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04命題作文之?dāng)⑹旅鑼?xiě)類近三年考情分析近三年考情分析年份地區(qū)題目命題形式2023年四川南充Wherethereisawill,thereisaway命題作文江蘇蘇州Startingfrommeandnow命題作文遼寧丹東TheSpreadofLove命題作文山東東營(yíng)TheplaceIwanttovisit命題作文2022年重慶B卷ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblem命題作文江蘇無(wú)錫ThePersonIWanttoThank命題作文湖南湘西OurColorfulLifeafterSchool命題作文2021年江蘇南京MyBeautifulSchoolDay命題作文浙江寧波MotherlandinMyHeart命題作文寫(xiě)作方法指導(dǎo)寫(xiě)作方法指導(dǎo)命題作文的基本要求：1．習(xí)作要有扎實(shí)的英語(yǔ)基本功底，要牢固掌握英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，文章中的大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、詞法、句法及語(yǔ)法等都要表達(dá)正確。2．要按照命題要求正確采用相應(yīng)的行文格式撰寫(xiě)習(xí)作，層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，句式排列整齊，段落過(guò)渡自然，富有條理性。3．文章內(nèi)容前后照應(yīng)，詞語(yǔ)運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確到位，語(yǔ)言流暢，言簡(jiǎn)意賅，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，敘事完整，深化主題。4．要根據(jù)文章規(guī)定的單詞數(shù)組織安排文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，不要忽上忽下。寫(xiě)作技巧：第一步，審題。無(wú)論寫(xiě)什么樣的文章都不能離開(kāi)文章的主題。主題是文章所要表達(dá)的中心，是文章的靈魂主宰。如果審不清主題，就有可能出現(xiàn)“下筆千言，離題萬(wàn)里”的情況。第二步，選材。審?fù)觐}之后，就應(yīng)該著手選材了。主題是文章的宗旨，材料必須為主題服務(wù)：主題必須統(tǒng)領(lǐng)材料，二者是密不可分、相輔相成的關(guān)系。既然要選材，就必須有充足的備選材料。只有平時(shí)多觀察、多學(xué)習(xí)、多積累，才能保證材料充分、詳實(shí)。在具備充足的材料的基礎(chǔ)上，要學(xué)會(huì)去粗取精，去偽存真。還要分清材料的主次與詳略，做到詳略得當(dāng)。第三步，列提綱。寫(xiě)文章之前列個(gè)提綱是個(gè)非常好的寫(xiě)作習(xí)慣。列提綱可以使雜亂無(wú)章的材料變得井然有序；列提綱可以使你緊扣主題不跑題；列提綱還可以節(jié)約你的時(shí)間，提高寫(xiě)作效率。第四步，動(dòng)筆。寫(xiě)作時(shí)一定要切題，抓住要點(diǎn)。題目要求的內(nèi)容一定要寫(xiě)進(jìn)去，以保證內(nèi)容的完整。對(duì)于與要求無(wú)關(guān)的內(nèi)容切忌任意發(fā)揮，畫(huà)蛇添足。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)法正確、用詞得當(dāng)、語(yǔ)言地道。在寫(xiě)不同題材和體裁的文章時(shí)，所用的句式、時(shí)態(tài)及用詞均不同。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要多從交流的角度考慮以上幾個(gè)方面。第五步，檢查修改。要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，除了準(zhǔn)確遣詞造句、嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)布局外，文章的修改也是很重要的一步。文章寫(xiě)好后，要經(jīng)過(guò)反復(fù)修改潤(rùn)色，才能措辭準(zhǔn)確，句子流暢，因此修改文章是提高寫(xiě)作水平的有效方法。寫(xiě)作模板寫(xiě)作模板 Oneday,

.(事情發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等) WhenIwas

,somethingstrangehappened

.(事情發(fā)生的過(guò)程)Finally,

.(結(jié)果) I’llneverforget

(感受)常用表達(dá)常用表達(dá)亮點(diǎn)詞匯1、敘事順序first,tobeginwith,firstofall,firstly首先secondly,then,besides,what'smore,inaddition,moreover然后atlast,lastbutnotleast,aboveall,allinall,tosumup,onthewhole,finally最后2、時(shí)間描寫(xiě)after.....之后 afterashort/longtime/period在一段很短/很長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間后afterwards后來(lái)；然后 assoonas...一......就......fromthattimeon從那時(shí)起 immediately立刻;立即lately最近;近來(lái);不久前 nowadays現(xiàn)在;如今recently最近 shortly馬上;立刻sincethen從那時(shí)起 when,while...的時(shí)候3、地點(diǎn)詞匯church教堂 tower塔bridge橋 station車站dormitory宿舍 supermarket超市shop商店 hospital醫(yī)院theater劇院 playground操場(chǎng)cinema電影院 museum博物館4.動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)gooutforapicnic去野餐 haveaparty舉行聚會(huì)gocamping去露營(yíng) rideahorse騎馬haveawalk散步 flykites放風(fēng)箏takephotos拍照 hurryto..匆忙趕到...seeadoctor看醫(yī)生 setoff出發(fā)watchthematch看比賽 climbthemountains爬山5、結(jié)尾詞匯thanksto多虧 asaresult結(jié)果luckily幸運(yùn)地 because/becauseof因?yàn)閍tlast/intheend最后.......中考真題精講中考真題精講（2023·四川南充·統(tǒng)考中考真題）你校英語(yǔ)報(bào)以“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway（有志者事竟成）”為題向全校學(xué)生開(kāi)展征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：（1）你對(duì)該諺語(yǔ)的理解；（2）你生活中的一個(gè)事例；（3）你的感悟。要求：1.必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4.詞數(shù)100左右（短文開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Wherethereisawill,thereisawayHaveyouheardofthesaying“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway”?Itmeans_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Wherethereisawill,thereisawayHaveyouheardofthesaying“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway”?Itmeansifyouarereallydeterminedtodosomething,howeverdifficultitmightbe,youwilleventuallyfindawaytodoitwell.Theimportantpointisthatyoumusthavethewilltoachievesuccess.Takemeforexample.SpeakingEnglishusedtobedifficultforme.InGrade7,Icouldn’tspeakEnglishclearlyandmyclassmatesalwayslaughedatme.WithmyEnglishteacher’shelp,Imadeplanstoimproveit.IreadEnglishtextsaloudforanhoureverymorning.Ialsomadeaforeignfriendonline.Italkedtohertwiceaweek.ShehelpedmecorrectthewayIspokeEnglish.DaybydaymyspokenEnglishimprovedalot.LastmonthIwonfirstprizeinmyschool’sEnglishSpeechContest.Thisexperiencehastaughtmethatnothingistoodifficultaslongasyoumakethedecisiontodoit,justthesayinggoes,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway”.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給的要點(diǎn)提示，結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀銓?duì)“有志者，事竟成”的理解和感悟，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，引出話題，并表達(dá)自己對(duì)該諺語(yǔ)的理解；第二步，以自身經(jīng)歷為例來(lái)闡述；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)自己的感悟。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takemeforexample就拿我來(lái)說(shuō)②usedtobe過(guò)去常常是③makeplantodo制定計(jì)劃做某事④makethedecisiontodosth下決定做某事[高分句型]①Theimportantpointisthatyoumusthavethewilltoachievesuccess.(表語(yǔ)從句)②Thisexperiencehastaughtmethatnothingistoodifficultaslongasyoumakethedecisiontodoit,justthesayinggoes,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway”.(aslongas引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句)（2023·江蘇蘇州·統(tǒng)考中考真題）HappyHomeClub本期的主題是“HowtomakeSuzhoumorebeautiful”，你打算以“Startingfrommeandnow”為題向中外朋友介紹你的想法，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.觸動(dòng)你的一件事情；2.這件事給你的啟示；3.你的倡議。注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右。2.內(nèi)容完整（照抄閱讀語(yǔ)篇不得分）3.文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實(shí)校名和姓名等信息。Startingfrommeandnow________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文StartingfrommeandnowLastweekend,Iwenttothecityparkwithmyclassmates.Whenwegotthere,wewereamazedthatthereweredifferentkindsofrubbishontheground.Wefeltverysadaboutthat.Thecityisourhome,soweshouldtryourbesttokeepthecityclean.Firstofall,weshouldprotectourenvironment.Don’tthrowrubbisharoundorspitanywhere.We’dbetterplantmoretreestomaketheairclean.Second,wearesupposedtobefriendlyandhelpfultoothers.Third,weoughttoobeythetrafficrules.Don’tridetoofastorplayonthestreet.Lastbutnotleast,remembertosaveenergy.Turnoffthelightsandtapsintime.Aslongaswetryourbestandstartingfrommeandnow,IbelieveSuzhouwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：要求根據(jù)題干中的提示介紹如何讓自己的家鄉(xiāng)變得更美，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹觸動(dòng)你的一件事情以及這件事情給你的啟示；第二步，為了使蘇州變得更美，介紹你的倡議；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)“希望家鄉(xiāng)會(huì)更美麗”的愿望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①differentkindsof各種各樣的②besupposedtodosth.應(yīng)該做某事③remembertodosth.記得做某事④intime及時(shí)[高分句型]①Whenwegotthere,wewereamazedthatthereweredifferentkindsofrubbishontheground.（when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）②We’dbetterplantmoretreestomaketheairclean.（“sb.hadbetterdosth.”表建議的句型）③IbelieveSuzhouwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.（賓語(yǔ)從句）（2023·遼寧丹東·統(tǒng)考中考真題）1．保持善良，傳播愛(ài)心。我們都曾幫助過(guò)別人或接受過(guò)別人的幫助。請(qǐng)結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，以“TheSpreadofLove”為題，講述一次你幫助別人或別人幫助你的經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)勀愕母形蚣敖窈蟮拇蛩?。?xiě)作要求：1.語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意通順連貫；2.書(shū)寫(xiě)工整規(guī)范；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名；4.詞數(shù)：70詞左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheSpreadofLoveEveryonehasdifferentideasaboutlife.Inmyopinion,lifeisbeautifulandfulloflove.Severalweeksago,myclassmateBobwasbadlyill.Hehadtobeinhospitalforalongtime.Buthisfamilywastoopoortoaffordit.SoIdecidedtoraisemoneytohelphim.WhenIsentallthemoneytoBob,heandhisparentsweredeeplymoved.Helpingothersmakesmehappy.Maybesometimeswefeelunlucky,butweshouldbelievethatlifeisbeautifulandlovewillbearoundusforever.AndIwillalsohelpmorepeopleinthefuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫(xiě)作，不能遺漏信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，介紹生活充滿愛(ài)；第二步，具體闡述你幫助別人或別人幫助你的經(jīng)歷；第三步，最后表達(dá)自己的感悟及今后的打算。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①inmyopinion在我看來(lái)②too...to...太……而不能……③decidetodo決定做[高分句型]①WhenIsentallthemoneytoBob,heandhisparentsweredeeplymoved.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）②Maybesometimeswefeelunlucky,butweshouldbelievethatlifeisbeautifulandlovewillbearoundusforever.（that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）（2023·山東東營(yíng)·統(tǒng)考中考真題）旅游是我們看世界的重要方式，它可以讓我們開(kāi)闊視野，增長(zhǎng)見(jiàn)識(shí)，豐富閱歷，陶冶情操。如果你有機(jī)會(huì)出去旅游，你最想去的地方是哪里？為什么想去那個(gè)地方？你想在那個(gè)地方干些什么？請(qǐng)以“TheplaceIwanttovisit”為題，寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的短文。要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名、學(xué)校及其他相關(guān)信息。2.照抄試卷內(nèi)容不得分。TheplaceIwanttovisit________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheplaceIwanttovisitBeijing,thesecondlargestcityinourcountry,istheplaceIwanttovisit.ThereareseveralreasonswhyIwouldliketovisitBeijing.First,BeijingisthecapitalofChina,andhasahistoryofmorethan3,000years.Ithasbeenthecapitalformanydynasties.Second,therearemanyhistoricalbuildings,suchastheGreatWallandtheSummerPalace.Therearealsosomenewstadiums,includingtheBirdNestandtheWaterCube,whichwerebuiltforthe2008BeijingOlympicGames.Iamreallylookingforwardtogoingthereandvisitingallthewonderfulplaces.Atthesametime,IhopeBeijingwillbemoreandmorebeautiful.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：題目要求以“TheplaceIwanttovisit”為題寫(xiě)短文介紹自己想要參觀的地方。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹想要去參觀哪里；第二步，談?wù)勏肴ミ@個(gè)地方的原因；第三步，介紹想要在那里干些什么。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①wouldliketodosth.想要做某事②suchas例如③lookforwardtodoingsth.期待做某事④atthesametime與此同時(shí)[高分句型]①ThereareseveralreasonswhyIwouldliketovisitBeijing.（why引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句）②Second,therearemanyhistoricalbuildings,suchastheGreatWallandtheSummerPalace.（therebe句型）（2022·重慶B卷·中考真題）有效控制憤怒能幫助我們恢復(fù)理智，找回方向，解決問(wèn)題。你校EnglishConer將進(jìn)行“ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblem”的成長(zhǎng)分享。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，講述你通過(guò)有效控制憤怒，成功解決某一問(wèn)題的小故事，并分享你的感悟。要求：1.80—120詞，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考詞匯：angern.[U]憤怒1.有效控制憤怒，成功解決問(wèn)題的小故事（起因、經(jīng)過(guò)、結(jié)果）2.你的感悟（保持冷靜、學(xué)會(huì)反思、有效溝通……）3.……ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblemHaveyouevercontrolledyourangerandsolvedaproblembetter?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforlistening.【答案】例文ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblemHaveyouevercontrolledyourangerandsolvedaproblembetter?Hereismyexperience.Lastterm,IboughtamagazinethatIhadalwayswanted.IlikeditsomuchthatIwascarefuleverytimeIcarriedit.Butoneday,mybestfriendTomtookthemagazinewithouttellingme.WhenIfoundit,Iwasveryangry.ButIcalmeddownsoon.IthoughtofhowTomhelpedmewhenIwasintroubleandIdidn’twanttobreaktherelationshipbetweenus.SoIcontrolledmyangeranddecidedtohaveatalkwithhim.Itoldhimthatheshouldtellmeifhewantedtoreadthemagazine.Afterthetalk,ourrelationshipbecamestronger.Fromthisexperience,whenweareangry,weshouldcalmourselvesdownandlearntoreflect.Themostimportantistocommunicatewithothersontimesothatwecansolvetheproblemsbetter.Thanksforlistening.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文以“ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblem”為題，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷講述通過(guò)有效控制憤怒，成功解決一件小事，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。第一段引入話題；第二段講述自己有效控制憤怒，成功解決問(wèn)題的小故事；第三段描述自己的感悟。寫(xiě)作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語(yǔ)使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。（2022·江蘇無(wú)錫·中考真題）生命中總有一些值得我們感恩的人。最近，無(wú)錫教育電視臺(tái)將舉辦題為“ThePersonIWanttoThank”的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。假如你想感謝身邊某位對(duì)你有影響的人(父/母親、老師、朋友……)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下流程圖寫(xiě)一篇英文演講稿參加比賽。注意事項(xiàng)：1.演講稿須根據(jù)流程圖自擬，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；2.流程圖中括號(hào)部分為非限定性內(nèi)容，僅供參考；3.詞數(shù)在100個(gè)左右，演講稿的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.演講稿中不得使用真實(shí)的個(gè)人及學(xué)校信息；5.演講稿必須寫(xiě)在答題卡指定的位置上。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ThePersonIWanttoThankInmyjuniorschoollife,manypeoplehavehelpedme.Ithankthemverymuch.ButthepersonIwanttothankmostismyEnglishteacherMissLee.MissLeeisbeautifulwithlonghair.Andsheiskind.Shehelpsmealot.SheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.WhenIamintrouble,shealwaysencouragesmetofacemydifficultiesandgivesmegoodadvice.IstillrememberthatonceIfailedinanimportantEnglishexamandwasupset.ShecheeredmeupandtoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,ImadegreatprogressinEnglishandbecameinterestedinit.I’mverythankfulforallthatshehasdoneforme.Shehasagreatinfluenceonme,andherhelpisveryusefulformyfuturedevelopment.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇演講稿。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示的內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)出最想感謝的人是誰(shuí)；他/她的外表、性格；舉例說(shuō)明為何感謝他/她；以及對(duì)你的影響。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該以第一人稱和第三人稱為主來(lái)敘述內(nèi)容；敘述想感謝的人的外表和性格時(shí)應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，敘述具體的故事時(shí)應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。同時(shí)寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句的連貫性，保證詞匯和語(yǔ)法的正確使用。（2022·湖南湘西·中考真題）隨著義務(wù)教育階段“雙減”政策的全面實(shí)施，合理安排課外生活對(duì)我們初中生尤為重要。某報(bào)刊青少年專欄以“我們豐富的課外生活”為主題開(kāi)展征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容提示，以“OurColorfulLifeafterSchool”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文介紹豐富多彩的課外生活，并推薦你最喜歡的一項(xiàng)活動(dòng)且說(shuō)明原因。OurColorfulLifeafterSchooltakepartindifferentvolunteeringactivitiesdevelophobbiesandinterests,likesinging,dancing...getclosetonature,suchasclimbingmountains,camping...learnsomeusefulskillsinourdailylife,suchas...要求:1.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.表達(dá)通順，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名、校名等信息；4.詞數(shù)80左右。文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。OurColorfulLifeafterSchoolLifeafterschoolisanimportantpartinourdailylife.Howcanwemakeitmorecolorful?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文OurColorfulLifeafterSchoolLifeafterschoolisanimportantpartinourdailylife.Howcanwemakeitmorecolorful?Wecantakepartindifferentvolunteeringactivities.Wecandevelopourhobbiesandinterests,likesinging,dancingandsoon.Weoftengetclosetonature,suchasclimbingmountains,camping.Wecanalsolearnsomeusefulskillsinourdailylife,suchascooking.Ilikesingingbecauseitisalsoa?goodwaytorelaxmyself.Besides,inthemusicclub,Icanmakemanyfriends.Allinall,after-schoolactivitiesmakemylifemorecolorfulandmeaningful.【解析】1.題干解讀：題目要求以“OurColorfulLifeafterSchool”為題介紹課外活動(dòng)；要求包含表格中的內(nèi)容提示。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：此作文時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；采用第一人稱口吻；可采用1段落格式，闡述最喜歡的課外活動(dòng)以及原因；注意無(wú)語(yǔ)法和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。（2021·江蘇南京市·中考真題）某英文網(wǎng)站正在舉辦征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)網(wǎng)站征文要求，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。Thisnewglobalsiteisaplaceforstudentstosharetheirideas.Wearelookingforyourbeautifulschooldaytoinspire（鼓舞）ourreaders.Didyouhelpanyoneatschool?Didyouenjoyabeautifulsonginyourartlesson?Didyouhaveanamazingexperienceintheschoollab?Yourschoollifeisfullofbeauty.Chooseabeautifulschoolday.Writeapassagetotelluswhatyoudidthatdayandwhyyouthinkitwasbeautiful.Sendyourwritingtousrightnow!注意:1.內(nèi)容涵蓋要點(diǎn),全文連貫通順。2.詞數(shù)80左右（已給出的文章開(kāi)頭,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。MyBeautifulSchoolDayMyschoollifeisfullofbeauty.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyBeautifulSchoolDayMyschoollifeisfullofbeauty.Iwillneverforgetthedaywhichmakesmefeelmeaningful.MybestfriendLucyandIalwaysridebikestogetherafterschool.Oneday,Iwaitedalongtimebutdidn’tseeher.ThenIsearchedforherinthecornerofourschool.Shewascryingatthattime.ShetoldmethatshewasnervousbecauseshewouldhaveanEnglishtest.IdecidedtohelpherwithEnglish.Thatevening,Ihelpedherreviewthekeypointsandnotes.Twodayslater,shetoldmethatshepassedit.Ifeltthathelpingotherswhoareinneedwasverymeaningful.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞“我美麗的學(xué)校生活”寫(xiě)一篇短文。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。分為兩段式，第一段引出主題；第二段描述自己的經(jīng)歷，并發(fā)表自己的感悟。寫(xiě)作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。（2021·浙江寧波市·中考真題）假如你是李華,上個(gè)月你校舉行了“祖國(guó)在我心中”的主題活動(dòng)（themeevent）,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提供的信息并結(jié)合你參加這個(gè)主題活動(dòng)的經(jīng)歷,寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文向你校英語(yǔ)報(bào)投稿。注意：（1）短文必須包括導(dǎo)圖的所有要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名;（3）詞數(shù)80-100;標(biāo)題已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MotherlandinMyHeart________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MotherlandinMyHeartLastmonth,ourschoolheldaneventwiththethemeof“MotherlandinMyHeart”toexpressourloveforourmotherland.Duringtheevent,wehadmanyactivities,includingsingingredsongsandtellingstoriesabouttheRedArmy.Itookpartinthesingingcompetition.Besides,IattendedthespeechcontestinwhichItoldastoryaboutahero.Manystudentsweremovedbymystory.Ithinkthiseventisverymeaningful.I’mproudofmycountry.Ihopeourmotherlandwillbecomemuchgreaterandeverybodycanliveabetterlife.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目要求根據(jù)所給提示，以“MotherlandinMyHeart”為題，結(jié)合自己參加“祖國(guó)在我心中”主題活動(dòng)的經(jīng)歷寫(xiě)篇文章，向?qū)W校英語(yǔ)報(bào)投稿。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：人稱應(yīng)采用第一人稱，介紹主題活動(dòng)內(nèi)容時(shí)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，表達(dá)自己的感受時(shí)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意要包含所給要點(diǎn)，保證條理清晰。名校模擬題提升練寫(xiě)作方法指導(dǎo)名校模擬題提升練寫(xiě)作方法指導(dǎo)（2022上·吉林長(zhǎng)春·九年級(jí)?？计谀吧倌陱?qiáng)，則國(guó)強(qiáng)”，青少年要勇敢肩負(fù)起時(shí)代賦予的重任，腳踏實(shí)地、志存高遠(yuǎn)。進(jìn)入九年級(jí)，每個(gè)同學(xué)都在為進(jìn)入夢(mèng)想中的學(xué)校而努力著。那么，為了實(shí)現(xiàn)你的夢(mèng)想，你打算怎么做？請(qǐng)你以“MyDream,MyFuture”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于80詞的英語(yǔ)短文。寫(xiě)一寫(xiě)你的期待和夢(mèng)想；為了實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想，你計(jì)劃做哪些方面的努力？至少2點(diǎn).；呼吁大家一起為夢(mèng)想而加油！要求：1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文流暢；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。MyDream,MyFuture________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyDream,MyFutureI’maGrade9studentnow.Theseniorhighschoolentranceexaminationiscoming.I’mbusygettingreadyforiteveryday,suchasreadingaloudinthemorning,finishinglotsofexercisesandsoon.It’smydreamtogotohighschool.Toachievemydream,Ihavesomeplans.First,I’lllistentomyteacherscarefullyinclass.Everylessonisimportant,Ican’tmissanypoint.Second,Ineedtofinishmyhomeworkontime.It’sagoodwaytocheckwhatIhavelearnedandhowIhavelearned.Finally,it’snecessarytopayattentiontomyphysicalandmentalhealth,whichareimportantformetofacethebigchallenge.Witheveryeffort,Ihopemydreamwillcometruesoon.Let’sworkhardtofightforabrightfuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：本文以“MyDream,MyFuture”為題，結(jié)合題干中的提示介紹如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，簡(jiǎn)單說(shuō)明自己的夢(mèng)想；第二步，具體闡說(shuō)如何實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想；第三步，最后呼吁大家一起為夢(mèng)想而加油。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①getreadyfor作準(zhǔn)備②ontime準(zhǔn)時(shí)③payattentionto注意[高分句型]①Toachievemydream,Ihavesomeplans.（動(dòng)詞不定式表目的）②It’sagoodwaytocheckwhatIhavelearnedandhowIhavelearned.（what引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句）③Finally,it’snecessarytopayattentiontomyphysicalandmentalhealth,whichareimportantformetofacethebigchallenge.（which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）（2023上·天津和平·九年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）每個(gè)時(shí)代都有自己的偶像，青少年們?cè)诔砷L(zhǎng)中也一定有榜樣的力量在指引。例如：航天英雄楊利偉，奧運(yùn)冠軍蘇炳添，抗疫英雄鐘南山等等。其實(shí)，只要用心觀察，平凡的生活中也有我們的偶像。他們陪伴我們成長(zhǎng)，指引我們前行，給予我們力量。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，以“Myhero”為題，講述一位平凡生活中的偶像。(1)偶像：媽媽

年齡：40多歲

職業(yè)：醫(yī)生

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