專題06讀后續(xù)寫（原卷版）【查漏補缺】

專題06讀后續(xù)寫目錄01挑戰(zhàn)真題·查知識漏洞02回顧教材·補知識漏洞回顧知識體系回顧核心考點易混易錯歸納03知識通關演練回顧知識體系回顧核心考點考點一如何寫續(xù)寫?厘清原文的伏筆閱讀文章，找5W1H，故事線和情感線

對于學生來說，讀后續(xù)寫的關鍵點在于讀懂原文,能有效獲取原文的重要信息，也就是伏筆。實際上，很多學生只是了解原文的大概情節(jié)，沒有獲取足夠多的有效伏筆信息，在續(xù)寫情節(jié)時往往會邏輯混亂天馬行空，出現與原文協(xié)同度不高的邏輯問題。因此，要落實好讀后續(xù)寫題型，就要通過精讀獲取準確的原文信息伏筆點和合理、流暢的構思,然后串聯情節(jié),實現情節(jié)構建的合理性。以2022年高考英語全國I.II卷讀后續(xù)寫為例進行分析:

(1)Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltown...(越野跑，對正常人來說都很難，對身體有殘疾的大衛(wèi)來說更難;來參加的人很多，為后文大衛(wèi)害怕被嘲笑埋下伏筆。)

(2)Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.(他比同齡人小,并且有殘疾，參加比賽雖然不易，但仍要參加，突出其勇敢。比賽結束時，受到在場師生的鼓勵、欽佩，甚至尊敬,因此大衛(wèi)的微笑表情不能缺失。)

(3)AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,...hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.(續(xù)寫中可以用來描述大衛(wèi)賽跑時的樣子，是有效的動作描述，更是原文協(xié)同。)(4)Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.(這是大衛(wèi)最令人敬佩的品質。竭盡全力練習,平時積極參加各種比賽，應是“我”說服他參賽的關鍵點。兩個always的部分可以用來描述大衛(wèi)在比賽時的結果:他雖然不可能跑贏別人，但堅持跑完全程。這可能是學生容易忽視的地方。有的學生寫成大衛(wèi)獲得第一名，不符合常理。)(5）...wasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.(此處是“我”能夠成功鼓勵大衛(wèi)參加越野跑的基礎?！拔摇笔翘厥饨逃蠋?有經驗,因此續(xù)寫第一段時可以參照此句。)2.掌握原文的語言特色讀后續(xù)寫的實質是根據所提供的原文內容,寫出主旨一致、邏輯順暢、語言風格一致的故事結尾。因此，續(xù)寫時除了考慮故事的主題思想、關注邏輯之外，還要高度關注續(xù)寫部分和原文語言風格的一致性。主要從主要人物、時態(tài)、原文中的高級句式三個方面考慮。3.定“兩條”設“四點”主題升華“兩條”指情節(jié)線(Plotline)、情感線(Emotionline)。在讀后續(xù)寫題型中，續(xù)寫部分往往是故事的高潮。在寫的過程中第一條情節(jié)線是出現問題之后先嘗試，嘗試未果失敗之后會出現第二條情節(jié)線是在失敗有沖突矛盾的基礎之上會繼續(xù)解決這個問題在構思過程中,合理、有效的方法是結合段首語推理情節(jié)，以及在這些情節(jié)發(fā)生的過程中伴隨怎樣的情感。在這個過程中我們會涉及到三種沖突（與環(huán)境的沖突與自己的沖突與第二主人公的沖突）在這這個過程中會有一些心理環(huán)境情緒動作描寫，這樣一添加整個過程就完整了在寫作過程中尤其要關注“四點”:第一點:位于續(xù)寫第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語;第二點:位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首語;第三點:位于續(xù)寫第二段段首,續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語;第四點:文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量,揭示和強調劇情的寓意。這“四點”決定了續(xù)寫故事的發(fā)展方向。按照寫作要求的不同側重方向,將這四點劃分為段首三點和結尾一點。段首三點指與段首句相關的三個點，即緊接兩段段首句之后的兩個點和第一段結尾的一個點。通過分析這三點可以保證整體故事的連貫性。第一點要限定劇情走向，同時為下文的展開留出足夠的寫作空間;第二點要達成兩段之間的銜接,過渡不能突兀;第三點不僅要銜接第二段開頭語,還要收束劇情，為結尾作鋪墊。在創(chuàng)作過程中，學生要培養(yǎng)銜接意識，關注原文的隱含信息?？键c二情景好詞佳句+高級句式分析+解題發(fā)揮【高級詞匯】一、表示人物開心快樂1．難以形容地開心：indescribablywildjoy2．極為感動：beoverwhelminglymoved3．幾乎無法掩飾他的興奮：canhardlyconcealhisexcitement4．既興奮又開心：amixtureofexcitementandhappiness5．激發(fā)某人的激情：kindlesb.with/topassion6．顯示出極大的意愿：showagreatreadiness7．被強烈地吸引：bepowerfullyattractedto8．心情愉快：incheerfulspirits9．振作精神：keepupone’sspirits10．滿意的表情：asatisfiedlook11．對……感到滿意：becontentwith12．對……很高興：bedelightedat13．為成功而欣喜：beexcitedwithjoyatthesuccess14．被……場面所吸引：befascinatedbythespectacleof15．被她的美貌所吸引：befascinatedwithherbeauty16．因……而高興：bejoyfulover/about17．喜愛，對……著迷：bekeenon18．快樂至極：beoverwhelmedwith19．高興地跳起來：dance/jumpforjoy20．欣喜若狂：bewildwithdelight21．一個令人鼓舞的表情：anencouragingexpression22．過一個愉快的假日：haveapleasantholiday23．心滿意足，非常幸福：onthetopoftheworld24．對(做)……感到非常高興：overjoyedat/todo25．流下幸福的淚水：tearsofhappinessflowdown26．樂得大叫：yellwithdelight27．使某人心情愉快：brightensb.’sheart28．使某人安心：setone’sheartatrest29．感到鼓舞的：feelinspired/encouraged30．精神高漲：beinhighspirits二、表示人物傷心抑郁1．強烈的失落感：astrongsenseofloss2．陷入絕望：fallintodespair3．讓他很傷感：puthimintoasentimentalmood4．避免陷入消極的漩渦：avoidgettingsuckedintoawhirlpoolofnegativity5．哭泣釋放苦悶情緒：cryinggivessomeemotionalrelease6．減輕某人的痛苦/煩惱：easesb.ofhispain/trouble7．因某人的死亡而痛心：breakone’sheartoverone’sdeath8．使某人悲痛：makeone’sheartbleed9．傷心而死：dieofabrokenheart10．悲痛欲絕：cryone’sheartout11．懷著沉重的心情：withaheavyheart12．沮喪的：withasinkingheart13．憂郁的：withasorrowfulheart14．驚慌失措：beseizedwithpanic15．有點驚訝：comeassomethingofasurprise16．感到疲憊不堪：feelexhaustedandoverwhelmed17．很可能引發(fā)一陣挫敗感：beextremelylikelytoraiseastormoffrustration18．某人突然感到一陣悲傷：aflashofgriefcomesuponsb.19．情緒低落：bedowninspirits20．垂頭喪氣：loseone’sspirit21．心里悲傷：besadatheart22．意志消沉：abrokenspirit三、表示人物憤怒怨恨1．引起某人的不快：arouseone’sdispleasure2．對某人的行為感到不滿：bedispleasedatone’sconduct3．易為瑣事而惱火：beeasilyannoyedattrifles4．氣得說不出話：bespeechlesswithindignation5．不斷地抱怨：complainconstantly6．對……大發(fā)脾氣：rageatsb.7．怒火萬丈：flamehigh8．氣得滿臉通紅：flamewithanger9．勃然大怒：flyintoarage10．對某人生氣：getirritatedat11．對某人勃然大怒：getmad/crossatsb.12．愁眉苦臉：haveaworriedlook13．對抱怨不予理會：ignore/disregardacomplaint14．對……表示不滿：express/voiceacomplaintabout15．怒氣沖沖地跑出房間：runoutoftheroominaburstofanger16．憤怒地跺腳：stampone’sfootinanger17．感到尷尬的：feelembarrassed18．感到困惑的：feelpuzzled/confused19．感到沮喪的：feelfrustrated/depressed20．感到惡心的：feeldisgusted/sickened21．感到惱怒的：feelannoyed22．感到憤怒的：feelirritated23．感到泄氣的：feeldiscouraged24．充滿怨恨的眼神：aresentfullook四、表示人物其他情緒1．激發(fā)興趣：find...highlystimulating2．寬容的精神：aforgivingspirit3．以和藹可親的態(tài)度：withakindlyandgood-humoredspirit4．某人對……一點也不感興趣：notintheleastbesb.interestedin...5．混合著焦慮與希望的情緒：mixedwiththeemotionofanxietyandhope6．引起強烈的情感：setoffstrongfeelingsintheheartsof...7．對……徹底上癮：behopelesslyaddictedto8．在這些情緒的控制下：underthedominationoftheseemotions五、表示人物的外貌特征1．優(yōu)美的身材：agracefulfigure2．勻稱的形體：ashapelyfigure3．瘦削的身材：askinnyfigure4．細長的身體：aslimfigure5．發(fā)育良好的身體：awell-developedfigure6．儀表堂堂：animposing/adashing/ahandsome/astrikingfigure7．(人)形體很好：haveagoodfigure8．改善形體：improveone’sfigure9．看到月光下有一個模糊的人影：seeadimfigureinthemoonlight10．炫耀某人優(yōu)美的身段：showoffsb.’slovelyfigure11．中等身材：anaveragebuild12．身材魁梧的人：awell-builtman六、表示人物個性品質1．務實的：bedown-to-earth2．保守的性格：conservativepersonality3．缺乏責任感：lackofresponsibility4．具有……的美德：withthevirtueof5．責任感：asenseofresponsibility6．一個專心致志進行探索的科學家：ascientistbentonmakingadiscovery7．高素質、有經驗的老師：highlyqualified，well-experiencedteachingstaff8．脾氣好的人：agood-humored/good-naturedperson9．一個完美的人：afaultless/perfectperson10．一個有自制力的人：aself-possessedperson11．一個疑心重的人：asuspiciousperson12．有抱負的人：anambitiousperson13．聰明人：anintellectualperson14．個性強的人：amanoffinepersonality15．容易相處的人：aneasypersontodealwith16．冷酷無情的人：acold-bloodedman17．性情和善的男子：agood-naturedman18．嚴肅的年輕人：aseriousyoungman19．頭腦簡單的人：asimple-mindedman20．能說會道的人：asmooth-spokenman21．消息靈通/見多識廣的人：awell-informedman22．嫻靜有禮的淑女：aquiet，graciouslady23．說話直率的人：anoutspokenman24．有教養(yǎng)的女子：aculturedwoman七、表示人物心理活動1．鼓起勇氣：masterupcourage2．期待：intheexpectationof3．不顧對……的憂慮：regardlessofconcernover4．感覺不適：feeloutofplace5．毫無倦意：shownosignsoftiredness6．走神：keepdriftingaway7．好奇地向某人看：throwacuriousglanceatsb.8．對某事不存幻想：beundernoillusionaboutsth.9．不耐煩地聽：listenimpatiently10．贊賞的目光：anadmiringgaze八、表示人物的動作1．步態(tài)優(yōu)美地走：walkgracefully2．拖著疲憊的雙腿回家：gohomeontiredlegs3．朝某人匆匆瞥了一眼：castahastyglanceatsb.4．聽到遠處隆隆的雷聲：hearthethunderrollinginthedistance5．穿過田野的散步：awalkacrossthefields6．爆發(fā)出陣陣喝彩聲：breakintoshoutsofapplause7．自吹自擂：singone’sownpraise8．嚴厲訓斥某人：givesb.asharpscolding9．一躍而起：jumptoone’sfeet10．漫步向山里走去：wanderintothemountain11．散步；閑逛：have/takeastroll12．來回踱步：pacebackandforth13．毫無目的地在街上游蕩：wanderaimlesslythroughthestreets14．臂挽著臂走：walkarminarm15．故意說：saysth.deliberately九、表示天氣1．涼爽清新的風：cool，refreshingbreeze2．落日：thesetting/decliningsun3．多雨的季節(jié)：arainyseason4．暴風雨之夜：astormynight5．四面受風：exposetothefourwindsofheaven6．連綿不斷的雨：continuous/constantrains7．在茫茫大雨中：intheblindingrain8．深埋在雪中：beburiedinsnow9．難以忍受的酷熱：unbearablyhot10．在春天溫暖的陽光里：inthewarmspringsunshine11．放晴：clearup12．狂風暴雨：fierce/heavy/violentstorms13．及時雨：atimely/seasonablerain14．沐日光浴：bathe/baskin(the)sunshine15．在盛夏灼熱的陽光下：undertheblazing/scorching/burningsunofmidsummer十、表示地理位置1．位置優(yōu)越的城市：afavorablysituatedcity2．水下面的暗礁：ahiddenrockbeneaththesurfaceofthewater3．一個偏僻的小村子：asmallvillageoffthemap4．離海濱僅咫尺之遙：withinastone’sthrowofthebeach5．位于……最北端：besituatedatthenorthernextremeof...6．在群山環(huán)抱的村莊里：inavillageamongthehills7．朝南的房間：roomfacingsouth8．人煙稀少的農村地區(qū)：thethinlypopulatedruralarea9．位于太平洋沿岸某處：belocatedsomewhereonthePacificcoast【常用句式】一、表示心理描寫1．Myheartbegantoraceandmymindwentblank.我心跳開始加速，腦子里一片空白。2．Somanythoughtscrowdedintohermind，allatonce.那么多的想法突然涌入她的腦海。3．Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.她是如此的羞愧以至于臉如充血般發(fā)燙。4．Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize，awideexcitementtookholdofher.當主持人宣布她獲獎時，她的激動之情溢于言表。5．Hisheartsankwhenheheardthenewsthathefailedtowinaprize.聽到他沒獲獎的消息，他的心情沉重。6．Onbluedaysyoufeellikeyou’refloatinginanoceanofsadness.在憂郁的日子里，你會覺得自己在悲傷的海洋里沉沉浮浮。7．Asaresultofanaccident，Tonywassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarknessandsankintohopelessness.因為一場事故，托尼的世界突然陷入一片黑暗與絕望之中。8．Terroranddeathstruck，andherheartwasbeatingpainfullyfast，bangingagainstherribs.恐怖和死亡襲來，她的心臟跳動得非?？欤矒糁睦吖?。9．Ifeltthatthebloodinmybodycooled/frozerapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.看到這可怕的景象，我感覺我的血液都凝固起來。10．Hewassickwithfear，butthethoughtoftheconsequencesurgedhimon.他因害怕而感到惡心，但一想到結果，他還是要繼續(xù)下去。11．Iwonderifit’sbecauseIhaven’tbeenabletobeoutdoorsforsolongthatI’vegrownsocrazyabouteverythingtodowithnature.我不知道這是不是因為我太久無法出門的緣故，我變得對一切與大自然有關的事物都無比狂熱。12．Icanwellrememberthattherewasatimewhenadeepbluesky，thesongofthebirds，moonlightandflowerscouldneverhavekeptmespellbound.我仍然清楚地記得曾經有一段時間，湛藍的天空，鳥兒清脆的歌聲，月光明亮，花香彌漫，從未令我心迷神往過。13．Iwasalittlenervousatfirst，buteveryonewassoniceandfriendlythatIsoonstoppedworrying.起初我有點緊張，但是大家都那么友好，我很快便不再擔心了。14．TheEagleswenthomeangryandbitterbecausetheydidnotwinthetournament.Meanwhile，theKangarooswenthomeandtrainedharderthanbefore.老鷹隊隊員們回到了家，內心既憤怒又苦澀，因為他們沒有贏得錦標賽。與此同時，袋鼠隊隊員們回家后，訓練得比以前更刻苦了。15．Ifeltsoashamed.Imustbereallystupidtofailasimplemathquiz!我感到很丟臉。我一定是蠢到家了才會連一次簡單的數學測試都沒通過！16．Afterwards，Ipretendedtobecheerful，butHannahsensedsomethingwaswrong.后來，我假裝很開心，但是漢娜覺察到了異樣。17．Afteracoupleofweeks，theexcitementstartedtofade，andhomesicknessstartedtosetin.幾個星期后，那股興奮勁開始減退，想家的情緒開始蔓延。二、表示環(huán)境描寫1．Thesunbegantoriseinthesky，bathingthemountainingoldenlight.太陽開始緩緩升起，給山披上了一層金紗。2．Thesunroseoveraquietworldandlookedwarmlydownuponthepeacefulvillage.太陽在一個寧靜的世界里升起，溫暖地俯視著這個寧靜的村莊。3．Theskyisclearbluenowandthesunhasflungdiamondsdownonmeadows，riverbanksandwoods.此時已是萬里藍天，太陽將鉆石般燦爛奪目的陽光灑向草原，灑向河岸，灑向樹林。4．Theroselookslikeanangel，swayinginthewind，dancinginthesun.這朵玫瑰就像是在風中搖擺、在陽光下跳舞的天使。5．Thegroundswerecoveredwithdarkgreengrassthroughwhichstretchedastraightwhitestonepath.庭院里處處是碧綠的芳草，綠草中鋪著潔白筆直的石路。6．Thebeautifulsceneryisafeastforyoureyes.美麗的景色令人大飽眼福。7．Thesesublimeandmagnificentscenesofferedmethegreatestconsolation.這些令人贊嘆的壯美景色給了我極大的安慰。8．Nanjing，anoldcitywitharichandcelebratedpast，yetvigorousinhernewyouth—howlovelysheis!南京，這座古老而又年輕的歷史文化名城，是多么的可愛！9．Itwassoquietintheclassroomthatthesoundofaneedleinthegroundcouldbeheard.教室里很安靜，連一根針掉在地上的聲音都聽得見。10．Whenwereachedthetopofthehill，amagnificentviewoftheseagreetedus.當我們到達山頂時，我們看到了一片壯麗的海景。11．Thedark，rainyevening，thewind，thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.那漆黑的雨夜，刮著大風，電閃雷鳴，烏云滾滾，我完全被這種景象鎮(zhèn)住了。12．However，thelakesshonelikeglassinthesettingsunandlookedwonderful.然而，湖水在落日的余暉下閃亮如鏡，景色迷人。13．Thehutwasdarkinsidesoittooktimeforoureyestoadjust.小屋內很黑，所以我們的眼睛需要點時間才能適應。14．Theroomisinamess，withpizzaboxesontheflooranddirtydishesinthesink.Inthecorner，thereisagarbagecanaroundwhicharepiecesofgarbageandwastepaper.房間里一片混亂，地上扔了些比薩盒子，水槽里堆著臟盤子。角落里有一個垃圾箱，周圍散落著廢紙屑和垃圾。15．Uponthearrivalofspring，beautifulbirdswillsinghappilyinthepark.春天一到，美麗的鳥兒們就會在公園里歡快地歌唱。16．Thenarrowwindowsadmitlittlelightintotheroom.窗戶很窄，只有少量的光能照進這個房間。17．Atthecloseoftheafternoonservice，wereturnedbyanexposedandhillyroad，wherethebitterwinterwind，blowingoverarangeofsnowysummitstothenorth，almostgrayedtheskinfromourface.下午的禱告結束以后，我們沿著一條光禿崎嶇的山路返回。冬日刺骨的寒風吹過大雪覆蓋的山峰，吹向北邊，吹得我們一臉蒼白蕭索。18．Thebrightlyburningmeteordarkenedthelight.熊熊燃燒的流星使光線都變暗了。三、表示動作描寫1．ItwasobviousthatthemanagerofthecoffeeshopwaswaitingforLiFangtoleave—hewipedthetables，thensatdownandturnedontheTV.很明顯，咖啡館的經理在等李方離開——他擦好桌子，然后坐下來，打開電視。2．Hiseyesstareatwhatisleftofthebrother’sdinnerontable.他的眼睛盯著兄弟倆留在餐桌上的殘羹剩菜。3．OlivergetsitfromadeskandgivesittoHenrylikeagift.奧利弗從桌上取過信，像送禮物一樣遞給亨利。4．Thehostessscreams，theothercustomerslookatherandsheputsahandtohermouth.老板娘尖叫起來，其他顧客都望著她，于是她用手捂住了嘴巴。5．Theowner，hostessandwaiterallbowasHenryleaves.當亨利離開的時候，店主、老板娘和服務員都向他鞠躬致敬。6．Charliefirstpicksoutthelacesandeatsthemasiftheywerespaghetti.Thenhecutsofftheleathertopoftheshoeasifitwerethefineststeak.查理先把鞋帶挑出來，像吃意大利面一樣把它們吃了。然后他把皮制的鞋頭切下來，就好像那是最美味的牛排。7．Shesteppedbackappearingsurprisedandputupherhands，asifindefence.她退了幾步，顯得很吃驚，舉起了手，想要自衛(wèi)。8．Heheldherfirmlyinhisarmsandshefeltthewarmthofhisbody.Shescreamed，pushedhimawayandrantoherroomfortherestoftheday.他把她緊緊地摟在懷里，她感覺到他身體的溫熱，尖叫了起來，推開他，跑進她的房間，之后一整天都未出來。9．Theboyswhohadnevercomeacrossanythinglikethisbeforestartedjumpingoutofthewindows.以前從來沒有見過這種情況的男孩們嚇得從窗戶跳了出去。10．ProfessorHigginscarelesslythrowsahandfulofmoneyintoherbasket.希金斯教授漫不經心地朝她的籃子里扔了一把錢。11．ElizaDoolittle：(lookingatthecollectedmoneyinamazement)Well,Inever.Awholepound!伊萊扎·杜利特爾：(驚奇地看著收集起來的錢)啊，我還從來沒有見過！整整一英鎊呢！12．MrsPearce：(onlyhalfresignedtoit)Verywell，sir.(goesdownstairs)皮爾斯夫人：(似聽非聽地)好吧，先生。(隨即向樓下走去)13．Danielrunsintohisbedroomandshutsthedoorangrily.丹尼爾跑進臥室，生氣地關上了門。14．Duringtheexperiment，volunteerswereaskedtosniffvariouspleasantsmellsandunpleasantsmells.實驗期間，志愿者要去聞各種好聞的、不好聞的氣味。15．TheEagle’scaptainknockedtheballtothegroundwithhishand，andthenkickeditandscored.Therefereeblewthewhistle；thematchwasoverandtheEagleshadwon.老鷹隊的隊長用手將球擊倒在地，踢了一腳，進球得分了，裁判吹響了哨子。比賽結束，老鷹隊贏了。16．Shesaidthatsomeonemusthavebeenspyingonusinthewashroom，butIdidn’tbelieveherexplanation.她說肯定有人在洗手間一直監(jiān)視我們，但是我不相信她的解釋。17．AsIdroppedmydadoff，Iwatchedhim，dressedinhisworkclothes，gettinghistoolsfromthetrunkofmycar.我讓父親下車，看著他穿著工作服，從車后備箱里拿工具。18．Hebrokedownintearsandwasnevergoingtoletheroutofhissightagain.他痛哭流涕，再也不會讓她離開自己的視線。19．Herfatherturnedawayasatearofjoyrolleddownhischeek.她的父親別過臉，喜悅的淚水從臉頰上滾落下來。四、人物外貌描寫1．Hehadawidemouthandhumorousgreyeyes.他有一張大嘴和幽默的灰色眼睛。2．Twospotsofcolorbrightened/lituphercheeks.兩朵紅霞暈染了她的臉頰。3．Hehastwobigdarkeyesunderapairofthickeyebrows.在一對濃密的眉毛下是他大而黑的雙眼。4．Inoticedthathiseyeswereblack—coalblack.我注意到他的眼睛是黑色的——炭黑色的。5．Shearrivedlateforclass，herhairwetandmessy.她上課遲到了，頭發(fā)又濕又臟。6．Shewasfair-skinned，havingreddishhairandlongfingers.她皮膚白皙，有著紅發(fā)和修長的手指。7．Hisstrongly-builtbodyandsun-tannedskinmakehimlooklikeasportsman.他強壯的身體和曬黑的皮膚使他看起來像一個運動員。8．Everythingabouthimwasoldexcepthiseyesandtheywerethesamecolorastheseaandwerecheerfulandundefeated.他身上的一切都顯得古老，除了那雙眼睛，它們像海水一般藍，是樂觀而不肯認輸的。9．Hehassparkingbluegreeneyes，thinningsilverhairthatspillsontohisforehead，bigears，atriangularnose，andtuftsofgrayingeyebrow.他的眼睛閃爍著藍綠色光芒，稀疏的銀發(fā)散落在前額，大耳朵，三角形的鼻子和灰白的眉毛。10．Theyoungwomanwastall，withgraceandelegance.Shehadagreatamountofdarkhairthatwasshowninthesunlight，andafacemorebeautifulthananyother，withdark，mysteriouseyes.Shewaspoliteandwell-mannered，withatenderlook.這個年輕的女人很高，且很優(yōu)雅。她有一頭烏黑的頭發(fā)，在陽光下顯得十分美麗，她的臉比任何其他人都漂亮，她有一雙神秘的黑眼睛。她彬彬有禮，舉止文雅，目光溫柔。五、人物神態(tài)描寫1．Adreaminglookcameoverherface.她臉上浮現出夢幻般的神情。2．Herfacewasfullofgloomandcruelty.她面色陰沉，表情冷酷。3．Hesmiled，hiseyesfulloflaughter.他露出了笑容，雙眼充滿笑意。4．Hereyesgleamedandherfragilefacebrokeintoasmile.她的眼睛閃爍著光芒，精致的臉龐展現出微笑。5．Colorglowedinhisfaceandhisstrangeeyeswidenedwithjoyfulness.他的臉熠熠閃光，奇怪的眼睛因歡樂而大大睜開。6．Aleybecamehappynowandagentlesmilespreadoverherface.阿利變得很開心，整張臉洋溢著溫和的微笑。7．SherodetherestofthewayhomewearingaMonaLisasmileofpeaceandgrace.她帶著蒙娜麗莎式的平靜而優(yōu)雅的微笑，騎完了剩下的回家路。8．Hewasglaringdownatmeagain，hisblackeyesfullofdisgust.他又低頭瞪著我，黑色眼瞳里充滿了厭惡。9．Hiseyeslitupwhenshewalkedintotheroom.Asmilelitupherface.Thesmilespreadacrossherface，whichlituphisgloomyafternoon.看見她走進房間，他兩眼一亮。她笑了，臉上露出了喜色。她滿臉的微笑，點亮了他陰郁的下午。10．Hercheekswereglowing.Hertearsmingledwiththebloodonherface，droppinghergaze.她雙頰緋紅，淚水和臉上的血混在了一起，同時目光低垂，不再凝視?！靖呒壘涫浇Y構】1．ItwasthefirsttimeinayearandahalfthatI’dseenthenightfacetoface.這是我一年半以來第一次目睹夜晚。[句子結構：Itis/wasthefirst(second...)timethatsb.＋現在完成時/過去完成時：這是某人第幾次做某事。]2．ItwasmysisterwhofirsthadtheideatocyclealongtheentireMekongRiverfromwhereitbeginstowhereitends.首先想到要沿著湄公河從源頭騎車到終點的是我的姐姐。(句子結構：強調句Itis/was＋被強調部分＋that/who...；from...to...連接where引導的賓語從句。)3．Allhopewasnotlost.不是所有的希望都破滅了。(句子結構：部分否定)4．Onlythendidwedecidetoanswerviolencewithviolence.直到那時我們才決定以暴制暴。(句子結構：Only＋狀語＋部分倒裝。)5．NeverwillZhouYangforgethisfirstjobattheofficeofChinaDaily.周洋永遠不會忘記他在《中國日報》辦公室獲得的第一份工作。(句子結構：never等表示否定意義的詞位于句首，句子用部分倒裝。)6．AmongthepainterswhobrokeawayfromthetraditionalstyleofpaintingweretheImpressionists，wholivedandworkedinParis.在那些突破傳統(tǒng)畫法的畫家中有生活和工作在巴黎的印象派畫家。[句子結構：among(介詞)位于句首的倒裝句，who引導非限制定語從句。]7．FrederickWilliamⅠ，theKingofPrussia，couldneverhaveimaginedthathisgreatestgifttotheRussianpeoplewouldhavesuchanamazinghistory.普魯士國王腓特烈·威廉一世絕不可能想到他送給俄羅斯人民的厚禮會有這樣一段令人驚訝的歷史。(句子結構：主語＋同位語＋謂語＋賓語從句。)8．ThereisnodoubtthattheboxeswerethenputonatrainforKonigsberg，whichwasatthattimeaGermancityontheBalticSea.毫無疑問，這些箱子后來被裝上火車運往哥尼斯堡，當時德國在波羅的海海邊的一個城市。(句子結構：Thereisnodoubt＋that引導的同位語從句＋which引導的非限制性定語從句。)9．IndiahasanationalfestivalonOctober2tohonourMohandasGandhi，theleaderwhohelpedgainIndia’sindependencefromBritain.印度在10月2日有一個全國性的節(jié)日，以紀念莫罕達斯·甘地，這位幫助印度獨立于英國的領袖。(句子結構：名詞＋同位語＋定語從句。)10．Perhapsweoughttocombineourideasandprovideabalancedmenuwithfoodfullofenergyandfiber.或許我們應該結合彼此的想法，然后提供一個營養(yǎng)充足且富含纖維的健康均衡的菜單。(句子結構：介詞短語作定語，相當于一個定語從句which/thatisfullof...。)11．Earlierthatday，whentheycrossedtheRockyMountains，theymanagedtocatchsightofsomemountaingoatsandevenagrizzlybearandaneagle.那天清晨，當她們穿越落基山山脈時，她們看到了野山羊，甚至還看到了一只大灰熊和一只鷹。(句子結構：時間狀語＋when引導定語從句＋主句)12．Goingeastward，you’llpassmountainsandthousandsoflakesandforests，aswellaswideriversandlargecities.一路向東，你會經過重重青山，路過千千萬萬的湖泊、山林，還有寬闊的河流和大都市。(句子結構：現在分詞短語作狀語；并列表達“AandB，aswellasCandD”。)13．AsVictorHugooncesaid，“Laughteristhesunthatdriveswinterfromthehumanface”，anduptonownobodyhasbeenabletodothisbetterthanCharlieChaplin.正如維克多·雨果所說：“笑是陽光，能驅散人們臉上的寒冬”，目前為止，在這點上沒有人做得比查理·卓別林更好。(句子結構：as引導非限制性定語從句；否定意義的詞與比較級連用表示最高級含義。)14．YoumayfinditastonishingthatCharliewastaughttosingassoonashecouldspeakanddanceassoonashecouldwalk.你會吃驚地發(fā)現，查理一會說話就有人教他去唱歌，一會走路就有人教他跳舞。[句子結構：findit(形式賓語)＋adj.＋that引導的賓語從句；that引導的賓語從句中包含著assoonas引導的時間狀語從句。]15．Theyaresohungrythattheytryboilingapairofleathershoesfortheirdinner.他們太餓了，于是嘗試著煮一雙皮鞋當作晚餐。(句子結構：so...that...句型。)16．Withalltheseattractions，nowondertourismisincreasingwhereverthereisaDisneyland.有這么多引人入勝之處，難怪有迪士尼樂園的地方，其旅游業(yè)就會增長。[句子結構：with＋n.作原因狀語；(itis)nowonder＋...＋wherever/whenever/whatever...引導的讓步狀語從句。]17．JohnSnowwasawell-knowndoctorinLondon—(andhewas)sofamous，indeed，thatheattendedQueenVictoriatoeasethebirthofherbabies.約翰·斯諾曾經是倫敦一位著名的醫(yī)生——他的確太負盛名了，所以能照看維多利亞女王，并幫助她順利分娩。(句子結構：一個簡單句和一個復合句合并成一句，很好地運用了插入語和符號來連接句子。)18．Theseatswerecomfortableandafteracalmingdrink，whichmadeussleepy，oureyesclosed.座位非常舒適，喝了點鎮(zhèn)靜劑后，我們很快閉上了眼睛，感到昏昏欲睡。(句子結構：非限制性定語從句插在主句和狀語之間。)19．Withoutthenewpaintsandthenewtechnique，wewouldnotbeabletoseethemanygreatmasterpiecesforwhichthisperiodisfamous.沒有新的顏料和新的(繪畫)手法，我們就不能看到這一時代很多著名的杰作。[句子結構：“介詞without＋n.”作條件狀語，主句(虛擬語氣)＋介詞(for)＋which引導的定語從句。]20．Itiseasytowriteand，likethecinquain，cangiveaclearpictureandcreateaspecialfeelingusingtheminimumofwords.它容易寫，而且像五行詩一樣，它可以用最少的詞語呈現一幅清晰的畫面，表達出一種特殊的感情。(句子結構：Itis＋adj.＋todosth.，like＋n.作插入語，現在分詞短語作方式狀語。)21．ItseemsamazingthatatmyageIamstillfitenoughtocycle20kilometersinanafternoon.感到不可思議吧，像我這樣的年紀，身體健康而且能在一個下午騎車20公里。[句子結構：It(形式主語)＋seems＋adj.＋that引導主語從句。]22．Thereisnodoubtthattheearthisbecomingwarmerandthatitishumanactivitythathascausedthisglobalwarmingratherthanarandombutnaturalphenomenon.毫無疑問，地球正在變暖，而地球變暖正是人類活動所致，而非一種無規(guī)律的自然現象。[句子結構：Thereisnodoubtthat...andthat...句式(兩個同位語從句并列)；在第二個that引導的同位語從句中，又用了itis...that強調句型。]23．Iwasabouttogobacktosleepwhensuddenlymybedroombecameasbrightasday.我剛要繼續(xù)睡覺，突然我的臥室亮如白晝。(句子結構：beabouttodo...when...。)24．Theothertwoclimbeddownintothecratertocollectsomelavaforlaterstudy，butthisbeingmyfirstexperience，Istayedatthetopandwatchedthem.另外兩人向下爬進火山口去收集供日后研究用的巖漿，我是第一次經歷這樣的事，所以留在山頂上觀察他們。(句子結構：獨立主格結構thisbeingmyfirstexperience作原因狀語。)25．Justacceptthemforwhotheyare，andgivethemencouragementtoliveasrichandfullalifeasyoudo.要接受他們，給他們以鼓勵，讓他們能像你一樣過得豐富多彩，充實美滿。(句子結構：as＋形容詞＋a/an＋名詞＋as的用法。)26．Pressedbymyfriendsandrelations，Idecidedtosendmyinventiontothepatentofficetogetrecognitionformysuccessfulidea.由于朋友和親戚的敦促，我決定把我的發(fā)明送到專利局，請他們對我這次成功的思路給予認可。(句子結構：過去分詞短語作原因狀語。)1．（2024·浙江·二模）閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Jay,24,gothomefromworkshortlyaftermidnight.Then,suddenly,ahorror-filledscreamrippedthroughthestillnight.Herushedoutsideandsawflameslightingtheskyhalfamileaway.Hurriedly,hecalledthefiredepartmentandrushedouttocheckthesituation.Secondslater,Jaywasfishtailinghiscaronthemainroad.Thefireragedatasmallhillsidecomplexofmobilehomes.Jayslidthecartoastopandsprintedupasteeplanetowardthereddeningglow.Reachingthehilltop,hesawthata70-foot-longtrailer(房車)wasonfire.Ayoungwomanintornnightclotheswasrunningwildlybackandforth,jumpingtosmashatthe6-foot-highwindowswithherhands.“DearGod!”shescreamed.“Myfamilyisdying!”Jayfeltamomentofpanic.Heseemedtobetheonlypersontheretohelp.Neverhadheseensuchafire!Flameswereleapingoutofbrokenwindowsatthefarendofthetrailerandwindingalongtheroof;theroaring,cracklingnoisesgrewlouderbythesecond.Hegrabbedthewomanbytheshoulders.“Whathappened?”heshouted.Barelycoherent,Cindytoldhimshehadescapedthroughoneofthemasterbedroomwindows.Herhusband,Leonard,hadgonefortheirtwochildren:22-month-oldRyanand6-week-oldAngela.Hewassupposedtohandthemouttoherfromthebedroom.But,secondslater,flameshadburstfromthekitchenandlivingroomwindows.Cindybegancryingmiserably.“Wherearethey?”Jayyelled.Cindypointedtotheendsectionofthetrailer,wherethick,blacksmokepouredfromthewindows.Fromthetimehewasoldenoughtoplaysports,Jayhadlearnedtobattletheodds.AsaLittleLeaguer,heledhisunderdogteamtothestatechampionship.AndintinySt.Maries,hiscouragehadearnedhimtownspeople’srespect.Always,Jayrecalledthewordsofhisfather:“Thewordcan’tneverdidanythingforanybody.Youcandoit!Neverstoptrying,son!”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數應為150左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Para.1Jay’sfather’swordsechoedinhismind.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.2Asherhusbandwasplacedintheambulancetobedriventothehospital,CindywalkedovertoJay.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2024·遼寧·模擬預測）閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Mychildhoodismagicalandfullofadventure.Ihavesomanychildhoodmemories,andIwouldliketoshareonethatstillstimulatesme.ThisunforgettablechildhoodeventwasaboutthefirstdaywhenIlearnedhowtoswim.IthappenedsounexpectedlyandquicklythatnotonlyIbutmyparentsweresurprised.Ofcourse,wewereproudaswell.Iwasbarelysevenyearsoldbackthen,andmyparentsthoughtthatitwastimeformetolearnhowtoswim.Onesummermorning,theytookmetoaswimmingpoolintheCitySwimmingComplexwhichwasjusta35-minutedrivefromourhouse.Itwasaweekendandbothmyparentsaccompaniedme.AfterwereachedtheSwimmingComplex,wefoundmanypeoplewerelearninghowtoswim.Mymothersaidshewouldwatchmelearnthisimportantskillwiththehelpofmyfather.Thenshecheeredmeonandtookaseat.IhadnoideahowtoswimbutIwasexcitedtotrythisnewadventure.However,whenmyfathergotintotheswimmingpoolwithme,Ibecameabitnervous.Itseemedthatthingswerenotquiteaseasyforme.Lookingaround,Inoticedthatmanyotherchildrenofallageswerealsotryingtograspthisskillandsomeofthemhadprettymuchlearnedtheartandscienceofthisskill.Influencedbyothers,Iwasdeterminedtofocusonmytrainingandswimaswellasthem.Undertheguidanceofmyfather,Ilearnedwithallmyeffortanddevotion,andImaderapidprogress.Afterteachingmefor30minutesorso,myfatherwenttobuysomesnacksforusandmymothercametotalktomeforawhilenearthepool.SheaskedmeifIhadlearnedanythingatall.Toprovemyprogress,Ijumpedintothewaterandstartedswimming.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Mymotherwasfrightenedbymyactionatfirst.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Eatingthesnacksboughtbymyfather,wewereallthrilledandexcited.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________