初中英語寫作輔導(dǎo)省公開課一等獎全國示范課微課金獎?wù)n件

初三英語寫作輔導(dǎo)第1頁writing在英語學(xué)習(xí)中，寫是學(xué)生必須掌握語言技能之一。寫作表達了一個人綜合語言利用能力。要寫好一篇文章，不但要有扎實語言基礎(chǔ)知識包含語法、詞匯、習(xí)慣用語等，還需要掌握必備寫作技巧。寫作能力培養(yǎng)不是一蹴而就，它需要進行知識積累和技能訓(xùn)練。第2頁

新課程標準中關(guān)于五級水平（即初中畢業(yè)要求到達水平）要求是：

A.能依據(jù)寫作要求，搜集、準備素材；B.能獨立起草短文、短信等，并在教師指導(dǎo)下進行修改；C.能使用常見連接詞表示次序和邏輯關(guān)系（即文章中用于表示并列，轉(zhuǎn)折，舉例，因果，遞進，讓步，總結(jié)等邏輯關(guān)系固定單詞或詞組）

；D.能簡單描述人物或事件；E.能依據(jù)所給圖示或表格寫出簡單段落或操作說明。

1.新課程標準中關(guān)于寫要求第3頁ThingsIhatetodo

MostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy.However,therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo.Ihategoingtothetutorsbecauseitisboringandtiring.IalwaysstayuplateandIdon’tgetenoughsleep.SogettingupearlyisalsowhatIdon’tlike.ButthethingIhatemostistellinglies.Youwillfeelguiltyaftercheatingothers.Youwillneverbetrustedifyouoftentelllies,andnotrespectedaswell.Ihatebeingdishonest,andIhopethateveryonewillbehonesttoothers.第4頁LovearoundmeLoveiseverywhereinmylife.Myparentslovemeandmyfriendscareaboutme.WhenIamindifficulty,theywillpullmeout.WhenIfeelsad,theywillcheermeup.IfeeldelightedandthankfulwhenIgetlovefromthem.Ialsowanttodosomethingtoshowmylovetoothers.Whentheyhavesomeproblems,Iwilltrymybesttohelpthem.Idobelieveifweallloveeachother,ourworldwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.

第5頁Timeorder:First,…Firstofall,…Second,…Third,…Next,…Afterthat,…Then…Finally,…第6頁SpaceorderOntheright,…Ontheleft,…Inthecenter,…Inthemiddle,…Nexttothe…,…Besidethe…,…Oppositethe______,…Nearthe______,…Underthe______,…Abovethe______,…Ononesideofthe______,…Ontheothersideofthe______,…第7頁Transitionsignals1、遞進：besides,inaddition,what’smore2、轉(zhuǎn)折和對比：but,however,ontheotherhand,3、總結(jié)：inshort,inbrief,forthesereasons4、因果和結(jié)論：asaresult,dueto,becauseof,thus,therefore5、強調(diào)：really,indeed,surely6、其它插入語：worsestill/what’sworse,afterall,ifpossible,第8頁培養(yǎng)英語思維---詞搭配大雨大橋大樓大錯大寫大病大地震heavyrainlongbridgehighrise/largebuildingbig/terrible/seriousmistakecapitalletterseriousillnessmajorearthquake第9頁句表示注意漢英差異：一、狀語e.g.她一周有三個下午在一家百貨企業(yè)做兼職。 Sheworksparttimeinadepartmentstorethreeafternoonsaweek. 在我十歲那年我和家人經(jīng)歷了一次奇妙旅行。ItookafantastictripwithmyfamilywhenIwastenyearsold.第10頁二、謂語動詞

漢語：無動詞或多動詞

英語：單動詞e.g.我媽媽很漂亮。Mymotherispretty.

我們又唱又跳。Wesanganddanced.

我們邀請他們到上海來玩。WeinvitedthemtocometoShanghaiforavisit.

你上課經(jīng)常缺席所以我想要提醒你。

YouareoftenabsentfromclasssoIwanttoremindyou.

第11頁三、主語

e.g.活到老，學(xué)到老。

Oneisnevertoooldtolearn.極難說誰對誰錯。It’shardtotellwhoisrightandwhoiswrong.

昨天找到了丟失鋼筆。Thelostpenwasfoundyesterday.上飯店吃飯很貴。 It’sexpensivetoeatout.

乘飛機旅行更舒適、便捷。Travellingbyplaneisfasterandmoreconvenient.第12頁四、定語漢：經(jīng)常是前置定語英：前置和后置定語e.g.我們學(xué)校全部學(xué)生allthestudentsinourschool

左邊數(shù)第五個男孩thefifthboyfromtheleft

英國人日常生活everydaylivesoftheBritish

在中國騎車人數(shù)thenumberofcyclistsinChina幾個氣體混合物amixtureofseveralgases

介詞短語作后置定語第13頁三到六歲孩子Childrenfrom3to6yearsofage隔壁音像店themusicstorenextdoor用英語寫信theletter(s)inEnglish晚上最晚一班返回公交車thelastbusbackintheevening城市生活嘈雜、臟亂thenoiseanddirtofcitylife第14頁玩/放松時間timetoplay/relax當(dāng)一個音樂家計劃planstobeamusician出國學(xué)習(xí)機會thechancetostudyabroad供人坐著休息平靜場所aquietplaceforpeopletositin/rest找到任何一個能夠問詢?nèi)薴indanyonetoask動詞不定式作后置定語第15頁城市用水waterusedbycities不亂扔垃圾習(xí)慣thehabitofnotthrowingawayrubbish我曾經(jīng)生活村莊thevillagewhereIstayed/lived我昨晚吃某樣?xùn)|西somethingIatelastnight到月球去宇航員astronautswhotraveledtothemoon孩子們喜歡吃食物food(which)childrenlike分詞、定語從句等作后置定語第16頁Writingtips:時態(tài)一致必須注意所用時態(tài)符合上下文。假如用過去時敘述一個故事，就要確保通篇都用過去時，不要在作文中間變成現(xiàn)在時。一樣，假如是在談?wù)撈毡閱栴}、現(xiàn)實狀況或日常習(xí)慣，就要用現(xiàn)在時，而不要用過去時。e.g.YesterdayIdidmyhomework.Ittakesmethreehours.Hisfatherthoughtheisgoodatmath.Shestartedhernewjoblastweek.Shelikedit.Wedidn’tgototheparty.Wearen’tinvited.tookwaslikesweren’t第17頁Writingtips:2.主語一致應(yīng)該保持全文人稱一致，這么讀者才能跟隨一個邏輯思維次序。不然讀者會感到迷惑。e.g.Althoughyoumayfailtheexam,hecanstillbeusefultothecountry.

Itnotonlyprovidesyouwithlotsofknowledgebutalsodevelopshisinterests.youyour第18頁Writingtips:3.主謂一致/人稱一致確保語法正確。e.g.ThingsIhatetodoisdoinghomework.WhatIhatetodois…EverypeoplestarttolearnEnglish.EverypersonstartstolearnEnglish.Theactivitiescanrelaxourselves.Theactivitiescanhelpusrelaxourselves./Wecanrelaxourselvesbytakingpartintheactivities.第19頁Writingtips:4.詞序/語序它能夠幫助準確表示作者本意并并防止意義含糊不清。注意要讓句子盡可能保持英語表示習(xí)慣。e.g.Ialreadyhavehadlunch.ShewithhermumtraveledtoItaly.

Ialwaysbethewinnerofthepianocontest.InChina,heknewtherewerebigfloods.IjustwonderwhatdoesmyfuturelikeandwhatshouldIdo.havealreadyShetraveledtoItalywithhermum.amalwaysHeknewtherewerebigfloodsinChina.IjustwonderwhatmyfatherlikesandwhatIshoulddo.第20頁Writingtips:5.并列句用并列句能使文章更生動流暢，它包含兩個獨立分句和一個連詞，如：and,but,or,so等。e.g.Theyknowwhatisbetterandtheyarealwaysright.Itwascrowded.Wewereabletoseehim.Itwascrowdedbutwewereabletoseehim.Sheisatopstudent.Sheisatalentedmusician.Sheisatopstudentandatalentedmusician.Thoughhedoesn’thavemuchmoney,buthisheartisfulloflove.

兩個分句不要重復(fù)同一個單詞。每個分句都必須有一個動詞；每兩個分句組成句子只能使用一個連詞。第21頁Writingtips:6.復(fù)合句。它包含一個主句和一個從句，由when,after,if等連詞或who,which等關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)。e.g.She

was

very

old.

She

couldn't

stand

on

the

bus

easily.

Shewassooldthatshecouldn’tstandonthebuseasily.Theresultwasnotthemostimportantthingforme.Theresultwouldbeknownawholemonthlater.Theresult,whichwouldbeknownawholemonthlater,wasnotthemostimportantthingforme.第22頁Writingtips:7.防止詞重復(fù)。e.g.Allinall,wehadawonderfultrip.WetravelledacrossSydney,CanberraandMelbourne.WesawthebeautifulcoastofQueensland.WetouredallofPerth.WehadagreatvisitwithDan.Perhapswewillgoagainnextwinter.第23頁Usefulsentences:Sayingsandproverbs:Onself-help:Pridegoesbeforeafall驕者必敗.Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好開端是成功二分之一。Confidenceinyourselfisthefirststepontheroadtosuccess.自信是走向成功第一步。Custommakesallthingseasy.有個好習(xí)慣，事事皆不難。Greathopesmakegreatman.偉大理想造就偉大人物。第24頁Usefulsentences:Honestyisthebestpolicy.做人誠信為本。Hopeforthebest,butpreparefortheworst.抱最好愿望，做最壞打算。Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上無難事，只要肯登攀。Ifathingisworthdoing,it’sworthdoingwell.值得做是就值得做好。Wherethereislife,thereishope.生活充滿了希望。/留得青山在，不怕沒柴燒第25頁Usefulsentences:Onhealth: Aclosemouthcatchesnoflies.病從口入。 Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一蘋果，不用請醫(yī)生。 Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.早睡早起身體好。Onmotherhood: Amother'sloveneverchanges.母愛永恒。第26頁Usefulsentences:Onfriendship: Afriendiseasierlostthanfound.得朋友難，失朋友易。 Afriendisneverknowntillamanhasneed.需要之時方知友。Onreading: Agoodbookisthebestoffriends,thesametodayandforever.一本好書，相伴一生。 Byreadingweenrichthemind,byconversationwepolishit.讀書使人充實，交談使人精明。 Chooseanauthorasyouchooseafriend.擇書如擇友。第27頁Usefulsentences:Onentertainment: AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只會用功不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻。Onlife: Weknownotwhatisgooduntilwehavelostit.好東西，失去了才明白。 Varietyisthespiceoflife.豐富多彩是生活調(diào)味品。 Lifeisjustlikeabowlofcherries.生活如同一盤櫻桃。 Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutacompass.生活沒有目標等于航行沒有指南針。 Pleasanthoursflypast.高興時光去如飛。第28頁注意點：一、仔細審題，明確要求。二、主題明確，語言表示完整正確。三、重視字詞利用和句子組織結(jié)構(gòu)。四、防止無謂失分。（書寫不規(guī)范，字跡潦草，忽略大小寫等）第29頁Romewasn’tbuiltinaday!Practicemakesperfect!第30頁Usefulsentencepatterns:在各種…之中…Amongvariouskind