2024年高考英語話題寫作通關(guān)攻略-讀后續(xù)寫人物外貌、性格描寫（高分定律 ）

人物外貌、性格描寫（高分定律）

"|【考情分析】

在讀后續(xù)寫過程中，沿用原文語言特點(diǎn)，圍繞原文主旨大意，在續(xù)寫部分中可以利用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語描述

人物來豐富續(xù)寫的情節(jié)。對(duì)人物進(jìn)行恰到好處的肖像描寫能夠生動(dòng)地反映出人物的角色身份、社會(huì)地位、

性格特點(diǎn)、情感變化等，將人物栩栩如生地呈現(xiàn)在讀者面前，讓讀者在閱讀的過程中如見其人，提升續(xù)寫

語篇的可讀性。

、］【寫作指導(dǎo)】

在進(jìn)行外貌描寫時(shí)，可以寫對(duì)一個(gè)人的總體印象，也可以抓住人物重要的外貌特征或性格特點(diǎn)進(jìn)行描

述?？梢跃唧w描述人物的五官、著裝，外貌、體態(tài)、性格等對(duì)人物印象最深刻的點(diǎn)來進(jìn)行描述和評(píng)價(jià)，可

以使人物形象栩栩如生，躍然紙上。

（2022年浙江卷）Astheycameinmydirection,Iputonmybrightestandhappiestsmile.Iwantedtomake

themknowthatIwasreallyanxioustohelpthem.Tomyrelief,theysmiledpolitelybackatmewhentheysawmy

smile,andIcouldseetheirexhaustionintheireyes.

［、一］【素材寶庫】

詞匯積累之性格特點(diǎn)

幽默的humorous健談的talkative壞脾氣的bad-tempered

心不在焉的absent-minded熱心的warm-hearted有耐心的patient

有魅力的charming獨(dú)立的independent勤奮的diligent

勤勞的diligent和藹的kind誠實(shí)的honest

有幽默感haveasenseofhumor真誠的sincere受人尊敬的respected

努力工作型hardworkingtype正直的upright保守的conservativepersonalities

務(wù)實(shí)的bedown-to-earth懶惰goofoff缺乏責(zé)任感l(wèi)ackofresponsibility

有抱負(fù)的ambitious果斷的ofadeterminedcharacter樂觀的optimistic

有教養(yǎng)的女子aculturedwoman突出的個(gè)性strikingpersonalities心腸冷酷的人ahard-heartedman

詞匯積累之外貌描寫（五官）

round圓的;thin瘦的;long長的;square方的；puffy浮腫的；憔悴的面容haggard；布

臉型face滿皺紋的wrinkled；長滿粉刺的pimpled；淚珠布滿的tear-stained；長滿雀斑freckled；

麻臉pock-markedfhce；眉清目秀的finely-cut；黝黑的swarthy；曬黑的sunburned；秀麗

的sweet；

紅潤的雙頰rosycheeks；豐滿的雙頰chubbycheeks；蒼白的雙頰palecheeks；

臉頰粉紅的雙頰pinkcheeks；紅光滿面的雙頰ruddycheeks；涂脂抹粉的臉頰rougedcheeks；

cheeks深陷的雙頰hollow（sunken）cheeks；刮得精光的臉頰clean-shavencheeks；

胡須滿面的雙頰stubbycheeks；布滿皺紋的雙頰wrinkledcheeks；

deep-set深陷的；sunken凹陷的；bulging凸出的；eyelashes睫毛；eyebrows眉毛；

眼睛eye睜得圓圓的/鼓起來的/深陷的/凹陷的眼睛/充滿血絲的wide-open/bulging

/deep-set/sunken/bloodshoteyes

long長的;straight挺直的;big大的；small小的;flat扁平的;hooked鉤狀的；

鼻子nose鷹鉤鼻anaquiline（hooked）nose；扁鼻子flatnose；翹鼻子snubnose；

筆直的鼻子straightnose

嘴部mouthtooth牙齒;even整齊的;uneven不整齊的；chi下巴；

下巴chin雙下巴（形容胖）adoublechin;尖尖的下巴apointedchin;

圓圓的下巴aroundchin;翹起的下巴aprotrudingchin

額頭寬大的額頭abroadforehead；突起的額頭adomedforehead；高高的額頭ahigh

foreheadforehead；寬闊的額頭anopenforehead；窄小的額頭anarrowforehead；

頭發(fā)hair發(fā)型(hairstyle):straight直的;curly卷發(fā)的;pigtails辮子;crewcut平頭;bald禿頭的；

發(fā)色jet-black烏黑的；fkii?金色的;blonde淡黃色的；golden金黃色的；dyed染色的；brunette淺

haircolor黑色的；mousey灰褐色的；chestnut栗色的；

詞匯積累之外貌描寫（身材）

肥胖的fat；瘦的thin；苗條的slim；塊頭大的big；矮小的short；強(qiáng)壯的strong；

身材高的tall；小巧的small；超重overweight；中等身材的ofmediumbuild；

消瘦的身材askinnyfigure；豐滿的身材plumpfigure；瘦小的身材slightfigure；

身材魁梧well-built；矮壯的身材stockyfigure；優(yōu)美的身段agracefulfigure；

身高中等身高的ofmediumheight；低于平均身高belowaverage;

身高中等的middle-sized;

句式積累

1.Shehadalittlethinfaceandalittlethinbody,thinlighthairandasourexpression.

她有著瘦削的臉、瘦弱的身體、單薄淺色的頭發(fā)還有尖酸的外表。

2.He'stallandhandsomebutwithapairofthickglassed.

他高大又英俊，但是戴著一副厚眼鏡。

3.They（代指eyes）werelargeandscaredandliftedimploringlytothefairboyofficer'sface.

那雙大眼睛變得驚恐，乞求地盯著那個(gè)白膚律師男孩的臉。

4.Davidwasalittleboywithimpudentblueeyesandaturn-upnose,andMaryhatedhim.

大偉是有一雙無恥的藍(lán)色眼睛和一只朝天鼻的小男孩，并且瑪麗討厭他。

5.Jamesfrownedandcondescendedtolookather.

詹姆斯皺著眉頭，故意表示和藹可親的看著她。

6.Herhairwaslikecurlysilkandshehadadelicatelittlenosewhichseemedtobedisdainingthings,andshehad

largelaughingeyes.

她的頭發(fā)像是微卷的絲綢，她有著精致小巧的鼻子似乎在蔑視著一切，她還有著一雙大大的笑眼。

7.Hissun-burntfaceandarmsandhisslim,strongbodyarejustlikethoseofmillionsofChinesefarmers,for

whomhehasstruggledfbrthepastfivedecades.

他那曬黑的臉，手臂和瘦長結(jié)實(shí)的身體，就像過去50年里他為之奮斗的數(shù)百萬中國農(nóng)民一樣。

8.Hisfacelookeddreadful,whiteandredandswollen,andhewasgaspingandchoking

他的臉看上去很可怕，又白又紅又腫，他喘不過氣來。

9.Sheevenlookedratherpale.

她甚至看上去相當(dāng)蒼白。

10.t4Idon?tlikeit,“shesaidtoherself.6"Idon'tlikeit,“andshepinchedherthinlipsmoretightlytogether.n

我不喜歡它，”她捏她瘦弱的嘴唇更緊密地在一起。

11.Shelookedsostonyandstubbornlyuninterestedthattheydidnotknowwhattothinkabouther.

她看起來是如此的無情和頑固地冷淡以至于他們不知道該怎么去考慮她。

12.Shewasastoutwoman,

withveryredcheeksandsharpblackeyes.

她是個(gè)矮胖的女人，有著很紅的臉頰和鋒利的黑色眼睛。

13.Herblackdressmadeherlookyellowerthanever,andherlimplighthairstraggledfromunderherblack

crepehat.

她的黑衣服使她看起來比以前更柔軟了，她柔軟的淺色頭發(fā)從她的黑色紿布帽子下散亂的披落下來。

14.hewasawizenedoldmanwithwrinkledfaceandasadexpression.Overhisshoulderwasthrownarough

browncoat,alltornandfullofholes,histhickbootswereoldandpatched.

他是一個(gè)干癟的老人，臉上布滿皺紋，表情悲傷。肩上披著一件粗糙的棕色外套，全是破的，滿是洞，厚

靴子是舊的，打了補(bǔ)丁。

15.Hiseyesaredeep-setbecausehehasworkedtillmidnightforalongtime.

他的眼睛深陷，因?yàn)樗@段時(shí)間經(jīng)常工作到深夜。

16.Thisprettygirlhasdimplesonhercheeks.

這美麗的姑娘兩頰都有酒窩。

17.Theinn-keeper'swife,herfeetbare,herhairuntidy,herblousedirty,cameherselftomeetherguests.

旅店老板的妻子光著腳，穿著骯臟的罩衣，頭發(fā)亂蓬蓬的，親自迎接她的客人。

18.Themiddle-agedmanalreadyhasdoublechinsandrecedinghairline.

這個(gè)中年人已有了雙下巴，頭發(fā)也日漸稀少。

19.shewasyoung,withafair,calmfacethatshowedacertainstrength.

她是一個(gè)年輕人，滿臉的恬靜，表現(xiàn)出一種與眾不同的力量

20.Sheeatstoomuchthesedays,soherfaceisgettinground.

她最近吃得太多了，所以她的臉變圓了。

諺語積累

1.Appearanceiseasytorecognize,butheartisthehardesttoguess.Judgenotfromappearances.

外貌容易認(rèn),內(nèi)心最難猜。

2.Outsideofthegoldandjade,therearemanyfailures.金玉其外，敗絮其中。

3.Waterradishskinredheartnotred.水蘿卜皮紅心不紅。

4.Judgenotfromappearances.人不可貌相，海不可斗量。

5.aneyeforaneye以眼還眼，報(bào)復(fù)

6.catchsomeone?seye引某人注目，令人矚目

7.givesomeoneablackeye打得某人鼻青臉腫

8.bealleyes極注意地看著，非常留神

9.seeeyetoeye(with)意見一致，立場相同

10.seewithhalfaneye一看就明白

11.shutone'seyeto置之不理

12.haveaneyefor對(duì)..有判斷力

13.keepaneyeon照看，密切注意

14.intheeyesof在..的心目中，在看來

15.makeeyesatsb向某人送秋波

16.makesbopenhiseyes使某人瞠目結(jié)舌，吃驚

17.goinatoneearandoutattheother左耳進(jìn)右耳出，當(dāng)耳旁風(fēng)

18.pickupone'sears豎起耳朵聽

19.uptothe(one's)ears深陷在(債務(wù)等中)，債臺(tái)高筑

20.wetbehindtheears乳臭未干

21.beallears全神貫注地傾聽

22.giveearto聽，傾聽，注意

23.giveone?sears不惜任何代價(jià)(要)

24.havean(no)earfor對(duì)..聽覺靈敏(不靈敏)

25.sleeponbothears酣睡，熟睡

26.turnadeafearto對(duì)..置之不理，對(duì)...充耳不聞

27.downin(at)themouth垂頭喪氣

28.frommouthtomouth□□相傳，廣泛流傳

29.putwordsin(to)someone?smouth教人怎么說，誣指某人說過某話

30.stopsomeone?smouth使某人緘默

31.takethewordsoutofsomeone?smouth搶先說某人想說的話

32.fromthehorse?smouth(消息等)第一手的，直接得來的，來源可靠的

33.inthemouthof出于..之口

34.openone'smouthwide獅子大開口（指索高價(jià)）；信口開河

35.leadsomeonebythenose控制某人，牽著某

人的鼻子走

36.paythroughthenose花大價(jià)錢，被敲竹杠

37.asplainasthenoseonyourface顯而易見，一清二楚

38.bitesb/snoseoff氣勢(shì)洶洶地回答某人

39.followone飛nose筆直走；憑本能行事

40.lookdownone'snoseat瞧不起

萬能寫作模板

根據(jù)下列含有寫句子。

1.她有著一頭棕色而卷曲的頭發(fā)。

Herhairis.

【答案1Herhairisbrownandcurly.

2.她是一個(gè)金發(fā)美女。

Sheiswith.

【答案］Sheisabeautifulgirlwithfairhair.

3.她有一雙我從未見過的漂亮藍(lán)眼睛。

Hehadeyes.

［答案］HehadthemostbeautifulblueeyesIhadeverseen.

4.她時(shí)常燦爛地微笑，閃爍著她的大眼睛。

Shehasasmileandshealwayshasinhereye.

【答案】Shehasaverypleasantsmileandshealwayshasatwinkleinhereye.

5.她總是穿著優(yōu)雅整潔。

Shealwaysdresses.

【答案］Shealwaysdressesveiyelegantandtidy.

6.由于她皮膚白很善良，我們都很喜歡她。

Becauseofherand,wealllikeherverymuch.

【答案］Becauseofherfairskinandkindness,wealllikeherverymuch.

7.這個(gè)年輕的女人很高，體態(tài)優(yōu)美。

Theyoungwomanwastall,.

【答案】Theyoungwomanwastall,withafigureofperfectelegance.

8.她微微一笑，露出了潔白整齊的牙齒。

Whenshesmiled,sheshowed.

【答案】Whenshesmiled,sheshowedherwhiteeventeeth.

9.這個(gè)女孩子非常可愛有趣。

Thegirlisvery.

【答案】Thegirlisverylovelyandinteresting.

10.她是一個(gè)貪婪的女人。

Sheisa.

【答案】Sheisagreedywoman.

11.她臉上總是掛著心滿意足的微笑。

Thereisalways.

【答案】Thereisalwaysasmileofcontentmentonherface.

12.她屬于那種極難討好的人。

Shebelongstothosewho.

【答案］Shebelongstothosewhoareverydifficulttosatisfy.

13.她的美貌令我神魂顛倒。

Herappearancefairly.

【答案】Herappearancefairlytookmybreathaway.

14.Lily望著他那可憐的、疲倦的小臉和紅腫的眼睛，心都軟了下來。

Lilylookedathisfaceandeyesandherheartrelented.

【答案】Lilylookedathispoorlittletiredfaceandswolleneyesandherheartrelented.

15.他是一位枯瘦、駝背的老人，一個(gè)無牙的微笑和一縷長到肚臍的白胡子。

Hewasaoldmanwithbeardthatdroppedtohisnavel.

【答案】Hewasagaunt,stoopingoldmanwithatoothlesssmileandawhitebeardthatdroppedtohisnavel.

16.他的容顏飽經(jīng)風(fēng)霜，而雪白濃眉下那雙烏黑的眼睛，就像可以瞬間燃起烈火的煤炭。

Inhisfacebrowshisdarkeyesweresetlikecoalsthatcouldleapsuddenlyinto

fire.

【答案】Inhisagedfaceundergreatsnowybrowshisdarkeyesweresetlikecoalsthatcouldleapsuddenlyinto

fire.

17.我看著他走上舞臺(tái)。中等身材、健壯結(jié)實(shí)、淺黃色的頭發(fā)垂在前額。

Iwatchhimashemakeshiswaytowardthestage.hairthatfallinwavesoverhisforehead.

【答案】Iwatchhimashemakeshiswaytowardthestage.Mediumheight,stockybuild,ashyblondhairthatfall

inwavesoverhisforehead.

18.她們的指甲很長，拋光成粉紅色或橙色，她們的嘴唇像郁金香一樣紅。

Theirnailswere,theirlips.

【答案】Theirnailswerelong,polishedpinkororange,theirlipsredastulips.

19.亨利有一張消瘦的面孔、膝蓋骨突出的膝蓋、烏黑的頭發(fā)和一對(duì)翠綠的眼睛。

Henryhadaface,knees,hair,andeyes.

【答案】Henryhadathinface,knobblyknees,blackhair,andbrightgreeneyes.

20.米莉安是一位長著灰色大眼睛和滿頭金發(fā)的姑娘。

Miriamisagirleyesandhair.

【答案】Miriamisagirlwithbiggrayeyesandgoldenhair.

21.她面色白皙，體態(tài)輕盈，有一雙大而圣潔的藍(lán)眼睛和一頭濃密的金發(fā)。

Shewasacreature,witheyesandhair.

【答案】Shewasapale,etherealcreature,withwide,spiritualblueeyesandawealthofgoldenhair.

22.那個(gè)生硬、結(jié)巴的粗漢子消失了。但那不合身的衣服，布滿傷疤的雙手和曬黑的臉膛卻依然如故。

Thewasgone.Theclothes,hands,andface

remained.

【答案】Theraw,stumblingloutwasgone.Theill-fittingclothes,batteredhands,andsunburnedfaceremained.

23.馬麗身材修長，滿頭金發(fā)，苗條美麗，雍容華貴。

Maryisawoman,.

【答案】Maryisatall,blondewoman,slender,andstatelyandbeautiful.

24.她長著奶油般的皮膚，修長的肩和一頭黑色的卷發(fā)。

Shehasskinand.

【答案】Shehascreamyskinandshoulder-length,darkringlets.

25.他長得又怪又粗糙，一臉的雀斑，一個(gè)蓬亂的紅胡子。

Hewasa,withbear.

【答案JHewasastrange,roughfellow,withafreckledfaceandred,roughbear

、］r高考真題】

（2022年全國高考新高考I卷）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的

短文。

Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthe

smalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute（路線）throughthickevergreenforest.

IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewas

smallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn*t

withtheotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.

Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!

Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschoofscoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.HIwasafraidthatkids

fromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,"heexplaineduncomfortably.nIgavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlet

himdecide.n

Ibitbackmyfrustration（懊惱）.Iknewthecoachmeantwell-hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.

AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbody

rockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.

Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhis

classmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheywere

doing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.

Itjusttookhimlonger-thafsall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrun

longaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,Iwasfamiliarwith

thechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答.

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.

笳

【范文賞析】

Wesatdowntogetheronsomesteps,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.Iturnedhimaroundandlookedhimin

theeyesincerely.Iquietlysaid,"David,ifyou'renotrunningbecauseyou'reafraidsomeoneisgoingtolaugh,

thafsnotagoodenoughreason.Areyougoingtoletthemgetinyourway?Ifyoureallywanttorun,David,run!^^

IheldmybreathasDavidtookthisin.Thenhelookedatthefieldandsaidwithafiercebutquietdetermination,

'Tmgonnarun.^^

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartingline.Thestarter'sgunsounded.Buthehadonlygoneafewmetres

beforehetrippedandfellflatontheground.Myheartsank.AsIstartedtoshoutencouragement,othervoices

aroundmetookupthecall."ComeonDavid,youcandoit!”Davidpickedhimselfupandstartedagainuntilhe

crossedthefinishlinetowildcheersandapplause.

最后幾句結(jié)尾有三種：

第一種：（首選結(jié)尾）

Thatday,Davidgotaspecialawardforhiscourage.Healsogotrespectofallstudents.Tohim,thatwaswortha

wholelotmorethananaward.（169words）

第二種：（原文結(jié)尾）

Then,whenDavid'scoachslappedhimonthebackandsaidproudly,“Goodjob,David!”hecaughtmyeye,

flashedmeatoothygrinandsaid,"Thatwaseasy!^^（169words）

第三種：

Thatday,Davidgotaspecialawardfbrhiscourage.Hewasshiningonthewinner'spodium.David,withsomany

birthproblems,wasaherotoallofusandmostimportantly,tohimself!（175words）

r名校模擬題提升練】

1.（2023秋?湖北?高三校聯(lián)考階段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成

一篇完整的短文。

WhenIwasfour,myseven-year-oldbrotherreceivedabaseballmitt（手套）forhisbirth-day,whichwasalso

whatIdesperatelywanted.But,backthen,girlsdidn'tplaysports;theyplayedwithdolls.

26yearslater,Ihappenedtoseeanoticeinmylocalpaper:"Women'sSlow-PitchSoft-ballLeagueopens

soon.Anyoneinterested,signupattherecreationcenter.^^Icutitoutandsetitonthekitchencounter.Wasiteven

possibletoplaybaseball,agameI'dneveractuallyplayedbuthaddreamedofplayinginmyentirelife?

Lookingatthatnoticeonmycounter,IthoughtofathousandreasonsIcouldn'tplay.Buttheideaofplaying

baseballstuckinmyheadandwouldn,tgoaway.Finally,Iscrewedupmycourageandsignedup.Dayslater,word

camethatIcouldbeginpracticeinJamesParkonMondaynight.

OnMonday,heartpounding,Iwalkedthroughtheparkfilledwithwomenofallhigh-schoolgirlspracticingat

differentdiamonds.Iwaitedacoupleofminutesbeforeapproachingthecoach,whoseemedunhappytoseeme.He

hadjustputtogethertopathletesforhisteam,anddidn'twantsomeoldladymessingthingsup.Helookedme

over,whohadnomittbutworeanoldT-shirtandgymshoes.However,Ididn'tcare.

Thatveryfirstdaywasquitebitter.Hehadmerunbasesallnightandnevergavemeachancetobatorplay

thefield,withtheattempttomakemeshrinkfromdifficulty.ButhehadnoideahowdeterminedIwas.Istill

showeduptoplayinthefollowingMondays,whichclearlysurprisedhim.

Finally,hegavein.Duringthelastinningofthelastgameoftheseason,thecoachtoldmetogotocenter

field.Ihadtoborrowamittfromamemberofourteamandusedittocatchanimpossiblyhighball,winningthe

gameforus.Again,thecoachlookedsurprised.ItneverhithimthatImightbeabletoplay.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Afterthegame,Ireceivedanunexpectedinvitationfromanothercoach.

ItturnedoutIdidn'tletmycoachdown.

【答案】

Afterthegame,Ireceivedanunexpectedinvitationfromanothercoach.ThemomentheapproachedmeI

recognizedhim,theveryprestigiouscoachinAmerica.Hehadbeensearchingtheotherteamsforpotentialplayers

toplayforhisteam.He'dseenthecatchI'dmadeandthewayI"movedlikeanathlete^^onthefieldandthoughtI

mightmakeagoodpitcher.Whatasurprise!NoonecouldimaginehowthrilledIwasatsuchexcitingmoment.

Tooastonishedtosaytheword"yes”,Ijustnoddedmyheadvigorouslywithoutasecondthought.Tocelebratemy

newbaseballlife,thenextday,IwenttothesportinggoodsstoretobuyamittwhichIhadbeenlongingfor.

Excitedasakid,Itookmynewmitttojointhenewteam,wheretheteammateslovedthegamethewayIdid.

ItturnedoutIdidn,tletmycoachdown.Myparticipationinjectedtremendousvigorintothoseyounggirls,who

werealwaystouchedbymyendurance,persistenceandenthusiasmforbaseballandlife.ItwasnotuntilIwas

retiredat40thatIplayedwiththem.Andwewentundefeatedsixofthoseyears,andIwasnamedMVPfivetimes.

Playingthegamewiththesewomenenrichedmylifeandthelivesofmyfamilyincountlessways.Tothisday,

memoriesofthoseyearsgladdenallourhearts.AndnoneofitwouldhavehappenedifIhadn'tcutoutthatlittle

article,nervouslysigneduptoplayball,anddaredtotakeachanceonfulfillingmychildhooddream.

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者在三十歲時(shí)，偶然看到了當(dāng)?shù)貓?bào)紙的一則關(guān)于女子棒球團(tuán)開

團(tuán)報(bào)名的通知，她兒時(shí)因"女子不能從事體育運(yùn)動(dòng)”的舊觀念而被遏制的對(duì)棒球運(yùn)動(dòng)的渴望重新被點(diǎn)燃，她勇

敢地報(bào)了名，和年輕的女孩們一起練習(xí)。一開始她因年齡大，被教練嫌棄，慢慢地，她用自己的堅(jiān)持改變

了教練的看法，在賽場上表現(xiàn)出了優(yōu)異的技術(shù)，最終被知名教練邀請(qǐng)，正式加入了一家棒球隊(duì)，并和隊(duì)友

們一起創(chuàng)造了六年不敗的佳績，改變了自己的生活，實(shí)現(xiàn)了兒時(shí)夢(mèng)想的故事。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“比賽結(jié)束后，我意外地收到了另一位教練的邀請(qǐng)?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼戇@位教練對(duì)

作者的贊賞，和作者收到邀請(qǐng)后的激動(dòng)表現(xiàn)。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“事實(shí)證明，我沒有讓教練失望?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者加入棒球隊(duì)后的優(yōu)秀表現(xiàn)

和成績，實(shí)現(xiàn)了兒時(shí)的夢(mèng)想。

2.續(xù)寫線索：收到邀請(qǐng)——教練的評(píng)價(jià)——接受邀請(qǐng)——激動(dòng)的表現(xiàn)和行為——沒有讓教練失望——對(duì)棒

球隊(duì)的影響一棒球隊(duì)的戰(zhàn)績一對(duì)自己的影響和改變一實(shí)現(xiàn)了夢(mèng)想

3.詞匯激活：

行為類：

①尋找：searchfor/lookfor

②購買：buy/purchase

③發(fā)生：happen/takeplace

④注冊(cè)、登記：signup/register

情緒類：

①激動(dòng)的：thrilled/excited

②吃驚的：astonished/shocked

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】He,dseenthecatchI'dmadeandthewayI"movedlikeanathlete^^onthefieldand

thoughtImightmakeagoodpitcher.（運(yùn)用了catch后省略了關(guān)系詞that/which的定語從句、theway后省略

T關(guān)系詞that的定語從句和thought后省略了連接詞that的賓語從句）

[高分句型2]AndnoneofitwouldhavehappenedifIhadn'tcutoutthatlittlearticle,nervouslysignedupto

playball,anddaredtotakeachanceonfulfillingmychildhooddream.（運(yùn)用了if弓I導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句和虛擬語

氣）

2.（2023秋?貴州?高三統(tǒng)考階段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一

篇完整的短文。

Momsatdownatthekitchentableandlookedattheawardsdinnerinvitationasthoughshehadreceivedbad

newsfromfaraway.44Baby,itmightbeamistake.Sometimestheyaccidentallysendthesethingsouttothewrong

people.9,Shespokeslowlyandwithsympathyinhervoice.Iwasonlyinthefirstgrade;Ididn'tunderstandthebig

dealanddidn'treallycareaboutamistake.

Iwasembarrassedbytheprocessoflearning.Onthefirstdayofschoolmymomtalkedtomyteacherfora

longtimewhile1satatoneofthelittletablesandmetpeoplewhowouldbemyfriendsforyears,includingKatie.I

wassoabsorbedinmyfriend-makingthatIdidnotcarewhatmymomwassayingtomynewteacher,andI

certainlycouldnothaveknownthatshewasexpressingherconcernaboutmepossiblyhavingalearningdisability.

Myacademicprogresswasneveratopicofconversation.Ididnotknowanythingaboutgradesorscholarly

competition.Ididn'tcare.Ijustlikedmybeautifulteachers.Ilovedmyfriends.Ienjoyeddoingalltheworksheets

andactivities.Mygradesdidnotmeananythingtome.

Attheawardsdinner,wesatbymybestfriendKatieandherfamily.SheandItalkedandlaughedallthrough

themeal.ButMomlookedlikeshewasstillexpectingbadnews.Shereachedacrossthetableandheldmyhand

rightbeforetheprincipalstartedhandingoutawards."Remember,sweetie,we'rejustheretoenjoythedinner.^^

Theawardsweregivenoutbysubject.Withineachsubject,thegradewinnerswereannouncedandreceiveda

certificate,Math.NoRebecca,Science.NoRebecca.Reading.Katiegotthatone.Shesmiledbroadly.Icaughtmy

mom'sface.Shewasneartears.ShelookedatmeasifIwerehurt.ButIwasfine.Shewastheonewhowashurt,

watchingalltheotherchildrengetawardswhileherownwaspassedoveragainandagain.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Allthesubjectawardsweregivenout,andmynamewasnotcalled.

Afewsecondslater,tcOkay,theoverallachievementmedalforthefirstgrade-RebeccaYoungblood.^^

【答案】

Allthesubjectawardsweregivenout,andmynamewasnotcalled.Mom'sfacefell,andhereyeswerefilled

withtears.Shesqueezedmyhandtightly,herknuckleswhite.Ilookedather,feelingasenseofhelplessness.It

seemedthattheprincipalwasabouttofinishhisannouncement.However,Istillprayedforamiracle.Suddenly,the

principallookedatmydirectionwithasmile.

Afewsecondslater,46Okay,theoverallachievementmedalforthefirstgrade-RebeccaYoungblood.^^.The

principal'svoiceboomedthroughtheroom.Icouldn'tbelieveit.Ihadbeenawardedtheoverallachievement

medalformygrade.Mom'sfacelitupinasmileasshewipedawaytearsandhuggedmetightly.Itwasamoment

thatwebothcherished,onethatletmeknowthatmyhardworkhadpaidoff.Itwasalessoninresilienceand

perseverancethatIwouldcarrywithmealways.

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了小女孩麗貝卡和媽媽受邀參加學(xué)校的頒獎(jiǎng)晚宴。因?yàn)榕⒂袑W(xué)習(xí)

障礙，所以媽媽覺得可能是晚宴邀請(qǐng)函發(fā)錯(cuò)了，但她們還是如約參加了頒獎(jiǎng)晚宴。在晚宴上，校長一個(gè)一

個(gè)念著獲獎(jiǎng)學(xué)生的名字，但麗貝卡的名字一直未出現(xiàn)。媽媽看到其他孩子獲獎(jiǎng)而自己的孩子被忽略，感到

非常傷心。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“所有的學(xué)科獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)都頒發(fā)了，我的名字沒有被點(diǎn)名?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼憢寢尩氖?/p>

和麗貝卡的希望。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“幾秒鐘后，’好了，一年級(jí)的總成就獎(jiǎng)?wù)隆愗惪?揚(yáng)布拉德。R可知，第二段可描

寫麗貝卡獲獎(jiǎng)后母女倆的喜悅。

2.續(xù)寫線索：媽媽感到無助——祈禱奇跡出現(xiàn)——獲獎(jiǎng)后的喜悅——永遠(yuǎn)銘記這一刻

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①充￥黃：befilledwith/befullof

②緊握：squeeze/grasp

③結(jié)束：finish/conclude/end

情緒類

①緊緊地抱著我：hugmetightly/embracemetightly/holdmetight

②珍視：cherish/treasure

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Itseemedthattheprincipalwasabouttofinishhisannouncement.（運(yùn)用了that弓|導(dǎo)表語從

句）

[高分句型2]Mom'sfacelitupinasmileasshewipedawaytearsandhuggedmetightly.（運(yùn)用了as弓|導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀

語從句）

[高分句型3]ItwasalessoninresilienceandperseverancethatIwouldcarrywithmealways.（運(yùn)用了關(guān)系代詞

that引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句）

3.Q023秋?山西?高三太原十二中校聯(lián)考階段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，

使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Attheendofthefifthgrade,therewasaburstofexcitementintheclassroom.Theschoolyearwasalmost

over,andwewouldbemovingontoanewschoolforthesixthgrade.Allthegirlsmadeautographbooks（簽名冊(cè)）

andcollectedsignatures.

AsIsignedmyclassmates5books,Inoticedtheirmomshadwritteninthem,too.Suchsweetthoughtswere

expressed,“Icouldn'tbeprouderofyou.Can'twaittoseehowyoulikejuniorhigh!”"You'regraduating.

Congratulations!WeloveyouandknowyouhaveabrightfUture!”...

Iaskedmymothertosignmine,too.Shewasbusy,butshesaidshe'dsignit.Severaldayslater,whenIasked

aboutit,shetoldmeshejustforgot.Anyway,shehandeditbacktomelater.Iwasanxioustoseewhatencouraging

wordsshehadwritten.AndthisiswhatIfoundonthepage:

Whenathingisfirstbegun,

Neverleaveittillit'sdone.

Bethelaborgreatorsmall,

Doitwellornotatall.

Mom

Myheartsank.Thatwasit?Iwasdisappointedthattherewerenowordsofprideorencouragement.Itwasjust

astupidpoem-anotherindicationtomethatifIcouldn'tbeperfect,Iwasn'tgoodenough.

Iheldbackmytears,notexpressingmydisappointment.

Thatpageinthathandmadebookbotheredmeforyears,

Ibattledperfectionismandlowself-respectandneverfeltgoodenoughformostofmylife.Manytimes,I

gaveuponthingsafterIbarelygotstarted.AllIcouldhearwas"You'renotgoodenough/*

Whenmymotherwasinhereightiesandinanursinghome,Igaveherabooktofilloutsowecouldknow

moreabouther.Ithadhints（暗示）atthetopofeachpageandthenblankspacetorespond.Iwantedhertowrite

downhermemoriesandalifetimeofexperiences,soI.alongwithhergrandchildren,wouldhavesomeprecious

sectionsofherlife.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Inthebeginning,shewasveryexcited.

OnedayIwenttothenursinghometoseeher,onlytofindhersleeping,withthebooklyingbesideher.

【答案】

Inthebeginning,shewasveryexcited.She'dcallmetotellmethatshewasworkingonit.Afterseveral

weeks,though,shestoppedmentioningthebook,soIaskedaboutit.Thenshesaid,“Oh,Iwasbusychattingwith

myfriendsinthenursinghome,forgettingaboutit.ButIwillworkonitagain.^^Iguesseditgotboringforherand

thatshejustdidn'tlikewritinganythingtome,especiallysomethingencouragingorwhatshehadexperienced.

OnedayIwenttothenursinghometoseeher,onlytofindhersleeping,withthebooklyingbesideher.Ipicked

itupandsatdowntoreadthroughit.Onceagain,Ifeltdisappointment-she'donlyfilledouttenpages.