專題49 讀后續(xù)寫情感心理描寫20類80句應(yīng)用文好句背誦模板【 核心知識(shí)】 高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)知識(shí)清單（全國(guó)）教師版

專題49讀后續(xù)寫情感心理描寫80句應(yīng)用文好句背誦模板解析版書面表達(dá)磨尖訓(xùn)練一（讀后續(xù)寫情感心情描寫20類80句）（一）喜悅1.Hersmilebloomedlikeaflower.她的笑容像花朵一樣開放。2.Abrightsmilespreadacrossherface.她臉上洋溢著燦爛的笑容。3.Hewasinhighspirits,andfeltlikebeingontopoftheworld.他情緒高漲，感覺(jué)自己好像站在了世界之巔。4.Shelaughed,hereyesshining/twinklingwithexcitement.她笑了起來(lái)，她的眼睛因興奮而閃閃發(fā)光。（二）同情1.Shepressedmyhandinsympathy.她握了握我的手表示同情。2.Hispainfuleyesseemtobegmetospare.他痛苦的眼睛似乎在懇求他。3.Franklinstoodsilently,tornbysorrowandcompassion,weighingwhattosay.當(dāng)富蘭克林默默地站著，悲傷和同情讓他心碎，猶豫著該說(shuō)些什么。4.Seeinghercondition,Iimmediatelyfeltahugesympathyforher.Itwascomingdeepfromwithinmyheart.看到她的情況，我立即對(duì)她產(chǎn)生了極大的同情。這種感覺(jué)深深地發(fā)自我的心。（三）感動(dòng)1.Tearswelledupinhereyes.她淚如泉涌。2.Awarmcurrentroseinherheart.一股暖流涌上她的心頭。3.Withtearsstreamingdownherface,shethankedhimagainandagain.她淚流滿面，再三感謝她。4.Iwasdeeplymovedbywhathehaddone,tearsrollingdownwithoutcontrol.我被他的所作所為深深打動(dòng)了，淚水情不自禁地奪眶而出。5.Tearsdroppingfromhiseyes,herantoMum’swarmhug,andsaidgently"Mum,thankyou."他熱淚盈眶，跑到媽媽溫暖的擁抱前，溫柔地說(shuō)："媽媽，謝謝你。"（四）寬慰1.Hearingthis,Ifeltawarmflowspreadinginsideofme.流在我體內(nèi)蔓延。2.Shestrokedherfingersthroughmyhairandsaid,“Thingsaregoingtobefine."她用手指撫摸著我的頭發(fā)說(shuō)："一切都會(huì)好起來(lái)的。"3.Hereachedouthishandwithhisfingerforminga"heart",saying,“I’llalwaysbetherewithyou."他伸出手，用手指捏成"心形"，說(shuō)："我將永遠(yuǎn)與你同在"。4.Sheheldmyhands,weeping,"Thankyousomuch!Youhavenoideahowmuchthismeanstome."她握著我的手哭著說(shuō)："非常感謝！你不知道這對(duì)我有多重要。"（五）鼓勵(lì)1.Mymom/wearingasmileonherface,alwaysencouragesme.媽媽總是面帶微笑鼓勵(lì)我。2.Hesmiledwithsatisfaction,pattingmeontheshoulderandsaid,"Welldone!"他滿意地笑了，拍了拍我的肩膀說(shuō)："做得好！"3."Youmatter."Isaidthatsentencetomyself,feelingawarmglowspreadinginsideofme."你很重要。"我對(duì)自己說(shuō)了這句話，感到一股暖意在我體內(nèi)蔓延。4.Thankstotheencouragement,whichcalmsmedowngradually,Ibegantoacceptthatfailureisapartofgreatvalue.多虧了鼓勵(lì)，我漸漸平靜下來(lái)，我開始接受失敗是天賦價(jià)值的一部分。（六）希望1.Asparkofhopekindledintheirhearts.他們心中燃起了希望的火花。2.Lifebloomedwithhappinessandhope.生活充滿了幸福和希望。3.Hopeforthebestandpreparefortheworst.抱最好的希望，做最壞的打算。4.Afteralltheproblems,wearefinallybeginningtoseesomelightattheendofthetunnel.在經(jīng)歷了這么多困難之后，我們終于看到了曙光。（七）激動(dòng)1.Hisfaceisglowingwithexcitement.他的臉因激動(dòng)而容光煥發(fā)。2.Hewassothrilledthathecouldhardlyspeak.他激動(dòng)得幾乎說(shuō)不出話來(lái)。3.Shefeltherheartracingandherbloodrushing.她的心跳加速，熱血沸騰。4.Ashiverofexcitementpassedthroughherstomachwhensheheardthenews.聽(tīng)到這個(gè)消息，她激動(dòng)得胃里直打顫。（八）憤怒1.Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的聲音因憤怒而顫抖。2.Hewasreallyangry,shakinghisfists.他非常生氣，揮動(dòng)著拳頭。3.Hercolorwentup,aheavyragecameoverherlikeadarkcloud.她的臉色漲了起來(lái)，一股沉重的怒氣像一片烏云籠罩著她。4.Hestormedoutoftheroomwithanger,shuttingthedoorhardbehindhim.他怒氣沖沖地沖出了房間，重重地關(guān)上了門。（九）悲傷1.Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他默默地站著，淚水順著臉頰流了下來(lái)。2.Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.她哭了起來(lái)，跑出了房間。3.Sheshookherheadmiserably,tearspouringdownhercheeks.她痛苦地?fù)u了搖頭,淚水順著臉頰流下。4.Shewalkedtome,withgreatsorrow,thelightinhereyesdarkened,andsaidwithsadness,“Ifailed."她走到我面前，悲痛萬(wàn)分，眼睛里的光芒暗了下來(lái)，悲傷地說(shuō)："我失敗了。"（十）驚恐1.Afloodoffearwelledupinher.她心中起一股恐懼的洪流。2.Scaredandshocked,shecouldn'tsayaword.他又害怕又震驚，一句話也說(shuō)不出來(lái)。3.Hefrozenwithfear,tooscaredtomoveaninch.他嚇得僵住了，不敢動(dòng)彈。4.Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodthere,tongue-tied.他的臉色變得蒼白，站在那里，舌頭打結(jié)。5.Thesightofthefiercewolf,Mikefeltsoscaredthathisthroattightenedandhiskneesfeltweak.看到那只兇猛的狼，邁克感到非常害怕，喉嚨發(fā)緊，膝蓋發(fā)軟。（十一）緊張1.Hisheartbeatwildlyandhislegstrembled.他的心臟狂跳著，雙腿顫抖著。2.Hisheartbeatsoviolentlythathefeltlikesittingonpinsandneedles.如此劇烈，他感到如坐針氈。3.Hewasabouttorespondwhenhefelthistonguetiedinandpalmssweating.他正要回答時(shí)，感到舌頭被綁住了，手掌開始出汗。4.Asthebusgotcloserandcloser,Tom'sheartbeatsoviolentlythathefeltnearlybreathless.公共汽車越來(lái)越近了，湯姆的心臟劇烈跳動(dòng)，幾乎呼吸困難。（十二）悔疚1.Istoodthere,withregretfultearsinmyeyes.我站在那里，眼里含著遺憾的淚水。2.Onhearingthebadnews,shefeltextremelyguilty.聽(tīng)到這個(gè)壞消息，她感到非常內(nèi)疚。3.Desperateandhelpless,Janetkneltdownwithtearsofregretstreamingdownhercheeks.絕望而無(wú)助的珍妮特跪了下來(lái)，后悔的淚水順著面頰流了下來(lái)。（十三）困惑1.Hissuddenchangeinmoodcompletelyconfusedher.他的情緒突然變化完全把握弄糊涂了。2.Wearealittleconfusedaboutwhatwearesupposedtobedoing.我們對(duì)正在做的事情有點(diǎn)困惑。3.WhenIstoodonthestageinfrontofthelargeaudience,mymindwentblank.站在舞臺(tái)上面對(duì)大批觀眾時(shí)，我的頭腦一片空白。（十四）憂慮1.Worriedaboutthejourney,Iwasunsettledforthefirstfewdays.由于擔(dān)心這次旅行，頭幾天我心神不寧。2.HewassonervousabouttheEnglishtestthathelayawakehalfthenight,worrying.他對(duì)英語(yǔ)考試感到如此緊張，以至于大半夜都睡不著覺(jué)，心神不寧。（十五）震驚1.ItgavemeashockwhenIrealized...．當(dāng)我意識(shí)到．..，我感到震驚。2.Hefroze,withhismouthhangingopen.他僵住了，張著嘴。3.Ijumpedtomyfeetandsteppedbackinnotime,completelyataloss.我跳了起來(lái)，立刻后退了一步，完全不知所措。4.Everyonegaspedinastonishmentasthecarscamearoundthelastbend.汽車駛過(guò)最后一個(gè)彎道時(shí)，每個(gè)人都驚呆了。（十六）羞愧1.Soashameddidshefeelthatshewasclosetotears.她感到非常羞愧，幾乎要哭了。2.Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushedtoherface.我感到非常羞愧，甚至能感覺(jué)到鮮血涌到臉上。3.Shefeltsoashamedofherfoolishbehaviorthatshecouldfeelherfaceburning.她為自己的愚蠢行為感到非常羞愧，以至于感到臉紅了。（十七）疲憊1.Exhausted,Islidintobedandfellfastasleep.我精疲力竭地躺在床上，很快就睡著了。2.“Arewealmostthere?"sheasked,feelingburntout.“我們快到了嗎？”她問(wèn)道，感到筋疲力盡。3.Shefeltexhaustedandsatbythestreamrestingherachingfeet.她感到精疲力竭，坐在溪邊休息著疼痛的雙腳。（十八）孤獨(dú)1.Awaveoflonelinesswashedoverher.一陣孤獨(dú)感席卷了她的全身。2.Coldwithnohopeforwarmth,shefeltlikedrowninginacrowdofpeople.她感到又冷又無(wú)取暖的希望，感覺(jué)就像被人群淹沒(méi)一樣。（十九）尷尬1.Thewifestoodtherewithembarrassmentandshefeltbloodrushingtoherface.妻子尷尬地站在那里，感到鮮血涌向臉上。2.Alltheairseemedtodisappearandshefeltasifthewholeworldwaswatchingher.所有的空氣似乎都消失了，她覺(jué)得整個(gè)世界都在看著她。3.Heloweredhishead,hesitatedforamoment,wonderinghowtohidehisinnerembarrassment.他低下頭，猶豫了一會(huì)兒，不知道如何掩飾內(nèi)心的尷尬。（二十）絕望1.Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine.聽(tīng)到這個(gè)消息，他非常絕望，把悲傷淹沒(méi)在酒中。2.Hegazedattheconfusionaroundhimandwasoverwhelmedbyafeelingofdespair.他凝視著周圍一片混亂，感到一陣絕望。3.Desperateandhelpless,shekneltdown,withtearsofregretstreamingdownhercheeks.絕望而無(wú)助的她跪了下來(lái)，悔恨的淚水順著面頰流了下來(lái)。書面表達(dá)磨尖訓(xùn)練二（應(yīng)用文寫作高頻黃金句式4大類33句）●首段必背句式●1.Wordsfailtoconveymyheartfeltdelightonhearingthatyouwillparticipateinthecompetition.2.Morethandelightedtolearnthatyouarekeenonthecomingseminar,I’mwritingtoinformyouofthedetailsasfollows.3.Havingknownwithdelightthatyoutakeakeeninterestintheseminartobeheldinourschool,I’mwritingtosharewithyouthedetailsasfollows.4.GreatjoywellsupfromthebottomofmyheartthemomentIaminformedthatyouareduetosignupforthecompetition.●首段必背過(guò)渡句●1.Mysuggestionswithregardtothistopicareasfollows.2.I’dliketogiveyousomepracticalsuggestions,whichIhopewillbeofsomehelp.3.WhenitcomestotraditionalChineseculture,I’dliketoofferyousometipsforyourreference.4.Inresponsetoyouremailaskingforhelpwithregardtothecompetition,Ifeelhonoredtolendyouahand.5.Tohelpyougetfullyprepared,Iwillgiveyousomeadviceforyourreference.●中段必背經(jīng)典句●1.Firstandforemost,youareadvisedtopracticespeakingmorefromnowon.2.Lastbutnotleast,whenandwhereshallImeetandgiveyouahand?3.Theseminarisduetobeheldfrom3:00pmto5:00pmonTuesday.4.Asscheduled,theseminarwillbeheldinthelecturehall,lastingtwohoursfrom3:00pm.5.It’ssuchagoldenchanceforyoutogetexposedtoChineseculturethatyoucan’taffordtomissit.6.WheneverIlookbackonthewonderfultimewespenttogether,Ijustcan’thelpthinkingofwhatyouhavedoneforme.7.ItwasyouwhobuiltupmyconfidenceandassistedmewithmyEnglish.8.Onbehalfofmywholefamily,I’dliketoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyoursupport.9.Youarewelcometoshowuponstage,whichwilldefinitelyaddcolorandfuntoourfestival.10.Wehopethatyouwillacceptourinvitationifitisconvenientforyou.●尾段必背精彩句●1.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Itwouldbehighlyappreciatedifyoucouldrespondtomeatyourearliestconvenience.3.Yourpromptreplytothisletterwouldbehighlyappreciated.4.Shouldyoutakemyadviceintoconsideration,Iwouldbehighlygrateful.5.I’dbemuchobligedifyoucouldconfirmyourparticipation.6.I’msincerelylookingforwardtoyourpresenceattheseminar.7.Nothingcandelightmesomuchasyourparticipationintheseminar.8.Itcouldn’tbebetterifyoucouldletmeknowwhetherornotyouwillmakeitinadvance.9.Lookforwardtocommunicatingwithyoufacetofaceassoonaspossible.10.Whenenverintrouble,don’thesitatetoturntomeforhelp.11.WishyoubestluckinthecomingChineseIdiomStoryCompetition.12.MayyouwinthefirstprizeintheChineseSpeakingCompetition!13.Allinall,mysenseofresponsibilitywillmakemeaqualifiedvolunteer.14.Hopefully,youwillhavegreatfunattheweddingceremony.書面表達(dá)磨尖訓(xùn)練三（應(yīng)用文寫作高頻增分句式6大類31句）高頻增分句式一：很高興得知你…，我寫信…1.Wordsfailtoconveymyheartfeltdelightonhearingthatyouwillparticipateinthecompetition.2.ExceedinglydelightedtoknowyouarefondofChineseidioms,I’mwritingtoinformyouofsometips.3.GreatjoywellsupfromthebottomofmyheartthemomentIknowyouaretosignupforthecompetition.4.Havingknownthatyou’llattendtheChineseidiomstorycompetition,Iwillsparenoefforttodoyouafavor.5.HavinglearntthatyouarekeenonChineseidiomstorycompetition,Iamprivilegedtodoyouafavor.高頻增分句式二：寫信目的，發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)…1.Overwhelmedtolearnthatyouarekeenonthecomingseminar,I’mwriting,onbehalfoftheStudentUnion,toinformyouofthedetailsasfollows.2.ExceedinglydelightedtoknowyoushowakeeninterestintheChineseClassicsSeminar,I’mwritingafewlinestooffersomedetailsforyourreference.3.Havingknownwithdelightthatyoutakeakeeninterestintheseminartobeheldinourschool,I’mwritingtosharewithyouthedetailsasfollows.高頻增分句式三：就……提一些，希望……1.Mysuggestionswithregardtothistopicareasfollows.2.I’dliketogiveyousomepracticalsuggestions,whichIhopewillbeofsomehelp.3.WhenitcomestotraditionalChineseculture,I’dliketoofferyousometipsforyourreference.4.Inresponsetoyouremailaskingforhelpwithregardtothecompetition,Ifeelhonoredtolendyouahand.5.Tohelpyougetfullyprepared,Iwillgiveyousomeadvice.高頻增分句式四：盼望……1.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Ifyouhaveanyproblem,don’thesitatetoletmeknow.2.Lookforwardtofurtherdiscussionwithyouassoonaspossible.3.Yourpromptattentiontothisletterwouldbehighlyappreciated.4.Shouldyoutakemyadviceintoconsideration,Iwouldbehighlygrateful.5.Don’thesitatetoturntoyourteacherforhelpprovidedthatyouhaveanytrouble.高頻增分句式五：參與回復(fù)，不勝感激1.I’dbemuchobligedifyoucouldconfirmyourparticipation.2.I’msincerelylookingforwardtoyourpresenceattheseminar.3.Yourpromptresponsetomyletterwouldbehighlyappreciated.4.Nothingcandelightmesomuchasyourparticipationintheseminar.5.Itwouldbehighlyappreciatedifyoucouldrespondtomeatyourearliestconvenience.6.Itcouldn’tbebetterifyoucouldletmeknowwhetheryouwillmakeitornotinadvance.7.Shouldyoutakemyinvitationintoconsideration,Iwouldbemorethenobliged.高頻增分句式六：祝愿……1.WishyoubestluckinthecomingChineseidiomstorycompetition.2.Mayyouwinthefirstprizeinthecompetition!3.Withyoureffortandmyguidance,I’monehundredpercentsureyou’llmakeit.4.Devoteyourselftoyourspeechandyou’llsurelymakeit.5.WordsfailedtoconveyhowrejoicedIamthatIcanbeofanybenefittoyou.6.Nothingcandelightmesomuchasyoursuccessinthecompetition.書面表達(dá)磨尖訓(xùn)練四（通知類思路拓展）1.為了---inordertodo,withtheintention/aim/purposeof,forthesakeof,aimedat,targetedat2.將要做---beduetodo,bescheduledtodo,asscheduled3.下午3點(diǎn)到5點(diǎn)---beginat3:00pmandendat5:00pm,lastfrom3:00p,to5:00pm4.關(guān)于---concerning/regarding/withregardto/relevantto5.細(xì)節(jié)---detailed/specificinformation6.珍貴機(jī)會(huì)---suchagolden/precious/valuableopportunity7.深入了解---haveabetterunderstandingof,gainadeepinsightinto8.參與---joinin,participatein,takepartin,beinvolvedin9.歡迎做某事---bewelcometoparticipate/getinvolved10.報(bào)告廳/運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)---ontheplayground/inthelecturehall11.第一---Firstly,Firstofall,Inthefirstplace,Tobeginwith,Firstandforemost12.第二---Secondly,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Additionally,Inaddition,Whatismore13.第三---Thirdly,Finally,Moreimportantly,Lastbutnotleast,Ontopofthat14.學(xué)生會(huì)---theStudentUnion,theStudents’Union15.體育活動(dòng)類內(nèi)容：開幕式theopeningceremony，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)講話deliveraspeech，太極表演TaiChiperformance，田徑項(xiàng)目100-meterrace,highjump,4*100mrelayrace，頒獎(jiǎng)儀式awardthegoldmedal……16.體育活動(dòng)類收獲：豐富校園生活enrichafter-classlife，增進(jìn)同學(xué)友情promotefriendship，融洽團(tuán)隊(duì)精神improveteamspirit，增強(qiáng)學(xué)生體質(zhì)buildupone’sbody，提升健康意識(shí)raiseourawarenessofhealth，促進(jìn)身心健康enableustobephysicallyandmentallyhealthy，激發(fā)興趣arouseone’spassionfor17.讀書活動(dòng)類內(nèi)容：開幕式theopeningceremony，校長(zhǎng)講話deliveraspeech，專家講座givealecture，才藝表演atalentshow，讀書分享readingexperiencesharing，征文比賽writingcompetition……18.讀書活動(dòng)類收獲：豐富課外生活enrichafter-classlife，增長(zhǎng)見(jiàn)識(shí)broadenourhorizons，提升文化自信developasenseofculturepride，積累閱讀技巧accumulatereadingskills……19.比賽的細(xì)節(jié)如下。①Thedetailedinformationconcerningthecompetitionisasfollows.②.Thefollowingisthedetailedinformationwithregardtothecompetition.③I’dliketosharewithyouthespecificinformationrelevanttothecompetitionasfollows.20.盼望你的參與。①Lookingforwardtoyourparticipationinthecompetitionassoonaspossible.②Earnestlylookingforwardtoyourinvolvementinthecompetitionwithgreatexpectation.③Youractiveinvolvementishighlyexpected.④WhoeverisinterestedinChinesecultureiswelcometogetinvolved.21.比賽將于周五下午三點(diǎn)舉行,五點(diǎn)結(jié)束。①Thecompetitionisscheduledtobeginat3:00pmonFridayandendat5:00pm.②Thecompetitionisduetostartat3:00pmonFriday,endingat5:00pm.③Asscheduled,thecontestistobeheldat3:00pmonSaturday,lastingapproximatelytwohours.22.比賽機(jī)會(huì)難得，不容錯(cuò)過(guò)。①Thecontestissuchagoldenchancethatyoucan’taffordtomissit.②Thecontestissuchapreciousopportunitythatyoucan’taffordtomissit.③Sovaluableachanceisthecompetitionthatyoucan’taffordtomissit.學(xué)以致用：2023新課標(biāo)I&II卷讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(銀匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【官方答案】Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.IwasinformedthatIwonthefirstprizeinthewritingcontestandthattherewouldbeanawardpresentationintwodays.IwassohappytohearthenewsthatIimmediatelyshareditwithmyteacher.“Iknewyou’dwin!Iamproudofyou.Youmadeit!”hesaidexcitedly.Thencamethebigday.WhenIwasinvitedtothestagetoreceivetheaward,Iexpressedmythankstomyteacher.Isaid,“It’syouwhomakemefallinlovewithwriting,mysocialstudiesteacher.Withoutyourrecognitionandguidance,Icouldn’thavewrittenthisarticle.Againthankyouverymuch!”Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.Myteacherwaswaitingforme.Holdingmyhands,hesaid“Congratulations!Youareagoodwriter,sokeepwriting.”“YouknowIdidn’tlikewritingbefore,butnowIamcrazyaboutit!Iwilltrymybesttocreategoodworks.”Isaidseriously.Sincethen,IhavewrittenmanygoodworksandnowIamafamouswriter.Iowemysuccesstomysocialteacherwhoisabeaconinmylifeontheroadtowriting.【參考答案一】Afewweekslater,Ialmostforgotthecontestwhenthenewscame.

Duringausualmorningbreak,theschoolradiobegantoannouncethelistofthewritingcontest

winners.

Uponhearingthis,I

couldfeelmyheartpoundingwildly

andmymindgoingunconsciouslybacktothedays

Irackedmybrainforstories.

EventhoughIwasindifferenttotheresult,

arushofunexpectedanxiety

stilltorturedme.

Whenmynamewas

incredibly

calledasthefirst-prizewinner,I

letoutascreamofthrill,rushingto

theawardpresentation.

Eageranddelighted,Iheldupthechampionshiptrophy,and

ItwasnotuntilthenthatIrealized

thejourneyofwritingwasnotonlyfilledwithdisbeliefandself-doubtbutalsosupportandself-approval.Idecidedtovisitmyteacher

themoment

Igottheprize.Icametotheteacher'sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.

NosoonerhadI

steppedintothisfamiliarroom

than

Isawmyteachersittingamongpilesofpapers.

Variousthoughtscrowdedintomymind,makingmeunabletoexpressmyself.Hisfacecrackedintoaproudsmileashesawmestandingthere.

Withouthisencouragement,nevercouldIimagine

I

wouldcompletea

wholestory,letalonejointhecompetition.

Inaflash,aburstofheartfeltgratitudetakingholdofmeentirely,Isteppedforwardtogivehimawarmhug.Hegentlypattedonmyshoulderand

uttered:“Iknewyouareagoodstory-tellerwhoonlyneedssomeacknowledgement.”.

Speechlessbutmoved,Ifeltunprecedentedlyconfident.Atthatmoment,

theamber-likesunlightkissingthefloor,Irealizeditwasmyteacher’sfaiththatsparkedmypassionforwriting.【參考答案二】Afewweekslater,Ialmostforgotthecontestwhenthenewscame.

Tomysurprise,Ilearnedthatmyessayhad

ranked

firstinthecontest.

Amixofexcitementanddoubtwashedoverme.Havingdouble-checkedit,Icouldnolonger

contain

myselfand

promptly

sharedthenewswithmysister,

withoutwhosehelp,Iwouldneverhadthechancetoobtainthehonor.Ofcourse,Iknew

theveryperson

towhomIwouldbemostgrateful.Icametotheteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.Heraisedhisheadfromthetable,

hisfacewreathedinsmiles.“Iwasagainimpressedbythe

novelty

ofyouressay.Nowyoubelieveyoucanbegoodatwritingstories?”Heasked,

beamingwithjoy.

Ifeltaslightflushcreepingupmycheeks

asIresponded."Thankyou,professor,forencouragingmetoenterthecontest.Now,Ikn