget”要求：1.先把題目補(bǔ)充完整；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分；3.詞數(shù)為80個(gè)左右。composition考題分析Haveatry,please.AnUnforgettableLesson“____I’llneverforget”---一件難忘的事(Anunforgetablething)一個(gè)難忘的假期-AnUnforgettableHoliday難忘的時(shí)刻(Anunforgettablemoment)一堂難忘的課(AnUnforgettableLesson)OnethingIcantforget我難忘的一件事一次難忘的經(jīng)歷(AnUnforgettableExperience)一次難忘的旅行(Anunforgetfultrip)我忘不了的一件事(OnethingIcan”tforget)一張難忘的相片(Amemorablephoto)難忘的經(jīng)歷(Anunforgettableexperience)寫作訓(xùn)練的具體流程審定列寫查賞開頭主體結(jié)尾定內(nèi)容定語法定句型評(píng)題目譯補(bǔ)連提定體裁記敘文的寫作要素：5W1HWhenWhereWhoWhat開門見山，交待事情的.......HowWhy說明事情的經(jīng)過，描述原因What總結(jié)I’msureyoucan!Comeon!?定寫作訓(xùn)練的具體方法譯補(bǔ)連提Howtowrite請(qǐng)你以“__________Ｉ’llneverforget”為題寫一封信，向外國(guó)筆友介紹令你難以忘懷的一個(gè)人或一件事（物）。

定體裁：定內(nèi)容：定語法：人稱：時(shí)態(tài)：語態(tài)：記敘文難忘的人/事是誰/什么；為什么難忘第一、三人稱一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)主動(dòng)語態(tài)（一）例題審題一般過去時(shí)（二）頭腦風(fēng)暴

一，“＿＿＿＿Ｉ’llneverforget”1，ThepersonI’llneverforget2，ThethingsI’llneverforget二，Whywillyouneverforget…?你可以談?wù)撘粋€(gè)人（朋友、家人、同學(xué)、老師）Whatmakesyouunforgettable?Giveanexample.父母的養(yǎng)育；恩師的教誨；朋友的安慰；親情的可貴；愛情的美好第一次做飯，第一次表演，第一次養(yǎng)寵物……，一個(gè)個(gè)“第一次”就像一行行腳印，印在我們成長(zhǎng)的道路上，令我們難以忘懷……你可以談?wù)撃阕钕矚g的一本書、一部電影、卡通故事、一項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)、一副照片、一個(gè)節(jié)日、一個(gè)季節(jié)、一次記憶深刻的旅行。Thefriendinteresting/exciting/helpful/happy/enjoyable?同學(xué)友誼“____________Ｉ'llneverforget”?

初中階段的學(xué)習(xí)馬上就要結(jié)束了，在這三年中，你一定和你的同學(xué)結(jié)下了深厚的友誼。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面英語提示，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，講述你和同學(xué)之間的故事。提示：1.Whoisyourbestfriend?2.Whatmakesyougetonwellwithher/him?3.Oneunforgettablethinghappenedtoyoutwo.Thefriend單句翻譯?------狠抓句型、分層達(dá)標(biāo)策略B層(達(dá)標(biāo)）：三年來，我在五中交了好多朋友，最要好的是李華了。IhavemadealotoffriendsinNo.5MiddleSchool.Oneofthemismybestfriend.HisnameisLiHua.?2.她黑黑的頭發(fā)、帶著一副眼鏡，非常的活潑、可愛。Shehasblackhairandshewearsapairofglasses.Sheisverylovelyandpretty.?3.她有許多愛好，比如跳舞、跑步、玩游戲。她的最愛就是聽音樂。Shehasmanyhobbies,suchasdancing,runningandplayingcomputergames.Herfavouritehobbyislisteningtomusic.4.我倆在同一個(gè)年級(jí)但不在一個(gè)班。We’reinthesamegrade,butindifferentclasses.5.我們經(jīng)?；ハ鄮椭?，有時(shí)也爭(zhēng)吵但很快就和好了。Wehelpeachother.Sometimeswefightbutwealwaysgetalongwell.B層（達(dá)標(biāo)）6.當(dāng)我有困難的時(shí)候，她總是及時(shí)來幫我。WhenIwasintrouble,shecanalwayshelpmeintime.7.她總是告訴我要努力學(xué)習(xí)并幫助我學(xué)習(xí)英語。HealwaystoldustostudyhardandhelpmewithmyEnglish.8.她經(jīng)常鼓勵(lì)我并且給了我許多關(guān)于學(xué)好英語的建議。SheencouragedmeandgavemesomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell.9.我是如此感動(dòng)以至于我決定要好好學(xué)英語

IwassomovedthatIdecidedtostudyhard.10.在她的幫助下，我的英語取得了很大的進(jìn)步。WithherhelpImadegreatprogressinEnglishrapidly.A層（提優(yōu)）11.她總是告訴我：“你是最棒的！相信自己！沒有什么不能的?！眘healwayssaidtome"Youaregreat,Justbelieveyourselfandeverythingyouwantwouldbeachieved."12.她告訴我要堅(jiān)持不能放棄，我從她身上學(xué)到了很多。ShetoldmetokeepworkinghardandnevergiveupandI'velearnedalotfromher.13.當(dāng)別人有困難的時(shí)候我也要學(xué)著去幫助別人。Iwilltrytohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.14.我認(rèn)為幫助別人是件快樂的事。Ithinkitisahappythingtohelpothers.15.我忘不了我們?cè)谝黄饘W(xué)習(xí)、玩耍的美好時(shí)光。Iwillneverforgetthetimewhenwestudiedandplayedtogether.連句成篇表并列：表轉(zhuǎn)折：表原因：表目的：表順序：表總結(jié)：其他：and,also,aswell…but,however,while,although…so,because,for,therefore…·inorder

to,sothat…firstly,secondly,firstofall,then…inmyopinion,inaword…what’smore,notonly…butalso…（四）連句成篇and,also,aswell,so,because,for,but,however,while,although,though,therefore,inorder,sothat,by,firstly,secondly,firstofall,then,next,besides,what’smore,notonly…butalso,afterall,finally,thelastbutnottheleast,like,suchas,forexample/instance,ononehand,ontheotherhand,foronething,foranotherthing,inmyopinion,inall,inaword,

Howtimeflies!Ihavestudiedinmyschoolforthreeyears.AndIwillgraduatefrommiddleschoolintwomonths.IhavealotoffriendsinNo.5MiddleSchool.Oneofthemismybestfriend.HisnameisLiHua.Iregardhimasmybestfriendhe’salwayshelpfulfriendlytome.Shehasblackhairandshewearsglasses.Sheisverylovelyandpretty.Shehasmanyhobbies,dancing,runningandplayingcomputergames.Herfavouritehobbyisreading.We’reinthesamegrade,indifferentclasses.wehelpeachother.wefightbutwealwaysgetalongwell. heattractsmemostisthathelikesmusic,too. wehavetime,welistentopopsongstogether.Ihadsomanymemoriesinthreeyears'life.Oneofthemimpressedmeverymuch.Istillremember, IbegantolearnEnglish,Ifoundittoodifficult.hardItried,Istillcouldn'tdowellinitandalmostgaveitup.shefoundmyproblem,shehadatalkwithmeabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.,shehaskepthelpingme.,I'vebecomeinterestedinEnglishandI'mgoodatit.becauseandsuchas

butSometimesWhatWheneverwhenNomatterhowAssoonas

SincethenLittlebylittle

呈上啟下，連詞很重要。Iunderstandwhatshesaid,“Justbelieveyourselfandkeepworkinghardeverythingyouwantwouldbeachieved.”IthinkIamsoluckytobecomeoneofherfriends.I'velearnedalotfromher.Iwilltrytohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.Ithinkitisahappythingtohelpothers.SheoftenhelpedmewithmyEnglishindass

afterclass.andIwasbadlyillIcouldn'tgotoschoolforthreedays.ShecametomyhouseandhelpedwithmyEnglish.IwasmovedIdecidedtostudyhard.WithherhelpIworkharderthanbeforeandmadeprogressrapidly.IthankedherverymuchandImissedher,too.Thatdaywasoneofthehappiestdayswehadtogether.SheismybestfriendI’llneverforget.Not

only

but

alsooncesothatsothat亮點(diǎn)提升1.詞組搭配:

Howtimeflies,graduatefrom,regard…as，

befriendlyto，suchas,getalongwell,Nomatterhow，dowellin,giveup,assoonas,hadatalkwith,sincethenkeptdoingsth,littlebylittle,becomeinterestedin,begoodat，

learn…from,beintrouble,not

only….but

also,

help….withmakeprogress開頭：中間：結(jié)尾：helpeachother（五）亮點(diǎn)提升2.句型從句（原因）because,notonly…butalso…,（時(shí)間）Whenever/when/assoonas/sincethen,（讓步）Nomatterhow/once,（結(jié)果）so…that...引導(dǎo)的狀語從句（that）引導(dǎo)的賓語和定語從句3.比較、最高級(jí)級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)：workharderthan....thehappiestdays,mybestfriend主題升華1.I'velearnedalotfromher.Iwilltrytohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.2.Ithinkitisahappythingtohelpothers.3.Iunderstandwhatshesaid,“Justbelieveyourselfandkeepworkinghard,everythingyouwantwouldbeachieved.”得分要領(lǐng)拿到必拿的分1）2）3）4）5）6)人稱（讀者意識(shí)）語序（簡(jiǎn)單句的五中基本句型）時(shí)態(tài)（混用）內(nèi)容（結(jié)構(gòu)清，要點(diǎn)全）連接（關(guān)聯(lián)詞）

提升（好詞，好句）英語寫作普遍易犯的錯(cuò)誤1.是否有大、小寫錯(cuò)誤2.是否與拼寫錯(cuò)誤3.是否有標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤4.是否有語法錯(cuò)誤注意：1.主謂是否一致2.動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)3.語態(tài)的使用是否正確4.詞組的搭配是否正確學(xué)生作文評(píng)價(jià)表評(píng)價(jià)項(xiàng)目（共15分）

評(píng)價(jià)要點(diǎn)

分值自評(píng)

同伴評(píng)師評(píng)備注內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)（5分）要點(diǎn)齊全

5

篇章邏輯（4分）

要點(diǎn)順序合理

且語序正確4

用詞正確（3分）

單詞用法及拼寫正確3

多種句型結(jié)構(gòu)

（3分）3種以上（含3種）

3

59-30詞以下

2

29詞以下

1

總分合計(jì)

備注

如果以上評(píng)價(jià)要點(diǎn)都符合，但有語言錯(cuò)誤，請(qǐng)按1-2個(gè)知識(shí)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤扣1分處理。

（八）評(píng)價(jià)修改??作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)作文15分，其中內(nèi)容分6分，語言分6分，組織結(jié)構(gòu)分3分。?語言評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：語言分主要從語法規(guī)則和詞數(shù)兩方面進(jìn)行評(píng)分。1、拼寫：每錯(cuò)一個(gè)扣0.5分。2、語法：每錯(cuò)一個(gè)扣0.5分。3、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，大小寫：每?jī)商幙?.5。4、語言分最多扣4分。詞數(shù)不足30個(gè)得分不超過總分一半分，不足40個(gè)得分不超10分，不足50個(gè)12分組織結(jié)構(gòu)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

1、內(nèi)容充實(shí)，不寫廢話；上下文連貫，用語規(guī)范，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，無或少見語法錯(cuò)誤，詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，多見好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語者，可給滿分。2、通篇句型、句式單一，詞匯貧乏者，即是無語法錯(cuò)誤，一般不給組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。內(nèi)容評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：一檔13-15分

?包含所有要點(diǎn)，應(yīng)用了較豐富的語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，

用詞準(zhǔn)確、語法正確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，具有較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。

?

二檔

10-12分

?基本包含所有要點(diǎn)，應(yīng)用了較豐富的語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，句子較通順，表達(dá)較清楚，但有少量錯(cuò)誤。

?三檔

7-9分

?內(nèi)容包含了多數(shù)要點(diǎn)，語言表達(dá)過于簡(jiǎn)單，句子不夠通順，有部分語言錯(cuò)誤，基本上不影響總體理解。

?四檔

4-6分

?只包含了少數(shù)要點(diǎn)，語言不規(guī)范，句子無條理，行文不連貫，語言錯(cuò)誤嚴(yán)重，影響理解。

?五檔

0-3分

?只寫出與要求的內(nèi)容相關(guān)的一些信息詞語，語言錯(cuò)誤多。

Howtimeflies!Ihavestudiedinmyschoolforthreeyears.AndIwillgraduatefrommiddleschoolinamonth.Iameagertosharemyhappinessandsadnesswithyou.Ihadsomanymemoriesinthreeyears'life.Oneofthemimpressedmeverymuch.Istillremember,whenIbegantolearnEnglish,Ifoundittoodifficult.NomatterhowhardItried,Istillcouldn'tdowellinitandalmostgaveitup.AssoonasmyEnglishteacherfoundmyproblem,shehadatalkwithmeabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.Sincethen,shehaskepthelpingme.Littlebylittle,I'vebecomeinterestedinEnglishandI'mgoodatit.IthinkIamsoluckytobecomeoneofherstudents.I'velearnedalotfromher.Iwilltrytohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.Ithinkitisahappythingtohelpothers.SampleTheteacherI’llneverforgetMyschoolI’llneverforget

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MyEnglishTeacher–Alva?

Alva,myEnglishteacher,isfromEnglandandisabout29yearsold.Shehasblondehairandshealwayswearsapairofglassesonhernose.Sheisstrictwithusinourstudy,soallthestudentsarewell-behavedinherclass.Althoughsheisstrict,shecangetalongwellwithallthestudentsbecausesheisverykindandpatient.WheneverwehavedifficultyinEnglishlearning,shewillhelpustodealwiththequestions.Wealllikeherlessonsverymuch.That’sbecausesheisverycreative.Herteachingstyleisquitedifferentfromthatoftheothers.Shepreparesherlessonswellandcorrectsourhomeworkcarefully.Inclassshealwaysencouragesustothinkhardanddevelopourabilitytostudyonourown.

Inaword,Ithinksh