高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫專題14 讀后續(xù)寫句子改寫之名詞化

專題14句子提升思維之名詞化一、讀后續(xù)寫中抽象名詞的運(yùn)用文本賞析:Atthat,MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolistentoJenny’sspeechfirst.Jennymadeherwaytotheplatformwitheveryconfidence.Wordsbegantofloodoutofher.“Howcouldshemakeit?We’veneverseenJennygivesoterrificaspeech.”Whisperswentaroundtheclassroom,andevenMissWalkernoddedwithapproval.ImmediatelyJennyfinishedherspeech,astormofapplauseeruptedfromtheclass.Relieved,Jennytoldeveryonethetruth,andespeciallythemagicofthewatch.“Butit’sjustanordinarywatchwithnomagic”,Leeannounced.[80words]文中多次運(yùn)用到抽象名詞作主語(yǔ)：Wordsbegantofloodoutofher.Whisperswentaroundtheclassroom,andeven...ImmediatelyJennyfinishedherspeech,astormofapplauseeruptedfromtheclass.二、概要寫作中抽象名詞的使用（一）despite的使用1.ThoughMikewasremindedmanytimes,apparentlyhedidn'treturnthemoney.ManytimesthoughMikewasreminded,apparentlyhedidn‘treturnthemoney.(變倒裝句）拔高：概寫中although/though換成despite第一種方法把動(dòng)詞變成doing。Mikeapparentlydidnotreturnthemoney,despitebeingremindedrepeatedly.第二種方法把動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)化成相應(yīng)的名詞。Mikeapparentlydidnotreturnthemoney,despiterepeatedreminders.2.Hehasbeencriticizedmanytimes,butheremainsthesame.Despiteourrepeatedcriticisms,heremainsunchanged.3.Althoughhefailedmanytimes,hedidn’tgiveup.Despitenumerousfailures,hedidn’tgiveup.4.Hedidn’thaveenoughexperience,buthegotthejob.Despitehislackofexperience,hegotthejob.（二）witness的使用1.Inthepastfouryears,ourproductionhasincreased.Thepastfouryearshaswitnessedanincreaseinproduction.（時(shí)間作主語(yǔ)）2.Manygreathistoriceventshappenedinthecity.Thecityhadwitnessedmanygreathistoricevents.（地點(diǎn)名詞作主語(yǔ)）（三）其它常見(jiàn)抽象名詞的使用1.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Views

differfrompersontoperson.Opinionsvarygreatlyamongpeople.2.Moreover,theyspendlesstimewithyoungerchildrenbecauseofschoolreforms.Moreover,

lesstimespentwithyoungerchildrenisattributedtoschoolreforms.3.Progresscanbebeneficialtopeopleonlywhentheyaccepttechnologyandpursueefficiency.Progresscanbebeneficialtopeopleonlywiththeiracceptanceoftechnologyandpursuitofefficiency.（此處介詞with后的賓語(yǔ)名詞化）4.Anotherreasonisthattheyarenotinterestedinit.Lackofinterestisanotherreason.5.Weshouldconsider

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6.Peoplewithgoodhabitsareefficientwhilethosewithbadhabitsareinefficient.Goodhabitslead

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opposite.7.Itisgoodfortheplanttobeexposedtosunlight.Exposuretosunlightisagoodfortheplant.8.Therearemanypeoplewhocomplainofhousingshortages.Housingshortagesarousegreatcomplaint.9.Ifyoucomparethetwomethodscarefully,youwillfindthedifference.Carefulcomparisonofthetwomethodswillshowyouthedifference.三、更多用法舉例Sleepdidn‘tvisitheralthoughthesilenceofadeadworldwasonthejungle.盡管叢林里是死一般的寂靜,她還是不能入睡。Misthadcreptinfromthesea.薄霧從海面上彌漫過(guò)來(lái)了。Achillofhorrorsuddenlysweptoverhim.他突然感到不寒而栗。Despairseizedhimatthethoughtofherlivingaloneinthesmallvillage.想起她一個(gè)人住在小村莊里，他感到絕望。Couragedesertedhim.他沒(méi)有了勇氣。Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.我突然想到一個(gè)好主意Bynowoptimismhadgivenwaytodoubt.現(xiàn)在，樂(lè)觀變成了懷疑。Angerchokedmywords.我氣的說(shuō)不出話。Manyyearsofhardworkchangedhergrandfathergreatly.多年的辛勞使她爺爺大大變樣了。Hisnameescapedmeforthemoment.我一時(shí)記不起他的名字。Hisnameslippedmymind…四、句子翻譯練習(xí)：我忘了確切的日期。（exactdate）Jack周一早晨精神萎靡。（miserable）他的工作使他不可能比每隔一個(gè)周末一次的頻率更加經(jīng)常地回家。你吃了這藥就會(huì)好些。一見(jiàn)到那個(gè)孤兒，我就想到了她的父母。天氣太壞，我們無(wú)法動(dòng)身。Shelosthercourage.

她失去了勇氣。五年來(lái)，環(huán)境狀況逐步好轉(zhuǎn)。他突然想出了一個(gè)好主意。我心里熱呼呼的。一想起這事他就狂躁得無(wú)法工作。他悲傷之極。他非常貪戀錢財(cái)。他先是驚訝，接著笑了起來(lái)，笑聲越來(lái)越響。他失職了，這說(shuō)明他沒(méi)有資格做這件事。他讀書，其樂(lè)無(wú)窮。如果別人打擾你時(shí)，你表現(xiàn)出一幅寬容的樣子，別人就容易利用你的善良、占用你的時(shí)間。這個(gè)問(wèn)題如果不解決，勢(shì)必嚴(yán)重?fù)p害兩國(guó)關(guān)系。我有急事，所以沒(méi)去看你。黃昏的時(shí)候，她獨(dú)自在街上哭泣。這樣的遷徙在世界上史無(wú)前例。我立刻對(duì)他產(chǎn)生了一種崇敬和感激之情。得知老人的經(jīng)歷后，我們對(duì)他深感同情。她笑得說(shuō)不出話來(lái)。當(dāng)他經(jīng)濟(jì)困難的時(shí)候，他絕望極了。他開(kāi)始感到驚恐萬(wàn)狀。這里的工作條件太差，已經(jīng)對(duì)他的身體健康帶來(lái)影響。他心事重重，眉頭緊鎖。答案：1.Theexactdatehasescapedme.（slippedoutofmymind)2.MondaymorningfoundJackmiserable.3.Hisworkmadeitimpossibleforhimtogethomeoftenerthan

everyotherweekend.4.Thismedicinewillmakeyoufeelbetter.5.WheneverIseetheorphan,Irememberherparents.----Thesightoftheorphanalwaysremindsmeofherparents.6.Wecouldnotstartbecauseofbadweather.-------Badweatherpreventedusfromstarting.7.Hercouragefailedher.

8.Overthepastfiveyears,theenvironmenthasseengradualimprovement.9.Agoodideasuddenlypoppedintohismind.10.Warmthfloodedovermyheart.11.Thethoughtofitmadehimsowildthathecouldn'twork.12.Hisgriefknewnobounds.13.Hisloveofmoneyknowsnobounds.14.Hisamazementturnsintolaughter,whichbuildssteadily.15.Hisfailureindutyshowsheisnotqualifiedforthejob.16.Readingsupplieshimwithendlessentertainment.17.Yourtoleranceofinterruptionscanallowotherstotakeadvantageofyourtimeandgoodwill.18.Failuretosettlethisissueisboundtoimpairtherelationsbetweenthetwocountriesseriously.19.Urgentbusinesspreventedmefromcallingonyou.20.Duskfoundhercryingcompanionlessinthestreets.21.Neverbeforehadtheworldseensuchamovement.22.Admirationandgratitudesweptthroughme.23.Alloursympathywenttoth